托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析.docx
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托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析
托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析
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托福写作难点话题一览
Landforhumanneedsorendangeredanimals
Somepeoplethinkthathumanneedsforfarmland,housing,andindustryaremoreimportantthansavinglandforendangeredanimals.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththispointofview?
Whyorwhynot?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
写作思路展开结构分析
虽然两边立场都可以选,但一般来说按照政治正确的思路还是建议选择站濒危动物这一边,中国考生比较容易relate到的例子就是熊猫了吧。
所以认为选择不同意更好写一些。
大家可以列举两三个保护endangeredanimals的重要性。
同时不要忘了说明人类也确实需要更多的土地。
只不过不能只顾眼前利益(shorttermbenefits)而已。
这样就能两边都兼顾到一些了。
本话题高分范文赏析
Whenmakingdecisionsaboutlanduse,somesaythathumanneedsshouldebeforeanimalneedsineverycase.WhileIagreethathumanneedsshouldhaveprimaryconsideration,humanshaveaspecialresponsibilitytoprotectthelandthatendangeredanimalscallhome.Animalsadaptveryslowlytosuddenchangesintheirenvironments.Manyendangeredanimalscanonlyliveinoneplace,orinaspecifictypeofplace.Humans,ontheotherhand,haveaspecialabilitytoadaptquicklytochangingandhostileenvironments.Forinstance,ifhumansneedtoliveinaverydryenvironmenttheycanusetechnologytolocateanddrillforwater,orbuildpipelinestobringinwaterfromoutside.ThousandsofyearsagotheresidentsofXinjiangprovincedugundergroundtunnelshundredsofkilometerslongtocarrywatertooasistownslikeTurpan.Becausehumansarethusflexiblewhilemanyanimalsarenot,humansshouldmakeanefforttouseupallavailablespacebeforeencroachinguponthehabitatsofendangeredanimals.Oneoftheimportantreasonstoprotectendangeredanimalsisthatthedelicateecologicalbalanceofanareamightbeirreparablyharmedbytheirextinction.Forexample,ifhumanschopdownforestsandusethelandtogrowcorn,theymightsimultaneouslydestroythehabitatsofakindofbirdthateatslocusts.Thenextyearbecausethelocustpopulationcangrowunchecked,locustsmightdestroytheentirenearbycorncrop.Notonlydothebirdslosetheirhomes,buthumansarealsoharmed.Theecologicalbalanceofmanynaturalhabitatsisstillnotwellunderstoodandhumansinterfereinitattheirperil.Finally,humanshavemuchtolearnfromendangeredspecies.Oneexampleisinthefieldofmedicine.ByobservingaparticularspeciesofendangeredmonkeysinSouthAmerica,scientistshavediscoveredthatmonkeyseatacertainkindofplantwhentheygetsick.Throughresearchthescientistsdiscoveredthatthisplantalsohasmedicinalvalueforhumans.Ifthemonkey'shabitathadbeendestroyedtocreatemorefarmland,notonlywouldwelosetheplantsandthemonkeys,wewouldalsoloselife-savingmedicinesandthepotentialformedicalresearch.
托福写作难点话题一览
Doweneed"Never,nevergiveup"?
Theexpression"Never,nevergiveup"meanstokeeptryingandneverstopworkingforyourgoals.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
写作思路展开结构分析
这道题目比较狡猾,很多人可能一看到never就马上选好边准备反对了,但觉得大家最好还是结合题目的实际情况来分析。
never的确是一个绝对词,但是由于这道题目说的是nevergiveup,本身是一个积极向上的说法,所以,认为比较合理的态度是“很大程度上同意”。
比如大家可以说永不放弃的前提是“制订一个现实、可行、并有意义的计划”等等。
本话题高分范文赏析
NeartheendoftheSecondWorldWar,Churchilldeliveredhismostfamousandtheshortestspeech:
Never,NeverGiveUp.TheBritishandpeopleinmanyothercountriesweretremendouslyencouraged,andfinallywentthroughthehardestperiodinhumanhistory."Nevergiveup"representsastrongandpositivelifeattitude.Somepeoplearereadytoquitwhentheyfeeltheycannotendurethedifficultiesofsomeworkortheythinktheycannotfindawaytofinishtherequiredtask.Suchpeopleusuallybeeupsetanddisappointedandlosetheirself-confidence,althoughtheyvirtuallycandoeverythingwellsimplybytryingoncemore.Incasessuchasacquiringsecondlanguage,mostpeoplefailedsimplybecausetheyhadgivenup.Acquiringsecondlanguagemightbetheeasiesttaskamongdiverseacademiccurriculums,becauseonecanbesuessfulonlybyplainrepetition,thoughitispainstakingandtime-consuming.Nevergiveup.Suchstrongbeliefoftengivesusthesecondchance.Thefactthatwefail-somewheredoesnotmeanwearegoingtofaileverywhere,andespeciallyitdoesnotnecessarilymeanthatwearedeprivedofopportunitiestowinthere.Thereprobablyisasecondchance.Manysuessfulpeopledidfailbefore.YuMinhong,thefounderofNewOrientalSchool,wasabletostudyinPekingUniversityonlyafterthreeattempts.Hewasn'treckonedassuessfulaftergraduation,amongmanysignsisthefactthatalmostallhisclassmateswentabroadwhilehew~eachandeverytimerefusedbyofficialsinvisa-grantingofficeforunexplainedreasons.Yethenevergaveup,whichmakeshislatersuessinevitable.Psychologyteachesusthatwedogetwhatwewant,ifweknowexactlywhatwewantandwanttherightthing.Firstofall,wemustmakesurethatourclearlydefinedgoalsareachievable,andthatourcarefullydesignedmeansarepracticable.AsuperficialclaimlikeIwanttobeamillionairebringsnothing.Andanunrealisticgoallikeinventingaperpetualmotionmachineisabsolutelymeaningless.Butifwewanttoacquireasecondlanguage,itisbothrealisticandmeaningful.Bycarefulplanning,andrelevantpersistencewehavenoreasontofail.Andnumerousexamples___usthatevenifthemethodsareproblematic,manystillfinallyattaingreatachievements.Therefore,inmostcases,thebelief"Never,nevergiveup"isreallysomethingthatweshouldalwaysbearinmind.
