原创精析届高考英语读后续写最新真题剖析+模拟题分析递送.docx
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原创精析届高考英语读后续写最新真题剖析+模拟题分析递送
【原创精析】2021届高考英语读后续写最新真题剖析+模拟题分析递送
真题部分①——2020.7高考浙江卷
Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:
tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.
Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.
AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.
Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.
Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).
Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.
ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.
Para1:
Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.
Para2:
Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.
背景信息
DuringOctoberandNovember,thelocalpeoplebothdreadandcelebrate PolarBearHighSeason.Thisisthetimewhenpolarbearsmigratetotheregionandvisitorsfromallovertheworldfollow.ItisaGREATdealoffunespeciallyifyougettoviewpolarbearsbeingairliftedfromthe PolarBearJail. The ChurchillNorthernStudiesCentre,17kmsouthoftown,servesasbasecampforseriousarcticresearch.Intownareanumberofreasonablycomfortablehotelsandgood shopping opportunities.!
范文1:
Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Thenwerealizedthatthesprayhadonlyangeredhimevenmore,forheseemedmuchfiercerthistimeandviolentlypushedthefencelikemad.Myheartracedwildly,notknowingwhattodo.Atthiscriticalmoment,Elligrabbedseveralpiecesofgarlicbreadandthrewthemoverthefence.Itworked!
Thebearstoppedtheattackandrantothebread.Butitwasn’tlongbeforeheateupallthebreadandcamebackagain.
Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.“Thankgoodnesswearesaved!
”Ellicriedout.Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospotthatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.Iquicklytookoutthecameraandphotographedtherarescene—wewererobbedbyapolarbear!
范文2(原创)
Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Shrieksandhowlsofutterfurybrokethesilenceandextremeterrorgrippedus.Thebearrearedup,attackedthefenceandevendesiredtoteardownuswithflamesblazinginitseyesowingtothedreadfulspray.MywifeElligraspedmyclothesandtrembled,swallowinghard.Inaperspicaciousapproachtowintimefromthebattleagainstdeath,mymindracedanditoccurredtometothrowthebreadlittlebylittleThebearcouldhardlyresistthetemptationofthebread,admittedly,avariceurgedhimtoyearnformore.Heflewintoarageandhithischest,glaringatusaggressively.Withlittlehesitation,Ifumbledformycamera,capturedthelastshotofthebearandsmashedit.
Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.Hopemetus!
Idashedstraighttothecamphaltingly,nearlystumbling.IfonlyIcouldfly!
Mywifewascorrespondingwiththepilotthroughradiowhoensuredwhetherwehadsufferedanyinjury.Thefiercenoisesgotonthebear’snervesandafteraglimpseoftheenormousthing,thebeardisappearedtowardsthelake.Seeingallofthese,wesighedwithrelief,sparklesofdelightarisinginourfaces.Inspiteoftheglorioussacrificeofmypreciouscamera,thephotographsweremiraculouslysurvived.Whatreallytouchedourheartstringswastheencounter,adversityandceaselessstrive.
②——2020.7高考山东卷(精深)
WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn’sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.
Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.
Para.1
WhenMrs.Meredithheardoftheidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.ThenMrs.Meredithsearchedtheinternetandorderedahouseholdpopcornmachine.Afterthat,Mrs.Meredith,togetherwithherthreechildren,paidanothervisittothefamilyandtoldthemaboutthepopcornplan.Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved,especiallyBernardwhofinallyfoundawaytomakemoneyforhisfamily.Afewdayslater,themachinewasdeliveredtoMrs.Meredith’sdoorstep.Anditwasn’tlongbeforetheygotthehangofusingthemachinetomakepopcorn.
Para.2
Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.Althoughitwasahardtimeandthingsweretightforeverybody,Bernard’sbusinessworkedoutquitewell.Hecarriedthepopcornonhissmallbike,goingfromdoortodoortosellit.Peopleweresurprisedtoseesuchalittle,poorly-dressedboysellingpopcornattheirdoors,buteventuallyalmostallofthemwouldbuyabagortwo.ItislovethatmakestheworldgoroundandBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.
范文分析:
模拟题部分:
①——精诚联盟2020.9联考
ThisstoryhappenedtomemanyyearsagobutIcanstillrememberitwell.WhenIwasfreshoutofschoolandworkinginDenver,Iwasdrivingtomyparents'homeinMissouriforChristmas.Onmyway,Ifoundthatmy car wasrunningoutofgas.SoIstoppedatagasstationabout50milesfromfromOklahomaCity,whereIwasplanningto stop andvisitafriend.WhileIwasstandinginlineatthecashregister(收款台),Isaidhellotoacouple(夫妻)whowerealsopayingforgasandtheyrespondedwiththeirwarmsmiles.
