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考研作文模板
考研作文高分策略
时间规划
1-6月:
基础阶段
•明确方向
•最新考题
•购买历年真题及相关参考书
•以英语复习为核心
7-8月:
强化阶段
•7月初研究大纲(词汇、样题)
•全面启动专业课复习
•了解考试信息政策
•辅导班-黄金时段
•英语复习:
以真题为核心
9-12月:
充实阶段
•11月初考试报名
•10-12月考研政治、考研数学的学习
•专业课的全面巩固
英语复习发动三大战役
•1.英语学习查漏补缺:
完型填空的词汇区分;阅读难句和难词全面突破
•2.模拟题自测打分
•3.扩展阅读——经济类报刊(Time,BusinessWeek,Fortune)网站(
12-1月:
冲刺阶段
•冲刺模拟
•关注网络和讲座的名师答疑
•政治的重复背诵
•劳逸结合,保持良好的应战状态
大纲解读:
两大黄金原则
(一)印象原则:
书写工整、卷面整洁、字迹清晰
(二)结构安排:
语言第一位、结构第二位、内容第三位
1,语言:
•基本正确
•丰富多变(词汇+句型)
2,结构:
•段落结构:
总分总结构
(1)主题句:
1句,改写提纲
(2)描述或论证:
2-3句
(3)小结:
1句
评分点
A节应用文
•信息点的覆盖
•内容的组织
•语言的准确
•格式的正确
•语域的恰当
B节作文
•内容的完整
•文章的组织连贯性
•语法结构和词汇的多样性
•语言的准确性
2001满分作文以及18分范文分析
首句改写:
•词汇替换
•主语——宾语
•主动——被动
•词汇——词组
•改变词性
•实词——同义词、近义词、上下义词
写作三大定律
1.错误的复杂句不如正确简单句
2.想第二个词汇或者句
3.写的每一个词或句都是背过的
三,考研写作九大问题及解决策略
(1)作文的框架结构问题
•避免自由分段
•避免语言杂乱
(2)作文的内容设计问题
热点话题VS永恒话题。
需要考虑的十个问题:
•成功
•诚信
•团结
•和平
•环境
•住房
•交通
•就业
•教育
•网络
策略
a.例证思维由点及面
b.三项原因思维训练
c.报刊文章拓宽思路
d.高谈阔论即兴思维
e.适当应用万能理由
万能理由
•经济
•效率
•交流
•他人
•安全
•方便
•耐久
•环境
•健康
•情感
•性格
•经验
•空间
(3)语言的衔接流畅问题
Wehavesomanyproblemsinoursociety,itseemseverysolutionneedsmoney.Wetalkaboutgettingpeopleoffwelfare.Weneedmoneytogivethemjobsuntiltheycansupportthemselves.Thatmeanssupporttraining,daycarefortheirchildren,probablyamonthlyrentsubsidy.Allofthosethingscancosthundredsofmillionsofdollars.Ifwecouldsolveamajorproblemlike,wouldn’titimproveoursocietyevenmorethannewtechnology?
Wehavesomanyproblemsinoursociety,anditseemseverysolutionneedsmoney.Forinstance,wetalkaboutgettingpeopleoffwelfare.Todothat,weneedmoneytogivethemjobsuntiltheycansupportthemselves.Thatmeanssupporttraining,daycarefortheirchildren,andprobablyamonthlyrentsubsidy.Allofthosethingscancosthundredsofmillionsofdollars.However,Ifwecouldsolveamajorproblemlike,wouldn’titimproveoursocietyevenmorethannewtechnology?
如何连贯?
1)启动观点
•Nowadays,aheateddebateisspringingupasto…
•Whenitcomesto…
•Asisshowninthepicture/tableabove
•Withthedevelopmentof…
•Itisgenerallybelievedthat…
2)内容承接
1)名词性代词
one,that,thesame,those,theformer...thelatter
•HehasjustboughtanewcameraanditisthemostadvancedoneIhaveevermet.
•Weenteredtherestaurantandorderedthenewestdishesofferedthere.Aswewaitfortheorder,Tomcameinandorderedthesamefood.
2)动词性替代
do,does,did,done
•Ithinkyoulikethestyleofthiswristwatch.Ifyoudo,Iwillgiveittoyouasthebirthdaypresent.
