专八作文范文赏析及写作思路分析.docx
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专八作文范文赏析及写作思路分析
专八作文范文赏析及写作思路分析
冲击波英语专八系列:
作文之范文赏析--公司高管的多重职责
Corporateexecutives,undoubtedly,playacrucialpartinacompany’smanagementandoperation.Somepeoplearguethattheonlyresponsibilityofcorporateexecutives,providedtheystaywithinthelaw,istomakeasmuchmoneyaspossiblefortheircompanies.Doyouagreetotheiropinion?
Writeanessayofabout400words.Youshouldsupplyanappropriatetitleforyouressay.
Inthefirstpartofyouressayyoushouldstateclearlyyourmainargument,andinthesecondpartyoushouldsupportyourargumentwithappropriatedetails.Inthelastpartyoushouldbringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionormakeasummary.
Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.
写作思路
当今社会,公司的发展越来越正规化,而公司掌舵人的作用也显得尤为重要,这也是众多公司不惜重金竞相聘用得力高管的重要原因。
那么,公司高管究竟要起到哪些作用呢?
是不是只要想方设法为公司盈利就可以了呢?
我们认为不是这样的,公司高管还应担负起许多其他责任,包括为全球环境和人民造福、塑造良好公司形象、保障公司长足发展等。
MultipleResponsibilitiesofCorporateExecutives
Corporateexecutivesdohavearesponsibilitytomakemoneyfortheircompanies.Forpubliclyownedcompanies,thismeansthattheymustfindawaytomaximizeshareholdervalue.Butitwouldbewrongtosaythat,withoutqualification,makingasmuchmoneyaspossibleisanexecutive’sonlyresponsibility.
Firstofall,corporateexecutiveshaveadutytoprotectournaturalenvironmentandtonotexploithumanresources,particularlyinlesser-developedcountries.Thesepoorercountriessometimeshavepoorlydevelopedlegalsystemsandlawsthatcanbeusedunfairlybycompanies,eventhoughthecompaniesareactuallyoperatingwithinthelimitsofthelawinthatcountry.Asanexample,apharmaceuticalcompanyshouldnotbeallowedtotestnewdrugsonpeopleinapoorcountryeventhoughitisperfectlylegalunderthatcountry’slaws.Corporateexecutivesmusttakeituponthemselvestoensurethatitoperatesethicallyinallcountriesandthatthecorporationdoesnotexploitlaxoperatinglawsinunderdevelopedpartsoftheworld.
Secondly,arelatedresponsibilityofcorporateexecutivesistomakesurethatthecompanyreflectsapositiveimagetotherestoftheworld,thusgivingstockholdersandownersasenseofprideinbeingapartofthatcompany.Mostpeopledonotwanttobeassociatedwithacompanythatisseenasgreedyorexploitive.Ifcorporateexecutivesfocussolelyonmakingasmuchmoneyaspossible,therecanbeabacklashagainstthatcompanyforappearingtoomaterialisticanduncaring.ExecutivesatmultinationalcompaniessuchasMcDonald’sandWal-Marthaverecognizedthisprobleminthepastandhavenowbecomeheavilyinvolvedinthecommunitiesinwhichtheirstoresarelocatedthroughcharitableprograms.
Athirdandalsorelatedresponsibilityofcorporateexecutivesistoensurethelong-termviabilityoftheircompanies.Employees,aswellasotherstakeholders,needtoknowthatthecompanyexecutivesareinterestedinbuildinganenduringinstitution.AgoodexampleofthisresponsibilitynotbeinghonoredisthatoftheEnronEnergyCompanyandArthurAndersenbankruptcyandaccountingscandal.Inthiscase,corporateexecutivesabdicatedtheirresponsibilitiestobothcompaniesinordertomaximizeshort-termprofitandpossiblytheirownbonusesandstockoptions.
Corporateexecutivesdohavearesponsibilitytomakeasmuchmoneyaspossible.Buttheyalsohavetheresponsibilitytodosoinamannerthathelpstoprotecttheworld’senvironmentandpeople,thatreflectsapositivecorporateimage,andthatwillguaranteethelong-termsurvivalofthecompany.
