TEM4命题作文的写作模式与语言参考.docx
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TEM4命题作文的写作模式与语言参考
TEM4命题作文的写作模式及语言参考
年份
作文题目
题材
题型
体裁
1999
AMajorAdvantage/DisadvantageofAdvertisingonTelevision
社会现象
利弊讨论
议论文
2000
TheImportanceofExtracurricularActivities
学生生活
观点说明
说明文
2001
TravelBroadenstheMind
大众生活
观点说明
说明文
2002
TheBestWaytoStayHealthy
大众生活
提出建议
说明文
2003
TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMind
大众生活
观点说明
说明文
2004
WillPhonesKillLetterWriting?
社会现象
观点讨论
议论文
2005
MyIdeaofaUniversityArtsFestival
校园文化生活
提出建议
说明文
2006
SavingMoneyorSpendingTomorrow’sMoney
大众生活
观点讨论
议论文
2007
IsItWisetoMakeFriends
Online?
社会现象
观点讨论
议论文
2008
TheBenefitsofVolunteering
大众生活
观点说明
说明文
2009
WillTourismBringHarmtotheEnvironment?
社会现象
观点讨论
议论文
1.比较选择类作文20%
2.观点说明类作文(意义、重要性、危害性等)30%
3.观点论证类作文30%
4.现象解释类作文
5.提出建议、解决问题类作文20%
观点说明类作文(意义、重要性、危害性等)
1.典型题眼:
TheImportanceof…/TravelBroadensMind
Theharmof…
2.结构模板
第一段:
引出要说明的事物,明确自己对这一事物的态度(赞同或反对,应该不应该,重要否?
有利还是有害?
)
第二段:
第一句:
承接首段观点,对本段容及其发展方式加以限制(一般用举例法),说明重要性(危害性、有利之处)表现在以下几个方面:
分主题一:
重要性(危害性、有利之处)之一(一句话)+拓展观点(2-3句);
分主题二:
重要性(危害性、有利之处)之二(一句话)+拓展观点(2-3句);
第三段:
结论:
重要性+建议或展望(危害性+警示;有利性+建议)
Directions:
Peopleinmodernsocietyliveunderalotofpressure,fromeducation,career,orfamily.Soitisimportantforthemtokeepagoodmoodunderwhatevercircumstances.Writeacompositiononthefollowingtopic:
TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMood
TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMood
Competitionisoneofthetraitsofthesociety.Heatedcompetitionincareerandeducationhasexertedgreatpressureonpeople,whichbringsaboutmanyphysicalillnessandmentalproblems.Inmyopinion,agoodmoodiscriticallyimportantforusunderwhateversituations.
Theimportancecanbeshowninthefollowingtwoaspects.Foronething,agoodmoodisbeneficialtoourhealth,bothphysicallyandmentally.Peoplewhoarealwaysgloomy,accordingtotraditionalmedicine,havemorechancestosufferfromphysicalillnesssuchaskidneypains.Onthecontrary,keepingagoodmood,wecankeepourselvesrelaxedandthereforecankeepcalmandoptimisticindifficulties.Therefore,agoodmoodkeepsthedoctors(includingmentalhealing)away.Foranother,withagoodmood,wearelikelytoworkmoreefficiently.Inagoodmoodwearemorewillingtocooperatewithothers,andaremorewillingtolistentoothers’advice.Withsuchrelaxation,itiseasyforallthepeopletocooperatetofigureoutsolutionstotheproblems.Therefore,itisnotexaggeratingtosaythatagoodmoodisthepreconditionofhighworkingefficiency.
Fromthereasonswehavepresentedabove,wecansurelycometotheconclusionthatkeepingagoodmood,wewillbehealthier,andinagoodmood,wearemorelikelytosucceedinourcareer.
