中考英语写作李继涛.ppt
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中考英语书面表达中考英语书面表达备考指导备考指导阜阳实验中学英语组阜阳实验中学英语组李继涛李继涛2014.11.28AnotherpopularideaisthatStonehengemightbeakindofcalendar.Thelargestoneswereputtogetherinacertainway.Onmidsummersmorning,thesunshinesdirectlyintothecenterofthestones.Otherpeoplebelievethestoneshaveamedicalpurpose.Theythinkthestonescanpreventillnessandkeeppeoplehealthy.“Asyouwalkthere,youcanfeeltheenergyfromyourfeetmoveyourbody,”saidonevisitor.NooneissurewhatStonehengewasusedfor,butmostagreethatthepositionofthestonesmustbeaspecialpurpose.Somethinkitmightbeaburialplaceoraplacetohonorancestors.Othersthinkitwasbuilttocelebrateavictoryoveranenemy.(选自九年级第八单元课文-Stonehenge)AnotherpopularideaisthatStonehengemightbeakindofcalendar.Thelargestoneswereputtogetherinacertainway.Onmidsummersmorning,thesunshinesdirectlyintothecenterofthestones.Otherpeoplebelievethestoneshaveamedicalpurpose.Theythinkthestonescanpreventillnessandkeeppeoplehealthy.“Asyouwalkthere,youcanfeeltheenergyfromyourfeetmoveyourbody,”saidonevisitor.Mostagreethatthepositionofthestonesmustbeaspecialpurpose.Somethinkitmightbeaburialplaceoraplacetohonorancestors.Othersthinkitwasbuilttocelebrateavictoryoveranenemy.假定你是王伟,你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在署假期间对学生的要求。
请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。
(2014年安徽省英语中考题年安徽省英语中考题)家庭安全:
小心用火用电,外出时关好门窗;游泳安全:
不独自去游泳,不去河、湖游泳;交通安全:
过马路要当心,不在马路上玩耍。
提示词:
electricity.(电)注意:
1.词数80-100;2请不耍逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;4.邮件的开头和结尾以为你写好,不计入总词数。
DearDavid,Gladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Ourschoolhasmademanysafetyrulesforustofollow.Letmetellyousomethingaboutthem._Ithinktheserulesarenecessaryassafetycomesfirst.Haveagoodsummerholiday!
解析:
解析:
1.要点多并且分类别2.多是祈使句今天是父亲节。
假定你是李华,请给你的美国朋友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。
要点如下:
表述你与父亲间的情感;(2013年安徽中考)年安徽中考)为父亲制作一张卡片;帮助父亲做点事;陪父亲散步等。
注意:
1.词数80-100;2请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥3邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数DearJohn,ItsFathersDaytoday.Itsaspecialday,isntit?
_WhatyourplanforFathersDay?
Imlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua要点分析:
表述你与父亲间的情感;为父亲制作一张卡片;帮助父亲做点事;陪父亲散步等。
解析:
解析:
虚点虚点:
帮助父亲做点事;:
帮助父亲做点事;表述你与父亲间的情感;表述你与父亲间的情感;实点实点:
为父亲制作一张卡片:
为父亲制作一张卡片陪父亲散步等陪父亲散步等策略:
策略:
1.以实代虚以实代虚-写实写实2.增加限定语增加限定语定语,状语等定语,状语等3.增加例子增加例子forexample,suchas4.增加原因增加原因-进一步说明进一步说明5.加套语(词块)加套语(词块)表述你与父亲间的情感表述你与父亲间的情感Iliketodosomethingtoexpressmythankstomyfatheronthisspecialday.Iliketodosomethingmeaningful/specialformyfather.Reasons:
Becausemyfatherismybestfriend.Becausemyfatherhavedonesomuchforme.BecausemyfatheristhepersonwhoIadmiremost.BecausemyfatherandIaregoodfriends.WhenImeetwithdifficulties,heisalwaysthere,readytohelpme.Justasthesayinggoes,“Fatheristhegreatestpersonintheworld.”例证:
例证:
Examples:
Iwillmakeacardformyfather.Iwillmakeabeautifulcardformyfathermyself.Iwillmakeabeautifulcardformyfatherandsaytohim,“Iloveyou,daddy.”Iwillmakeabeautifulcardforhim,withmythanksandbestwishesonit.要点:
散步要点:
散步Iwilltakeawalkwithmyfather.Iwilltakeawalkwithmyfatheraftersupper.Iwilltakeawalkwithmyfatherintheparknearbymyhome.Aftersupper,Iwilltakeawalkwithmyfatherintheparknearbymyhome.Moreexamples:
(平时写过的;有把握的)(平时写过的;有把握的)Iwillbuyabirthdaycakeforhimwithmyownpocket.Aftertheexam,Iwillgethomeearly,cleanmyhouseandcookhisfavoritefood.Iwillplaychesswithhimaftersupper,becausehelikesplayingchessverymuch.Iamsurehewillbehappy.whentheexamisover,Iwillhelpmyfatherdosomehousework,suchassweepingthefloor,doingdishes,wateringflowersorfeedingpigs.AndIamsurehewillbehappy.DearJohn,ItsFathersDaytoday.Itsaspecialday,isntit?
Iliketodosomethingtoexpressmythankstomyfatheronthisspecialday,becausemyfatheristhepersonwhoIadmiremost.First,Iwillmakeabeautifulcardforhim,withmythanksandbestwishesonit.Then,whentheexamisover,Iwillhelpmyfatherdosomehousework,suchassweepingthefloor,doingthedishes,wateringflowersorfeedingpigs.AndIamsurehewillbehappy.Aftersupper,Iwilltakeawalkwithmyfatherintheparknearbymyhome.WhatsyourplanforFathersDay?
Imlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.(94words)Yours,LiHua英语课堂上,老师要求学生就“与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论。
请根据以下你所在小组的讨论结果,以“howtogetonwellwithothers”为题,写一篇英语短文。
(2012年安徽中考年安徽中考)注意:
1.词数80-100;2.可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;3.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。
SuggestionsLearntoshareRespect尊重尊重othersCommunicatewitheachother.Mysuggestions.解析:
解析:
有英语提示词的作文,但提示词少,字有英语提示词的作文,但提示词少,字数不够数不够How?
解决方法:
解决方法:
1.加加“经典的废话经典的废话”常见的套语常见的套语(词块)(词块)2.加例子加例子例证例证3.加适量的定语、宾语、状语等加适量的定语、宾语、状语等-细化细化;具体具体4.加格言、谚语等加格言、谚语等-进一步说明进一步说明5.扩充建议扩充建议自主发挥,点到即可自主发挥,点到即可开头套语的引入开头套语的引入开头一:
开头一:
Asweallknowitisimportantforustogetalongwellwithothers.Butasamiddleschoolstudent,whatshouldwedo?
Ithinkwecanlearntogetonwellwithothersinthefollowi
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