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作文深度讲解
作文讲解及模板(后附常用句型)
收集整理编写:
肖庆华陈明
四级作文可分为:
记叙类,图表类,应用文类,阐述类(常见的如问题解决型,观点表达型,观点表达型一般也要求对某一主题进行讨论和提出解决方案,正反观点型即辩论式议论类,它一般会要求作者对一个现象的两种正反观点进行阐述,而后再提出自己的观点)。
近年来阐述类考得最多,记叙类的文章按照题目的要求写出相关内容即可(当然要逻辑表达清楚,内容要充实,因为内容相差很大,所以没有统一的模板可以遵循,尤其需要平时的积累,但由于内容贴近生活,一般都不会太难),其他的类型规律性要强些,可以总结出一些模板,但模板并非万能的,不能囊括所有的情况,而且大家都用模板,很容易引起阅卷老师的反感,如果死板地运用模板,结果可能会弄巧成拙。
一个有效的建议:
多看优秀范文,多记句型,根据优秀范文DIY属于自己的模板。
下面我们来一起看些优秀范文并DIY模板。
(关于应用文类另外还有一个名为应用文的一个ppt讲解,注意下面每种类型范文后还有一个大众模板,全篇为蓝色字,慎用!
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1图表类
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicABoominContinuingEducation.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:
1)上图为某城市2002-2008年参加继续教育的人数情况,请描述其中的变化;
2)分析导致该变化的原因;
3)谈谈你对继续教育的看法。
【范文】(图表类)
ABoominContinuingEducation
Fromthegraph,wecanlearnthenumberofcontinuingeducationparticipantshaskeptincreasingfrom2002to2008inXcity.In2002therewereonly20thousandpeopletakingpartinthecontinuingeducation,butin2004thenumbergrewto70thousand,andin2006thenumberincreasedto150thousand,andby2008,thenumberhasreached230thousand.Itcanbeseeneasilythatcontinuingeducationisgainingmoreandmorepopularity.
Thefollowingreasonsareresponsibleforthisboomincontinuingeducation.Firstly,duringtheworkmanypeoplebegintorealizewhattheyhavelearnedinschoolsisfarfromenough.Sotheyturntocontinuingeducationtogainmoreknowledgeandskills.Moreover,asthescienceandtechnologyinChinaaredevelopingveryfast,adultsaftergraduationhavetorefreshthemselves.Inaddition,inmodernsociety,thosewithoutbachelor'sdegreesorabovearelesscompetitive。
AsfarasIamconcerned,theboomincontinuingeducationisanecessity.Itprovidesthoseon-the-jobpeoplewithchancestogetadvanceddegreesandgainmoreknowledge.Asoursocietydevelops,moreandmorepeoplewillreceivecontinuingeducationinthefuture.
DIY模板
ABoominContinuingEducation
Fromthegraph,wecanlearnthenumberof…(主题)haskeptincreasingfrom…(时间)to…(时间)in…(地点).In…(时间)therewereonly…(数量),butin…(时间)thenumbergrewto…(数量),andin…(时间)thenumberincreasedto,andby…(时间),thenumberhasreached…(数量).Itcanbeseeneasilythat…(主题)isgainingmoreandmorepopularity.
Thefollowingreasonsareresponsiblefor…(主题).Firstly,...(原因一)Secondly,…(原因二).Inaddition,…(原因三).
AsfarasIamconcerned,…(主题)isanecessity.Itprovides…(对象)with…(好处)to...(好的行为).Asoursocietydevelops,moreandmorepeoplewill…(趋势)inthefuture.
图表类大众模板之一
Itisobviousinthegraph/tablethattherate/number/amountofYhasundergonedramaticchanges.Ithasgoneup/grown/fallen/droppedconsiderablyinrecentyears(asXvaries).Atthepointof(接近)X1,Yreachesitspeakvalueof…(多少).
Whatisthereasonforthischange?
Mainlythereare…(多少)reasonsbehindthesituationreflectedinthegraphic/table.Firstofall,…(一个原因).Moreimportantly,…(一个原因).Mostimportantofall,…(一个原因).
Fromtheabovediscussions,wehaveenoughreasontopredictwhatwillhappeninthenearfuture.Thetrenddescribedinthegraph/tablewillcontinueforquitealongtimeifnecessarymeasuresarenottaken.
2阐述类(问题解决型)
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOnWaterShortage.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:
1.水资源短缺已成为严重问题;
2.造成水资源短缺的原因;
3.提出解决方案。
OnWaterShortage
【范文】阐述类(问题解决型)
OnWaterShortage
Noonecanhavefailedtonoticethefactthatwatershortageisagraveproblemwithwhichthewholeworldisconfronted.Actually,ithasbecomesowidespreadthatithasseverelyaffectedpeople’sdailylifeandhinderedthedevelopmentoftheglobaleconomy.
Anumberoffactorscouldaccountfortheproblem,butthefollowingmightbethecriticalones.Tobeginwith,withthedevelopmentofagricultureandindustry,anincreasingamountofwaterisneeded.Inaddition,theever-increasingpopulationisanotherleadingcauseofwatershortage.Besides,theglobaltendencyofwarmingupalsocontributestotheproblem.What’sworse,pollutionandwasteoffreshwateraggravatethesituation.
