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08.01.19
Theoldergenerationshaveverytraditionalideasaboutthecorrectwaysoflife,thinkingandbehaviour.However,somepeoplethinkthattheseideasarenothelpfulfortheyounggenerationtoprepareformodernlife.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?
改写题目观点:
theelderlypeople'sideasareuselessforyoungerpeopletomakepreparationfortoday'slife.
中心词:
elderlypeople
Thevalueoftraditionalideas
老年人观点好
1经济上:
财务的管理,存钱的方式,投资方面帮助我们更理智(金融危机)
2道德上:
perseverance(坚持不懈),endurance(忍耐),tolerance(容忍,包容),optimism(乐观),年轻人提高道德修养
3驳,承认,有些过时,但是选择权在我们身上,我们可以加入自己的独立思考,去改进他们的建议
Economicallyspeaking,traditionalideasareofgreatimportance.
Manytraditionalideas,suchasadvicesaboutinvestmentandsaving,canprovideyoungergenerationwithmanyprofits.
Ratherspeaking,byacceptingelderlypeople'sopinions,theyoungcanimprovetheirfinancialplans,therebylivingarelativelyaffluentlife.
Notably,thereisnodearthoftellingexamplesinthisregard.SouthKoreaisaconspicuousone.
SinceSouthKoreahasatime-honoredtraditionofrespectingagedpeople'sideas,awealthofyoungpeopletendtofollowtheirparents'views,spendingfamilybudgetreasonably/rationably(理性的),whichcontributesalottotheaccumulationofwealth.
Insharpcontrast,currently,inMalaysia,owingtotheignoranceoftraditionalideas,manyyoungcitizenshavelittleunderstandingofscientificarrangementinfinance,becauseofwhich+manyyoungcoupleshavebearedaheavyeconomicburden.
Thus,thetraditionalideasarefarfromunimportantineconomicaspect.
Apartfromtheeconomicbenefits,traditionalideasexertpositiveeffectsonyoungpeople'smorality.
Quiteafewtraditionalideas,whichareconcernedabouthowtogetalongwithneighboursandco-workers,arebeneficialtotheyoung.
Influencedbytraditionalideas,awealthofyoungpersonslearnmanybrilliantvirtues,upgradingtheirmoralstandard.
Noticeably,thereisnodearthofconvincinginstancesinthisrespect.China,acountrywhichisimmersedinshiningcustomsandmoralrules,isacaseinpoint.
Inthiscountry,Whatyoungpeoplecanabsorbfromtraditionisthat+tolerance,endurance,perseverancearetrulyimportant.
Therefore,onnoaccountcanweignoretheimportanceoftraditionalideasinimprovingmoralqualitiesoftheyoung.
08.08.09≈04.04.17
Insomecountries,governmentsareencouragingindustriesandbusinessestomoveoutoflargecitiesandintoregionalareas.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofthisdevelopmentoutweighitsdisadvantages?
Givereasonsforyouanswerandincludeexamplesfromyourknowledgeorexperiences.
2
这中心词:
cityplanning
亮观点:
Iamsupportiveoftheargumentthat+manyfactoriesandcommercialenterprisesneedtomovetoruralareas.
再加个详细说明:
ratherspeaking,tomyunderstanding,themeritsofthismeasureoutweighitsdemerits.(优点大于缺点)
1经济好:
农村就业,降低贫困率,为当地带来大量的税收。
另外,工厂自己也可以节约成本。
企业:
原材料,食品厂,服装厂
农村:
就业,饭店,宾馆,娱乐场所
2环境好:
城市的污染问题,环境压力得到了极大的缓解
3美中不足:
给农村带来了很重的污染问题,人口激增,还有交通问题。
解决:
使用环保型技术生产,安装污水水处理系统。
Economicallyspeaking,bothenterprisesandruralareascanenjoythebenefitsoftherelocationpolicy.
Manyenterprises,especiallythoselarge-sizeones,wouldexertbeneficialeffectsonthecountrysideandhaveaccesstocheaprawmaterialsandlabour
Ratherspeaking,thoseregionalareaswouldwinawealthofjobopportunities,earningahugeamountoftaxrevenue.
Notably,thereisnodearthoftellingexamplesinthisregard.Japan,arobusteconomyinAsia,isaconspicuousone.
Inthe1970s,drivenbythemeasureofrelocatingfactoriesinthecountryside,manypoverty-strickenvillageswitnessedrapiddevelopment.similarly,thoseenterprisesalsobecamethebeneficiariesofthispolicy.Thus,thispolicybroughtawin-winsituation.
Inadditiontotheeconomicbenefit,thispolicyalsogeneratesecologicalbenefit.
Thosecities,especiallythoseaffectedbyexcessiveurbanizationandindustrialization,couldeasetheirownenvironmentalpressure.
Duetotherelocationoftheseheavy-industryfactoriesandbusinesses,thosecitiescouldlessenthetrafficcongestion,improvingthealreadyabominableairconditionandwatercondition.
反对观点:
1先承认不足(污染,交通,房屋短缺)
2再给个解决方法(污水处理)
Admittedly,relocatingthoseenterpriseswouldtriggersomeproblems,ofwhich+theenvironmentalheadacheisthemostprominentone,sincemanyfactorieswouldpolluteahugeamountofsewage(产生污水).(承认了缺点)
Nonetheless,theirviewissomewhatproblematic,thisproblemcanbesolvedbybuildingwatertreatmentsystems(解决方法)
08.03.01
Mostcountriesspendmuchmoneyoneducation,astheystarttorealizetheimportanceofeducation.Inyouropinionwhichtwosubjectsarethemostimportantforyoungpeopleandwhichoneistheleastimportant?
subjects:
LiteratureSports
MathematicsEconomy
PhysicsHistory
MusicGeography
1中心词theimportanceofsubjects
课程的重要性
2直接说哪些重要,哪个不重要
这篇文章的开头:
AsfarasIamconcerned,theimportanceofhistoryandmathematicscannotbeignored.Insharpcontrast,geographyistheleastsignificantone.
