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PartIWriting
原则版
Myopiniononcertificatecraze
Thegrowingtendencyamongcollegestudentstogetallkindsofcertificateshasnowevolvedintoacraze.Justrandomlyaskastudentwhatheorsheisbusilyengagedindoing,quitepossibly,youwouldgettheanswerthatheorsheispreparingforacertificateofsomekind.So,why'sthecraze?
Thereasonbehindthisphenomenoniscommon—theenormouspressureoffindingajob.Facedwithaharshjobmarket,moststudentshavenochoicebuttoseekmorecertificatestoparlaytheirqualifications.Anotherfactoristhatdiplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavilyintermsofsignifyingone'sability.Forthesakeofincreasingtheiroddsoflandingabetterjob,thestudentsarecompelledtorunfromoneexamtoanother.
ThoughIhaveanopenmindtowardthecrazeoncertificates,Isuggestthatstudentsshouldbemorerationalwhenitcomestocertificates,sincetheydonotnecessarilytelltheirability.Instead,theyshouldbemoreinvolvedinlearningandcapabilityboosting,thus,opportunitieswouldcomequitenaturally.
文章点评:
这是一篇“中档偏上”学生作文。
本文先对学生考证热进行简介,引出全篇;接着分析这一现象背后因素;整体看思路清晰,逻辑严密,行文流畅,句式多变,用语较为地道。
本篇亮点表达:
Thegrowingtendency…hasnowevolvedinto…
bebusilyengagedindoing
Thereasonbehind…
harshjobmarket
havenochoicebutto…
parlaytheirqualifications
sth.weighsheavilyintermsof…
increasingone'soddsof…
beinvolvedindoing…
becompelledtodo…
haveanopenmindtoward…
capabilityboosting
本文有待提高之处:
1.文章构造上,能看得出该同窗试图采用议论文“三段式”(提出问题、分析问题、解决问题)。
逻辑严谨,论证严密;句式表达灵活,用语较为地道。
2.微观语言点方面,有个主谓一致方面错误(diplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavily);有些语句稍显啰嗦,比quitepossibly,youwouldgettheanswerthat…大可简化成you'dmostlikelybetoldthat…更好,意思没有丝毫减损,表达力反而增强许多;此外某些用语多重复,例如job多次浮现;为了避免此类现象,文中theenormouspressureoffindingajob不妨改为theenormouspressureofgettingemployed。
从整体看,本篇文章不错,值得参照借鉴,但是用于方面尚有待提高。
高分版
Certificatecraze
Recentlythephenomenonofcertificatecrazehasbecomeabigconcernofthepublic.Itisalsoanewcrazeintheuniversity,whichseemslikearoutineactivityoncampus,forcertificatesdoplayavitalrolewhenstudentslookforadecentjob.
Admittedly,therearedifferentpurposesbehindthisphenomenon.Somepeopleaimatcertificatesbecauseoftheemploymentpressure.Withtheadmissionexpansionofcolleges,agreatmanygraduateshavetofacethefiercecompetitioninthejobmarket.Soitisthecertificatesthatcanmakethemmorecompetitive.However,someothersconsiderallthediplomaandcertificatesimportantstandardsbywhichaperson'sabilitycanbemeasured.Theysparenoefforttogetthecertificatesforthesolepurposeofprovingthattheyarequalifiedinacertainfield.Moreover,therearethosewhojustwanttoenrichtheirlifebypreparingforthecertificatesbecausetheyreallyenjoytheirprogress.
Frommypointofview,weshouldbemorerationalwhenitcomestocertificates,sincecertificatesdonotnecessarilyproveone'sability.Beingcrazyingettingcertificationsblindlyisnothingbutwastingtime.Toconclude,weshouldfocusonimprovingourabilitybutnotmerelygettingacertificate.
