高中英语新高考英语作文读后续写题型的写作兵法三招转折语言词库.docx
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高中英语新高考英语作文读后续写题型的写作兵法三招转折语言词库
高中英语新高考-英语作文:
读后续写题型的写作兵法三招:
转折,语言,词库
目前英语卷的题型的改革力度是够大的,说来就来。
这不,各种证据证明,未来作文会变成文章续写,即:
给一篇350词左右的记叙文给你,结尾没有,让考生自由发挥。
限制是:
需要用上文章里给定的五个左右的词语。
目前浙江已经明确在考试说明中说了,后面的高考就要采用这种形式。
(孙三五)
这种改革给考生一种恐慌,为什么呢?
因为从未写过这样的文章,而且续写听起来好高大上。
但是,我看来,这种作文最好发挥。
我给出的技巧是:
内容上要注意两个转折;语言上要注意倒装和非谓语动词;另外,我给考生们准备了万能的九个小词库。
一、何为内容上的两个转折
写记叙文,英汉是同理的。
故事要有曲折即:
twist。
而高考作文150作文只能让你写顶多两个曲折。
曲折分:
情节曲折和心理变化的曲折。
英语作文毕竟和语文作文有差别,我们的曲折不要一味追求离奇,而是讲究逻辑的连贯。
二、语言的运用
记叙文是动作和语言的干活,不需要你写复杂句,这是文体的需要。
常用的是:
非谓语动词和倒装句。
为什么呢?
因为只有这两种语法结构句子才能表达动作的多样性。
三、关于九个小词库
我认为记叙文的心情描写是伴随着动作一起的,你有什么样的心情就有什么样的动作。
笔者平时有摘抄各种文学作品的佳句和词块的习惯。
仅挑选一小部分,省略了伴随心情的手、脚、脸等词库,进行粗线条的概括。
虽然不多,但我认为也足够应付高考了。
我将它们分为九大类:
一、如何表达决心和注意力的集中:
二、如何表达同情和关心
三、如何表达轻松
四、如何表达生气、不耐烦等不愉快的心情
五、如何表达胆小、害怕
六、如何表达害怕、害羞和尴尬
七、如何表达悲伤
八、如何表达疲劳
九、如何表达疼痛
四、实战演练
(这道题是浙江考试说明上的例子,但没有给答案)
步骤一:
第一个转折:
Theyoungman;suitcasesinthebackseat;loudnoiseofanalarm;thebank;robbery;theshouts;people;thebankthief
报警:
群众拦阻;警察赶到
心情:
害怕;困惑;疼痛
第二个转折:
真相:
一箱书;赶往学校报到
心情:
生气;轻松;关心
步骤二:
Hedarednotstopanddashedtothecrowd.Hewasstruckdeadwithterror.Hisheartwasbeatingpainfullyfastandbangingagainsthisribs.However,hearingtheshouts,severalstrongyoungmeninfrontofthebankblockedandarrestedhim.Now,everynerveinAuthur’sbodywarnedhimnottogoanyfurther.“Idoubtthatguyisthebankthief.”saidAuthur,pointingthemanbehind.[用非谓语动词]Theangerhadreturnedlikeahardlumpatthebackofhisthroat.
Luckily,justthenupcamethepolicemen[倒装句].Authurbegantocalmdown,hisbreathinggrowingslower.[用非谓语动词]Hecouldfeelthebloodsurgingroundhisbodyandreleasingthetension.Whenthesuitcaseswereopened,manybookscameinsight.TheyoungmangaveAuthuralookofconcern,saying“Ireallyhopeyouarenothurt.Maybewecanbefriends.”Bothofthemsmiled.
(划线部分都是来自九小词库)
五、九小词库【以下均摘自文学作品,部分词汇需要你查词典理解】
一、如何表达决心和注意力的集中:
词语:
NounsThoughts,concentration,determination
VerbsFelt,tried,resolved,determined
Heard,remembered
词块:
*Deepinthought
*Lostinherownthoughts
*Trieddesperatelytoremember
*Heardlittleofwhatwasbeingsaidaroundher
*Nothingwasgoingtostophimnow
*Feltahardballofdeterminationtighteninginhisstomach
佳句:
Shetrieddesperatelytorememberwhereshehadseenhimbefore.
Shewasdeepinthoughtandheardlittleofwhatwasbeingsaidaroundher.
