概要写作专题训练 015篇 新高考英语新题型写作三合一解读+专项训练.docx
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概要写作专题训练015篇新高考英语新题型写作三合一解读+专项训练
高考英语概要写作
专题训练
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概要写作1:
Guidetheirkidstousecellphones
Therearesomeimportantregulationsparentscantaketomakesuretheirkidsusecellphonesinasafeandresponsibleway.Whenkidsknowwhattheconsequencesarewhenrulesaren’tfollowed,thatmakeslifemorepredictableforthem.
Mostkidsarenotpayingfortheircellphonesortheircellphoneplans,soifyoupayforit,youownit,whichmeansyouhavetherighttotakeitawayanytimeiftheydisobeytherulesyousetupearlier.
Afterakidhasacellphone,suddenlyparentsdiscoverdatarunsouthalfwaythroughthemonth.Thiscangetexpensiveandyourkidsneedtoknowhowtomonitortheiruse.Also,teencellphoneaddictionshouldbelimited.Generally,it’sagoodideatohavenocellphonepolicywhiletheyaredoinghomeworkandatbedtime.Cometoagreementinadvanceaboutwhattheyareandaren’tallowedtodownloadontheircellphone.Therearesomereallybadappsforkidsthatyoudon’twantontheirphones.
Makesureyourkidsunderstandhowtosetuptheirprivacy.Talkwiththemaboutwhyguardingtheirprivacyissoimportant.Manyteenstrulyhavenoconceptabouteverythingthatacellphonecanshareaboutthemincludingpersonalinformationandtheirlocation.
Youwanttocoverwhatisandisn’tappropriatetoshareviaacellphone.Thisdefinitelymeansphotosandlanguageusedinemailsandonsocialmedia.Butdon’tforgetsimplerthingslikeprovidingtheiraddress,theirageorwhatschooltheygotoonline.
Lastly,therearetimesandplaceswhenusingone’scellphoneisnotappropriate.Inmovietheatersorduringclasstimeatschoolthephoneshouldbeonsilentandputaway.Additionally,whensomeoneishavingafacetofaceconversationwiththem,theyneedtobelookingattheperson,nottheirphone.
【答案】Parentscanmakerulestoguidetheirkidstousecellphonessafelyandresponsibly.(要点1)First,parentshavetherighttodeterminehowtousecellphonesbecausetheyownthem.(要点2)Besides,parentsshouldteachkidstousecellphoneswisely.(要点3)Lastly,itisimportanttomakesuretheyknowhowtoprotecttheirprivacy.Meanwhile,whenandwheretousecellphonesshouldalsobetold.(要点4)
【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。
文章介绍了父母可以采取一些重要的规定确保孩子安全、负责地使用手机。
【详解】
1要点摘录
①Therearesomeimportantregulationsparentscantaketomakesuretheirkidsusecellphonesinasafeandresponsibleway.
②soifyoupayforit,youownit,whichmeansyouhavetherighttotakeitawayanytimeiftheydisobeytherulesyousetupearlier.
③Thiscangetexpensiveandyourkidsneedtoknowhowtomonitortheiruse.Generally,it’sagoodideatohavenocellphonepolicywhiletheyaredoinghomeworkandatbedtime.Cometoagreementinadvanceaboutwhattheyareandaren’tallowedtodownloadontheircellphone.
④Makesureyourkidsunderstandhowtosetuptheirprivacy.
⑤Youwanttocoverwhatisandisn’tappropriatetoshareviaacellphone.
⑥Lastly,therearetimesandplaceswhenusingone’scellphoneisnotappropriate.
2.缜密构思
将第3点进行整理概括,将第4、5两个要点进行重组
3.遣词造句
①Parentscanmakerulestoguidetheirkidstousecellphonessafelyandresponsibly.
②Parentshavetherighttodeterminehowtousecellphonesbecausetheyownthem.
③Parentsshouldteachkidstousecellphoneswisely.