文章点评:
本次六级作文探讨是考生比较熟悉话题——高校考证书热;本次试题延续了以往考试风格,关注点依然放在与学生息息有关话题上;从选题角度来说,考生还是比较好把握。
需要注意是由于第二某些也许需要列出多点因素,考生在该某些需要注意阐述条理性;此外,在保证句法通顺前提下,尽量做到表达多样化。
一方面,在考生拿到题目时候,应当先认真审题,心里大体对接下来文章安排有一种底。
提起证书热话,诸多考生都会联想到就业压力,学校予以压力以及学生自身需求;因而,全文可做如下安排;
第一段,考生可以整体阐述一下该话题,陈述下当前存在考证热现象;
第二段,考生可以对考证热背后存在各种各样目进行拓展;例如说由于日益严重就业压力,以及有学校时不时给学生灌输压力;或者是学生自身从身边感受到某些压力,都也许导致考证热产生。
第三段规定考生对于该现象给出自己理解,考生应在这里持一种客观态度。
由于考证自身并不是一种错误,但是考生应当注意从题目“考证热”出发,重点放在“热”字上,对这一现象做出最理性评述。
综合来讲,本篇文章观点明确,思路清晰;在第二段给出例证具备代表性;此外,文章中有用到不少亮点词汇;唯一比较遗憾是,由于时间和篇幅限制,论证展开尚未完全挖掘出来,但在如此有限条件下,可以称得上佳作了。
外教版
Thejobmarkettodayisincreasinglysophisticated,requiringworkerstohavespecializedknowledgeintheirfields.Asaresult,becomingcertifiedisatrendamongtoday'sjobseekingyouth.Moreandmorepeople,studentsespecially,lookatobtainingcertificationasameanstogettingabetterjoband,therefore,enjoyingbrighterfuture.
Thereareasmanycertificatesastherearefieldsofstudy.LawyerswilltaketheLSAT,businessmajorswilltaketheGMATtofurthertheirstudyintheUS,andthosewhostudyaforeignlanguage,likeEnglish,mighttaketheTOEFL,TOEIC,oranynumberofEnglishcertificationexams.
Isthisnecessary?
Or,isthe“certificationcraze”justatrendthatwilleventuallypass?
Imyselfhaveobtainedtwodifferentcertifications:
oneinJapanese(N2)andanotherinteachingEnglishasaforeignlanguage(TEFL).Bothofthesecertificationshavebeenbeneficialingettinggoodjobs.
Therefore,itismyopinionthat,trendornot,theresultsofbecomingcertifiedarerealandcanbeinvaluableinopeningupfutureopportunities.
文章点评:
1.逻辑构造上,本文大体也是按照“提出问题(考证热现象)”“分析问题(背后动力)”和“解决问题(个人观点)”构造展开。
2.本文亮点非常多,用语非常地道,用英语思维催动出来英语文章,才是真正极品。
相比用中式思维催动出来英语文章,这篇文章是很美味,强烈建议人们背诵下来。
人们记得《天龙八部》吗?
鸠摩智用小无相功催动出招式是敌但是藏经阁里扫地和尚。
总之,咱们大可不必刻意使用难词难句,其实表意明确,用语地道文章,就必定可以拿到高分。
PartIIReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)
1.B.Thelowgraduationratesofminoritystudents
2.D.itsincreasedenrollmentofminoritystudents
3.B.Therisinggenerationwillbelesswelleducatedthanthepreviousone.
4.C.Fifiteenpercent
5.B.theyrecruitthebeststudents
6.A.Universitiesaretoblame.
7.B.Theycannotaffordthehightuition.
8.thattheyarelessqualified
9.somepreparatorycources
10.beclosed
PartIIIListeningComprehension
SectionA
11.
M:
Ileft20pagesheretocopy.Hereisthereceipt.
W:
I'msorry,sir.Butwe'realittlebehind.Couldyoucomebackinafewminutes?
Q:
Whatdoesthewomanmean?
答案:
C.Shehasnotgottheman'scopiesready.
12.
W:
Ihopeyou'renottooputoutwithmeforthedelay.Ihavetostopbyfriends'hometopickupabookonmywayhere.
M:
Well,that'snotabigdeal.Butyoumightatleastphoneifyouknowyou'regoingtokeepsomeonewaiting.
Q:
Whatdowelearnaboutthewomanfromtheconversation?
答案:
B.Shewaslatefortheappointment.
13.
W:
Markisthebestcandidateforchairmanofthestudentunion,isn'the?
M:
Well,thatguywon'tbeabletowintheelectionunlesshegetssomemajorityvotefromwomenstudents.AndI'mnotsureaboutthat.
Q:
Whatdoesthemanmean?
答案:
C.Itwon'tbeeasyforMarktowintheelection.
