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MODELTEM4ESSAY05ARGUMENT1
TEM4ESSAY05:
Argumentation-1MODEL
Itwasreportedinthepresssometimeagothatafewsecond-andthird-yearstudentsinaprovincialuniversitydecidedtotrytheirhandatbusinessinordertogetpreparedforthefuture.Theyopenedsixsmallshopsneartheiruniversity.Theirteachersandclassmateshaddifferentopinionsaboutthisphenomenon.Somethoughtthatthestudents’businessexperiencewouldhelpthemadaptbettertosocietyaftergraduation,whileothersheldanegativeview,sayingthatrunningshopsmightoccupytoomuchofthestudents’timeandenergywhichshouldotherwisebedevotedtotheiracademicstudy.Whatdoyouthink?
Writeacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:
ShouldUniversityStudentsGoinforBusiness?
Inthefirstpartofyourwritingyoushouldstateclearlyyourmainargument,andinthesecondpartyoushouldsupportyourargumentwithappropriatedetails.Inthelastpartyoushouldbringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.
Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.
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Modelessay
Nowadays,youmayencounterstudentswhoaresellingstationeryornewspaperswhenyouarewalkingoncampus.Someofthemhaveevenopeneddifferenttypesofsmallshops.Theyassumethatinthiswaytheymayaccumulatesomesocialexperiencesandgetwellpreparedfortheirfuturejobs.(paraphrasetheintroduction)However,theycanhardlyachievethatpurpose.What'sevenworseisthattheywillwastealotoftimetheycouldhaveusedforstudy.Therefore,inmyopinion,universitystudentsshouldnotgoinforbusinessbecauseofthefollowingtworeasons.(aclearthesis)
Firstly,(badlinkers)universitystudentsusuallyhaveaheavytaskoftheoreticalstudy.(AtypicalChinesewayofreasoning:
startfromthemostindirectreason)Theyhavealotofcoursestotake,apileofbookstoread,andalltypesofhomeworktofinish.Thesetasksareessentialforthemtobuildupaprofoundandtheoreticalfoundation.Afterall,universityeraisthebesttimewhenastudentcanlearntheoreticalknowledge.Theyhavemanyyearstopracticeitlater,butiftheymissthechancetomasteritsystematically,theywillcertainlyregretwastingtheirbestyears.Doingbusinesswilltakethemtoomuchtimewhentheycanspendonphysicalexercises,onbooksandonactivitieswhichwillmakethembetterpeopleinthefuture.(mainidea/topicsentence,whichshouldbemovedtothebeginning)Nomatterwhetherthebusinessturnsoutsuccessfulorendsupafailure,itwilleventuallydistractstudentsfromtheiracademicstudy.Sointheendthestudentswilllosemuchmorethanwhattheyearn.
Secondly,(badlinkers)acompletesocialservicenetworkhasbeenestablishedoncampus,andthestudentsusuallyhavenochancetocompetewiththesupermarketswhichofferedmuchbetterserviceandcommoditiesofhighquality.(topicsentence,whichistoolong)Thesesupermarketssellgoodsrangingfrompens,papertoquilts,frombiscuitstocookedmeals.Youcanalmostbuywhateveryouwilluseindailylifethere.Besides,thesethingsareusuallycheap.Whattypeofshopsthestudentscanrun?
Mostofthemdothesamebusinessasthesupermarkets.Whattypeofgoodstheyoffer?
Nothingbetterthanthoseinthesupermarkets.Asaresult,thebusinessrunbythestudentsusuallyendinbankruptcy.Exceptbitterexperiences,theyearnnothing.
Inaword,ifuniversitystudentsgoinforbusiness,theywillinevitablylosenotonlyenergybutalsotime.Therefore,theschoolauthorityshouldforbidthestudentstorunbusiness,andteachersshouldtrytheirbesttopersuadethestudentsnottotaketherisksoearly.
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Mysampleoutline
Introduction:
studentsshouldnotgoinforbusinessuntiltheyareready.
Body:
a.what’sbusiness(differencewithpart-time)
b.Considertheopposingview:
advantages
c.Myownargument:
disadvantages
d.whencanwedobusiness
Conclusion:
studentsshouldbeverycarefuliftheywantto…
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Myversion(onlyoneofthemanypossibleversions)
Itisanundeniablefactthatmoreandmorecollegestudentsdecidetotrytheirhandsondoingbusiness.Schooladministration,teachersandstudentshavedifferentviewsonthisphenomenon.AsfarasI’mconcerned,collegestudentsshouldnotgoinforbusinessunlesstheyarepreparedpsychologicallyandeconomically.
