专题03 亲情故事直击高考英语 专项突破读后续写.docx
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专题03亲情故事直击高考英语专项突破读后续写
专题03直击2022高考英语专项突破“读后续写”—亲情故事(含高考英语冲刺复习计划及方法)
亲情是世界上珍贵的情感之一,因为每个人表达方式不一样,所以亲情的外在表现形式也不一样,但是爱是一样的……
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阅读下面短文,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It’shardtotalktodadssometimes.Therolesweoftenexpectourfatherstoplay—protector,provider—canmakethemseemimpenetrable(不可理解的).That’showitwaswithmydad.HecametoCanadaattheageoftenandsettledinanimmigrantcommunity.Hewasnevermuchofatalker.Herarelydrank,sowedidn’tgettoseehimloosenupafterafewbeers.Hedidn’ttellstoriesabouthimselfatthedinnertableorwhenwewentforwalksinthepark.Hewasaprivatepersonandseemedtowanttostaythatway.
BringingupthemanyquestionsIhadaboutlifebeforeIwasborn-hisearlyhopesanddreams,lovesandheartbreaks—letalonesharingmyownfeelings,feltliketoomuchforustohandle.Ididn’twanttothreatentheintegrity(完整)ofhishardshell.Ihadgottenusedtoit,anditmademefeelsecure.
Butwhenmyrelationshipandcareertookahitayearagoatthesametime,thingshadtochange.Iwasfacingseriousquestionsaboutmyownnature,andIwantedtoknowthathehadfacedthem,too.Ineededtoknowhowhehadfoundhisway,becauseIfeltlikeIhadlostmine.
Inaseveremomentofdesperation,itoccurredtomethatsendinganemailmightbethekey.Anemailcanbecrafted(精心制作)slowlyandcarefully.Icouldspeakatacomfortabledistanceandgivehimroomtoadjust.He’dbeupinhisoffice—acomfortableplacefilledwithbookshelves,dustyCD-ROMsandpilesofoldnewspapers.I’dbeatmydeskinanapartment20minutesaway.
SoIwrotetohim.Itoldhimaboutmyregretsandfears,andIaskedhimtoanswer,ifhefeltlikeit,andtosharesomethingabouthimself,somethingthatwouldgivememuch-neededperspectiveonmylife,especiallyonrelationshipandcareer.
Para1:
Twoweekslater,hisresponseshowedupinmyemailbox.
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Para2:
Iclosedtheemailandstartedtocry.
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【答案】Para1:
Twoweekslater,hisresponseshowedupinmyemailbox.Itwasascannedthree-pagedocument.Apparently,mydadhadcarefullyconsideredmymessage,reachedbackintohismemoryandcraftedaresponse.Intheletter,hesharedhishistoryoflove,longing,self-doubt,fearsandstrugglesinlife.Healsoofferedmesomepracticalsuggestionsonhowtohandlemyrelationshipandcareer.Whilereading,Igotthesensethatitmusthavebeenreallytoughformydadtosettledowninanewcountryatanearlyage.Iwasalsoimpressedbythegreatperseveranceheshowedinthefaceofdifficulty.
Para2:
Iclosedtheemailandstartedtocry.IcriedbecauseIwishedIhadopenedupearlierbutwasgratefulitwasn’ttoolate.Icriedbecauseinthemidstofmyownstruggles,hisletterinstantlyputmeatease.AndIcriedbecauseintheend,itwassosimple:
Ijusthadtohit“Send”.We’vesincehadmanyexchanges.Myproblemshaven’tbeenmagicallysolved,butgettingtoknowmydadbetter–andlearningtolovehimmore–hasmadethetoughstuffmoremanageableandlifesweeter.It’shardtotalktodadssometimes,butI’mgladthatIfoundawaytotalktomine.
【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。
文章以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者的父亲是一个少言少语的人,作者习惯这样的父亲,也觉得这样很安全。
但当作者的婚姻和职业受到打击时,他/她感到迷失了自我,想到父亲也可能曾经面临这样的问题,于是决定通过写邮件向他求助。
【详解】
1.段落续写
①根据第一段首句内容“两周后,他的回信出现在我的邮箱里”可知,下文可描写父亲在信里真诚地分享了自己的经历,以及作者的感受。
②根据第二段首句内容“我关了邮件开始哭起来”可知,下文可描写作者哭的原因,以及庆幸找到了和父亲进行交流的方式。
2.续写线索:
受到回信——父亲分享自己的经历——对父亲有了更多了解——哭起来——为什么哭——庆幸能和父亲交流
3.词类激活
行为类
①思考:
consider/think
②提供:
offer/supply/give/provide
③解决:
solve/settle
情绪类
①艰难的:
hard/tough/difficult
②感激的:
grateful/thankful
③高兴的:
glad/delighted/pleased
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Whilereading,Igotthesensethatitmusthavebeenreallytoughformydadtosettledowninanewcountryatanearlyage.(运用了状语从句的省略)
[高分句型2]IcriedbecauseIwishedIhadopenedupearlierbutwasgratefulitwasn’ttoolate.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句,和虚拟语气)
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“HasPriyanotcomehomeasyet?
”Suryaasked.Hehadjustreturnedfromwork.HewasacashierintheStateBankofHyderabad,whilehiswife,SharadaalabassistantinReddyCollegeforWomen.Theirdaughter,Priya,wasaClassXstudentinSaintAnne'sSchoolaroundsixkilometersaway.TherewasadirectbusfromPriya'sschool.
“Sheshouldhavebeenhereby4.30.Itis5:
30nowandshestillhasnotcome,"Sharadareplied."Yesterdaytooshewaslate.Infact,sincethelastfewweeksshehasbeencominghomelate."
“Didyouaskher?
”
“Yes,Idid,lastweek.”