•Haveyoufinishedyourproposalyet?
Ifyouhavedone,pleasehanditinonTuesdaymorning.
3)分句替代,用so,not来替代。
如:
•Heisbelievedtobethepresidentforanotherterm.Ifnot,therecentfavorablepoliciesforsmallandmedium-sizedenterprisseswillpossiblychange.
4)常用连接词
•1))先后次序关系:
atthistime;first;second;atlast;next;previously;simultaneously同时地;eventually;lastbutnotleast;tobeginwith;tostartwith;toendwith;finally;seeing...由于,因为;sincethen;firstofall;afterwards后来;followingthis
•2))因果关系:
because;becauseofthis;beingthat(口语)既然,因为;anotherimportantfactor/reasonof...;since;as;for;inthat...;owingto由于(负面);dueto由于;forthereasonthat...;inviewof鉴于,考虑到resultfrom归因于thereasonseemstobeobvious;thereareabout...;forthisreason;asaresultofthis;therefore;...andso...;consequently所以,因此;asaresult;thus这样,如此,因而;hence因此;so;sothat...;inconsequence结果,结果;asaconsequence;accordingly因此,于是,相应地;inevitably不可避免地;undertheseconditionsthereupon因此于是
(4)作文的词语表达问题
▪积累考研词汇、日常生活常见单词
▪1-6月打基础,考研大纲单词必须全背下来。
包括一词多义。
▪积累主题相关词
▪积累写作精彩用词和表达
例如:
▪smart/bright/advisable/clever
▪intelligent/brilliant/
▪quick-minded/ingenious/
▪sharp-minded/
▪talented/gifted/quick-witted
▪very/much/quite/fairly/considerably/
▪extraordinarily/remarkably/amazingly/
▪astonishingly/surprisingly/extremely/
▪shockingly/unusually/notably/
▪noticeably/overwhelmingly/strikingly
▪awfully/dramatically/highly/
▪impressively/strongly
▪Well-known/famous/famed/noted
▪celebrated/renowned/distinguished/
▪eminent
▪bear/hold/enjoyanation-wide/world-widefame/name/recognition/
▪celebrity/eminence/reputation
▪bewidelyrecognized/acknowledged
▪about/regarding/concerning/
▪involving/involvedin
▪asregards/withrespectto/
▪relatingto/withregardto/
▪withreferenceto/withrelationto
高频词汇
▪贫穷的:
poor=needy=impoverished=poverty-stricken
▪富裕的:
rich=wealthy=affluent=well-to-do=well-off
▪优秀的:
excellent=eminent=top=outstanding
▪积极的,好的:
good=conducive=beneficial=advantageous
▪流行的:
popular=prevailing=prevalent=pervasive
▪激发,鼓励:
encourage=motivate=stimulate=spur
▪认为:
think=assert=hold=claim=argue
▪完成:
complete=fulfill=accomplish=achieve
▪保留:
keep=preserve=retain=hold
▪有害于:
destroy=impair=undermine=jeopardize
▪减轻:
ease=alleviate=relieve=lighten
▪影响:
influence=impact
▪幸福:
happiness=cheerfulness=well-being
▪教育:
education=schooling=familyparenting=upbringing
▪青少年:
youngpeople=youngsters=youths=adolescents
▪优点:
advantage=merits=superiority=virtue
▪责任:
responsibility=obligation=duty=liability
▪能力:
ability=capacity=power=skill
▪职业:
job=career=employment=profession
▪娱乐:
enjoyment=pastimes=recreation=entertainment
▪孩子:
children=offspring=descendant=kid
高频短语
▪充满了:
befilledwith=beawashwith=beinundatewith=besaturatedwith
▪努力:
strugglefor=aspireafter=strivefor=sparenoeffortsfor
▪从事:
embarkon=takeup=setabout=goinfor
▪在当代:
incontemporarysociety=inpresent-daysociety=inthisdayandage
▪大量的:
ahostof=amultitudeof=avastnumberof=avastamountof
(5)句型要丰富多变
一,简单句的扩展
a形容词和副词
b同位语作插入语
c介词结构作修饰
d非限定性定语从句
e非谓语动词
▪YellowOldShoeislookingatapicture.