语言模板:
…Aplaysaveryimportantrolein…
TheimportanceofAliesinthefollowingaspects.FirstlyAisnecessaryto…Secondly,Acanalso…
Fromwhatarediscussedabove,wecannaturallydrawtheconclusionthatAisessentialto…Therefore,weshould…
Directions:
Currently,therehasbeenaheateddiscussiononwhetheritisappropriateforcollegestudentstorentanapartmentandliveoutsidecampus.Writeanessayaboutthisissuetostateyouropinion.
TheHarmsofCollegeStudents’RentingandLivingOut
Thereisapopulartendencythatcollegestudentsliveinrentedhouses,enjoyingtheirfreedom.Nomatterhowpopularitisnowadays,however,Iholdadisapprovingopiniontosuchabehavior.
Moneyisthefirstandthemostimportantreasonformetosay“no”tothispractice.Rentingahouseoutofcampuswouldcostthemmuchmoremoneyonwatersupply,electricitysupply,housemaintainingandsoon.Thisisaheavyburdenforcollegestudentswhoarestilleconomicallyindependent.Whynotspendsuchmoneyonbooksorstudyingmaterials?
Thesecondreasonformydisapprovalisthatlivingoutofcampusandseparatingfromyourclassmateswouldbringaboutmuchcommunicationinconvenienceandconsequentlyleadtolittlesenseofbelongingtoyourclass,whichwillblockyoufrommuchinformalbutusefulinformationwhiletalkingwithyourpals.
ThelastreasonIwanttopointoutissecurity.Livinginstudents’building,youareprotectedbyschoolguards;livingout,itisyourselftoturnto.Theremaynotbeanyonetoguaranteeyoursafetywhensomethinghappens.
Whenstudentstalkaboutrentinghousesoutofcampus,romanticscenesbubble.Butthinkingaboutthereallife,weallhavetoberealisticenough.
Directions:
December5thisInternationalVolunteersDay.Since1985,whentheUnitedNationsannouncedthespecialday,tensofmillionsofpeoplearoundtheworldhavevolunteeredtohelpthoseinneed.Chinanowhas4.5millionregisteredvolunteerswhohaveprovidedmorethan4.5billionhoursofvolunteerwork.Whatcanyougainfromvolunteering?
Writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:
TheBenefitsofVolunteering
Youaretowriteinthreeparts.
Inthefirstpart,statespeciallywhatyouropinionis.
Inthesecondpart,supportyouropinionwithappropriatedetails.
Inthethirdpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.
Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.
TheBenefitsofVolunteering
Volunteering,inmanypeople’sopinion,isalmostawasteoftime.Volunteersseemtogainlittle,ifnotnothing,fromtheirwork.Butactually,itisnotthecaseatall.Volunteersalwaysfindtheirworkmeaningfulandworthwhile.
Themostapparentbenefitofvolunteeringisthatvolunteerscangetvaluablechancestogetclosetorealsociety.Asmostvolunteersareyoungandinexperiencedcollegestudents,itwillhelpthemalottowitnesssocialrealityandtakepartinsocialactivities.Anothermajorbenefitvolunteerscangainisthecultivationofasenseofresponsibility.Byhelpingtheweakmembersofoursociety,volunteersalwaysfeelontheirshouldersthedutyofcitizenshipwhichisnecessaryinmaintaininggoodrelationshipinafamily,acommunityandawholesociety.Athirdbenefitthatisoftenoverlookedbypeopleisthehappinessatthebottomoftheheart.Thisisgainedbysimplyhelpingothers.
Beingavolunteermaynotbringyouanymoney,butsurelyonecangainalotfromtheirvolunteeringworkwhichbenefitstheirlaterlifeandwork.
Volunteeringisthepracticeofpeopleworkingonbehalfofotherswithoutbeingmotivatedbyfinancialormaterialgain.Volunteeringgenerallyconsideredanaltruisticactivity,intendedtopromotegoodorimprovehumanqualityoflife.Peoplealsovolunteertogainskillswithoutrequiringanemployer'sfinancialinvestment.
