作文范文之is评论作文.docx
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作文范文之is评论作文
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ctsfaroutweighitsnegativeaspects.whatevereffectsithas,onethingiscertain,________(主题)itselfisneithergoodnorbad.itistheusestowhichitisputthatdetermineitsvaluetooursociety.
(2)模版二withthedevelopmentofscienceandhumancivilization,manyformerlyunimaginablethingscomeintoreality.someofthemhavepositiveeffectsonourlife,butsomearedistasteful.thephenomenonof___________(主题现象)isanexampleoftheformer/latterone.therearemanyfactorsthatmayaccountforit,andthefollowingarethemostconspicuousaspects.tostartwith,__________________(原因1).furthermore,______________________(原因2).eventually,________________________________(原因3).goodas____________(主题现象)is,ithas,unfortunately,itsdisadvantages.theapparentexampleisthat______________(缺点例子1).inaddition,_____________________(缺点例子
2).onthewhole,thephenomenonisoneoftheresultsoftheprogressofthemodernsociety.thereisstillalongwayforustoimprove/eliminate__________(主题现象)andmakeourlifemorecomfortable.
recreationalactivities21stcenturyhasbroughtwithitanunprecedentedvarietyofrecreationalactivitiesrangingfromtraditionaloutdooractivitiessuchasplayingballgamestoallkindsofonlineones,thelatterofwhichisagreatappealtotheyounggeneration.soi’dliketonarrowmytopicdowntoonlinerecreationalactivities.itgoeswithoutsayingthatvariousactivitiesbroughtbymoderntechnologyhavegreatlybroadenedourhorizonandbroughtmuchexcitementtous.withaccesstotheinternet,youcangettoknowpeoplefromanycountryintheworldandyoucantalkwiththem,playgameswiththem---atemptationveryhardtoresist,andevenseethemviawebcam.thedisadvantage,however,isthatanyonewholacksself-controlwouldveryeasilygetlostandbecomeaddictedtotheonlineworld,whichinturnmightseriouslyaffecttheirlife,workandinterpersonalrelationships.asacollegestudent,ithinkwhatreallymattersistomakebetterchoiceandexertmorediscipline.we’dbettertakeadvantageofgoodonlinerecreationalactivitiestoeichourlivesandbroadenthescopeofknowledge.whenitcomestothoseaddictive,time-consumingandlessmeaningfulactivities,ithinktostayawayfromthemisawisedecision.
recreationalactivitieswiththedevelopmentoflivingstandard,peoplespendmoretimeonvariousformsofrecreationalactivities.peoplecandosports,singingkaraoke,godancing,gotothemovies,playvideogamesoronlinegames,orsurftheinternet.recreationalactivitiesaregoodtopeople’shealth,bothphysicallyandmentally.sportsanddancingcankeeppeoplefit.singingkaraoke,playingvideogamesoronlinegamescansatisfypeople’simagination.surfingtheinternetcanbringpeoplealotofinformationandknowledge.however,recreationalactivitiesmightbeharmfulifpeopleareaddicted.spendingtoomuchtimeonrecreationalactivitieswillseriouslyinfluencepeople’snormallives,especiallyworkandstudy.therefore,peoplewillbenefitfromrecreationalactivitiesonlyiftheytakepartinthemproperly.
一、用于作文开头的万能模板:
1、manypeopleinsistthat...很多人(坚持)认为?
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这句话乍看没亮点,但将众人皆知的think换为insist有没有觉得高大上了许多?
2、withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,moreandmorepeoplebelievethat...随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为?
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这个可是小编当年的杀手锏啊,虽谈不上洋气,但正确率百分百啊,还超好记!
3、alotofpeopleseemtothinkthat...很多人似乎认为?
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think终于闪亮登场,但seemto为整个句子增添了点婉转之感,这种客观的方式貌似较受老外(尤其腐国人)喜爱。
二、引出不同观点的万能模板:
1、peoplesviewson...varyfrompersontoperson.someholdthat....however,othersbelievethat....人们对?
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的观点因人而异。
有些人认为.....然而其他人却认为?
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看这个长度就已然鹤立鸡群。
其实,也是一个蛮简单也好记的模板。
2、attitudestowards(drugs)varyfrompersontoperson.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异。
乍一看,跟上句的开头神似,其实就是省略掉了peoples,不仅清爽而且好像高端了一些。
3、peoplemayhavedifferentopinionson...人们对?
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可能会有不同的见解。
又是一个婉转的句子,展示其客观性。
4、therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto...关于?
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人们的观点大不相同。
different虽拉低了水准,但asto又拯救了回来。
5、differentpeopleholddifferentattitudestoward(failure).对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。
这句话貌似亮点不多,顶多一个hold,但也是安全牌,容易理解。
三、得出最终结论的万能模板:
1、takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wenaturallycometotheconclusionthat...把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论?
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很完全的答法,takesthintoconsideration短语的应用,加分。
2、takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat...考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论?
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takeintoaccountsth短语似乎又比上句的takesthintoconsideration提升了一个层次。
3、hence/therefore,wedbettercometotheconclusionthat...因此,自然我们得出以下结论。
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hence一词用在文章中大气吧,但别平时口语中用,否则即使老外也用一种看老古董的眼神看你。
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再特意提一句:
wedbetter在这里不是“不得不”或“最好”的意思,而是一种自然而然,水到渠成的得出结论。
4、thereisnodoubtthat(job-hopping)hasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点。
短语thereisnodoubtthat上线,同时运用我们的老朋友aswellas增加看点。
5、allinall,wecannotlivewithout...butatthesametimewe
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