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Simon作文整理
IELTSWritingTask2:
'immigration'topic
Whatarethebenefitsanddrawbacksofimmigrationormulti-culturalsocieties?
Hereisaparagraphgivingsomeoftheeconomicbenefitsofimmigration:
Fromaneconomicperspective,immigrationcanbeextremelypositive.
Manyimmigrantshaveskillsthatareneededinthecountrytheymoveto.
Forexample,countriessometimeslackkeyworkerslikedoctorsandnurses,andimmigrationisthereforeencouraged.
Immigrantswhofindworkcontributetotheeconomyoftheirnewcountrywiththeskillstheybringandthetaxestheypay.
Atthesametime,manyimmigrantssendmoneytohelpfamilymembersintheirhomecountry,thereforehelpingtoboostthateconomytoo.
Explainsomeofthewaysinwhichhumansaredamagingtheenvironment.Whatcangovernmentsdotoaddresstheseproblems?
Whatcanindividualpeopledo?
Humansareresponsibleforavarietyofenvironmentalproblems,butwecanalsotakestepstoreducethedamagethatwearecausingtotheplanet.Thisessaywilldiscussenvironmentalproblemsandthemeasuresthatgovernmentsandindividualscantaketoaddresstheseproblems.
Twoofthebiggestthreatstotheenvironmentareairpollutionandwaste.
Gasemissionsfromfactoriesandexhaustfumesfromvehiclesleadtoglobalwarming,whichmayhaveadevastatingeffectontheplanetinthefuture.
Asthehumanpopulationincreases,wearealsoproducingevergreaterquantitiesofwaste,whichcontaminatestheearthandpollutesriversandoceans.
Governmentscouldcertainlymakemoreefforttoreduceairpollution.
Theycouldintroducelawstolimitemissionsfromfactoriesortoforcecompaniestouserenewableenergyfromsolar,windorwaterpower.
Theycouldalsoimpose‘greentaxes’ondriversandairlinecompanies.Inthisway,peoplewouldbeencouragedtousepublictransportandtotakefewerflightsabroad,thereforereducingemissions.
Individualsshouldalsotakeresponsibilityfortheimpacttheyhaveontheenvironment.
Theycantakepublictransportratherthandriving,chooseproductswithlesspackaging,andrecycleasmuchaspossible.Mostsupermarketsnowprovidereusablebagsforshoppersaswellas‘banks’forrecyclingglass,plasticandpaperintheircarparks.Byreusingandrecycling,wecanhelptoreducewaste.
Inconclusion,bothnationalgovernmentsandindividualsmustplaytheirpartinlookingaftertheenvironment.
Note:
Thisessayisexactly250wordslong.I'vetriedtomakeitassimpleaspossible,butit'sstillgoodenoughtogetaband9.
IELTSWritingTask2:
studyingabroad
Moreandmorestudentsarechoosingtostudyatcollegesanduniversitiesinaforeigncountry.Dothebenefitsofstudyingabroadoutweighthedrawbacks?
Herearesomeideasfrommy ebook:
Benefitsofstudyingabroad:
Manystudentstravelabroadtostudyataprestigiousuniversity.
Thebestuniversitiesemploylecturerswhoareexpertsintheirfields.
Qualificationsgainedabroadcanopendoorstobetterjobopportunities.
Livinginaforeigncountrycanbroadenstudents'horizons.
Overseasstudentsareexposedtodifferentculturesandcustoms.
Theycanimmersethemselvesinalanguage.
Drawbacksofstudyingabroad:
Livingawayfromhomecanbechallenging.
Studentshaveproblemswithpaperworksuchasvisaapplications.
Thelanguagebarriercancausedifficulties.
Studentshavetofindaccommodationandpaybills.
Manystudentsfeelhomesickandmisstheirfamilies.
Somestudentsexperiencecultureshock.
Whichofthewordsorphrasesabovedoyouthinkwouldbeconsideredband7orhigher?
"Band7Vocabulary"
WhenIsay"band7vocabulary",I'mreallytalkingaboutvocabularythatcouldhelpyoutogetaband7 orhigher.Examinersarelookingfor"lesscommon"wordsandphrases,correctandrelevantcollocations,andmaybesomeidiomaticlanguage.
I'vewrittenthefollowingparagraphusingsomeoftheideasfromthelessonbelow.I'veunderlinedtheband7(orhigher)vocabulary.
Advantagesofstudyingabroad:
1,Manystudentschoosetostudyabroadbecausethereare greateropportunities inaparticularforeigncountry.
2,Foreignuniversitiesmay offerbetterfacilities orcourses.
3,Theymayalsobemore prestigious thanuniversitiesinthestudent’sowncountryandhaveteacherswhoare expertsintheirfields.
4,Therefore,bystudyingabroad,studentscan expandtheirknowledge and gainqualificationsthat openthedoortobetterjobopportunities.
5,Aperiodofstudyabroadcanalsobroadenstudents’horizons.
6,Inthenewcountry,theywillhavetoliveandworkwithotherstudentsofvariousnationalities.Thus,overseasstudentsare exposedtodifferentcultures,customsandpointsofview.