Heshudderedandtensed,asahardballofdeterminationtightenedinhisstomach.
二、如何表达同情和关心
词语:
NounsFace,mouth,smile,eyebrows
Concern,sympathy,comfort,warmth
AdjectivesSoft,warm,calm,sympathetic,comforting
VerbsGave,flashed
Drew,turned
词块:
*Faceturnedsoftandsympathetic
*Gaveheralookofconcern
*Drewhereyebrowstogether
*Mouthturneddownatthecorners
*Flashedacomfortingsmile
佳句:
Hisfaceturnedsoftandsympatheticandhisvoicesanktoamurmur.
Shedrewhereyebrowstogetherandturnedhermouthdowninalookofconcern.
三、如何表达轻松
词语:
NounsHeart,pulse,blood
Chest,head,brow,scalp,sweat
AdjectivesCalm,grateful
VerbsEased,slowed,calmed,releasedached
词块:
*Poundingeasedinherchest
*Breathingslowed
*Rapidbeatofherheartbecamecalmer
*Sweatdriedonherbrow
*Bloodsurgedroundherbody
*Releasedthetensioninherbody
*Gratefulforhisnarrowescape
佳句:
Shebegantocalmdownandherheartstartedtoslow,butthepanichadleftanacheinherheadandaringinginherears.
Slowly,thepoundingeasedinherchestandthesweatdriedonherbrow.
Shecouldfeelthebloodsurgingroundherbodyandreleasingthetension.
Herbreathinggrewslower,asanewcalmsettledoverher.
四、如何表达生气、不耐烦等不愉快的心情
词语:
NounsHeart,pulse,breath,throat
Anger,rage,fury,temper,wrath,disgust,contempt,resentment
AdjectivesCross,furious,raging
Jealous,envious,resentful
Irritating,frustrating
Bitter,vicious,poisonous
Breathless,sweating
VerbsSwept,poured
Pounded,exploded,erupted
Shook,trembled,writhed
Raced,hammered
Clenched,gripped
词块:
*Redmist
*Spittingbundleofrage
*Viciousflashoftemper
*Hardlumpatthebackofherthroat
*Lefthimbreathless
*Madehisheartrace
*Hammeredinhishead
*Sweptthroughhimlikeatidalwave
*Burningwithrage
*Wrathexplodedlikeavolcano
*Pouredfromherlikeanacid
*Surroundedhimlikeafoulstench
*Poisonedtheairaroundhim
佳句:
Hewassweatingandburningwithrage.
Shesawhisfacethroughnarrowedeyesandafogofrage.
Herreplyfuelledhisangerandheeruptedlikeavolcano.
Theangerhadreturnedlikeahardlumpatthebackofherthroat.
Hisfuryknewnolimits–oneviciousflashoftemperafteranother.
Herragesweptthroughherlikeatidalwave,surroundingherlikeafoulstench.
五、如何表达胆小、害怕
词语:
NounsFear,dread,panic,terror,horror,turmoil
Thoughts,instinct
Heart,chest,pulse,blood
Head,brain,temples,forehead
Breath,throat,windpipe,cheeks,tongue,bile
Stomach,gut,cramps
Skin,hair,shivers,tingle,prickle
AdjectivesNumb,sick,nervous,uneasy
Dry,tight,thick,heavy
Long,deep,short,shallow
Unsteady,shuddering,rasping
Quick,fast,painful
Cold,tingling
Hot,sweaty
VerbsFelt,thought,urged,warned,paralysed
Rose,grew,swept,surged,seized
Bubbled,gripped,clutched,choked,strangled
Breathed,blew,hissed,sucked,gulped,gasped,tasted
Beat,leapt,raced,banged,throbbed,pounded,hammered,quickened
Crept,crawled,prickled,scuttled
Ran,tore,pumped,drenched
Dropped,fluttered,squeezed,tightened,gripped,stabbed
词块:
*Sickwithfear
*Throatwasdryandtight
*Tonguefeltthickandheavyinhismouth
*Fearwaslikeabitterbileatthebackofhisthroat
*Coldsweat
*Prickleoffearinthebottomofhisspine
*Likeanelectricshock
*Likealeadballinhisstomach
*Numbandparalysedbyfear
*Dreadsweptthroughhimlikeatidalwave
*Fearsettledonhimlikeadarkfog
*Struckdeadwithterror
*Terrorsurgedthroughher
*Fearseizedhiminitsjaws
*Thoughtoftheconsequencesurgedhimon
*Instinctsscreamedathimto...
