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中考范文
1.范文讲评:
周末
「要求」
周末两天的休息对于平时忙于工作学习的人们来说是非常宝贵的。
请你根据下列提纲写一篇短文。
周末对于人们来说意味着什么。
每个人都有自己度周末的方式。
我是怎样度周末的。
「范文」
Weekends
Weekendstopeoplemeanthattheycanhaveatwo-daygoodrest.Forexample,peoplecangoouttoenjoythemselvesorgettogetherwithrelativesandfriendstotalkwitheachotherorwatchinterestingvideotapeswiththewholefamily.
Everyonespendsweekendsinhisownway.Withintwodays,somepeoplecanrelaxthemselvesbylisteningtomusic,readingnovels,orwatchingfilms.Othersperhapsaremoreactivebyplayingbasketball,wimmingordancing.Differentpeoplehavedifferentrelaxations.
Ioftenspendweekendswithmyfamilyormyfriends.Sometimesmyparentstakemeonavisittotheiroldfriends.SometimesIgotothelibrarytostudyorborrowsomebookstogainmuchknowledge.Ialsogotoseevariousexhibitiontobroadenmyvision.Anexcursiontoseashoreormountainresortsismyfavoritewayofspendingweekends.Weekendsarealwaysenjoyableforme.
「评语」
全文思路清晰,论述充分,语言流畅易懂。
用词讲究,注意了词语搭配,没有重复、堆砌之感。
2.范文讲评:
节日出行
「要求」
和外国朋友交谈是文化生活中很重要的一部分,但是谈什么话题却要慎重考虑,因为各国风俗习惯不同,谈的东西要关涉到禁忌、兴趣。
学校的英语角将要组织一次对外交流活动。
请你以书面形式写一些可以作为谈话的材料。
「范文」
HolidaysandOutings
ItiscommoninEnglishtoaskpeopleabouttheirholidays.IntheWestmanyfamiliesgoawayonholidayduringthesummermonthsandsoitisveryusualtoaskaboutthis.Iftheholidayhasnotyettakenplace,thentheirholidayplanscanbetalkedabout.Andifitisalreadyover,thenwheretheywent,whethertheyenjoyeditandsooncanbediscussed.Similarquestionsareaskedbeforefestivalsandpubicholidays.
ForeignerslivingandworkinginChinaoftenhavefrequentopportunitiesfortravel,eitheratweekendsorduringtheirholidayperiods,soquestionsonthistopiccanoftenleadtofruitfuldiscussions.Theymaybeparticularlyinterestedtohearcommentsonwhichplacesareworthvisitingandwhy,especiallyiftheseplacesarealittlelesswellknownandnotclearlydescribedinthetourguides.
Takevacaticnandlongweekends.Neverletvacationtimeexpire.
「评语」
看完上文,可知这实际上是一篇讨论英语话题的文章。
从这个角度来写“HolidaysandOutings”这个题目可谓不无新义。
但是在与外国人交往时谈些什么都是一个很现实的问题。
本文提供了这一范例。
全篇也围这个问题来写,几乎每句话都是紧扣中心的。
比如它始终突出了这是一个话题,就反复用“ask”、“discuss”、以及“comment”等词。
3.范文讲评:
介绍你的学校
「要求」
下周将有一批外宾来校参观,请你给外宾简要介绍你校的情况。
内容包括三方面:
校史和成绩。
学校规模和主要设施。
师生状况(词数100—120)。
「范文」
AnIntroduction
Ourschoolwasbuiltin1945andagreatnumberofstudentshavegraduatedfromit.Nowmanyofthemhavebecomescientists,professorsandengineers.Manystudentshavealsobecomeworkersandfarmersaftergraduation.Theyhaveachievedgreatsuccessinthedevelopmentofmodernindustryandagriculture.
Ourschoolisakeymiddleschoolinourprovince.Ithasthirtyclasseswithover130students.Ourschoolhasasix-storeyedteachingbuilding,severallaboratoriesandalargeplayground.Lastyear,anewlibrarywasbuiltandithasmorethan1000copiesofbooks.
