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2006年11月10日

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1.whypeopleattendcollege?

peopleattendcollegeoruniversityformanydifferentreasons（forexample,newexperiences,

careerpreparation,increasedknowledge）.whydoyouthinkpeopleattendcollegeoruniversity?

usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

『分析』

说明人们选择上大学的具体原因（一个或者多个）：

增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野

为了实现理想（ideal;idealistic）（如，周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书）为了保证将来的就业机

会父母要求子女上大学别人都上大学了，所以自己也选择读书找不到工作

（无知，总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。

上大学如是[1]，去博物馆如是[12]，从事危险

运动亦如是[43]。

）

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『范文』

aftergraduatingfromhighschoolmanyyoungpeoplehavetheoptiontodirectlyenterthework

force.moststudentswhohavetheopportunity,however,decidetogotocollegebeforefinding

jobs（theyattendcollegetoobtainmorechoices,-highersalaries,andmoreopportunitiesfor

advancementinanincreasinglycompetitivejobmarket.beforeattendingcollege,studentshavea

limitedopportunitytospecialize.afterobtainingaspecificcollegedegreeajobapplicantcanbe

competitiveforpreviouslyunavailablejobs.forinstance,applicantswithcomputerscience

degreeswouldnotonlybequalifiedforjobsinhigh-techcompanies,theywouldalsobewell

preparedfor

anyjobwithcomputerskillsasaprerequisite.withalargerrangeofpotentialjobstochoosefrom,

degreeholders

aremorelikelytofindajobthatsuitstheirparticularneedsandinterests.

additionally,employersarewillingtopayapremiumforhighlyqualifiedapplicants.forexample,

many

companiesdesireemployeeswhoarecompetentinmorethanonelanguageandofferhigher

salariestoattract

them.evenifajobapplicantwithoutacollegedegreehashighstandardizedtestscores,

employersmaystillplace

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ahighervalueonanapplicantwithsimilartestscoreswhoalsopossessescredentialsfroma

well-known

university.becauseoftheextenttowhichacollegedegreeisacceptedbyemployersasproofof

competenceina

givenfield,collegegraduatesarenotonlymorelikelytoreceivemorejoboffers,theycanalso

commandhigher

salariesthanapplicantswholackcollegediplomas.

finally,inadditiontoofferingmorechoicesandhighersalaries,acollegedegreeoffersaccessto

jobswitha

clearpathtowardsprofessionaladvancement.ab.s.inbiology,forexample,couldallowa

studenttofindajob

inalabaftergraduation,afirststepontheroadtowardsacareerinscientificresearch.thesame

majorcouldalso

beusedtoapplytomedicalschool,andacareerasadoctor.bothoftheseavenueswouldbe

unavailablewithout

takingthefirststepofanundergraduatedegreeinbiology.

2.areparentsthebestteachers?

doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?

parents

arethebestteachers.usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

『分析』

因观点绝对而不能同意。

不是所有的父母都是好老师

最好的老师不仅仅是父母

有些父母尽管善良，但对教育孩子一无所知

z有些父母不配做孩子的老师，对孩子有不良影响

『范文』

obviously,inmostcasestheearliestteacherspeoplehavearetheirparents,andparentsare

generallymostconcernedaboutthedevelopmentoftheirchildren.however,itisnotcompletely

truetosaythatparentsarethebestteachers.

firstofall,notallparentsaregoodteachers.asnormalindividuals,someparentsmoreorless

havesomebadhabits.eventhoughparentsalmostinstinctivelydevotethemselvestocultivating

theiroffspring,theoutcomemightturnouttobedisappointment,forallchildrentendtounconsciouslyorsubconsciouslycopyeverythingincludingbadonesfromtheirparents.another

deficiencyofparentsasteachersisthefactthatmostparentsarelackofcommonsensesof

education.alltoooftenweobservesomeparentstendtopursuetheircherishedbutfaileddream

byforcingtheirchildrentodevelopinaprearrangeddirection.ironically,whentheirchildrendo

notfollowtheinstructions,thechildrenwillberegardedasdisobedientorallegedlyrebellious.in

fact,itisparentsratherthantheirchildrenthatvirtuallydisobeycommonsenses

moreover,someparentsarequalifiedasgoodteachers,butnotallofthemarethebestones.

whenchildrenareinthepreliminaryschool,itisnotsurprisingthatparentsareperhapscapableof

teachingtheirchildrenalmosteverysubjectevenbetterthanprofessionalteachersintheschool.

butthesituationwillnotlastlong.weliveinaworldwhereknowledgeisaccumulatedby

multiplyingandatthesametimebecomesmoreandmorespecialized.therefore,tobea

professionalinacertainfieldtodaytakesmuchlongertimethanhaseverbeenbefore.noparent

isabletobeprofessionalinallfields,thoughtheymightbeexpertsinoneormorefields.wise

parentsoftenreleaseratherthanchargetheirchildrenasearlyaspossible.theyareawareofthe

possibilityoutsidethefamily.

parentsmay,nevertheless,helptheirchildrenmuchmorethandogoodteachers.mostparts

ofchildreneducationarevirtuallybeyondteachersreaches.itisparentsthatsupplement.

psychologystudieshaveshownusthatparentslovesometimeshasastonishinglymagicpowerto

theirchildren.albeiteinsteinsmotherandthatofforestgumparebothgoodexamples.onthe

otherhand,parentsmightdotheirchildrenharmmorethandobadteachersaswell.thenaturesof

thosechildrenwhoseparentshavedivorcedareoftenseverelydistorted.

inaword,itisrathersuperficialtosimplysaythatparentsarethebestteachers.

