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高考英语二轮练习书面表达附参考范文

2016高考英语二轮练习：

书面表达（4）附参考范文

【2014高考英语广东省华侨中学四模】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文

Injuniorhighschool,oneofmyclassmates,Ethan,wasaddictedtoTV.ThisboysimplykneweverythingaboutsuchpopshowsasWho’stheBoss?

ThenonedayEthan’smothermadehimanofferinordertodrawhimbacktohisschoolsubjects.Shepromisedthatshewouldgivehim$200ifhecouldgoafullmonthwithoutwatchinganyTV.NoneofusthoughtEthancoulddoit,buthedidquitTV.Hismompaidhim$200.HewentoutandboughtaTV,thebiggesthecouldfind.

Inrecentyears,hundredsofschoolshavecarriedoutexperimentswithpayingkidswithcashforshowinguporgettinggoodgrades.Allschoolkidsadmirethistrend.Butitupsetsadults.Teacherssaythatwearerewardingkidsfordoingwhattheyshouldbedoingoftheirownwill.Psychologistswarnthatmoneycanactuallymakekidsperformworsebymakingtheactoflearningcheap.Thedebatehasbecomeatypicalbattleoverwhyourkidsarenotlearningattheratetheyshouldbedespitedecadesofreformsandbudgetincreases.

【写作内容】

1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。

2.以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：

（1）你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法：

（2）你的父母（或其他亲人）是如何鼓励你学习的；

（3）你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习

【写作要求】

1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

【参考范文】读写任务：

Ethan'smomusedmoneyforencouraginghimtobedevotedtolearning,butshefailed.Infact,kidsarehappytoberewardedwithmoneywhilesometeachersandpsychologistsareupset.（32words）

Rewardingachildwithcashisacommonphenomenoninreality,anditdoesevenbecomeatrend.FormwhereIstand,Iamnotinfavourofencouragingkidswithcash.Togetkidsmotivatedtolearn,weshouldnottreateverychildinthesameway.Tosomestudents,oralpraiseisessentialandadequate.However,thismethodmaynotworkwellwithotherkids.Maybewhatcountsmoretothemistowatchamovieorgoonatriptogetherwiththeirparents.Itjustdepends.Myparentsusedtoencouragemebyleadingmetohavemorereading.WheneverImadeprogressinmystudies,theyboughtmemyfavouritebooks,whichnotonlymotivatedme,butalsohelpedmegetalongwellwithmystudies.

Inconclusion,schoolsandparentsshouldeducatetheirkidsbyteachingthemtostudyforthemselvesandthesocietyratherthansimplyofferingthemmoneytodosomethingpassively.Onlybybuildingupsomenobleandlong-rangeaimscantheystudyontheirowninitiative.

高中英语书面表达中的高级词汇替换例举

1．occur替换thinkof

Itoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.

2．devoteto替换spend

Hedevotesallhissparetimetoreading.

3．seektodo试图，企图干

seekafter=seekfor寻求

Theysoughttohidethemselvesbehindthetrees.

4．average替换ordinary

I’manaveragestudent.

5．but替换very

Thefilmwesawlastnightwasveryinteresting.→

Thefilmwesawlastnightwasnothingbutinteresting.

6．seat替换sit

Hefoundanoldladyseated（sitting）bytheroad,lookingworried.

7．besupposedto=should

Heissupposedtohavedrivenmoreslowly.

8．appreciate替换thankyoufor

Ideeplyappreciateyourkindnessincomingsofartomeetme.

9．on替换assoonas

Assoonashearrived,hebeganhisresearch.

→Onhisarrival,hebeganhisresearch.

10．dueto替换becauseof

Duetopoormanagement,thefactoryisdeeplyindebt.

11．cover替换walk/read

Aftercovering10miles,weallfelttired.

12．contributeto替换write,donate等

HecontributeanarticletoChinaDaily.

TheassociationhascontributedasumofmoneytotheRedCoss.

PlentyofmemoryworkwillundoubtedlycontributetoEnglishstudy.

13．roundthecorner替换comingsoon/nearby

Thesummervacationisroundthecorner.

LiMingstudiesinaschoolroundthecorner.

14．comeupwith替换thinkof

Jackisveryclever.Heoftencomesupwithnewideas.

15．setaside替换save

Somestudentsthinkthattheyshouldsetasidesomeoftheirpocketmoneyforbooks.

16．beof+n.替换adj.

TheproductsareofhighqualityandaresoldeverywhereinChina.

17．referto替换talkabout/of,mention

Theprofessoryoureferredtoisveryfamous.

Letmerefertomynotesfortheexactfigures.

