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英语作文复习
2015年6月Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandcommentonparents’roleintheirchildren’sgrowth.Youshouldwriteatleast120butnomorethan180words。
破题思路:
第一段:
漫画描述,重点是母女之间的对话内容,从而引出文章的主题是有关孩子的独立性,家长干涉孩子过多。
第二段:
可以分析此现象产生的原因。
第三段:
采取措施解决此现象。
Howimpressivethecartoonisindescribingthemostwidespreadsocialphenomenonconcerningtheindependenceofthechildren.Let’stakeacloserlookatthedrawing,thegirltoldhermothershewasacceptedbytheuniversityofhermother’schoicewithpride.Theauthor’srealpurposeisnotthedrawingitself,buttoleadustosecurewhathidesbehindthepicture。
Whatarethereasonsforit?
Inthefollowingsentences,I’llventuretoexplorethereasons.Tostartwith,theonly-onechildpolicyinChinahasmademoreandmoreparentspaymuchattentiontotheirchildrenthattheywouldliketoreplacetheirchildrentodoeverything.Inaddition,parentsdon’tbelievethattheirchildrenhaveenoughabilitytodealwiththeirpersonalmattersandmakeanydecisions.Therearesomesuggestionsgiventoourparents。
Foronething,itisquiteimportantforourparentstorealizethattheirchildrenwillgrowupandhavetheirownideasastimegoesby.Foranother,childrenshouldbeencouragedtomakesomedecisionsalonesothattheyareabletopursuewhattheyreallywant.Icontendthatourparentsshouldgivetheirchildrenafreehandinsomematterstohelpthemtobeindependent。
参考范文:
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Inthepicture,thereisastudenttalkingtohisfatherwiththewordsthat“WhyamIgoingtoschoolifmyphonealreadyknowseverything?
”Howvividisthepicturetoshowtheyounggenerations’dependenceonhightechnologiessuchasthephone.Butinmyopinion,hightechnologiescannotreplacegoingtoschoolatall.
Threepointscanaccountformyview.Firstly,withoutgoingtoschool,wecannotlearnbasicknowledgeandethicsthatphonesareunabletoteachus.Secondly,withoutgoingtoschool,wecannotlearnskillstomakegooduseofhightechnologies.Thirdly,withoutgoingtoschool,wecannotlearndisciplinesandunitywithpeoplearoundus.Inschool,notonlydoweacquireknowledgebutwelearnhowtocommunicatewithpeople.
Inaword,nomatterhowhightechnologiesarepowerful,theytotallycannotreplacegoingtoschool.
参考范文:
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Asisillustratedinthepicture,apupilisaskinghisfatherwhyheisgoingtoschoolifhisphonealreadyknowseverything.Itcanbeknownthatthepupillacksathoroughunderstandingofgoingtoschool.
Comparedwiththephone,therearecertainthingsthatcanbeonlyachievedbygoingtoschool.Inthefirstplace,goingtoschoolendowsuswiththeexperiencesofgettingalongwithothers.Onlybycontactingpeoplecanourinterpersonalskillsbedeveloped.Thephoneonlyprovidesinformationinanenvironmentwherethereisjustthephoneandyou.Secondly,youcanconsultyourteacherfacetofaceaboutanydetailofyourquestion,whichcannotbedoneonyourphone.Lastbutnotleast,schoolisaplacewhereyoucanlearntobeindependent.Ifyoustaywithyourparentsallthetime,youwillnevertrulygrowup.
Toconclude,it’sanecessityforkidstogotoschool.Itisatruthwhichshouldbewellacknowledgedthatschoolcanneverbereplacedbythephone.
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescrptionofthepictureandcommenonthiskindofmodernlife.Youshouldweiteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.
破题思路:
第一段:
描述漫画内容,引出文章主题:
电脑的使用越来越广泛,使用的时间也越来越长。
第二段:
分析该现象的原因。
第三段:
提出措施解决。
或得出自己的结论。
Thispicturevividlydescribesthatthepersonusesacomputerinthewholedayevenwhenhefallsasleepatnight.Whatthecartoonconveysistheimpactofcomputersonpeople.Newproductsarebeinginventedeveryminuteofeveryday,allofwhichwillholdswayoverpeopleinsomerespects.However,inallthesetechnologiesandproducts,computershaveexertedthemostimportantinfluenceonpeople.Somepeopleassertthatcomputershavemadelifemorecomplexandstressful,whilesomepeoplebelievethatcomputershavemadelifeeasierandmoreconvenient.NowmanyofmyclassmatesliketosurftheInternetintheirfreetime.IthinkInternetcanbringusbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Forexample,ifIhavesometroublestudying,Icansurftheinternettofindmorehelpfulinformation.However,Internetcanmakesomeproblemsatthesametime.Inaword,inspiteofthefactthecomputerappearstohavemadelifemorecomplexandstressful,Ifeelthattheadvantagesaremoreobvious,whichhavebecomeanintegralpartofeverydaylife。
参考范文:
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Thismodernlife
Asisshownintheabovepicture,peoplesitinfrontofthecomputeralldayandnight,evenintheirdreamsthey’restillplayingcomputergames.Suchthought-provokingphenomenonis,especiallyamongyoungpeople,prevailinourmodernlife.