亮点回放
★用词亮点
lesser-developed:
欠发达的,同下文中的underdeveloped。
takesomethinguponsomebody:
承担起……职责。
exploitive:
剥削的。
backlash:
后坐力,强烈反对。
viability:
生存能力,可行性。
abdicate:
正式放弃,退出。
★句式亮点
Corporateexecutivesmusttakeituponthemselvestoensurethatitoperatesethicallyinallcountriesandthatthecorporationdoesnotexploitlaxoperatinglawsinunderdevelopedpartsoftheworld.
laxoperatinglaws意为“现行法律中的漏洞”;两个that均作为ensure一词的宾语从句。
全句句意为:
“公司高管必须承担起责任,确保公司在任何国家的运作都不会有违道德规范,同时在世界欠发达地区,也不钻现行法律的空子”。
AgoodexampleofthisresponsibilitynotbeinghonoredisthatoftheEnronEnergyCompanyandArthurAndersenbankruptcyandaccountingscandal.
agoodexampleofthisresponsibilitynotbeinghonored在此处表示“一个不那么光彩的例子,反面教材”。
此处作者以安然公司(Enron)和安达信会计师事务所(ArthurAndersen)为例,充分证明了只图眼前利益而忽略公司长足发展的下场。
★篇章亮点
文章采用的是开门见山的开头方式,直接提出作者观点——为公司多赚钱不应是公司高管的惟一职责。
紧接着,作者采用了分总的行文结构,在主体部分层次分明地论述了公司高管应当承担的其他责任。
逻辑信号词firstofall,secondly,athird清晰地对文章做出了划分,使读者一目了然。
结尾部分概括全文,同时采用了与正文不一样的表达方式,显示出作者扎实的文字功底。
冲击波英语专八系列:
作文范文赏析之水资源问题
写作题目
Inmanycitiesandallovertheworld,thereisaseriousshortageofwatersupplies.Whatarethecausesofandsolutionstothescarcityofwaterresource?
Writeanessayofabout400words.Youshouldsupplyanappropriatetitleforyouressay.
Inthefirstpartofyouressayyoushouldstateclearlyyourmainargument,andinthesecondpartyoushouldsupportyourargumentwithappropriatedetails.Inthelastpartyoushouldbringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionormakeasummary.
Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.
写作思路
本题属于“问题解决型”,需要按照问题、原因/后果、解决方法三步骤来进行结构安排。
水资源缺乏是人类面临的一大挑战,本题要求先分析原因,再提出解决方法,其中原因和解决办法必须是两点或两点以上。
在第一段,我们可以先大体介绍一下水资源缺乏的现状及带来的可怕后果;随后用一到两段来具体分析水资源缺乏的原因,如人口爆炸、环境污染、或是地球本身淡水资源的匮乏等等;接下来再用一段提出解决方法,如海水淡化、节约用水、保护环境等;最后做出总结。
OnWaterScarcity
Water,asoneofthemostimportantnaturalresources,isfacingseriousscarcity.ArecentsurveyconductedbyGreenpeacerevealedthatovertwothirdsofthenationsintheworldwereafflictedwithseverewatershortage.Hence,itisessentialthatweascertainthecausesofthisphenomenonandidentifytheeffectivesolutions.
Anumberoffactorscouldaccountfortheproblem,butthefollowingmightbethecriticalones.Firstofall,itisgenerallyarguablethatthepopulationexplosionistherootcauseofthecrisis.Toillustrate,overthepasthalfacentury,theworldpopulationhasmorethandoubledandthisgrowthrateshowsnosignofslowingdown.Therefore,householdandindustrialuseofwaterhasbeenshootingupsincetheendofWorldWarII.Further,waterresourceispollutedbytheindustrialwastesproducedbyfactoriesandcompanies.Forinstance,currently,avastnumberoffactoriesdumptheirwastesintoriversandlakes,whichseriouslyunderminestheworld’seco-system.Finally,theshortageoffreshwatercanalsobeattributedtothelowerefficiencyinwaterutilization.Somedevelopingcountriesstillusetheprimitiveirrigationsystem,whichisbelievedtowasteatleast70%freshwater.InmostcitiesinChina,freshwaterisusedtoflushlavatories.