Alltheteachersherearetryingtheirbesttodotheirworkwell.Everystudentsismakingfulluseofhistimetotrainhimselftobeaqualifiedstudent.
「评语」
文章简洁得体,结构鲜明,语言流畅,介绍具体。
读后让人对学校概貌了然于胸。
school还有学派的意思,另外“一群鱼”叫做aschooloffish
4.范文:
你喜欢哪种方式的旅行?
WhichModeofTravelDoYoulike?
Directions:
ForthispartyouareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicWhichModeofTravelDoYoulike?
Youshouldwritenolessthan150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:
1.有的人喜欢参加旅行社旅游(packagetours)
2.有的人喜欢自己独立行动(travellingonone’sown)
3.比较这两种旅游方式,我喜欢的是……
范文:
Withthegeneralstandardoflivingimprovingandtheworkingweekbecomingshorter,moreandmorepeopleareabletomakeaholidaytriptoplacesofinterest.Whilemanyliketojoinpackagetoursfroconvenience,Iprefertotravelnmyown.
Iliketravellingonmayownnotonlybecauseitcostsmuchlessbutbecauseitgivesagreatdegreeofindependenceandfreedom.Travellingonmyown,I’mmyownboss;andcandecidewhentostartonmyway,wheretolingeralittlelongerandwhichspotcanbeskippedovertosaveenergyortimeforanotherspot.Icanalwaysadjustmyplan.Onthecontrary,inapackagetouryou’redeprivedofasmuchfreedomasinamilitarybase.Atthesoundofthewhistle,youhavetojumpupfromasoundsleepand,withheavy-liddedeyes,hurrytothegatheringplacewhereyouarecollectedandcountedtoboardacoach.Atthesightofthelittleflagwaving,youmustimmediatelytakeyourselfawayfromthescenesyouaremarvelingatandfollowtheguidewhosesoleinterestistocoverallspotsaccordingtohimstrictschedule,regardlessoftheweatheroryourhealthcondition.
True,youmayencounterinconveniencesifyoutravelindividually,forinstance,gettingaccommodationsforthenightandfindingaplaceformeals.Butnothingcanbecomparedwiththefreedomwhichisvitaltoapersonwhotakesaholidaytripmainlytoescapefromconstraintsofhisroutinelife.
5.范文:
全家福APhotoofMyFamily
Lookatthisphotographofmyfamily.Therearefivepeopleinit.Thetallestoneismyfather.Heisforty-eightyearsold.Mymotherisstandingbesidehim.Sheisnotasmyfather.Sheisthreeyearsyoungerthanmyfather.Sittinginfrontofthemaremygrandparents.Mygrandfatheristhatfatonewithapairofglasses.Mygrandmotherisasfatashe.Thislittleoneisme.I’msittingbetweenthem.
Allofusloveoneanther.Ihaveahappyfamily.
范文:
春天来了Springiscomingon
Winterhasgone,andspringiscomingon.
Watchingtheicemelting,Iknowthewholeearthisbeingrejuvenatedfromthewinter.Avarietyofflowerscomeouttoshowtheirbeautyandbringusfragrance.Itisafeastforoureyesandsouls.Theyellowgrasssuddenlyturngreen.Theyoungleavesgrowonthebranches.Theswallowsflybackhomewiththegreetingofspring.
Everythingiscomingtolife.Feelingthewarmsunshine,enjoyingthebeautifulscenery,listeningtothewonderfulmusic,drinkingthenewtea,mymoodisperfectandIhavenothingelsetodesire.Springisthemostfantasticseasonintheyear.Itmeanssomuchtotheotherthreeseasons.
7.范文:
一个特殊的女孩Aspecialgirl
Thereisaspecialgirl.Whyisshespecial?