It’struethatthecomputerhasbroughtgreatconveniencetoourmodernlife.However,asisillustratedinthepicture,theoveruseofitmayleadtoseveralbadconsequences.Tobeginwith,thereisevidencethatlong-termexposuretoelectromagneticradiationemittedfromcomputersmaycausemanyhealthproblems,likeinsomnia,headaches,andevencancer.Inaddition,whenpeopleimmersehimselfintheworldofcomputer,theytendtopaylessattentiontothesurroundings,andexcessiveuseofthecomputermeansmuchlesschanceofface-to-faceinteractionswithpeoplewhopopulatetheirreallives.
Inconclusion,whilecomputershavecontributealottomakingourlifemoreconvenient,weshouldusethemappropriately.
参考范文:
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首段:
Asisclearlydepictedfromaseriesofcartoonsthatamanisexcessivelydependentonthecomputerwhetherinworkingandplayingorathomeandsleeping.Theimpactofthecomputerondailylifeissuchseriousnessthatitishightimewepaidattentiontoit.
展开段:
Inthefirstplace,duetothewideapplicationofthecomputer,somepeoplecallednetfriendsalwaystakepriorityoverourfamilyandfriendsinreallife.ThebulkofeachdayincludingourtimeandenergyisspentontheInternet.What’smore,theInternetdeprivesusofthedelightincommunicationwithothers.Whentakingtosomeonebyus,wecanheartheirvoices,seetheirexpressions,andevenholdtheirhandsifwewouldliketo.Lastbutnotleast,thecomputerwillleadtoadeclineofourskillsofface-to-facecommunication.Thuswemayfeelembarrassedandfindithardertocommunicatewithpeoplearoundus.
结论段:
Tosumup,weshouldn’tbedependentonthecomputerexcessively.Nomatterhowconvenientandspeedyitis,weshouldremembertheadvantageofface-to-facecommunication.
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaybasedonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandcommentonparents’roleintheirchildren’sgrowth.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan180words.
“Goodnewsmom!
Iwasacceptedtothecollegeofyourchoice.”
参考范文:
Parents’roleintheirchildren’sgrowth
Asisprescribedinthepicture,thegirltoldhermother,“Goodnewsmom!
Iwasacceptedtothecollegeofyourchoice.”Wecaninferthatthemomchoosescollegeforherchild,butshouldtheparentsmakesuchdecisionfortheirchildren?
AsfarasIconcerned,parentscangiveadvicefortheirchildreninsteadofmakingdecisionsforthem.
Firstly,parentsalwayswanttogivetheirchildrenthebest,however,theycannotcompletelyunderstandtheirchildren’sinterestandcan’tsurewhatthemostsuitableistotheirchildren.Theyjustgivetheirchildrenwhattheyconsiderthebest,regardlessofwhattheirchildrenwantandwhattheylike.Sothebestwaytoshowyourloveistorespectchildren’schoice.Secondly,thechildrenshouldresponsiblefortheirownlife.Parentscancompanytheirchildrendecadesofyears,buttheycannotcompanytheirchildren’swholelife.Parentscangivetheirchildrenadvice,butteachtheirchildrentobeindependentismoreimportantintheirgrowth.
Tosumup,parentscangivetheirchildrenadvice,buttheyshouldrespecttheirchildren’schoice.Afterall,childrenwillgrowuponeday,andtheymustlearnhowtoliveindependentandberesponsiblefortheirownlife.
2014年6月SupposeaforeignfriendofyoursiscomingtovisityourChina,whatisthemostinterestingplaceyouwouldliketotakehim/hertoseeandwhy?
假设你的一位外国朋友来参观中国,你最感兴趣的地方想带他/她去看?
为什么?
【范文一】
IfoneofmyforeignfriendsiscomingtoChina,nodoubt,IwilltakehimtoBeijingfirst.Thereasonsareasfollowing:
First,BeijingisthecapitalofChina,anenergeticcitywithalonghistory.Beijingisasuperlargedistributioncenter,high-qualitygoodsacrossthecountrywillappearhere,soyoucaneasilyfindwhateveryoulike.Second,thereareagreatnumberoftouristattractionsandhistoricsitesinBeijing,suchasForbiddenCity,TiananmenSquareandSummerPalace.Whatismore,someoftheseinterestingplacesarewithinwalkingdistance,soyoucanvisitseveralscenicspotsbyspendingarelativelylesstime.Third,thetrafficinBeijingisveryconvenientandinexpensive.Youcantakebusorsubwaytraintoanywhereyouwanttogo.
【重点句型及短语】
nodoubt毋庸置疑
distributioncenter物流中心,配送中心
agreatnumberof许多
Whatismore而且
【范文二】
InChina,there’sasayingthat"ThelandscapeofGuilintopsthatofanyotherplaceunderheaven."Inlightofthis,IwillrecommendGuilinasthefirstdestinationofmyforeignfriend’striptoChina.
OverlookingtheLiJiangRiver,Guilinislocatedinthe
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