写出正确的句子.docx
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写出正确的句子
写出正确的句子
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不完整的句子
Hethinksthebookisterribleeventhoughmanyofhisfriendslikeit.
Aftercompletinghissecondaryeducation,hefoundajobinadepartmentstore.
Todaymanymiddleschoolstudentsarefacedwithsomeproblems.Forexample,theyhavetoomuchhomework,toomanyexamsandlessphysicalexercise.
Peoplehaveproblemstodaybecausetheyrelyheavilyoncomputerstodotheirroutinework.
Thisisaninterestingfilm.ItissonicethatIwanttoseeitagain.
Inwriting,mymainpurposeistolearnsomeimportantpatternssothatIcanwriteeffectivelyforexamination.
Thenovelisaboutacouplelivinginasmalltown.
Theelderlypeoplearerespectedbyeveryone,whichiscommoninourcountry.
Itwaswonderfulthattherewere20peoplecomingforthegame.
Althoughheis70yearsold,hestillgoestoworkintheoffice.
主谓一致
Heisacarefulpersonandnevermakesanymistakeinhiswork.
Eighthoursislongenoughtofinishthiswork.
Hasn’ttherainstoppedyet?
Tomakegoodresultsneedshardworking.
Themanager,ratherthanemployees,isresponsiblefortheaccident.
Inthedowntownareastandmanytallbuildings.
时态
Hehasfinishedreadingthenovelabout10minutesago.
Hissisterhasbecomeateacherfor5yearsinthisschool.
Shefixedtheradiobeforeherbrotherreturned.
HeaskedmeifIwillcometothepartythisevening.
Thisisthesecondtimewevisitedthemuseum.
Whenshehadarrived,thefilmalreadystarted.
Sheisorderedbythedoctortostayinbedlastweek.
语态
ThemeetingistobeholdnextMonday.
Theschoolhasbeencompletedtwoweeksago.
ThesportsmeetistoputofftillnextSaturday.
Mybrotherwasadvisedtobegivenupsmoking.
Allthewindowsinthehousearesaidtobreaklastnight.
Hewillasktoshowhispassport.
Theaccidentwashappenedwhenhewasaway.
非谓语动词
Todriveacarsafely,itisnecessarytohavegoodbrakes.
Onweekends,IalwaysliketostayathomeandwatchTV.
I’mthirstyandIwanttohaveacupoftea.
Withmyhelpingherdothis,shewillhavenodifficultyfinishingthejobbeforeFriday.
Isawafilmlastnightanditwasveryinteresting.
Surroundedbythepolice,hehadnochoicebuttogivein.
Hefinishedthehardwork,tiredandwornout.
段落写作
段落的构成:
主题句,扩展句,结尾句
段落的发展方法:
1.排列顺序
InChina,bicycleisverypopularandiswelcomedbyalmosteveryone.Thereasonsforthisareasfollows:
First,abikeischeapandmostpeoplecanaffordit.Thepricesofordinarybikesrangefrom200yuanto500yuan.Second,ridingabikeisagoodexercise,anditcanhelpustokeepfit.Third,bikesdonotcausesuchproblemsasairpollutionandtrafficjamsinthecityandcangivepeopleagoodenvironmenttolivein.Finally,abikedoesnotneedalargeparkingspace.Forthesereasons,manypeopleinChinalikebikesverymuch.
(105words)
Exercise:
WatchingTVathomeisbetterthangoingouttoamovie.
Suggestedwordsandphrases:
comfortable,convenient,savemoney,choiceofprograms,enjoy
2.因果推理
Progressinscienceandimprovementoflivingconditionshaveledtotherapidgrowthoftheworldpopulation.Modernmedicinehasmadeitpossibleforbabiestogrowuphealthilyandforpeopletolivelonger.Withimprovedlivingconditions,peopletendtohavelargerfamilies.Asaresult,theworldpopulationhasincreasedrapidly.
(55words)
Exercise:
Severalfactorshavecausedthedifficultyinsolvingthehousingshortageinbigcities.
Suggestedwordsandphrases:
Population,lackoffunds,limitedland
3.举例说明
Airpollutionisnotonlyharmfultopeople,butalsotothesurroundings.Forexample,iterodesbuildings,damagescropsandforests.Besides,airpollutionislikelytospreadfromcitytocity,evenfromcountrytocountry.Therefore,airpollutionhasbecomearealglobalproblem.
(47words)
Exercise:
Automobileshavebeenplayinganimportantroleinthedailyactivitiesofhumansociety.