Itookoff,buthadgoneonlyafewmileswhenblacksmokepouredfromthebackofmycar.Mycarjust brokedown.Whata trouble!
IstoppedandwaswonderingwhatIshoulddonextwhenacarpulledupbehindme.Itwasthe couple Ihadspokentoatthegasstation.Theysaidtheywouldtakemetomyfriend's.Wechatted happily onthewaytothecity,andwhenIgotoutofthecar,thehusbandgavemehisbusinesscard.
Arrivinghome,Iwrotetohimandhiswifea thank-younote forhelpingme.Soonafterwards,IreceivedaChristmaspresentfromthem.Intheirnotetheysaidthathelpingmehadmadetheirholidays meaningful.
Yearslater,Idrovetoameetinginanearbytowninanearlymorning.Theroadconditionwasquitepooronthewayanditwassaidthatcarsbrokedownfrequentlythere.Anyway,Igottheresafeandsound.Afterthemeeting,IreturnedtomycarandfoundthatI'dgotaflattire(瘪胎).IwasatalosswhenI noticed thattheFriendlyFordDealership-ashopsellingFordcars--wasrightnextdoor.Iwalkedoverandfound twosalesmen intheshop.注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Ienteredtheshop,andoneofthesalesmencametome.Icouldn'tbelievemyeyes.
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Afterawhile,theyquicklydroveapick-uptrucktomycarandstartedit.
二、下水思路
1.确定主题:
大主题是人与社会--良好的社会关系与社会交往。
主旨是乐于助人,人生才有意义。
原文中第三段最后一句--helpingmehadmadetheirholidaysmeaningful--体现全文的主题。
所以结尾处须有点题。
IwillneverforgetthelessonArthurtaughtme:
Lifeismeaningfulwhenyoucangiveahandtothoseintrouble.
2.时空变化:
第一段情节发生的时间是会议结束以后afterthemeeting.地点是inashopsellingFordcars,第二段情节发生在作者的小车边,时间是第一段以后不久afterawhile
3.续写难点:
第一段情节比较简单,第二段开头提示语理解有难度--Afterawhile, they quicklydroveapick-uptrucktomycarand startedit.应该思考的一个问题是they指代thecouple还是thetwosalesmen;另一个问题是轮胎漏气为什么要启动汽车startedit。
下水时,最后安排启动汽车听发动机的声音,先检查汽车发动机是否有问题,确保汽车不会在路上breakdown。
检查发动机以后,再补轮胎这样的情节安排应该是合理。
另外,原文的thehusband在续写时应该给出姓名,原因是thehusband gavemehisbusinesscard.Arrivinghome,I wrotetohimandhiswifeathank-younote forhelpingme.Soonafterwards,I receivedaChristmaspresent fromthem.所以续写时thehusband以多年未见的好友(Arthur)身份出现。
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Ienteredtheshop,andoneofthesalesmencametome.Icouldn'tbelievemyeyes. Surely,itwasmylong-lostfriend,Arthur,alwayswearingawarmsmile.WhatacoincidencethatArthurwouldappearinfrontofmewhenIhad trouble!
Ithought.Forasecond,Istaredathimindisbelief,mymouthhangingopen.InthemeanwhileTominstantlyrecognizedmeandhegavemeahugehug.“Whatbringsyouhere?
”heaskedwithapuzzledexpressiononhisface.SoItoldhimthatmy car gotaflattireandthatconsideringthepoorroadcondition,itmight brokedown onmywaybackhome.Knowingwhathadhappenedtome,hesaidthathewouldbegladtogivemeahandagain.
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Afterawhile,theyquicklydroveapick-uptrucktomycarandstartedit. Afterlisteningtothesoundoftheengine,Arthurtoldmethattherewasnothingwrongwithit.Andthentheystartedtofixthetireandwechatted happily.Arthurtoldmethatthe thank-younote frommeinspiredhimtolivea meaningful lifebyhelpingothers.Soonafterwards,hegotthetirefixed.Hegotup,wipedthesweatfromhisfaceandwishedmeapleasantjourney.Icouldn’tthankhimenough.Manyyearshavepassed,butIwillneverforgetthelessonArthu
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