读后续写主题专练7A人际交往类解析版.docx
- 文档编号:2896035
- 上传时间:2022-11-16
- 格式:DOCX
- 页数:14
- 大小:28.50KB
读后续写主题专练7A人际交往类解析版.docx
《读后续写主题专练7A人际交往类解析版.docx》由会员分享,可在线阅读,更多相关《读后续写主题专练7A人际交往类解析版.docx(14页珍藏版)》请在冰豆网上搜索。
读后续写主题专练7A人际交往类解析版
主题7A:
人际交往类(解析版)
一、读后续写
1.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISE
ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.
Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.
ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!
Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Father’sappearingwaslikeasaviortothetwochildren.Undertheguidanceoftheirfather,theytookpositiveactionsandstartedalloveragain.Theymadethebreadandthenwentoncookingporridge.Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.Itwasallrightthistime.Deliciousbreakfastwasready.Howhappytheywere!
Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousandperfectbreakfastinfrontofher,shewasverysurprised.Itwasnotonlythegift,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.Thetwochildrencouldfinishcookingabreakfast,whichshedidn’texpect.Thechildrensaidloudly,“HappyMother’sDay!
”Motherhuggedthemtightlyandkissedthemagainandagain.
【分析】
本文以母亲节为线索展开,讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐,自己动手,做起饭餐来,但是不幸的是,他们连连失败,后来在父亲的帮助下,获得成功,他们把早餐献给亲爱的母亲,妈妈非常感动的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时,他们的父亲出现了。
”可知,第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。
②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上,叫醒了他们的母亲。
”可知,第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐,非常感动。
2.续写线索:
帮助——指导——积极——献礼——感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①帮助:
help/assist
②.指导:
guide/conduct
③.献礼:
presentagift/giveagift
情绪类
①.积极:
positive/positively/takepositiveactions
②.感动:
moved/touched
【点睛】
[高分句型1].Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2].Itwasnotonlythebreakfast,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.(使用notonly…but(also)句型及强调句型)
2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
ThatcoldJanuarynight,IwasgrowingsickofmylifeinSanFrancisco.ThereIwaswalkinghomeatoneinthemorningafteratiringpracticeatthetheatre.Withopeningnightonlyaweekaway,Iwasstilllearningmylines.Iwashavingtroubledealingwithmypart-timejobatthebankandmyactingatnightatthesametime.AsIwalked,IthoughtseriouslygivingupbothactingandSanFrancisco.Citylifehadbecometoomuchforme.
AsIwaswalkingdownemptystreetsundertallbuildings,therewasacolddampwindblowingofftheseawhichnearlythrewmeoffmyfeetandIfeltverysmallandcold.Ibegantoruntokeepwarmandtokeepawayfrompossiblerobbers.Veryfewpeoplewerestilloutexceptafewsad-lookinghomelesspeopleunderblankets.
Aboutablockfrommyapartment,Iheardasoundbehindme.Iturnedquickly,beingafraidtoseesomeonewithaknifeoragun.ThestreetwasemptyandtheonlylivingthingIcouldseewasafrightenedcatoutside
- 配套讲稿:
如PPT文件的首页显示word图标,表示该PPT已包含配套word讲稿。双击word图标可打开word文档。
- 特殊限制:
部分文档作品中含有的国旗、国徽等图片,仅作为作品整体效果示例展示,禁止商用。设计者仅对作品中独创性部分享有著作权。
- 关 键 词:
- 后续 主题 人际交往 解析