病句的修改The error modification.docx
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病句的修改Theerrormodification
病句的修改(Theerrormodification)
Teacherguidance:
commonerrorsandmodifythetypeofChineseseniorhighschoolentranceexamination
Thedoctorgivesthedoctor,thefirstisthediagnosisofthedisease,determinethecause,anantidoteagainstthedisease,andstrivetocurethepatient,soitisrevisingsentences.Weshouldfirstanalyzethemistakesanddeterminethetypesoferrors,thenthecorrespondingmodificationmethod.Thecommontypesoferrors,therevisionofthegeneralmethod.
First,incompletesentenceelements
Therearetwokindsofincompletesentenceelements,oneistheabsenceofsubject,theotheristheabsenceoftheobjectofthecentrallanguage.
Absenceofsubjectisdividedintotwocases.
First,thesubjectiscovered,forexample:
"Throughthisactivity,makeourhorizons,increaseofknowledge.
Becausethesentenceisaddedwiththeword"pass"before"thisactivity",andtheword"make"isaddedbefore"we",thesubjectofthissentenceiscovered,causingthesubjectincomplete.Themethodofrevisionistodeletetheword"pass",andmake"thisactivity"asthesubjectofthesentence.Ordelete"make"sothat"we"isthesubjectofthesentence.
Amistakeiscausedbythesubject,thesubjectisincomplete,suchas:
Thegustofwindsweptthroughthefield,likethebillowingwateroftheYellowRiver,upsanddowns.
Thissentencetook"gust"assubject,thesubjectshouldbe"inits".Themethodismodified,inthe"is"before"thedesire".
Theotheristheabsenceofthecentrallanguage,suchastheobject:
"Heisapersonwithmanyworthyofpraise.
Thissentencelacksthecentrallanguageoftheobject,andshouldbeaddedattheendofthesentence".
Two,sentenceelementdoesnotmatch
Therearefivetypesofsentenceelementsthatdonotmatch.
Oneisthatthesubjectdoesnotmatchthepredicate:
Theaudienceatthistime,alleyesarefocusedtothepresidentoftheGeneralAssemblyonthestage.
Thecentralword"eye"inthissentencedoesnotmatchthepredicate"focus",sothe"eye"shouldbechangedto"gaze"".
Oneisthattheverbdoesnotmatchitsobject,suchastheverb:
Thestudentstorespectthegazeandlistenedtothereportofheroes.
Theverb"gaze"inthissentencedoesnotmatchitsobject"report",andthemodificationisin"gaze"
Add"theheroes","and"removeacommain"theheroes".
Oneisthatthesubjectdoesnotmatchtheobject,forexample:
6JulyInnerMongoliagrassland,isabeautifulseason.
Thesubjectofthesentence"InnerMongoliaGrassland"andtheobject"season"donotmatch,canbechangedto:
InnerMongoliagrasslandinJuly,isabeautifulseason.
Oneisthattheattributedoesnotmatchitscentrallanguage,forexample:
Ishesetastrongpacetowardus.
Thestrengthofthesentence"strong"doesnotmatchwithitscentrallanguage"pace",and"strong"canbechangedinto"strong"".
Oneisthatadverbialdoesnotmatchitscentrallanguage,forexample:
Thisverysimplewordshowdeeplycontainsthephilosophyoflife!
Thissentenceadverbial"howdeep"andthewords"implication"shouldbechangedto:
notcollocation,thissimplediscoursecontainshowprofoundphilosophyoflife!
Three,improperwordorder
Wordorderispronetoambiguity,forexample:
Thereporter,wenttotheschooltointerviewmanyofZhang'sdeeds.
Therearetwokindsofunderstandingofthissentence:
oneis"many"as"deeds",said"thereisalotofdeeds";oneis"many"as"Zhang",said"thereisalotofzhang".Inordertoavoidthisambiguity,"many"shouldbetransferredbehind"teacherZhang".Anothermanifestationoftheimproperwordorderistheimproperhandlingofthefarandnearrelationsbetweenthepluralityofattributesandthecentrallanguage.Suchas:
Thatourschoolhastwoexcellentteachersthirtyyears.
Thesubjectofthesentence"teacher"hasfourattributes,
Accordingtoitsdistancefromthecentrallanguage,thedistancerelationshipshouldbearrangedasfollows:
two-thirtyyearsofage-excellent-old.Therefore,thissentencecanbechangedasfollows:
ourschoolhastwoexcellentoldteacherswiththirtyyearsofteachingexperience.
Four.Juxtapositionofgenusrelations
Theconceptofspeciesrelationscannotbejuxtaposed,forexample:
Heoftengotothelibrary,books,dictionariesandthe"modernChinesedictionary".
Thereferencebooksanddictionariesinthissentence,themodernChinesedictionary,belongtoakindofrelationship,notparallel,shouldbechangedto:
heoftengoestothelibrarytoconsultdictionariesandmodernChinesedictionaryandotherreferencebooks.
Five,crossrelationjuxtaposition
Theconceptsofcrossrelationscannotbejuxtaposed,forexample:
Themajorityofthisschoolisayoungteacher,oldandfemaleteachersonlyaminority.