“Whatdidshesay?
”
“Shenumbedsomethingaboutspendingtimewithherbestfriend,thenshekeptquiet.Youknowsheisnotveryforthcoming.Onedayshewouldbebecomeanengineerordoctor."PriyawastoappearfortheClassXexaminationinAprilthenextyear.ThiswasthemonthofJulyandherstudieshadstartedinrealearnest.MorningsixtoeightshewentforMathsandPhysicstuition,andintheeveningseventoeightforChemistry.
Thenextday,SuryahappenedtodiscusPriya'sstrangebehaviourwithhiscolleague,Durga,whotoohadateenageddaughter.
“Surya,youshouldnottakeitsolightly.Ihaveanidea.Mybrother,Ajay,worksinaDetectiveAgency.Iwilltellhim.Iamsurehewillagreetofollowher.SincePriyadoesnotknowhim,shewillnotgetsuspicious.”
Suryakeptsilentforawhile,finallyagreed.
OnWednesday,Suryagotacallintheoffice.
“Hello!
Surya?
ThisisAjay?
”
“Yes,Ajay.Anynews?
”
“Plenty.CanyoucometoArtsCollegeat4.30intheevening?
”
“Why?
”
“Iwillexplainwhenwemeet.”
Sharpat4.30,SuryaparkedhisscooterinfrontoftheArtsCollegeBuilding.Ajaywaswaitingforhim.“Comewithme,“hesaid.TheywentbehindthebuildingandtookapathwhichledtoasmallHanumanTemple.SuryahadbeentherewithPriyaacoupleoftimesandtheybothquitelikedtheserenityoftheplace.Whentheyreachedtheplace,Ajayaskedhimtoquietlylookfrombehindaboulder.
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
AsSuryalooked,hewassurprised
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“Ileftmypaintingsinthetemple.Iwanttobecomeapainter.”Priyaansweredonthesofa.
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【答案】AsSuryalooked,hewassurprised.HesawPriyasittinginthesmallcourtyardinfrontofthetemple.Therewasacanvasinfrontofherandshewasbusypainting.Afewpaintbottles,brushesanddrawingsheetswerelyingaround.Besideherwereseveralcanvases,Suryawasstruckbythebeauty,therawenergy,ofhisdaughter’sart.Thenheleft,determinednottodisturbher.ButwhydidshespendsomuchtimepaintingattheapproachoftheClassXexamination?
SuryakeptwonderinguntilPriyacamehomethatevening.“Whyareyoulateagain?
Spendingtimepainting?
Whereareyourpaintings?
”heaskeddirectly.
“Ileftmypaintingsinthetemple.Iwanttobecomeapainter.Priyaansweredonthesofa.“Idonotmindstruggling,evenstarvingtorealizemydream.Isitreallythatwrongtochaseone'sdream?
”Struckbythechild'sdetermination,Suryawaslostinthought.TheyalwayswantedtheirdaughtertostudyPhysics,Chemistry,Maths,Biology,andbecomeanengineeroradoctor.Theybelievedpaintingcouldn'tguaranteeherbreadandbutterbutengineeringormedicinecould.Maybeitwastimetochange.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Surya发现女儿Priya一直回家很晚,为了弄清楚女儿的这些奇怪行为,他的同事建议让自己的兄弟Ajay帮助他弄清楚,最后Ajay带着Surya来到了一所寺庙,发现女儿在画画。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当Surya看着,他感到很惊讶。
”可知,第一段可描写Surya发现女儿在画画,画的很好,Surya没有打扰她,等到女儿回家,直接询问女儿的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“‘我把我的画留在了寺庙里。
我想成为一名画家。
’Priya坐在沙发上回答道。
”可知,第二段可描写Priya告诉Surya渴望实现自己成为画家的梦想,Surya陷入深思,他们总是想要让女儿学习物理,化学,数学等,想要让她成为医生或者工程师,现在Surya有了改变。
2.续写线索:
看到女儿画画——父亲被吸引——询问——女儿决心实现梦想——父亲反思——做出改变
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.忙于做某事:
bebusydoingsth./beoccupiedindoingsth.
②.被……吸引:
bestruckby/beattractedby
③.下定决心做某事:
determinedtodosth./makeupone’smindtodosth.
情绪类
好奇:
wonder/becurious/befullofcuriosity
【点睛】
[高分句型1].SuryakeptwonderinguntilPriyacamehomethatevening.(运用了until引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2].Theybelievedpaintingcouldn'tguaranteeherbreadandbutterbutengineeringormedicinecould.(运用了省略连接词的宾语从句)
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AGIFTFORGRANDPA
Summervacationwascoming.JackandhisbrotherBerlinwerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofvisitingtheirgrandparentsagain.
Thebigdaycameatlast.Afterthehappyfamilygotready,theysetoutforthegrandparents’eagerly.Ontheway,thebrotherswereexcitedlytalkingaboutthefuntheyhadwithgrandparents.
Alittlebluehousewithatallwhitechimneyfinallyappeared.BehindthepropertywastheforestcarryingtheirgoodmemorieswithGrandpa.Theyarrivedatthedriveway,attheendofwhichGrandmawaswaitingforthemjoyfully.
JackandBerlineachgaveGrandmaabighugandthenswepttothelivingroom,shoutingexcitedly“Grandpa,weareback!
”
Seeinghisgrandsons,Grandpawaswildwithjoyandtriedtogetupwithallhisstrengthfromthechairbutinvain.Ahelplessexpressionflashedonhisface.Grandmaexplainedthathishealthwasdecliningrapidlyandmaybecouldn’tstanduponhisownforever.ButGrandpadeclaredstubbornly(倔强地),“Ican!
”Certainly,hewasstuckinhisboyishway.Mumandgran
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