*Everynerveinhisbodywarnedhimnotto...
*Couldtastethefearinthebackofhisthroat
*Gulpedair
*Letoutagasp
*Blewouthercheekstostopherselfhowling
*Tooklong,shudderingbreaths
*Panicroseinhischest
*Panicbubbledinherthroat
*Fearchokedhimwithitsmurderoushands
*Snakedroundhiswindpipe
*Heartpounded
*Pulseraced
*Missedabeat
*Bangedagainsthisribs
*Heartabandonedhischesttopoundinhisthroat
*Squeezedherheartlikeavice
*Bloodpoundedinhertemples
*Drenchedinsweat
*Coldsweatpoureddownhisforehead
*Skincrawled
*Hairsprickledonthebackofhisneck
*Shiverstoredownherspineandrackedherbody
*Likeahundredspiderswerescuttlingdownherback
*Stomachdropped
*Likeamothflutteringinsideherstomach
*Doubledoverwithcramps
*Grippedwithanxiety
*Likeavolcanoeruptinginsideher
佳句:
Everynerveinhisbodywarnedhimnottogoanyfurther.
Allhisinstinctsscreamedathimtoslipawaybeforehewasspotted.
Hewassickwithfear,butthethoughtoftheconsequencesurgedhimon.
Herthroatwasdry,hertonguethickandheavyinhermouth.
Fearchokedhimwithitsmurderoushands.Itgrippedathisthroatandstrangledhisbreathintoshort,shallowgasps.
Shewasstruckdeadwithterror.Herheartwasbeatingpainfullyfastandbangingagainstherribs.
Herheartmissedabeat,squeezedlikeavicebytheshock.
Asthebloodpoundedinhertemples,herbrainquickenedandallhersenseswerealert.
Blowingouthercheeks,shedrewalong,shudderingbreathandtriedtodampenthesenseofimpendingdoom.
Hefeltuneasy.Thehairsonthebackofhisneckprickledwithdreadandhewasdrenchedinsweat.
Fearsettledonherlikeadarkfog,bringingachillthatcreptoverherandthatnoamountofheatcoulddriveaway.
Thefearwaslikeanelectricshock,pumpingshiveringwavestearingthroughhisbodyandmakinghishairstandonend.
Hedoubledoverwithcramps.Itwasasifaleadballhadbeendroppedinhisstomachandwasblockinghisgut.
Herstomachwasgrippedwithanxiety,likeavolcanoeruptinginsideher.
Somethingwasmakingherfeelveryuneasy.Itwasgnawingatherstomachandflutteringasifshehadswallowedabutterfly.
六、如何表达害怕、害羞和尴尬
词语:
NounsMind,senses,nerves,confusion,embarrassment
Body,heart,breath,throat,tongue,mouth
Hands,palms,stomach
AdjectivesThick,dry,fuzzy
Tense,sharp,alert
Sweaty,breathless
VerbsShook,trembled
Pounded,fluttered
Gulped,swallowed
Shrunk,shrivelled
词块:
*Tonguewasthickandfuzzy
*Throatwasdry
*Likeanervousrabbitcaughtintheheadlights
*Blizzardofnervesandconfusion
*Heartpounded
*Heartfluttered
*Heldtheirbreath
*Watchedwithbatedbreath
*Trembledlikeanervousrabbit
*Butterfliesflutteredinherstomach
*Bodywastenseandhersensesalert
*Feltasifthewholeworldwaswatching
*Insidesshrivelledwithembarrassment
*Mistdescendedonhismind
佳句:
Herhandswereshaking.Butterfliesflutteredinherheartandstomach.
Amistdescendedonhermind.Shefeltasifshewaswalkinginablizzardofnervesandconfusion.
Shefeltherbodytenseandhersensessharpen,asshewatchedwithbatedbreath.
Hetriedtospeak,buthistonguewasthickandfuzzyandpastedtotheroofofhismouth.
Hefeltasifthewholeworldwaswatchinghim,andhisinsidesshrivelledwithembarrassment.
七、如何表达悲伤
词语:
NounsSadness,misery,grief,despair,loneliness,regret
Heart,throat,lump,sobs
AdjectivesCold,hollow
Painful,horrible
VerbsFilled,welled,choked,broke
词块:
*Silent,shudd
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