Volunteeringtakesmanyformsandisperformedbyawiderangeofpeople.Manyvolunteersarespecificallytrainedintheareastheyworkin,suchasmedicine,education,oremergencyrescue.Othersvolunteeronanas-neededbasis,suchasinresponsetoanaturaldisaster.
•FromWikipedia,thefreeencyclopedia
•Benefitsofvolunteering
•Therearethreemajorbenefitsofvolunteering:
•Economicbenefits:
activitiesundertakenbyvolunteersthatwouldotherwisehavetobefundedbythestateorbyprivatecapital,sovolunteeringaddstotheoveralleconomicoutputofacountryandreducestheburdenongovernmentspending.
•SocialBenefits:
volunteeringhelpstobuildmorecohesivecommunities,fosteringgreatertrustbetweencitizensanddevelopingnormsofsolidarityandreciprocitythatareessentialtostablecommunities.
•IndividualCareerBenefits:
graduatescanmeetpeopleandgainworkexperiencethroughvolunteering,and,ithelpsschoolstudentsforscholarshipsknowingwellthatthejudgesareimpressedwhenaresumelistsvolunteerwork.
比较选择类作文
1.比较选择题型A:
比较两个事物的优缺点并表明倾向
典型题眼:
BorrowingBooksOutweighsBuyingBooks
ABalancedDiet:
ABetterWaytoStayHealthy
变通形式1:
WillPhonesKillLetterWriting?
(TEM4:
2004)
变通形式2:
TheDifferenceofMyCollegeLifeandMyMiddleSchoolLife
(Whichonedoyouprefer?
)(TEM4:
1996)
结构模板:
A1、B1;A2、B2对比比较法
第一段:
用现象或者事实引出要比较的A和B的上义词C,说明A和B是C的两个重要或者流行的选择,用一句话表明自己观点或倾向(假如说选择是A).
第二段:
第一句承接首段观点,引出下文的发展模式(列举)
A优点之一(1句),用拓展句加以说明(2-3句);转折关联词说明B相应的缺点(1句),并用拓展句加以说明(2句)。
A优点之二(1句),用拓展句加以说明(2-3句);转折句说明B缺点(1句),并用拓展句加以说明(2句)
第三段:
结论
语言模板
…(引题)Betweenthetwo(AB的上义词或者概括词):
AandB,IholdthatAisbetter…(e.g.choice,means,way,access)
Mybelief(statement,view,pointofview)thatAisbetterthanBisbasedonthefollowingtworeasons/MyreasonsforthepreferenceforAliesinthefollowingaspects.ThefirstreasonisthatAcan(aenablesustodo)…(拓展句加以说明2句).WhileBcan…(拓展句加以说明2句).ThesecondreasonisthatAcan…(拓展句加以说明2句).But(Nevertheless,However)Bcanonly…(拓展句加以说明1-2句).
Forthereasonsmentionedabove,wecaneasilydrawtheconclusionthatA(观点)outweighsB(AissuperiortoB)asanimportantC.
文
Directions:
Whenwedecidetoattendcollege,somepeoplethinkschoolbrandisthemostimportantfactortobetakenintoconsideration,butothersholdthatmajorismoreimportant.Whichweighsmore,aschoolbrandoramajor?
MajorisMoreImportantthanSchoolBrandinCollegeChoice
Afteryearsofpreparationforhigheducation,itistimeforhighschoolstudentstodecidewhichschooltoenroll.Amongvariousfactors,schoolbrandsandmajorsbecomethemostimportantfactorstobetakenintoconsideration.Betweenthem,Ibelieve,majorismoreimportantthanschoolbrand.
Mypreferenceforagoodmajorratherthanschoolbrandliesinthefollowingtworeasons.Thefirstoneisthatanidealmajorcanmotivatemetomakegreatereffortsinacademicstudy.Asapopularsayinggoes,interestisthebestteacher.Withamajorofgreatinteres
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