托福写作难点话题一览
Shouldhistoricbuildingsbepreservedorbereplacedwithmodernbuildings?
Shouldacitytrytopreserveitsold,historicbuildingsordestroythemandreplacethemwithmodernbuildings?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.
写作思路展开结构分析
保留历史建筑的必要性在于其文化意义、教育意义和商业意义(比如开发旅游业)。
而拆除则是出于城市土地需求的现实性来考虑,比如开发住房和商业场所。
至于要不要保留,也往往是看哪一个价值更大,并且要具体情况具体分析。
Theanswerdependsontheconcreteanalysisofconcreteconditions。
本话题高分范文赏析
Tallglasstowers,whoseshinyfacadesareascoolastheirair-conditionedinsides,arebeingpartofcityscapesfromSouthAmericatoNorthEastAsia.Intheprocess,oldbuildingsaremakingroomfortheseeminglyunstoppableadvancementofmodernity.Thusthefaceoftheglobalcityischanging,andcityplannersarefacingthedifficultchoiceofeitherpreservinghistoricbuildingorreplacingthemwithmodernones.Astherearestrongargumentsforeitheroption,thefinaldecisionwilldependonathoroughanalysisofthespecificsituationathand.Itisimportanttopreservehistoricbuildingsandpartsofcitiesbecausetheyarepartoftheculturalheritagethatgivesidentitytoamunity.Oldhomesandlivingquartersareapartofhistory,and,oncedestroyed,leveled,andburiedunderthousandsoftonsofconcreteandsteel,theywillbelostforever.Theconstructionserectedintheirplacesintoomanycaseslackanysortofconnectiontotheplace.Thesebuildingsareanonymousandculturelessedificesthatcouldstandtallinanyotherpartoftheworld.Theylackthecharmandcharacteroftheirhistoricpredecessors.
Yettheconstructionofnewbuildingsisasignofmodernization.Notonlywillmanypeoplefindworkintheprocessofbuildingthesestructures,buttheirexistencewillattractfutureinvestmentsandthusgreatlybenefittheeconomyofanareaorcountry.Inaddition,thesenewbuildingsoftenhavelowermaintenancecostsinparisontotheagedconstructions.Moreimportantly,newlydevelopmenthomesandofficespacesincludethefortsofmodernlife,e.g.air-conditioningandmodernkitchens,arethusfortabletolivein.
Sweepinggeneralizationsareimpossiblehere.Acitygovernmentshouldtryitsbesttopreservetheold,historiccharmofacityanditspeople.Yetatthesametime,theyhavetolookforwardandmodernizeold,rundownbuildingsinanefforttomaketheircityamorefortableplacetoliveinandamoresuessfulplacetodobusiness.Therefore,acityshouldthinkaboutitsgeneralinterestsandgoalsandthentrytomakespecificdecisionsinindividualsituations.
Isliteracymoreimportanttodaythaninthepast?
Istheabilitytoreadandwritemoreimportanttodaythaninthepast?
Whyorwhynot?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
写作思路展开结构分析
一定程度上,同意这个说法。
(Inasense,itistruethat…)阅读并理解(Comprehend)的能力,在信息过度丰富的今天,更加重要。
现代人的阅读量要比过去高出许多倍(过去大学生就是很高的学历,现在博士后[postdoctoral]才算是高学历)。
需要更多的能力去辨别真伪。
写作的能力更是如此,比如在工作中,写报告是一项重要内容,公司的规模越大,越是如此。
没有写作能力,就等于没有升迁机会。
本话题高分范文赏析
Astheworldbeessmallerandsmallerduetotheprocessofglobalization,itbeesmoreandmoreimportantthateveryonelearnshowtoreadandwrite.Ifoneistokeepupwiththefastpaceoftheworld,literacyskillsareofutmostimportance.
Technologyisexpandingatanever-increasingrate.Computers,andtheInter,havebeemontermsinalmostallnationsintheworld.Ifonewantstobeabletomunicatewithothersusingthisefficientmethod,onemustlearnthebasicsofreadingandwriting.Theobjectswehaveinourhomearealsobeingincreasinglymoreplicated.Forexample,ifonewantstouseaDVDplayerwiththeirtelevision,onemustbeabletoreadthemanualtolearnhowtoworkit.Eventhemostbasictechnologiesewithaninstructionguide:
ifoneisunabletoread,theywillconstantlybestrugglingtofigureouthowtoworkthesetechnologies.
Asmentionedabove,theworldisbeingmuchsmaller.Morepeoplearefindingitnecessarytoleavetheirhomesinsmalltownsandvillages,movingtothebigcitieswherethereismoreopportunity.Someofthesepeoplefinditquitedifficulttonavigatearoundthecity,asonemustknowhowtoreadinordertounderstandthestreetsigns.Ifon
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