Collegestudentsshouldunderstanddoingbusinessisnotdoingpart-timejob.Ifastudentspends2to3hoursatweekendsteachingmiddleschoolstudentsasatutoror…,that’spart-timejob.Heorshedoesn’thavetofacetotheriskoflosing…andtheydon’thavetosacrificetoomuchtime.Butifastudentborrowslotsofmoneyfromhisparents,classmates,orbanktoopenashoporbuystocksinstockmarket,that’s….Heorshewillfacetheriskof…
Wecannotignorethepracticalvalueofdoingbusiness.Ifhisshopisrunningwellorhissharegoesup,hecanmakemoneytoreduce…Collegestudentcanalsolearn…
Nevertheless,wemustadmitbusinesshasrisk.Astudent’sshopmaynotbeabletocompetewithsupermarketonpriceandrangeofgoods.Hisstocksharemay…So,hewillfacethedangerof…
Whetherstudentscantrytheirhandsatbusinessdependsonfollowingfactors.Heorsheshouldaskthemselveswhethertheycanmakeabalancebetweenstudyandbusiness…Theyshouldalsoaskthemselveswhethertheyarereadytofacetheriskoflosingeverythingintheirbusiness…(optional)
Tosumup,collegestudentsshouldtrytheirhandsonbusinessverycautiously.Beforetheyarereadytofacethedangerof…they’dbetter…
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What'sthewesternpatternofargument?
1.What'stheorderofbodyparagraphs?
2.Howdoesthewriterintroduceeachbodyparagraph?
Howdoesthewriterconsidertheopposingview?
3.Whatlinkingwordsdoesthewriterusetoconnecteachbodyparagraph?
4.Whatevidencedoesthewriterusetosupporthisview?
Dolly'sFalseLegacy
1.Overlookedintheargumentsaboutthemoralityofartificiallyreproducinglifeisthefactthat,atpresent,cloningisaveryinefficientprocedure[Introduction:
technicalproblem].Theincidenceofdeathamongfetusesandoffspringproducedbycloningismuchhigherthanitisthroughnaturalreproduction--roughly10timesashighasnormalbeforebirthandthreetimesashighafterbirthinourstudiesatRoslin.Distressingenoughforthoseworkingwithanimals,thesefailureratessurelyrenderunthinkablethenotionofapplyingsuchtreatmenttohumans.
2.Evenifthetechniquewereperfected,however,[transition]wemustaskourselveswhatpracticalvaluewhole-beingcloningmighthave.Whatexactlywouldbethedifferencebetweena"cloned"babyandachildbornnaturally—andwhywouldwewantone?
[Thesis:
twoquestions]
3.Theclonedchildwouldbeageneticallyidenticaltwinoftheoriginal,andthusphysicallyverysimilar—farmoresimilarthananaturalparentandchild.Humanpersonality,however,emergesfromboththeeffectsofthegenesweinherit(nature)andenvironmentalfactors(nurture).Thetwocloneswoulddevelopdistinctpersonalities,justastwinsdevelopuniqueidentities.Andbecausethecopywouldoftenbeborninadifferentfamily,clonedtwinswouldbelessalikeinpersonalitythannaturalidenticaltwins.[Answerthesecondquestion:
differencebetweenclonedbabyandnaturallybornbaby]
4.Why"copy"peopleinthefirst[transition]place?
Couplesunabletohavechildrenmightchoosetohaveacopyofoneofthemratherthanaccepttheintrusionofgenesfromadonor[opposingview1:
themostcommonreason].MywifeandIhavetwochildrenofourownandanadoptedchild,butIfindithelpfultoconsiderwhatmighthavehappenedinmyownmarriageifacopyofmehadbeenmadetoovercomeinfertility.MywifeandImetinhighschool.Howwouldshereacttoaphysicalcopyoftheyoungmanshefellinlovewith?
Howwouldanyofusfindlivingwithourselves?
Surelytheolderclone—I,inthiscase—wouldbelievethatheunderstoodhowthecopyshouldbehaveandsobeevenmorelikelythantheaveragefathertoimposeexpectationsuponhischild.Aboveall,howwouldateenagercopewithlookingatme,abalding,agingman,andseeingthephysicalfutureaheadofhim?
[Counterevidence:
personalexperience]
5.Eachofuscanimaginehypotheticalfamiliescreatedbytheintroductionofaclonedchild—acopyofonepartnerinahomosexualrelationshiporofasingleparent,forexample[opposingview2:
lesscommonreason].Whatismissinginallthisisconsiderationofwhat'sintheinterestsoftheclonedchild.Becausethereisnoformofinfertilitythatcouldbeovercomeonlybycloning,Idonotfindtheseproposalsacceptable.Myconcernsarenotonreligiousgroundsoronthebasisofaperceivedintrinsicethicalprinciple.Rather,myjudgmentisthatitwouldbedifficultforfamiliescreatedinthiswaytoprovideanappropriateenvironmentforthechild.[Counterevidence:
commonknowledge)
6.Cloningisalso[transition]suggestedasameansofbringingbackarelative,usuallyachild,killedtragically[opposingview3:
lessercommonreason].Anyparentcanunderstandthatwish,butitmustfirstberecognizedthatthe
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