高考英语热点内容专练二 书面表达概要写作.docx
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高考英语热点内容专练二书面表达概要写作
热点02书面表达概要写作
【命题趋势】
提供一篇350以内的短文,要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。
考查要求:
对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;
应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;
上下文的连贯性;
对各要点表达的独立性情况。
【满分技巧】
如何确保要点齐全?
【诀窍】
划分段落【不以自然段为单位】
段落数=要点数
说明文的段落划分
1.描述某事物的性质功用等:
性质/定义—功用/功能—应用/利好
2.针对某问题提出解决办法或措施:
问题—成因—解决方法/措施
3.介绍某现象及其原因结果:
现象—原因—结果
议论文的段落划分
三要素:
论点、论据和结论:
论点—论据1……论据n—结论
记叙文的段落划分
人物、情节(whodidwhat)、时间、地点:
夹叙夹议者:
+观点/哲理性推论:
情节1—情节2……情节n—启示
【热点话题】社会热点;学生生活;暑期活动
【限时检测】(建议用时:
30分钟)
A
(2019年浙江省高考真题)
话题:
父母鼓励孩子的方式
难度:
★★
建议用时:
5分
第二节读后续写(满分25分)
67.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Parentseverywherepraisetheirkids.JennBerman,authorofTheAtoZGuidetoRaisingHappyandConfidentKids,says,“We’vegonetotheoppositeextremeofafewdecadesagowhenparentstendedtobemorestrict.”Bygivingkidsalotofpraise,parentsthinkthey’rebuildingtheirchildren’sconfidence,when,infact,itmaybejusttheopposite.Toomuchpraisecanbackfireand,whengiveninawaythat’sinsincere,makekidsafraidtotrynewthingsortakeariskforfearofnotbeingabletostayontopwheretheirparents’praisehasputthem.
Still,don’tgotoofarintheotherdirection.Notgivingenoughpraisecanbejustasdamagingasgivingtoomuch.Kidswillfeellikethey’renotgoodenoughorthatyoudon’tcareand,asaresult,mayseenopointintryinghardfortheiraccomplishments.
Sowhatistherightamountofpraise?
Expertssaythatthequalityofpraiseismoreimportantthanthequantity.Ifpraiseissincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome,youcangiveitasoftenasyourchilddoessomethingthatdeservesaverbalreward.“Weshouldespeciallyrecognizeourchildren’seffortstopushthemselvesandworkhardtoachieveagoal,”saysDonahue,authorofParentingWithoutFear:
LettingGoofWorryandFocusingonWhatReallyMatters.“Onethingtorememberisthatit’stheprocessnottheendproductthatmatters.”
Yoursonmaynotbethebestbasketballplayeronhisteam.Butifhe’soutthereeverydayandplayinghard,youshouldpraisehiseffortregardlessofwhetherhisteamwinsorloses.Praisingtheeffortandnottheoutcomecanalsomeanrecognizingyourchildwhenshehasworkedhardtocleantheyard,cookdinner,orfinishabookreport.Butwhateveritis,praiseshouldbegivenonacase-by-casebasisandbeproportionate(相称的)totheamountofeffortyourchildhasputintoit.
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【写作思路】完成一篇概要写作,需要经过三个步骤,
1.读懂原文,抓住段落主题句。
在阅读过程中,需要准确把握文章的段落大意,学会剔除非重要信息,弄清楚不同体裁的文章的内部逻辑关系以及文章的篇章结构。
2.组织语言,转换表达。
在找到主题句明确全文中心的基础上,组织好语言,注重语言表达的独立性和准确性以及高级性,不全盘照抄原文句子,尽量用自己的语言转换表达,同时要注意篇幅的比例安排,用较多的文字去表达重要的内容。
3.通读全文,逻辑连贯。
要牢记各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接,用恰当的关联词去连贯全文。
【参考范文】
Parentstendtogotoextremeswhenitcomestopraisingtheirkids.(要点一)Yet,bothtoomuchandtoolittlepraisecanbeequallydamaging.(要点二)Whengivingpraise,parentsshouldbesincereandconcentrateontheprocessinsteadoftheresult.(要点三)Similarly,theyoughttogivepraiseforhowmuchefforttheirkidshaveinvestedintheworkthey’reinvolvedin.(要点四)
【名师点评】
本次浙江高考书面表达采用了概要写作题型。
概要写作是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁,考查的是学生在实现自由的思维表达之前,对他人的信息在理解的基础上进行概括表达的能力。
选材上,提供一篇350词以内的短文,题材不限,要求考生写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。
B
(2020届江苏南京师大苏州实验学校高三上第一次模拟考)
话题:
机器人
难度:
★★
建议用时:
5分
请认真阅读下面的短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Robotswillcreatedoublethenumberofjobsthattheywilldestroy,accordingtotheWorldEconomicForum(WEF),buttherewillbesignificantshiftsinthestructureofAmerica’sworkforcethatmayimpacteveryone.Thereportsaysthat75millionjobswillbereplacedbyartificialintelligence(AI),roboticsandautomation.Butitalsosuggeststhat133millionnewjobsmaybecreatedasorganizationsshiftthebalancebetweenhumanworkersandmachines.
Itisawidelyheldbeliefthatroutine,lowskilledjobsaremostatriskforautomation,butthereportshowsthatmanymiddleclassrolesarealsoatrisk.Financialanalysts,accountantsandlawyerscouldallseesignificantchangesby2022.Butmanualworkerscouldbeamongthehardesthit.