Inviewoftheseriousnessoftheproblem,effectivemeasuresmustbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.First,itisessentialthatlawsandregulationsbeworkedoutandenforcedtoprotectwaterresources.Secondly,peopleshouldenhancetheirawarenessofsavingwater.Withthesemeasurestaken,itisreasonableforustoexpectabrighterfuture.
DIY模板
OnWaterShortage(问题解决型)
Noonecanhavefailedtonoticethefactthat…(问题)isagraveproblemwithwhich…(面对问题的人或事)is/areconfronted.Actually,ithasbecomesowidespreadthatithasseverelyaffected…andhinderedthedevelopmentof….
Anumberoffactorscouldaccountfortheproblem,butthefollowingmightbethecriticalones.Tobeginwith,withthedevelopmentof….,anincreasingamountof…isneeded(原因一).Inaddition,…(原因二)isanotherleadingcauseof….Besides,…(原因三)alsocontributestotheproblem.What’sworse,…(原因四)aggravate(s)thesituation.
Inviewoftheseriousnessoftheproblem,effectivemeasuresmustbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.First,itisessentialthatlawsandregulationsbeworkedoutandenforcedtoprotect….(指出第一个措施,此处立法并执法,protect接对象).Secondly,peopleshouldenhancetheirawarenessof….(原因二,在此处是提高观念).Withthesemeasurestaken,itisreasonableforustoexpectabrighterfuture.
3阐述类(观点表达型)
2010.12真题
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?
Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该……
【范文】阐述类(观点表达型)
HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?
Nowadays,thereisagrowingconcernoversuchaphenomenon,thatis,someparentstakecareofalmosteverythingconcernedwiththeirchildren,includingstudy,work,andmarriage.Someparentsbelievethatthisislove,however,itisonlytodestroychildren’sindependencethoroughly.
Forthefutureofthenextgeneration,moreeffortsshouldbemadebyparentstohelptheirchildrentobeindependent.Thefundamentaloneistocultivatetheawareness,namely,theimportanceandnecessityofbeingindependent,whichissupposedtobeginfromchildhood.Childrenshouldbetaughtthatnoonecanbestrongerandmorehelpfulthanthemselvesinthisworld.
Thequalityofindependenceissoindispensableforusthatparentshadbetteractasatutor,notadictator.Andonlywithparents’trust,canthenextgenerationaccumulateconfidencestepbystep.
DIY模板
HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentobeIndependent
Nowadays,thereisagrowingconcernoversuchaphenomenon,thatis,...Some....(某种人)believethatthisis…(积极的内容),however,itisonlytodestroy…(对象)thoroughly(消极的内容).
Forthefutureof(Forthesakeof)…(为了谁或什么着想),moreeffortsshouldbemadeby…(某种人)tohelp….(对象).Thefundamentaloneisto….(措施一)Moreover,…shouldbe…(措施二).
…(讨论的主题)issoindispensableforusthat…(某种人)hadbetter….(采取的措施).Andonlywith…(具备的条件),can…(讨论的对象)accumulateconfidencestepbystep.
大众模板(问题解决型和观点表达型都可用)
Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceaproblem-----A,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.--------(说明A的现状).
ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,---------------(解决方法一).Foranother-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).
Personally,Ibelievethat-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently,I’mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause--------------(带来的好处).
4阐述类(正反观点和自我观点表达相结合)
2005年12月全国大学英语四级作文
PartVWriting(30minutes)
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?
YoushouldwriteatLeast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点
2.校园是否应对游客开放,人们看法不同
3.我认为…
【范文】阐述类(正反观点和自我观点表达相结合)
ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?
Nowadays,manyfamousuniversitycampuseshavebecomeoneofthepopulartouristattractions.IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothateveryyearthousandsandthousandsofmiddleschoolstudentsvisitTsingHuaUniversityandPekingUniversityandotherfamousuniversitiesinChina.Intheplacefarawayfromthecapitalcity,thelocalstudentsalsovisittheuniversitiesfamousintheirownprovince.
Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingtoopentheuniversitycampusfortourists?
Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Ononehand,somepeoplearguedthatitisagoodthingforthestudentstovisitthefamousuniversitycampusinthatitcanenablethemiddlestudentstogetmoreinformationabouttheuniversityandtheycanhaveenoughtimeandopportunitytopreparethemselveswiththechancetogetintotheuniversity.Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdanegativeviewaboutthisphenomenon.Intheiropinion,thepublictourismwillhavenegativeeffectontheuniversitiesbecauseitwillnotonlydoharmtotheenvironmentbutalsototheintellectualatmosphere.
Inmyopinion,thetourismtotheuniversitiesisnotagoodthing.Thecampusismainlyaplaceforstudy.Withtheincreasingtourismonthecampus,itwillruinthespiritualatmosphereinthislearningfield.
DIY模板
ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?
Nowadays,…havebecomepopular.IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothat….(列举现象一).Moreover,….(列举现象二)
Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingto…(主题)?
Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Ononehand,somepeo
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