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改错
错A
DearElli,
I’maseniorstudent.Ilikemakefriendswith
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peoplebutIdomybesttogetonwellwitheveryone.
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ButinlastweekIfoundthatoneofmyfriends
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wroteinherEnglishdiarythatshedislikedmeand
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thathedidn’twanttobemyfriendanymore.Now
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shehasstartedtomakefunofmebecauseofI’m
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fat.I’mkindtoher,butwhycan’tshebefriend
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ofmine?
Otherproblemisaboutmyweight.Should
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Idolessexerciseorusepills?
Anddoyouknow
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anyotherway?
Pleasegivemesomeadvices.
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Yours,
Mary
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DearSir,
IamnowacollegestudentatPekingUniversity.I’m
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quiteinterestedinthepositionofferingbyyourwebsite
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forpart-timeEnglishreporters.IthinkI’mfitthejob.
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Asastudent,I’vereadalotandhavemanyknowledge
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indifferentfield.I’mfondofEnglishanddowellin
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bothspeakingandwriting.Besides,I’measilytoget
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alongwithandIenjoyworkingtogetherwithanother.
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Aboveall,Ionceworkasareporterformycollege
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broadcaststation.SoI’msureIcandothejobwellifIwillget
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thechancetoworkforawebsite.I’mlookingforwardto
yourreply.10
Yoursfaithfully,
LiHua
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Peoplehavedifferenttastesinfood.Some
feeltheyhaven’tamealunlesstheyhavehad
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porkorothermeat;somepreferchickens2
orfish,andeatsoneortheotherateverymeal.
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Othersprefervegetablesandfruitor
grainsbutwouldenjoyamealofpotatoes,
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noodlesandcarrotsandsomeanotherfruit.
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Otherscouldliveonthefoodsarecalled6
fastfoods,forexample,ahamburgeror7
hotdog,Frenchfriesandasoftdrinks.8
Foodcanbepreparedbysomanyways.9
Everyissatisfactorytodifferentpersons.10
D
Somestudentsdon’tliketalkingabouttheirparents
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oftenasiftheirparentslovethemverymuch.Areyou
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gettingonwellwithyourparents?
Youandyourparents
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willbeveryhappyifyoucanbefriends.Herearesome
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waytohaveagoodtalkwiththem.Findagoodtimeto
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talk,likewhenyou’reeatingdinner,goingoutforwalk
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andwatchingTV.Tellthemsomethingyou’reinterested
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in,oraskthemabouttheirlifewhentheyareyoung.
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Theylovetotalkaboutourpast!
Meetthemfacetofaceand
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listentothemcarefully.Behonesty,andyourparents
willtrustyoumore.10
短文改错E
Ourschoolinvitedaforeignteacherwhomisworkingin
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acollegeinourcitygiveaclasstothestudentsofSenior
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Three.Theclasswasveryinterested.Ihavelearneda
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lotoffromhim.Theteacherhadafreetalkwithus
usingsimple4
English.Hespokeslowlysothatwecouldunderstand
him5
well.Sometimesherepeatedwhatwedon’tunderstand.
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Myclassmateswereallactiveintheclass.Tohisjoy,I
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understoodalmosteverythingtheteachersaid.ButIwas
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abletoaskquestioninEnglish.Thisclassencouragedme
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greatly.I’msurewekeeponpracticing,itwillbeeasy
forustolearnspokenEnglishwell.10
F
Yesterdaywewenttoplanttreesonthehillnearto
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ourschool.Theboysweremadedigpits(坑).The
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girlsweretoldtoplanttheyoungtreesintothepits.
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Allofusworkedveryhardly.Soonwewereallwet
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withsweat.Aftertheyoungtreesplanted,we
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begantowaterit.Thewaterwasatthefootof
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thehill.Butwestoodinlinetopasspails(桶)
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ofwaterfromonetootheruptothehill.8
Wedidnotfinishwaterthetreesuntilit9
wasdark.Thoughweweretired,wefeelveryhappy.
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G
IwasreallyexcitingwhenIwasofferedtheopportunity
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togotoGuangzhouinChinaformywork.Ihadnever
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beentoChinabutIhadneverbeenoutsideEurope.
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Ididn’tknowwhattoexciting.WeflewtoHongKong,
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thentookthetrainfromHongKongtoGuangzhou.
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Iwasimpressedalotofbythemodern,comfortable
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trainandtheworkersintheirsmartclothes.Sincewegot
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toGuangzhou,thefirstthingIsawaswewentoutofa
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stationwas…McDonalds!
Thatisabitdisappointing,
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Ihavetosay,butitwastheonlydisappointmentsonthetrip.10
H
DuringtheweekendItraveledbyairthefirsttime
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inmylife.Igenerallytravelbytrainandbus.Itis
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bothcheaperandsafe.Butthiswasashortjourney
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InthebeginningIdidnotfeelveryhappily,butthis
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feelingdidnotlastlonger.Thejourneywasveryexciting.