18．cannotbutdo/cannothelpbutdo替换havetodo

19．moreoftenthannot替换usually

Moreoftenthannot,themeaningofmanywordscanbeeasilyguessed.

20．beabsorbedin全神贯注于beaddictedto沉溺于替换belostin

Nowmanykidsareaddictedtoplayingnetgames.

21．morethan替换very

IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou,Iwouldbemorethangladtohelp.

22．dosba/thefavor替换help

Wouldyoupleasedomethefavortoturndowntheradio?

23．theotherday替换afewdaysago

TheotherdaymybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycle.

24．inthecourseof替换during

Inthecourseofthemountain-climbing,pleasehelpeachotherandpayspecialattentiontoyoursafety.

25．themajorityof替换most

ThemajorityoftheintervieweespreferwatchingTVathometogoingtothecinema.

26．consistof替换bemadeupof

Ourclassconsistsof（ismadeupof）50students.

27．bewornout替换betired/broken

Afterfivehours’non-stopwork,wewereallwornout（tired）.

Myshoesarewornout（broken）.Pleasebuymeanewpair.

28．attendto替换lookafter

Shehangeduphurriedlyandattendedtothebaby.Meanwhile,themealgotburnt.

29．onconditionthat替换aslongas

Youcangooutonconditionthatyouwearanovercoat.

30．nevertheless替换however

Fredaknewthatshewouldnotwin;nevertheless,shewentontrying.

31．expressone’ssatisfactionwith替换besatisfiedwith

Theyexpressedsatisfactionwiththeirlives.

32．sparenoeffortstodo替换tryone’sbesttodo

Tobecompetitiveontheworldmarket,wemustsparenoeffortstoimprovethequalityofourproducts.

33．manya替换many

Manyaquarrelhascomeaboutthroughamisunderstanding.

34．beoccupiedindoing替换bebusyindoing

Timespunawaywhenwewereoccupiedinrepairingthefarmtools.

35．ahandfulof替换some

Heallowedonlyahandfulofhismanycompositionstobepublishedduringhislifetime.

36．（inthe）meanwhile替换atthesametime

Iwenttocollege.Meanwhile,allmyfriendsgotwell-paidjobs.

37．occasionally替换sometimes/onceinwhile

Ilikeplayingfootballbest,butoccasionallyIplaytabletennis,too.

38．forinstance替换forexample

Forinstance,thetwopatternsbelowareconsideredthesame.

39．seldom替换notoften

I'manightowlandseldomwillIgotobeduntilaftermidnight.

40．wealthy替换rich

Awealthysponsorcametoourrescuewithagenerousdonation.

请同学们继续归纳：

书面表达（B）（20分钟）

作为中学生，我们应该如何理解父母对我们的严格要求和爱护呢？

下面是三名高中生想对父母说的话，请你就此谈谈自己的看法。

注意：

1.词数150左右

2.可适当增加细节。

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【参考范文】

Onepossibleversion:

InChinachildrenarethecentreofeachfamily.Allparentswishtheirchildren,especiallyseniorhighstudents,couldgototopuniversitiesandhaveabrightfuture.Sotheyalwaysexpecttheirchildrentomakefulluseoftheirtimetostudy.Theydon’tallowthemtowatchTV,playcomputergamesorgoouttoplaywiththeirfriends.Somestudentsjustcomplainthattheirparentsareonlyconcernedabouttheirgradesandnottheirotherneeds.

Inmyopinion,ourparentsareresponsibleforus.Perhapstheyaresometimestoostrictwithus，butwhattheyaredoingisoutofnothingbutlove.Themostimportantthing,Ithink,isthatweshouldlearntocommunicatewiththem.Findtherighttimeforatalk,tellingthemthatyou’llneverletthemdownandwillworkhardertoearntrustandrespectfromthem.

书面表达（满分25分）

一个英国中学生代表团将到你校参观和交流,假设你有幸参加与他们的座谈会，请根据以下图示，写一篇120词左右的发言稿，请你谈谈学校开展小组合作学习和自主学习的体会。

注意：

1.根据图片的内容适当展开，以使行文连贯；

2.开头和结尾已写出，不计入总词数；

3.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

Goodafternoon!

It’smypleasuretobrieflyintroducemyschoolliferegardingtwoaspects,independentlearningandcooperativelearning.________________________________________________________________

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Thankyou!

【参考范文】

Onepossibleversion:

Goodafternoon!

It’smypleasuretobrieflyintroducemyschoolliferegardingtwoaspects,independentlearningandcooperativelearning.

Independentlearningisabasicprincipleofmyschooleducation. Ato