Moreover,mostcitizensuseawash-machine,whichconsumesalargervolumeoffreshwater.Inviewoftheseriousnessoftheproblem,effectivemeasuresmustbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.Firstly,itisessentialthatlawsandregulationsbeworkedoutandenforcedtoprotectwaterresource.Secondly,nationalinfrastructurehastobeimproved.Forexample,newdamsshouldbebuiltandnewtechnologyshouldbeinventedtosavewaterscientifically.Thirdly,manmustdohisutmosttofindalternativesourcesoffreshwater.Researchhasprovedthatwecantransformseawaterintodrinkingwaterwiththehelpofmoderntechnology.Lastbutnottheleast,governmentsinallcountriesshouldgivepriorityto6thecontrollingofthestaggeringincreaseofthepopulation.ItisnecessarythatothernationslearnfromChina’ssuccessincurbingitspopulationsurgeoverthepastthreedecades.
Aboveall,weshouldnotforgettheimportanceofwaterorwasteitunnecessarily.Anykindofdroughtisalwaysareminderthatweshouldnevertakeourwaterforgrantedandthateverydropcounts.Therefore,weshouldtakeeffectivesteps,includingbirthcontrol,promotionofsustainabledevelopment,andresearchaboutnewwaterresource,toalleviatethismodern-dayscourge.
★用词亮点
beafflictedwith:
受……的折磨
ascertain:
查明,弄清
rootcause:
根本原因
shootup:
猛增
doonesutmost:
尽某人最大的力量
givepriorityto:
把……放在首位
curbitspopulationsurge:
抑制它的人口暴增趋势
scourge:
灾祸
★句式亮点
Toillustrate,overthepasthalfacentury,theworldpopulationhasmorethandoubledandthisgrowthrateshowsnosignofslowingdown.
本句最大的特色在于一些短语的使用,如toillustrate、morethandoubled、nosignofslowingdown,这些表达既有新意又相当准确。
本句句意为:
例如,在过去的半个世纪中,全世界的人口翻了一倍多,而且这种增长速度并没有任何减缓的迹象。
Anykindofdroughtisalwaysareminderthatweshouldnevertakeourwaterforgrantedandthateverydropcounts.
Anykindofdroughtisalwaysareminder...的意思是Anykindofdroughtalwaysremindsus...,即“任何形式的干旱都是在提醒我们……”。
本句句意为:
任何形式的干旱都是在提醒我们不应该再把水看作是理所当然的东西,每一滴水都是重要的。
★篇章亮点
语言是本文的一大亮点,作者用词准确、语言表达地道、句式丰富多变。
在结构安排上,作者严格遵循了问题解决型文章的基本结构,主题句“Hence,itisessentialthatweascertainthecausesofthisphenomenonandidentifytheeffectivesolutions.”既统领全文,又暗含了主体部分的主要内容:
即先分析原因,再提出有效方法。
在两段主体段落中,作者主要采用了分类论证和举例论证的方法,尤其在分析原因部分,作者将缺水的原因大致分为三类,即人口爆炸、水污染、水资源浪费,并辅以恰当的例证,逻辑性强。
此外,作者大量使用连词,如:
firstofall,further,finally等等,这些连词很好地将全文的内容连接在了一起。
在结尾部分,作者向大家发起节水的号召,并总结了上文提出的解决方法。
全文结构完整、论述方式多样、很有说服力。
冲击波英语专八系列:
作文范文赏析之人口爆炸
写作题目
Theworldisexperiencingadramaticincreaseinpopulation.Thisiscausingproblemsnotonlyforpoor,undevelopedcountries,butalsoforindustrializedanddevelopingcountries.Describesomeoftheproblemsthatoverpopulationcauses,andsuggestatleastonepossiblesolution.Writeanessayofabout400words.Youshouldsupplyanappropriatetitleforyouressay.
Inthefirstpartofyouressayyoushouldstateclearlyyourmainargument,andinthesecondpartyoushouldsupportyou
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