3.doeseasier-preparedfoodimprovethewaypeoplelive?

nowadays,foodhasbecomeeasiertoprepare.hasthischangeimprovedthewaypeoplelive?

usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

『分析』

总体上，―食物变得越来越容易准备‖是一种进步[37]，所以自然会带来improvement。

使人们

的生活方式发

生了一些变化：

好的：

节省时间，越来越方便，一定程度上把妇女从繁杂的家务中解放了出来

也有不好的变化：

准备食物是一种重要的家庭活动，可是食物变得容易准备一定程度上使家人在一起的时间减

少

了，比如―速冻饺子‖[quick-frozendumpling]

快餐业的高速发展的一个直接结果是，人们普遍变胖了，尤其是孩子

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『范文』

peopletodaycanpreparetheirmealmucheasierthanhaseverbeenbefore.toprepareasingle

dinner,providenthousewivesusuallyhadtoworkforhoursinthepast:

theyhadtobuyhomedirty

vegetableswhichhadtowash,meatwhichhadtoslice,andsoonsoforth.eachandeverystepof

preparationwasatime-consumingtask.butnow,thingsareentirelydifferent.supermarkets

providevegetablesandmeatcleanandneat,someofthemevenhaverelevantingredientsand

needonlyafewminutestobemadeintodeliciousmeals.andthischangehasindeedgreatly

improvedthewaypeoplelive.inasense,foodpreparationisnolongeratedioustask,atleast

mucheasiertotolerate.suchachangehasliberatedmanywomenandgiventhemchancetodo

moremeaningfulthings,forexample,ahigherpayjoboramorerespectfulone.ontheotherhand,

moremenarebecomingwillingtodothethingthattheyoncehatedsomuch,andinsomecasessuchtransformationofmenbroughtdramaticpositiveimpactonthefamily.today,itsnothardtoimagineawifecomeshomeafteradayshardworkandhowdelightfulsheistofindouthishusbandhasalreadypreparedherseveralherfavoritedishes!

childrencanmoreeasilybecomeindependent—atleasttheycanmakethemselvesbreakfastsordinnerswhenparentsare

occasionallynotpresent.butsuchachangehasalsobroughtsomeunexpectedconsequences.girlsnowadaysarebecomingmoreandmorereluctanttodeemhouseholdworkastheir

responsibility.thereasonisquitestraightforward:

itwasoncereallyridiculoustoinsistmendotrivialhouseholdworkratherthangoworkandearnmoneytosupportfamily,butconditionshavealterednow,girlsmightthink:

icanworkaswell,ormaybeicanearnahighersalarythanyoudo,dearboyfriend,ifyouwanttomarryme,answermeonequestionfirst,willyoupreparemebreakfastanddinnereveryday?

andsomeboys,ontheotherhand,arebecominghesitanttogetmarried,orsimplyremainsolitary,amongmiscellaneousreasonstheydosoisonething:

icantakecareofmyself,atleastidontreallyneedsomeonepreparemedinner!

anyway,sucha

changeispositiveanditdidimprovethequalityofpeopleslife.atleastithasbroughtgirls,boys,husbands,wives,childrenandeveryoneelsewhohastopreparefoodanopportunity,nomatterwhatkindof

opportunityitis.

4.whichismoreimportant,bookknowledgeorexperience?

ithasbeensaid,noteverythingthatislearnediscontainedinbooks.compareandcontrastknowledgegainedfromexperiencewithknowledgegainedfrombooks.inyouropinion,whichsourceis

moreimportant?

why?

『分析』

注意一定要先进行比较

从书本中获取的知识

优点：

题材、范围更多

有更多的深度

更加的系统

缺点：

有时过于教条

也不见得完全准确

从经验中获取的知识

优点：

获取直接、简单明了

更加地实用

有些知识无法从书本中获得

缺点：

不系统，很大的随意性

很容易产生片面理解

不一定要说a比b更重要，或者b比a更重要。

也可以选择在不同的情况下，有不同的比较。

学习抽象

的知识，书本是最好的来源。

学习游泳，这只能靠经验。

另外，大多数的知识要书本经验相

结合才可

以。

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有些科目或者知识适合通过实践学习，比如，语言，体育

有些科目或者知识适合通过阅读学习，比如，物理、化学、历史、地理

有些科目或者知识适合通过与别人交流来学习，比如销售技巧；管理技巧

所以不能一概而论（treatdifferentthings/problems/matters]asthesame），要看学什么，以及学习的阶段。

『范文』

ingeneral,knowledgegainedfrombookshasawiderrangethanthatgainedfromexperience.wenowliveinaworldthattypophileisnolongerexorbitant,andthatprintedmattersarereadilyavai