Suggestedwordsandphrases:
Industry(transportproducts);agriculture(carryfarmsupplies);people(gotoandcomebackfromwork);families(goonpleasuretripsandoutingsonweekends)
Transitionalwords&phrases
表示附加
and,again,also,too,besides,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,ontheotherhand
举例
forexample,forinstance,take…forexample,
对比
similarly,inthesameway,equallyimportant,incontrast,
转折
however,nevertheless,yet,but,instead,meanwhile
结果,结论
therefore,consequently,so,thus,asaresult,inconclusion,inshort,tosumup,inoneword,
让步
ofcourse,itistrue,although
时间顺序,重要程度
first(second,third…),firstofall,then,inaddition/besides,finally,next,aboveall,tobeginwith,
段落写作练习
AlmosteverybigcityinChinahasserioustrafficproblems.
Suggestedwordsandphrases:
citydevelopment,numberofvehicles,population,narrowstreetsandroads
Smokingisharmfultopeople’shealth.
Suggestedwordsandphrases:
pollutetheair,second-handsmoking,causediseases
Compositionwriting:
Directions:
forthispart,youallowed30minutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan120wordsunderthetitleof“KeytotheNewCentury”.YourcompositionshouldbebasedonthefollowingoutlinegiveninChinese.
1.掌握英语是进入新世纪的钥匙
2.21世纪的发展对科技人才的要求
3.我应该如何把握这一机会
Thekeytoexercises:
WatchingTVathomeisbetterthangoingouttomovies.First,itismorecomfortableandconvenienttowatchTVathome.Youmaysitinasofaoranarmchairandyoucantalkifyouarewatchingwithyourfamily.Second,youcansaveyourtime.Youstayathomeanddonothavetospendmuchtimeonyourwaytothecinema.Third,youcanchoosetheprogramyoulikesincethereissuchawidechoiceofTVchannels.Forth,youcansavemoneybecauseTVprogramsaremainlyfree.Fortheabove-mentionedreasons,manypeopleliketowatchTVathome.
(108words)
Severalfactorshavecausedthedifficultyinsolvingthehousingshortageinbigcities.First,thepopulationgrowstoofast.Forexample,Beijingusedtohavetwomillionpeople.Nowitspopulationisovertenmillion.Second,thereisnotenoughfundsfortheconstructionofapartmentbuildings.Third,thelandisexpensiveandratherlimited.Onaccountoftheabovefactors,itisdifficulttosolvethehousingshortageprobleminbigcitiesinashortperiodoftime.
(80words)
Automobileshavebeenplayinganimportantroleinthedailyactivitiesofhumansociety.Forexample,industrydependsonthemfortransportingmaterialsandproducts,andagricultureneedsthemtocarryfarmsupplies.Besides,automobilesarealsoimportantmeansoftransportationforpeople’slife.Theycarrypeopletogotoandcomebackfromworkeveryday.Onweekends,automobilestakefamiliesonpleasuretripsandniceoutings.
(68words)
AlmosteverybigcityinChinahasserioustrafficproblems.ThatisbecausebigcitiesinChinahavedevelopedveryfastinthepastfewyears.Forexample,thenumberofvehicleshasincreasedagreatdeal,andpopulationhasdoubledoreventripledinsomecities.But,ontheotherhand,thestreetsandroadsremainalmostunchanged.Theyarenarrowandmanyofthemarestillinpoorcondition.Asaresult,trafficproblemsexistinalmostallthebigcitiesinChina.
(85words)
Smokingisharmfultopeople’shealth.First,smokingwillpollutetheairofourlivingenvironment.Thesmokeofcigaretteswillmaketheairintheroomstaleandstuffy,whichisbadnotonlyforsmokersbutalsofornonsmokersaswell.Second-handsmokingisevenmoreharmfultoourhealth.Second,smokingwillcausevariousdiseasessuchasbronchitisandevenlungcancer.Asisknowntoall,anyonewhosuffersfromthesediseasescannotlivelong.
(79words)
KeytoSuccessintheNewCentury
Englishisoneofthemostimportantlanguagesintheworld.Ithasbeenwidelyusedinallwalksoflifeallovertheworld.SomepeoplesaythatEnglishisthekeytosuccessinthenewcenturyandwithoutagoodmasteryofEnglish,onewouldhavedifficultyworkingsuccessfullyinhisfield.
Inthe21stcentury,themainlanguagethatwillbeusedforcommunicationisEnglishintheworld.ScientificandtechnicaldocumentsandjournalswillbepublishedinEnglish.Internationalconferences,seminarsandsymposiumswillbeconductedinEnglish.ScientistsandtechnicianswillneedEnglishtocommunicatewitheachother.Therefore,itisquitenecessaryforscientiststomastertheEnglishlanguagetomeettheneedsofthenewcentury.
Asacollegestudent,IhavebeenfullyawareoftheimportanceoftheEnglishlanguageinthenewcenturyandIhavemadeupmymindtolearnEnglishwellinordertoworksuccessfullyinmyfieldinthe21stcentury.
(168words)
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