④Itisimportanttomakesuretheyknowhowtoprotecttheirprivacy.
⑤Whenandwheretousecellphonesshouldalsobetold.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Itisimportanttomakesuretheyknowhowtoprotecttheirprivacy.(使用了it作形式主语,概括第四段的内容,表达非常高级。
)
[高分句型2]Whenandwheretousecellphonesshouldalsobetold.(疑问词+不定式做主语,概括了最后一段的内容,用法比较高级)
概要写作2:
Ed-tech
TheUN'sMillenniumDevelopmentGoalsincludedtheambitionthatby2015alltheworld'schildrenwouldcompleteprimaryschool.Thishaslargelybeenachieved:
nineoutoftenchildrenarenowenrolled.Alas,thefigureisnotasimpressiveasitsounds.Eventhoughmostoftheworld'schildrengotoschool,anawfullotofthemlearnprettymuchnothingthere.AccordingtoarecentWorldBankstudyofsevensub-SaharanAfricancountries,halfofnine-year-oldscannotreadasimplewordandthree-quarterscannotreadasimplesentence.Thereasonisterribleteaching:
only7%ofteachersstudiedhadtheminimumknowledgeneededtoteachreadingandwritingeffectively.
Payingteachersmore,inthehopeofrecruitingbetterones,isnottheanswer.Inpoorcountries,teachersarewellpaidbylocalstandards—annualsalariesarefourtimesGDPperpersoninIndia.Nordoesraisingorreducingpayseemtomakemuchdifference:
neitherasharpcutinPakistaninthelate1990snorasharpincreaseinIndonesiaafter2005hadanyimpactonlearningoutcomes.
Severalrecentstudiessuggested-techcanhelp.Itseemstobringaboutbigimprovementsinpoorcountries.Inastudyofarangeofinterventionsinpoorcountries—includingsmallerclasssizes,incentivesforteachersandpupils—techhadthebiggesteffect.
Someofthescarceresourcesbeingspentonteacherscouldthereforebebetterspentoned-tech.Thatdoesnotmeandumpingcomputersonschoolsinthehopethatchildrenwillunderstandhowtousethem,amisconceptiononwhichplentyofmoneyhasbeenwasted.Instead,itmeansprovidingschoolswithsoftwarethatchildrencanusewithminimalhelpfromadults,thatgetsthingsrightmoreoftenthantheteachersdo,thatadjustsitselftothechildren’sability,thatsendsteachershintsaboutwhattheyaresupposedtobeteaching.
Technologyisnocureall.Goodtraditionalteacherarenotoutofdate,andareneverlikelytobe.Andauthoritiesneedtoholdteacherstoaccount.Buted-techcanhelpgreatly—byassistingthebestteachersand,mostimportantly,makingupforthefailingsoftheworst.
【答案】Fortheambitionthatby2015alltheworld'schildrenwouldcompleteprimaryschool,ithaslargelybeenaccomplished.Butseveralrecentstudieshaveshownthated-techcanhelpthebestteachersandmakeupforthefailingsoftheworst.Becausethetechnologyisnoteverything,theauthoritiesshouldmaketeachersbeartheresponsibility.
【分析】
这是一篇说明文。
文章讲述了,在2015年前,联合国让全世界所有儿童都能完成小学学业的雄心壮志的千年发展在很大程度上已经实现了。
但最近几项研究表明,ed-tech(教学技术)可以起到帮助作用,帮助最好的老师和弥补最坏情况下的失败。
但技术不是万能的,当局需要让教师负起责任。
【详解】
1要点摘录
①TheUN'sMillenniumDevelopmentGoalsincludedtheambitionthatby2015alltheworld'schildrenwouldcompleteprimaryschool.Thishaslargelybeenachieved:
nineoutoftenchildrenarenowenrolled.
②Severalrecentstudiessuggested-techcanhelp.