▪Inanafternoonwithbrightsunlight,YellowOldShoe,whohadamiserablechildhood,apatheticlifeandanunsuccessfulmarriage,islookinganxiously,withthehelpofamagnifierandapairofreadingglasses,atapictureofabeauty,whomadethousandsofChineseyoungmansleeplessandqueasy.
▪Youarenotafishyourself.Howcanyouknowthehappinessofafish?
▪Howcanyou,notbeingafishyourself,knowthehappinessofafish?
总结:
加附属成分:
▪分词短语
▪介词短语
▪副词短语
▪不定式动词短语
▪Thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarmandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(并列分句)
▪Grazingpeacefully,thegoatsinthefarmwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(现在分语短语+简单句)
▪Inthefarm,thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.
▪(介词短语+并列分句)
▪Thereweregoatsgrazingpeacefullyinthefarm,unawareoftheapproachinghunter.
▪(简单句+形容语短语)
▪Asthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarm,theywereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(原因状语从句+主句)
2009年真题
▪ThispictureisaboutInternet.
▪Internetlookslikeanet.
▪Peopleusethecomputers.
▪Internet,whichisvividlydepictedinthepicture,lookslikeanetbyconnectingdifferentpeopleintheworld.
▪Nowadays,lotsofpeople,whethertheoldandtheyoung,usethecomputerstoconstantwitheachother.
▪Wecandeducefromthispicturethateachpersonsitsintheirownworkroom,usingthecomputerstocommunicatewiththeircolleaguesinsteadoftalkingfacetoface.
二,修辞手段的运用
1.明喻simile
▪like,as,seem,asif,asthough,suchas等。
▪Myheartislikeasingingbird.
▪Herskinwasaswhiteassnow.
2.拟人
▪MyonlyworrywasthatJanuarywouldfindmehuntingforajobagain.
3.排比
▪Noonecanbeperfectlyfreetillallarefree;noonecanbeperfectlymoraltillallaremoral;noonecanbeperfectlyhappytillallarehappy.
(6)语言的雕刻润色问题
▪从画中我们可以看到一只小鸟正在为失去的森林/家园哭泣。
▪Fromthepicturewecanseeatinybirdcryingforthelosthouse.
▪Thispicturedepictsalittlebirdlamenting/sheddingtearsforthelossofitshabitat/paradise.
词汇雕刻
▪harm----endanger,damage,threaten
▪get----obtain,acquire,derivefrom
▪solve----settle,resolve,tackle
▪problem----difficulty,crisis,disaster/tragedy
▪famous----distinguished,prestigious,enjoyahighreputation
▪enough----sufficient,adequate,abundant
▪good/great----remarkable,marvelous,impressive
▪bad-----severe,grave
▪happy----delighted,ingoodmood,inhighspirits
▪many----innumerable,countless
(7)语言的替换问题
▪Theoldmanwastoddlingoutofthebar.
▪FromthewindowIsawmanystreet-walkers.
▪Ishouldgainmoreexperiencesandbecomeripe.
(8)语言的修补纠错问题
▪主谓一致
▪时态
▪冠词用法
▪名词单复数
▪介词搭配问题
▪拼写错误
(9)语言的笔迹书写问题
大作文
3,12-13
160-200
5-7
5-7
反面题材
第一段:
描述图画(2-3句)
第二段:
分析主题(5-7句)
第三段:
提出建议(5-6句)
1,第一句:
总体描述
▪操作步骤:
who,what,when,where
▪将关键词连成句子
常见的开头写法
▪Asisvividlydepicted/described/portrayedby/inthepicture,…
▪Thepurposeofthepictureistoshowusthat...
▪Asisshowninthepicture,…
▪Wecandeducefromthispicturethat...
▪Thepictureindicates/conveysthemeaningthat…
▪Asisshowninthepicture,wecanseeclearlytherelationshipbetween...and...
2,第二句:
图画最强烈的视觉效果
▪Thispictureseemstobe….
▪Whatisdescribed/conveyedinthepictureis…
▪Themoststrikingfeaturethatimpressesmedeeplyis…
▪Thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyed/impliedshouldbegivendeepconsideration.
2011
▪Asisshowninthepicture,twoyoungmensittingontheboatarethrowingrubbishintothelake,withallkindsofgarbagefloatingonthesurface.Whatisconveyedinthepictureisratherrealisticandthought-provoking.
▪Asisshownin
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