14.
M:
Sorrytohavekeptyouwaiting,Madam.I'velocatedyourluggage.ItwasleftbehindinParisandwon'tarriveuntillaterthisevening.
W:
Oh,Ican'tbelievethis.Haveitdelivertomyhotelthen,Iguess.
Q:
Whathappenedtothewoman'sluggage?
答案:
A.Itfailedtoarriveatitsdestinationintime.
15.
W:
Idon'tthinkwehaveenoughinformationforourpresentation,butwehavetogiveittomorrow.Theredoesn'tseemtobemuchwecandoaboutit.
M:
Yeah,atthispointwe'llhavetomakedowithwhatwe'vegot.
Q:
Whatdoesthemansuggesttheydo?
答案:
A.Justmakeuseofwhateverinformationisavailable.
16.
M:
Iamtakingthisgreatcourse-PsychologyofLanguage,it'sreallyinteresting.Sinceyouareapsychologymajor,youshouldsignupforit.
W:
ActuallyItriedtodothat,buttheytoldmeIhavetotakelanguagestudiesfirst.
Q:
Whatdowelearnfromtheconversation?
答案:
D.Thewomanisn'tqualifiedtotakethecoursethemanmentioned.
17.
W:
CanyoubelievethewayLarrywastalkingtohisroommate?
Nowondertheydon'tgetalong.
M:
Well,maybeLarrywasjustreactingtosomethinghisroommatesaid.Therearetwosidestoeverystoryyouknow.
Q:
WhatdoesthemanimplyaboutLarryandhisroommate?
答案:
A.Theyarebothtoblame.
18.
M:
Wedon'thavetheresourcestostopthosepeoplefrombuyingusoutunlessamiraclehappens.Thismaybetheendofus.
W:
Istillhavehopewecangethelpfromthebank.Afterallwedon'tneedthatmuchmoney.
Q:
Whatdowelearnaboutthespeakersfromtheconversation?
答案:
A.Theyareindesperateneedoffinancialassistance.
ConversationOne
听力原文
Questions19to22arebasedontheconversationyouhavejustheard.
W:
YouknowI'veoftenwonderedwhypeoplelaughatthepictureofabigbellybusinessmanslippingonabananaskinandfallingonhisbottom.Wearetofeelsorryforthem.
M:
Actually,Laura,Ithinkwelaughbecausewearegladitdidn'thappentous.Butofcoursethereisalsoakindofhumoroussatisfactioninseeingsomebodyself-importantmakingafoolofthemselves.
W:
Yes,andtherearealotofjokesaboutpeoplewhoaretoofatorphysicallyhandicapped,youknow,deaf,orshort-sightedthingslikethat.Afterall,it'snotreallyfunnytobelikethat.
M:
Oh,Ithinkthat'sbecausewe'reembarrassed.Wedon'tknowhowtocopewiththesituation.Perhapsweareevenabitfrightenedwemaygetlikethat,sowelaugh.
M:
Whataboutthecustardpieroutine?
W:
Whatdoyoumean‘custardpieroutine'?
M:
Youknow,allthoseoldfilmswheresomeonegetssooutragedwithhisboss,Hepicksupacustardpieandplastersitallovertheotherperson'sface.
W:
Thatnevermakesmelaughmuch,becauseyoucanguesswhat'sgoingtohappen.Butalotofpeoplestillfinditlaughable.Itmustbecauseofthesortofthethingwe'dalllovetodoonceinawhileandneverquiethavethecourageto.
M:
Ihadanoldauntwhousedtothrowcupsofteaatpeoplewhenshewasparticularlyirritated.Shesaiditrelievedherfeelings.
W:
Itmusthavecomeabitexpensive.
M:
Notreally.Shetookcarenevertothrowherbestchina.
19.Whydoesthemansaywelaughedwhenweseesomeself-importantpeoplemakingfoolofthemselves?
答案:
C)Wederivesomehumoroussatisfactionfromtheirmisfortune.
20.Whydosomepeoplejokeaboutthosewhoarefatorhandicappedaccordingtotheman?
答案:
B)Theydon'tknowhowtocopewiththesituation
21.Whydomanypeoplefinditfunnytoseesomeonethrowingacustardpieontheirboss'sface?
答案:
A)Theythemselveswoul
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