Firstlyshelookslikeaboysoherclassmatesalwayscallhera“hoyden”.Maybethey’rerightbecauseshealsohasthesamehobbiesastheboys.Shelikesplayingsoccer,basketball,tabletennis,badminton,computergamesandsoon.Ifsomeonebothershershewillfeelannoyedandevenfightagainsthim.
Secondlysheisalovelygirl.Sheloveslifeverymuch.Youmayseehersmilingallthetime.Shelikesmakingfriendswithothers.Shelikesmakingjokeswiththem,too.Shelikessingingbutsheisnotgoodatit.Shelikesdancing,butsheisnotgoodatit,either.
Thirdly,sheisasentimentalgirl.Shelikestalkingtobirdsandflowers.Shelikestalkingtoherself,too.Whenshe’swatchingTV,shewillcryoveratouchingscene.Sometimessheismovedtocryalldayandallnight.
Lastlyshe’safantasticgirl.Shehaslotsofdreams.Shealwaysdreamsofherfuturesuchasherjobwhenshegrowsup.Shewantstobeascientistbecausescientistsinventthingsthatarehelpfulforourlives.ShewantstobeaTVhostessbecauseshehasbeautifulvoiceandshealsowantstobe…
That’swhyIsaidshe’sspecial.Doyouwanttoknowher?
IfyoucankeepthesecretIcantellyouwhosheis.Thespecialgirlisme.
8.范文:
参观博物馆GoingtotheMuseums
Duringalongvacation,Iusuallyliketogotoseetheexhibitsinoneofagreatmanymuseums.Suchastheartmuseum,thehistorymuseum,themuseumofnaturalhistory,andthemuseumofscienceandtechnology.
Manywonderfulthingsarecaredforinmuseums.Therearepaintings,potteries,sculptures,costumes,swords,ancientanimalbonesandplants,stuffedanimals,antiquesteamlocomotives,andmanyothers.Itisalwaysagoodreviewofhistorytovisitthosemuseums.
9.范文:
寄信MailingaLetter
Alllargecitiesaroundtheworldhavemanypostofficeslocatedthroughoutthecity,andeventhesmallestvillagehasatleastonepostalstation.Youmaygotoapostofficetomailaletter.
However,therearemailboxeslocatedoneverysecondorthirdcornerinallcitiesandtowns.Anyletterorsmallpackagehavingsufficientpostagemaybedroppedinanyofthesemailboxes.
Ifapersonwishesalettertobedeliveredmorequicklytotheaddress,hemaybuyaspecialdeliverystampanddeliveryismadedirectlybythemessengerinsteadofbytheregularcarrier
寒假生活Wonderfullifeinwinterholiday
FromthesixteenthofJanuarytotheseventhofFebruaryisourWinterHoliday.IthinkeverybodydidalotofthingsintheWinterHoliday.ButIdidn't.LetyoutolistentomystoryofWinterHoliday.
Ispendalotoftimeonthehomework…EverydayinmyWinterHoliday,Ialwaysgotuplate.ThenIlistenedtothetape,itwasnineo'clock.ThenIatebreakfastandthenIdidmyhomeworkduringthedaytime!
I’mnotveryslowbutthehomeworkwastooheavy!
I'munluckyontheplayingtoo.IplayedfirecrackerbutIhurtmyfingerwiththefire.I'mcarelesstokindlethefirecracker,soI'mveryunlucky.
Istillunluckyonmyfriend'sparty.Inthemorning,IwantedtogetupearlybutIwokeupat10:
50.Aftertenminutes,thepartywouldstart!
SoIonlyeatapieceofbreadthenIgotomyfriend’shome!
AndIstayathishomeforalongtimewhenIcamehome.Mymotherandfatherwereveryangryandtheyscoldedme!
I'mworriedandfeelunluckyonmyweigh.Lastterm,Iwas48kilogrambutnowIam51kilogram!
Imusttodobanting!
Butmostimportant,IhavegonetoShanghaiOceanAquarium,IwanttogothereverymuchbecauseIwanttoseethehorse,them…inthesea.NowI'vedonei
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