1教育角度来看
2数学对于很多学生是非常重要的。
(中心句写得笼统些)
3很多学生,特别是成功的学生,都把他们学业上的优秀归结为对于数学良好的掌握。
(挑中心句里的名词来解释)〉
Iattributemysuccesstomymother.
Attributexxxtoxxx
Owexxxtoxxx
4确切地说,数学锻炼了学生的分析能力,提高了学生的批判性思考能力。
Ado1,doing2
(就是详细解释中心句用的)
5值得一提的是,在这方面压根就不缺鲜明的例子。
新加坡,就是个典型。
(注意,这个地方只是引出例子)
Logicability逻辑能力
Reasoningskill推理能力
通过在数学教育方面大量投资,新加坡学生的整体学业表现提升很快,因此,新加坡造就出大量的科学家,金融人才和工科人才。
这些人才创造出大量的专利patents,(成功案例)
6相反的是,因为在数学教育方面的投入不足,美国学生的整体的分析能力和反应能力要落后于他们的同龄人。
7因此,在任何情况下我们都绝不能忽略数学的重要性。
Educationallyspeaking,mathematics,anassetinthecurriculum,canprovidestudentswithmanybenefits.
Providesbwithmanybenefits
Sbcanbenefitalotfromxxxxx.
Sbcanprofitalotfromxxxxxx.
Notably,manystudents,especiallyexcellentstudents,attributetheirsuccesstoagoodcommandofmathematics.
Haveagoodcommandof
Haveagoodknowledgeof
Haveagoodgraspof
对于什么的良好掌握
By(5号原则)learningmathematics,studentsareabletoimprovetheirownanalysisskill,enhancingtheircriticalthinkingskills.(2号原则)
Noticeably,thereisnodearthoftellingexamplesinthisregard.
Singapore,aleaderineducation,isaconspicuousone.(引出了例子)
Bylearningmathintensely,youngstudentsinSingaporeperform(表现的)muchbetterthantheirpeers(同辈人)inotherAsiancountries.Whatismore,studentsinSingaporeproduceagreatmanypatents(专利)andinventions(发明)becauseoftheirgoodknowledgeofmath.
Insharpcontrast,(与之形成鲜明对比的是)duetothelackofinvestmentonmatheducation,U.S.facesanalarmingdeclineof(急剧的恶化)students'innovativeandcreativeskills.Tomakethematterworse,(进一步渲染)
manyengineeringandscience-relateddepartmentsinuniversitiesareexperiencinganunprecedented(前所未有的)famineofapplicants.
Thus,onnoaccountcanweignorethesignificanceofmath.
Harmofmath
Undernocircumstancescanweignoretheimportanceofxxxx.
因此,在任何情况下我们都不能忽略数学的重要性。
历史
1从教育角度来说,
2历史对于学生能力的提高是非常关键的。
Itismanifestthatagoodknowledgeofhistoryisvitaltotheimprovementofstudents.
Bylearninghistory,studentscanachieverapiddevelopmentinknowledgescopeandabilities.
3许多关于历史的书,特别是关于二战史和世界经济史的书,都帮助学生对文化和经济有好的了解。
(插入语)
历史--------很多关于历史的课程
数学--------很多关于数学的学科,代数,微积分,几何
4学习历史能够增进学生的判断能力,提高学生的决策能力。
(现在分词)(去细化,解释说明中心句)
Itisawell-establishedfactthatStudyinghistorycanpolishstudents'judgmentskills,betteringtheirdecision-makingability.Moreimportantly,youngpeopleareabletohonetheircorecompetitiveness.
Takemeasanexample,
5特别值得一提的是,克林顿在这一方面就是个典型的例子。
因为他对于历史很好的掌握,他的能力很强,他展现出了卓越的领导力。
Whatisnotable,thereisnoshortageofconvincinginstancesinthisaspect/arena/field.
Inasmuchas(14号原则)heabsorbedoceansofhistoricalknowledgeinhisstudentdays,inthefollowingyears,hedemonstrated(展示出)outstandingabilities,especiallypublicspeakingskill,debatingability(辩论能力)and,mostimportantly,leadership(领导力).
EdwardGibbon爱德华吉本
ArnoldJosephToynbee汤因比
希罗多德(基础教育,基础学科)
6与之形成鲜明对比的是,在韩国,因为对于历史的重视不够,韩国学生的判断能力和决策能力落后于美国学生。
Insharpcontrast,inSouthKorea,owingtotheinadequateemphasison(对于什么重视的不足)history,studentsinthiscountrylagbehind(落后于)Americancounterparts(同龄人,同等的人)indecision-makingskillsandjudgmentskills.
7因此,在任何情况下我们都不能忽略历史的重要性。
Thus(hence,consequently,therefore),undernocircumstancescanweignore(overlook,neglect)(忽略)theimportanceofhistory.
Onnoaccountcansbdosth
在任何情况下某人都绝不能做某事
Conversely,thankstothedevelopmentoftechnology,asolidcommandofgeographynolongerseemsnecessarytostudents.Thatistosay,withthehelpofnavigationsystemsaswellas(coupledwith,pairedwith)othertechnologicalgadgets,studentscanarriveatthedestinationseasilyandrapidly.
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