(106words)
IELTSWritingTask2:
crimetopic
Hereisa"problem/solution"question,withsomeideasforanessaybelow:
Manycriminalsre-offendaftertheyhavebeenpunished.Whydosomepeoplecontinuetocommitcrimesaftertheyhavebeenpunished,andwhatmeasurescanbetakentotacklethisproblem?
Causesofcrimeandre-offending:
Themaincausesofcrimearepoverty,unemploymentandlackofeducation.
Peoplewhocommitcrimesoftenhavenootherwayofmakingaliving.
Theprisonsystemcanmakethesituationworse.
Offendersmixwithothercriminalswhocanbeanegativeinfluence.
Acriminalrecordmakesfindingajobmoredifficult.
Manyprisonersre-offendwhentheyarereleased.
Possiblemeasurestoreducecrimeandre-offending:
Prisonsshouldprovideeducationorvocationaltraining.
Rehabilitationprogrammesprepareprisonersforreleaseintosociety.
Communityserviceisanotherwaytoreformoffenders.
Itmakesoffendersusefulintheirlocalcommunities.
Theymightberequiredtotalktoschoolgroupsorcleanpublicareas.
Offendersalsoneedhelpwhenlookingforaccommodationandwork.
Therearemoreideasabouttopicslikepolice,prisons,capitalpunishmentandcommunityserviceinmy ebook.
IELTSWritingTask2:
'zoo'topic
Somepeoplebelievethatitiswrongtokeepanimalsinzoos,whileothersthinkthatzoosarebothentertainingandecologicallyimportant.Discussbothviews.
Herearesome(band7orhigher)vocabularyideas.I'veorganisedthevocabularyaccordingtodifferentperspectives.
Positivesofkeepinganimalsinzoos:
Environmentalperspective:
Zoosplayanimportantroleinwildlifeconservation.Theyhelptoprotectendangeredspecies.Theyallowscientiststostudyanimalbehaviour.
Economicperspective:
Zoosemploylargenumbersofpeople.Theyprovidejobopportunitiesandincomeforthelocalarea.Themoneyraisedcanbeusedforconservationprojects.
Personalperspective:
Zoosareinteresting,educationalandfun.Theymakeagreatdayoutforfamilies.Childrenlearntoappreciatewildlifeandnature.
Negativesofzoos:
Environmentalperspective:
Zoosareartificialenvironments.Animalslosetheirinstincttohuntforfood.Itwouldbebettertosaveendangeredspeciesbyprotectingtheirnaturalhabitats.
Moralperspective:
Keepinganimalsincagesisunethical.Wehavenorighttouseanimalsforentertainment.Zoosexhibitanimalswiththeaimofmakingaprofit.
Thinkingabouttopicsfromdifferentperspectivesisausefultechnique.Ithelpsyoutogenerateavarietyofinterestingideas.Iusedthistechniquewhenthinkingofideasformyebook,andIencouragemystudentstouseitwhenplanningtheiressays.
SeveralstudentshaveaskedmetohelpthemwiththisIELTSquestion:
Somepeoplethinkthatschoolchildrenneedtolearnpracticalskillssuchascarmaintenanceorbankaccountmanagementalongwiththeacademicsubjectsatschool.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
Herearesomesuggestions(thisisNOTanessay):
1.Introducethetopicthengiveyouropinion
Iwouldwritethatitistruethatchildrenlearnacademicsubjectsatschool,butnotmanypracticalskills.However,Iwouldthendisagreethatschoolsshouldteachskillslikebankaccountmanagementandcarmaintenance.
2.Firstsupportingparagraph
Iwouldwriteaparagraphabouttheimportanceofacademicsubjectslikemaths,science,languagesetc.Weliveinaknowledge-basedeconomywhereindependentthinkingandproblemsolvingarethemostimportantskills.Withtimetablesalreadyfull,schoolsdonothavetimetoteachchildrenanythingelse.
3.Secondsupportingparagraph
Iwouldarguethatbankaccountmanagementisa'lifeskill'thatanyonecanlearnbysimplyopeningabankaccount.Mostadultshavenoproblemmanagingtheirfinanceswithoutbeingtaughtaccountinglessonsatschool.Otherskillslikecarmaintenancearenotreallynecessary.Mostpeopletaketheircarstoaqualifiedmechanic.
4.Conclusion
Repeattheideathatschoolsarealreadydoingagoodjobteachingthetraditionalacademicsubjects.Iftheystarttoteachpracticalskills,thestudyofimportantacademicsubjectswillsuffer.
IELTSWritingTask2:
globalisation
Hereisanessayquestiononthetopicofglobalisation:
Ithasbeensaidthattheworldisbecomingaglobalvillageinwhichtherearenoboundariestotradeandcommunication.Dothebenefitsofglobalisationoutweighthedrawbacks?
Yesterday'svideocontainedsomeusefulideas,butherearesomemoreideasfrommyebook:
Positivesofglobalisation:
Businessisbecomingincreasinglyinternational.
Aglobaleconomymeansfreetradebetweencountries.
Thiscanstrengthenpoliticalrelationships.
Globalisationcanalsocreateopportunitiesforemployment.
Itencouragesinvestmentinlessdevelopedcountries.
Itcouldreducepovertyinthedevelopingworld.
Negativesofglobalisation:
Globalisationcanalsoleadtounemplo
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