Meanwhile,therecouldbeahugechangeinthestructureoftheworkforce,withtheexecutivessurveyedbyWEFexpectingashiftawayfromfulltimeworktoflexibleemploymentwithafocusonproductivity.
Allindustriesexpectbigskillsgaps,statingthatatleast50percentoftheirworkforcewillrequirereskillingofsomedegree.Theaviation,travelandtourismindustrywillhavethelargestdemandforreskilling.
【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词概述短文的主要内容;
2.用约120个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:
(1)这一现象产生的原因有哪些(不少于两点);
(2)面对即将到来的“智能时代”你所做的准备。
【写作要求】
1.阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。
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【参考范文】
【概要】
Robotsarereplacinghumanbeingsbutarealsocreatingtwiceasmanyjobsastheyhavedestroyed,bringingaboutgreatchangesinthestructureofworkforceandrequirementsforreskilling.
【论述】
Behindthephenomenonarevariousreasons.Foronething,greatadvancesinscienceandtechnologymakeitpossibleforrobotstobewidelyemployedinmanyfields.Foranother,productivityhasbeengreatlyincreasedbyusingrobots,whichinturnhelpspromotethepopularityofrobots.Meanwhile,thewidespreadapplicationofrobotshasgeneratedgreatchangesinthewaypeopleworkaswellastheirchoicesofjobs.
Feelingluckytoliveintheintelligentage,I’dliketoequipmyselfwithrelevantknowledgeandenjoytheconvenienceitbringsus.Besides,Iwilltrytocultivatecreativethinkingandthesenseofinnovationsoastomeettheurgentneedsofthefastdevelopmentofscienceandtechnology.
C
(2020届新素养大二轮专题浙京津鲁琼版模拟卷1)
话题:
手机摄影大赛+收集
难度:
★★
建议用时:
5分
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假如你是李华,获悉中国日报(ChinaDaily)将举办“厉害了,我的国”(AmazingChina)手机摄影大赛。
请写封邮件建议你的美国留学生朋友George参加,邮件内容包括:
1.作品要求:
展示风土人情,附上作品名称;
2.投稿方式与截止时间:
12月30日前发邮件至ac@;
3.表示愿意提供帮助。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头及结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
DearGeorge,
Howiseverythinggoing?
Yours,LiHua
第二节阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Whileittakestime,energyandmoneythatcouldsurelybeputtoamuchmoreproductiveuse,therearemillionsofcollectorsaroundtheworld.Peoplecollectpostcards,chocolatewrappersorwhatevertheylike.Collectingmustbeoneofthemostvariedhumanactivities,andit’sonethatmanypsychologistsfindfascinating.Manyformsofcollectinghavebeendignifiedwithatechnicalname:
anarctophilistcollectsteddybears,aphilatelistcollectspostagestampsandadeltiologistcollectspostcards.
Therearepeoplewhocollectsomethingbecausetheywanttomakemoney,andthiscouldbecalledaninstrumentalreasonforcollecting,thatis,collectingasameanstoanend.Theywilllookfor,say,antiques(古董)thattheycanbuycheaplyandexpecttobeabletosellataprofit.Buttheremaywellbeapsychologicalfactortoo:
buyingcheapandsellingdearcankeepthecollectorasenseofachievement.Andassellingonlineissoeasy,morepeoplearejoiningin.
Ifyouthinkaboutcollectingpostagestamps,anotherpotentialreasonforitisitseducationalvalue.Stampcollectingopensawindowtoothercountriesandtotheplants,animalsorfamouspeopleshownonthestamps.Similarly,inthenineteenthcenturymanycollectorsamassed(积累)animalsandplantsfromaroundtheglobeandtheircollectionsprovideavastamountofinformationaboutthenaturalworld.Withoutthosecollections,ourunderstandingwouldbegreatlyinferiortowhatitis.
Notallcollectorsareinterestedinlearningfromtheirhobby,though,sowhatwemightcallapsychologicalreasonforcollectingistheneedforasenseofcontrolandasenseoffulfillment,perhapsasawayofdealingwithinsecurity.Stampcollectors,forinstance,arrangetheirstampalbums,usuallyveryneatly,organizingtheircollectionsaccordingtocertaincommonplaceprinciples—perhapsbycountryinalphabeticorderorgroupingstampsbywhattheydescribe—people,birds,mapsandsoon.
【应用文范文】
DearGeorge,
Howiseverythinggoing?
IhavesomeexcitingnewsforyouthatChinaDailywillholdamobilephotocontestnamed“AmazingChina”.Iknowyouhaveagreatloveforphotography,sowhynotgiveitatry?
Thecontestwelcomessubmissionsaboutnaturalscenery,attractivefiguresorlocalcustomsofChina.Itwillbebetterifeachphotoisaccompaniedwithatitle.You’dbettersendyourphotostoac@andthedeadlineforentrieswillbeDec.30th.
Ibelieveitisagreatopportunitytoshareyourpreciousexperienceswithus.Ifyouareinterested,I’mmorethanhappytobeyourhelperandoffermyadvice.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyourgreatworks.
Yours,LiHua
【概要范文】
Collectingwinstheheartsofmanypeopledespitethetime,effortandmoneytheyhavetoinv
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