作文 对比选择型作文.docx
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作文对比选择型作文
Outline:
1.很多人认为有必要举行口语考试,理由是…
2.也有人持不同的意见,…
3.我的看法和打算。
本题属于议论文中的对比选择型作文。
对比选择型作文可分为以下3种类型:
Introducingthetopic引出话题
Statingtheprosandcons分析利弊
Drawingaconclusion:
myopinion/attitude/总结观点:
摆明我的立场
Introducinganidea引出(反面)论点
Contradictingtheideaandraisemyownidea反驳并表明反对的理由,提出自己的观点
Supportingmyideaandmakingaconclusion总结:
从正面论述自己的观点
Statingtheprosandconsofsth.分析利弊
Drawingaconclusion总结:
论述自己的观点。
IsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary?
AtestofspokenEnglishwillbeincludedasanoptionalcomponentoftheCollegeEnglishTest(CET).(引出观点段)Inresponsetothechange,manyargue/holdthatitisnecessaryandbeneficial,butothersputforwardatotallydifferentargument.对于这个变化,许多人认为这是必要的而且有益的,但是有人则对此提出完全相反的观点。
Thosepeoplewhoholdthefirstopinion/maketheformerchoice/havethefirstpreferencebelievespokenEnglishshouldbegivenasmuchweightaswrittenEnglish,forthepurposeoflearningEnglishistobeabletoread,write,listenandspeakinEnglish.Inaddition,theymaintain/pointoutthatcollegestudents,whohavelearntEnglishforsomanyyears,aregoodatEnglishreadingandwritingbutextremelylackinginEnglishspeaking.ByincludingspokenEnglishasanoptionalcomponentoftheCET,theymayputmoreenergyandtimeintopracticingtheiroralEnglish,leadingtoimprovementintheiroralEnglish.
However,othersthinkdifferently/donotagreethis/havedifferentchoices/preferences.therearealsopeoplewhomaintainthatgoodreadingandwritingskillswouldbeenoughfortheaverageEnglishlearners.Collegestudentsarealreadyunderconsiderablepressurefromtheircoursework.Anotherrequiredtestwillonlyaddtotheirburden.Also,somestudentsmaytaketheshortcutandonlypracticethequestionsaccordingtothefixedformatofthetest,whichwillnotactuallyimprovetheirspokenEnglish.
Weighingupthesetwoarguments/choices/preferences,Iprefer/aminclinedto/wouldratherchoosetheformerone.Foronething,ascollegeEnglishlearnersweshouldandareabletofullydevelopourselvesinallaspectsofEnglish.Foranother/Furthermore/Moreover/
What’smore,thechangeinCETimpliesthatthesocietyneedspeoplewithcomprehensiveEnglishlanguageskills,soweshouldbeawareofthechangeandmakeadjustmenttoit.Justlikethefamoussaying:
Noonecanstandstill.Ifyouarenotmovingahead,youarefallingbehind.Fromnowon,Ishouldgetreadyforthatchangeandsetagoalforit.OnlybypracticingwillmyoralEnglishbeimproved!
范文:
AtestofspokenEnglishwillbeincludedasanoptional(componentoftheCollegeEnglishTest(CET).SomepeoplecontendthatitisabsolutelynecessarytoholdatestofspokenEnglishinChinabecausewehavebeentoldmanytimesthataChinesestudentwhohasbeenlearningEnglishforyearscannotcommunicatewithanativeEnglishspeaker.SometimeseventhosetopstudentswhoexcelatgrammarandwritingskillsfindtheirEnglishinadequatetoexpresstheirthoughtsfreelywhenspeaking.AtestofspokenEnglishwillbringtheimportanceofspeakingEnglishtotheawarenessofthecollegestudents,andthushelpthemwiththeircommunicatingskills.
Ontheotherhand,therearealsopeoplewhomaintainthatgoodreadingandwritingskillswouldbeenoughfortheaverageEnglishlearners.Collegestudentsarealreadyunderconsiderablepressurefromtheircoursework.Anotherrequiredtestwillonlyaddtotheirburden.Also,somestudentsmaytaketheshortcutandonlypracticethequestionsaccordingtothefixedformatofthetest,whichwillnotactuallyimprovetheirspokenEnglish.
IbelievethatatestofspokenEnglishwilldomoregoodthanharm.SinceChinawillcontinueitspolicyofopeningandreform,theabilitytospeakfluentEnglishisamustforanyonewhowantstosurpassothersinahighlycompetitivesociety.WhetherItakethetestornot,IshallmakealleffortstopracticemyspokenEnglishintherestyearsincollege.
问题反馈:
1.审题不清:
1)CET大学英语考试不是CEE大学入学考试,也不是大学里的英语课考试。
2)SpokenEnglishtestwillbeincludedasanoptionalcomponent.可选择的,非强制的
2.表达问题:
1)表达不够简练。
2)论述没有说服力。
1)用语简练,直击要害!
2)深入思考,关注当前热点,关注生活,勤于思考,善于思考。
3)不要构思汉语,直接用英语表达思维。
要不然很容易写出chinglish。
3.语言错误太多!
影响分数档!
1)句子片段
Because...
Therefore,…附属连词不能单独使用,要依附于主句之上。
2)单词错误,重复出现。
leval/grammer/
3)用语不规范。
以我之见:
Inmyopinion,…
To/Inmymind,…
AsfarasIamconcerned,…[就我而言],
AsfarasIcansee,…[据我看来]
TherearefewstudentscanspeakEnglish.
Therearealotofpeoplehavedifferentopinions.
4)语体不当。
书面语;口头语
Iwanttosaythis…
That’sall.
4.结构问题:
1)一段论要摒弃!
2)务必按照写作提纲写作!
(顺序)
5.书写问题
1)字体过于潦草!
2)段首缩进
对比选择型作文写作常用句型
1.如何引出话题?
1)Whenitcomestothetopic,thereisnocompleteagreementamongpeople.
2)Whenaskedthetopic,differentpeoplewillgivedifferentanswers/offerdifferentviews/makedifferentchoices/havedi
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