③Technologyisnocureall.Goodtraditionalteacherarenotoutofdate,andareneverlikelytobe.Andauthoritiesneedtoholdteacherstoaccount.
④Buted-techcanhelpgreatly—byassistingthebestteachersand,mostimportantly,makingupforthefailingsoftheworst.
2.缜密构思将4个要点进行重组整合。
3.遣词造句
Fortheambitionthatby2015alltheworld'schildrenwouldcompleteprimaryschool,ithaslargelybeenaccomplished.
Butseveralrecentstudieshaveshownthated-techcanhelpthebestteachersandmakeupforthefailingsoftheworst.Buttechnologyisnoteverything,theauthoritiesshouldmaketeachersbeartheresponsibility.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Butseveralrecentstudieshaveshownthated-techcanhelpthebestteachersandmakeupforthefailingsoftheworst.运用了that引导的宾语从句,对原文倒数第三段和最后一段进行了概括。
[高分句型2]Becausethetechnologyisnoteverything,theauthoritiesshouldmaketeachersbeartheresponsibility.运用了Because引导的原因状语从句,对原文最后一段进行了概括。
概要写作3:
Distractedwalking
Parentsusuallyteachtheirchildrenhowtocrossthestreetsafely—bylookingbothwaysforcars.Butdotheyalsoteachthemtoputawaytheircellphones?
Accordingtostatisticsfromyearsofstudies,theyalmostneversayso.Inviewofthis,thecityofHonolulu,Hawaiiwantseveryonetolearnthatlesson.
Textingwhilecrossingthestreetwillsoonbebannedinthecity.BeginningonOctober24,youcanbefinedfrom$15to$99ifyoustepintoaHonolulustreetwhilelookingatyourphone.HonoluluisthefirstmajorU.S.citytobanwhatiscalled“distractedwalking”.Itrecentlypassedalaw,whichsaysnopedestrianshallcrossastreetorhighwaywhileviewingamobileelectronicdevice.
Thelawincludesallelectronicdeviceswithscreens,fromcellphones,tablets,gamingdevices,digitalcamerastolaptopcomputers.However,thelawdoespermitanexception:
pedestriansmayusesuchdevicesinthestreettocallemergencyservicesandrescueworkers,suchasfirefightersandpoliceofficers.
Pedestriandeathshavebeenincreasingastheuseofcellphonesrisesinthepastfewyears.TheGovernorsHighwaySafetyAssociation,orGHSA,sayspedestriandeathsintheUnitedStatesincreased25percentbetween2010and2015.Thattrendcontinuedin2016withthenumberofpedestriandeathsrisingtoalmost6,000,11%higherthanin2015.
OtherU.S.citiesmayfollowHonolulu.ThestateofWashingtonwasthefirsttooutlawdistracteddrivingbackin2007.Now,46otherstatesaswellasWashingtonD.C.,PuertoRico,GuamandtheU.S.VirginIslands,havelawsagainsttextingwhiledriving.
【答案】Onepossibleversion:
Despitegeneralguidanceonroadsafety,seldomdoparentsasktheirchildrentosetasidetheirphoneswhentheyneedtocrossastreet.Honoluluhasissuedabanondistractedwalking.Whoeverviolatesitshallfacefinesof$15to$99.However,thelawdoesallowemergencycalls.Withcellphonescausingincreasingpedestriandeaths,moreUScitiesmayfollowsuittoimproveroadsafety.
【分析】
这是一篇新闻报道。
文章讲述了,檀香山已经颁布了禁止分心行走的禁令,违反者将面临15至99美元的罚款;但是,法律允许紧急呼叫。
随着手机导致越来越多的行人死亡,更多的美国城市可能会效仿,以改善道路安全。
【详解】
1要点摘录
①Parentsusuallyteachtheirchildrenhowtocrossthestreetsafely—bylookingbothwaysforcars.Butdotheyalsoteachthemtoputawaytheircellphones?
②Texti
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