专四写作讲座之作文闪光点.docx
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专四写作讲座之作文闪光点
BySimmy
Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.
exceedingly替换very
thrilling替换exciting
sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
google替换search
anarmyof替换alotof
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingnumbersofindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;
Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular
Coincidentwith…非常地道的句型,表达“与…一致”的意思,替换With…
Advancement替换development
Pourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替换enterinto
Current(currently)替换now
Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
Growingnumbersofindividuals替换moreandmorepeople
Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的
Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.
Forastart替换Tobeginwith
Wecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法
ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally替换Inaddition/Besides Deliver替换send
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,obscene,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型,还有however作为插入语,functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmto
Emerging替换appearing(fading替换disappearing)
Netcitizen网民,属于精彩用词
Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.
Nogardenhasnoweeds替换Everycoinhastwosides
Computersdoplay,do强调
Positive替换important/good等
Asliceof替换apartof
Unfavorable替换bad
Impacts替换effects/influences
Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageof…使用插入语
Fruits(而且fruits用的非常形象,merits/virtues)替换advantage(defects替换disadvantage)
Facet替换aspect
各位同学,上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点,作文怎么会不得高分呢!
以下是30个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下。
,characters,folks替换(people,persons)
2:
positive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good
3:
dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill(有害的)替换bad
如果bad做表语,可以有belessimpressive替换
eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.
4.(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,many。
。
。
ifnotmost)替换many.
注:
用many,ifnotmost一定要小心,many后一定要有词。
Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,替换most.
5:
asliceof,quietafew,several替换some
6:
harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)替think
(因为是书面语,所以要加that)
7,affair,business,matter替换thing
8:
shared代common
hugefruits替换getmanybenefits
10formypart,frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion
11:
Increasing(ly),growing替换moreandmore(注意没有growingly这种形式。
所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.
hasgainedgrowingpopularity.
Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.
ifanything,或littleornothing替换hardly
13..beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,
client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer
,extremely,intensely替换very
necessary,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable
appealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin
one'sattention替换attractone'sattention.
,demension,sphere代aspect
indicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear
riseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause.
22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换..reasonsforsth
替换want.
attentioninto替换payattentionto
inmindthat替换remember
26.enjoy,possess替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
27.interaction替换communication
onsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth
nameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,forinstance
30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,替换nearly/almostimpossible
希望大家能够在平时的学习中多总结精彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点!
常用连接词
ToAdd:
and,again,andthen,besides,equallyimportant,finally,further,furthermore,nor,too,next,lastly,what'smore,moreover,inaddition,first(second,etc.),
ToCompare:
whereas,but,yet,ontheotherhand,however,nevertheless,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,bycomparison,where,comparedto,upagainst,balancedagainst,but,although,
conversely,meanwhile,afterall,incontrast,althoughthismaybetrue
ToProve:
because,for,since,forthesamereason,obviously,evidently,furthermore,moreover,besides,indeed,infact,inaddition,inanycase,thatis
ToShowException:
yet,still,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,despite,ofcourse,onceinawhile,sometimes
ToShowTime:
immediately,thereafter,soon,afterafewhours,finally,then,later,previously,formerly,first(second,etc.),next,andthen
ToRepeat inbrief,asIhavesaid,asIhavenoted,ashasbeennoted,
ToEmphasize:
definitely,extremely,obviously,infact,indeed,inanycase,absolutely,positively,naturally,surprisingly,always,forever,perennially,eternally,never,emphatically,unquestionably,withoutadoubt,certainly,undeniably,withoutreservation
ToShowSequence:
first,second,third,andsoforth.A,B,C,andsoforth.next,then,followingthis,atthistime,now,atthispoint,after,afterward,subsequently,finally,consequently,previously,beforethis,simultaneously,concurrently,thus,therefore,hence,next,andthen,soon
ToGiveanExample:
forexample,forinstance,inthiscase,inanothercase,onthisoccasion,inthissituation,takethecaseof,todemonstrate,toillustrate,asanillustration,
ToSummarizeorConclude:
inbrief,onthewhole,summingup,toconclude,inconclusion,asIhaveshown,asIhavesaid,hence,therefore,accordingly,thus,asaresult,consequently,onthewhole
一、常用句型及单词
A.开头
1、Thereisaninterestingandinstructivepicturewhichgoeslikethis:
______________.
2、______________hasbecomeahottopicamongpeople,especiallyamongtheyoung,andheateddebatesarerightontheirway.
3、Recently,_________hasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthat_________
.Recently,theproblemofglobalwarminghasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthatgovernmentsatalllevelsplaceitonthetopoftheagenda.).
4、Oneofourancientphilosopherssaid,______________.Chinesepeoplehavealwaysbeenholdingthisideatobeoneoftheirstandardsofmorality.
5.Noone,regardlessofrace,religionornationality,woulddenythat...或:
Everyonewouldagreethat...
B结尾
1)Onlyinthisway/Onlywhen……/Onlythrough……,will/canwe……或:
Itisonlyif/when……thatwewill……
Itisonlyifallsidesofsocietytaketheirrolesfullythatwewillachievethesocietywewant.
2)Aslongas……wewillbeableto……/theproblemisboundto……
Aslongaswepersistinspreadingscientificknowledgeamongthemasses,allthesuperstitionsareboundtogooutofourlife.
3)Withaconstant/steadyimprovementin……(或Withthegradualworseningof……)sth.will……
Withasteadyimprovementinourlegalsystem,thisproblemwillsurebesolvedearlierorlater.
4)Inawordthereisevery/littlechance/probability/possibilitythat.……intimeto
Inoneword,thereiseverychancethatthisChinesetraditonwillcontinuetoentertainmillionsofChinesecitizens.
C.中间
1.建议和解决方法
1).Agreatnumberofsolutionsarebeingoffered.Somepeoplesuggestthat______________.Othersarguethat______________.
2).ButIdon’tthinkitisaverygoodwaytosolve______________.Forinstance,______________.Worstofall,______________.
3).Mysuggestiontodealwith/solve/relievetheproblemareasfollows.Inthefirstplace,….Secondly,….Finally
4).Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,….Bythattime,….如果让这种情况继续发展下去,那么到那个时候,……。
5)If……,willtherebeanythingthatcanmakemeevenhappier?
如果(我们怎么怎么做),那将没有比这令我更高兴的了。
结构
1)Itisadvisabletoexercise(拥有)patienceindealingwithsuchcomplicatedsituations.
2)Itisnecessarythatyoungandoldpeopleshouldcommunicatemorewitheachother.
3)Itiscertainthatfreshairandexercisesaremoreenjoyableandbeneficialthanmedicine.
4)Itiswellknownthatmanyofourproblemsarecausedatleastinpartbyfailuretocommunicate.
5)Itseemedtomethattheonlythingthatmattersistolearnthroughfailure.
6)Itpaysinthelongrun(从长远的角度看……)tointroducenewtechnique.
3.动名词或分词结构
1)Drinking,eating,andsmokingexcessivelycandosevere
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