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Iwassoonhighupintheskyamongthecloud.Theviews
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ofmountains,fieldsandriverswereinterested.
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Ienjoyedmyshortandcomfortablejourneyverymuch.
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Thisexperiencehasshownthattravelinginairis
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actuallythesafestwayofmakejourneys.10
短文改错I
DearJohn,
I’dliketotellyouanythingthathappenedseveraldays
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before.Onemorningitwasrainingcatsanddogs.Isawanold2
manwalkingintherainwhohadnothingbutastickwithher.3
Fortunate,aChineseboywentoverandopenedhisumbrella4
forhim.Sothelittleboywasnottallenoughandhecouldn’t5
holdithighenoughtocoverhim.Theoldmandoesn’tnotice6
that.Thentheboythoughtofwonderfulidea.Hestoppedthe7
oldman,tiedhisumbrellawiththeoldman’sstick,andheld8
itforhim.Thentheboyhelpedtheoldmantohishome.
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Don’tyouthinkifthelittleboyisreallysmartandnice?
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J
DearKangLi,
Ihaven’theardyouforalongtime.Howare
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you?
Ihadjustfinishedtheexams.NowI’m
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gladthatIhavetimetowriteforyou.Ourteacher
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tellsusthatChinaisabigcountrythathavethe
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mostpopulationintheworld.It’sontheother
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sidesoftheworld.Nowthesunisshiningbrightly
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here,andperhapsyou’resleepinginthedark
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night.Iwishtoknowanythingmoreaboutthe
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Chinesewayofliving.Iwonderatifyoucan
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tellmeaboutitinyourletter.Pleasewritesoon.
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Yours,
John
K
Recentlyasurveyhasconductedtofindouthowmany
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hoursofsleepweSeniorThreestudentsgetorhowmuchtime2
wespendonphysicalexercise.Thesurveyshowedthat
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50%ofthestudentsgetabout7hours’sleepsand10%sleep4
forevenfewerthan6hours.Meanwhile,80%ofthem
take5
physicalexerciseforbelowanhour.Itcanbeeasilyseen
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thatthemostofthestudentsdon’thaveenoughsleepor
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exercise,thatisofgreatharmtotheirhealth.Inmy
opinion,8
Theyshouldhaveenoughsleepandexercise.Theycan
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helpustobemoreenergeticandlearnmoreeffective.
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L
TheInternetisplayingaimportantpartin
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ourdailylife.Onthenet,wecanlearnabout
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newsbothhomeandabroadandsomeother
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informationsaswell.Wecanalsomakephonecalls,
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sendmessagesbye-mails,gotonetschools,and
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learnforeignlanguagesbyourselves.Beside,we
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canenjoymusic,watchsportsmatches,andplaythe
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chessorcards.Thenetevenhelpusdoshopping,
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makeachatwithothersandmakefriendswiththem.
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Inaword,theInternethasmadeourlifemoreeasier.
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短文改错M
Lifeinthetwenty-onecenturywillbevery
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differentwithlifetoday.Therewillbemany
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changes.Whatcanthechangesbe?
Thepopulation
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isgrowingfast.Thatwillbemanymorepeoplein
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theworldandmostofthemwillliveinlonger
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thanpeoplelivenow.Computerswillbemuch
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moresmallerandmoreuseful,andtherewill
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beoneineveryhome.Peoplewillworkfew
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hoursthantheynowandtheywillhavemuch
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freetimeforreadingbooks,watchTVandtraveling.
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Aperson’sagenolongertellsyousomethingabout
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hissocialposition,marriageorhealthy.There’snolonger
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aparticularyearwhichonegoestoschoolorgoesto
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workorgetsmarriedorstartafamily.Thesocialclock
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thatkeptusontimeandtolduswhengotoschool,get
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ajob,orstopworkingisn’tasstrongasitwasusedtobe.
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Itdoesn’tsurpriseustoheara28-year-olduniversity
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presidentora35-year-oldgrandmother,or70-year-old
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manwhohasbecomeafatherforthefirsttime.Whatwe
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allknow,public’sideasarechangingnowadays.
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O
Myhometownisaprettycity,sopeoplethereare
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kindandpolite.Withcomingofspring,grassand
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treesturngreen,andflowersgrewinmanycolors.
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Insummer,theseaundertheblueskiesisevenmore
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beautiful.Afterautumnarrives,thecitylooksasan
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oldmanwithleavesfallenfromthetrees.Inwinter,
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alotofwhitebirdscometomycityforfood.Ican
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waitmorepatientlyabovetheseaforquitealong
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time.Whiletheyfindfishcomingtothesurface,they
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flydownimmediateand
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