Inthesentence"theyoungteachers"and"teachers"contain"femaleteachers,femaleteachersalsocontainsa"youngteachers"and"teachers"and"teachers"and"teachers"and"teachers"and"teachers"arecrossingrelations.Nottied.Therefore,"femaleteacher"shouldbedeleted.
Six,reversemeaningrelations
Inaprogressivecomplexsentence,andthelatterisaprogressiverelationship,themeaningrelationmaybereversed,suchas:
Letthetheorynotonlycanhewritethepaperandtheapplicationofalongandminutestatement,canwritegeneral.
Therelationshipbetweenthesentenceandtheconsequentreversalshouldbe"practicalwriting"towritethegeneralsentenceasmentionedintheprecedingparagraph,thetheoryof"article"towritealongandminutestatementassuch.Thiscomplexsentencecanbechangedasfollows:
hecannotonlywritegeneralpracticalwriting,butalsowritelongwindedtheoreticalessays.
Seven,tautology
Tautologysometimesproducespositiverhetoricaleffects,butmoreoftenitproducesnegativeeffects,suchas:
Iheardthattheschoolshouldbeestablished,theliteraryclub,hefirstreportedthename.
"First"and"first"aresynonyms,whichappearsuperfluousinthesentence,andoneofthemshouldbedeleted.
Eight,relatedwordsdonotmatch
IftheRelatedwordsdonotmatch,theywilldestroythelogicalrelationsbetweenclauses,forexample:
Onthedevelopmentofhighspeedofourcountryscienceandtechnologyandcultureandeducation,isnotonlynecessary,butisverylikely.
"Both"......And......"Ifwedonotmatch,wecanchange"and"into"+",andformaparallelrelationshipwith"both",orchange"notonly"to"notonly",butalso"and".
Nine,misuseofRelatedwords
Therelationshipbetweenclausesincomplexsentencesisinherentlylogicalandcannotbeartificiallyimposed:
Themthisbookwaspublishedforseveralyears,sotheauthorhasrecentlymadebiggermodification.
Thissentenceisthewordingabuserelatedwords"so",strengthenthecausalrelationship,shouldbesoremoved.
Ten,inappropriatelocationofRelatedwords
ThepositionofRelatedwordsincomplexsentencesisgenerallydefiniteandshouldnotbetransferredfreely:
NotonlythatChineseherbalmedicinecanbecomparablewiththegeneralantibiotics,andthesideeffectissmall,thecostisrelativelylow.
"Notonly",butonlyafter"Chineseherbalmedicine"canconstituteaprogressiverelationshipwith"and",therefore,"notonly"shouldbetransferredto"Chineseherbalmedicine".
Eleven,thefrontandbackitemsarenotcorresponding
Ifasentenceoftheprecedingparagraphappearedinthetwocase,thelattershouldhavetwokindsofcasescorresponding,otherwise,itwillcausebeforeandafterdonotcorrespond,suchas:
Andthereisnohealth,isthepremisetodoagoodjobof.
Thissentenceoftheprecedingparagraphappearedintwocases:
goodhealthandnohealth,thenonlya"cando",thiskindofcircumstanceandtheinthe"health"and"lackofcorrespondence,andnohealth"inanothersituation,sothecorresponding,thissentenceshouldbeinthe"afterthewords"aword"no",
Sothefrontandbackmatches.
Twelve,negativeinappropriate
Inappropriatenegationwillchangetheoriginalmeaningofthesentence,forexample:
Inordertoavoidsimilarincidentsdonotoccurinthefuture,wemustimprovethesecuritysystemassoonaspossible.
Theoriginalintentionofthissentenceistoavoidsimilaraccidentshappenagain,addnegativeword"no",thenchangetheoriginalmeaningofthewholesentence,therefore,thenegativeword"no"shouldberemoved.
Newquestionsprediction
1.Eachofthefollowingsentences,shedidn'tdoasentenceis()
A.intoday'scommodityeconomyera,whenthepoetrygraduallylostpastgloryfromusatthetimetoreadsuchasongtourgepeopletoFenranbeforeOdetothemotherlandisreallyrare,thespiritofenjoyment.
B.,theeditorforhishometown,isrichininformationandreadable.Afterprintingouteverymonth,hundredsofnewspaperswereaskedbytheircountrymenforlessthananhour.
ThequalityofthelanguageofC.literaryworksisnotthatitusesalargenumberofgorgeouswords,usesthetermofanindustry,butliesintheuseofitswords.
D.heisearnestandsincere,andinhislifeandwork,hehasmadegreatuseofhisownactionstoshapehisgreatpersonalitypower,andmovedandguidedthepeoplearoundhim.
Witheachofthefollowingsentences,shedidn'tdoasentenceis()
A.somepeoplethinkthatscientistsalldayimmersedinscientificresearch,"askalittlehousework,butthefactisthatthebestbebeneaththehumancharacter,tothiskindofprejudice.
ThequalityofB.investmentenvironment,thequalityofservice,thequalityofgovernmentofficialsaretheimportantguaranteeforthehealthydevelopmentofregionaleconomy
ThepreservationofthetreasurehouseofC.artinDunhuangmakesitpossi
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