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高分作文三要素

高分作文三要素

1．结构清晰文章框架合理，结构完整，主题不偏，段落衔接自然，各段详略得当

2．句式多变长短句错落有致，主动被动合理运用，倒装强调适当穿插，句与句间衔接紧密

3．出现亮点遣词用句准确地道，适当运用修辞手法，恰当使用格言，开头结尾突破常规

问题解决型

写作思路

基本框架

描述问题段

主题句----扩展句一（问题危害/原因/表现一）----扩展句二（问题危害/原因/表现二）---结尾句

说明方法段

主题句----扩展句一（方法一）----扩展句二（方法二）---扩展句三（方法三）-----结尾句

总结观点段

过渡句---扩展句（“我”的建议或看法）---结尾句

主题句---扩展句一（“我”的理由一）---扩展句二（“我”的理由二）---结尾句

结构模板

1Recently,therehasbeenadiscussionabout总述该问题。

2危害/原因一。

3Additionally,问题危害/原因二.4Therefore,itishightimethat解决该问题。

5Thefollowingwayscanbeadoptedto解决该问题./Someeffectivemeasureshavebeentakento解决该问题./Manyafactorplaysanimportantrolein解决该问题.6Firstly,/Firstofall,方法一/因素一。

7Secondly/Inaddition,方法二/因素二。

8Thirdly/Besides/Moreover,方法三/因素三.9Onlythroughtheseways/Onlyinthisway该问题才能够解决。

10Itisnodoubtthat解决该问题的意义.11Asforme,“我”的建议或看法.12总结观点。

结构模板

1Nowadaysitisgenerallyacceptedthat总述该问题。

2表现/作用一。

3Additionally,表现/作用二.4.Therefore,howto总述该问题isworthpayingmoreattentionto.

5Thefollowingwayscanbeadoptedto解决该问题./Someeffectivemeasureshavebeentakento解决该问题./Manyafactorplaysanimportantrolein解决该问题.6Firstly,/Firstofall,方法一/因素一。

7Secondly/Inaddition,方法二/因素二。

8Thirdly/Besides/Moreover,方法三/因素三.

9Asforme/AsfarasIamconcerned,“我”的建议或看法.10“我”的理由一.11Besides/inaddition,“我”的理由二。

12总结观点。

ReduceWasteonCampus

1）目前有些校园内浪费现象严重

2）浪费的危害

3）从我做起，杜绝浪费

1Recently,therehasbeenadiscussionaboutwasteoncampus.2Itisobviousthatagreatlosshasbeencausedbywastingpreciousresources,suchaswaterandelectricity.3Additionally,ourwasteaddsourparentsandsocietyaburden.4Therefore,itishightimethatmoreattentionwaspaidtohowtosolvethisproblem.（描述问题段）

5Thefollowingwayscanbeadoptedtoreducewasteoncampus.6Firstly,weshouldstopwastingwaterwhenwebath,orcleanfaces,orwashclothesanddishes.7Secondly,inourdailylife,wemustlearntobeeconomicalandonlybuywhatwereallyneed.8Thirdly,weshouldturnoffthelightwhenleavingdormsorclassroomssoastosaveelectricity.9Onlythroughthesewayscanwasteoncampusbeeliminatedinthenearfuture.（说明方法段）

10Itisnodoubtthatreductionofwasteisofsignificancetoourwholesociety.11Asforme,thecultivationofgoodhabitofthriftismostimportantforallofus.12Everycollegestudentshouldjoinintheeffortstocombatthewasteoncampus.（总结观点段）

HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview

1）面试在求职过程中的作用

2）取得面试成功的因素：

仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是…

1Itisgenerallyacceptedthatajobinterviewisindispensableintheprocessofjob

hunting.2Itisobviousthatitisagoodchancetodisplaytalentedperformance.3Additionally,ifajobseekercanmakethebestuseoftheinterviewandleavesagoodimpressionontheinterviewer,hemaybeluckyenoughtogetthejobcompetedforbymanyapplicants.4Therefore,howtosucceedinajobinterviewisworthpayingmoreattentionto.（描述问题段）

5Manyafactorplaysanimportantroleinasuccessfulinterview.6Firstofall,intervieweesshoulddressneatlyandproperlysincethefirstimpressionisalwayswherewestart.7Inaddition,theintervieweemustdemonstratehisaptitudeandskillsforthejobandhisknowledgeaboutjob-relatedareas.8Moreover,areallyimpressivejobseekermustconveyasenseofself-confidence.（说明方法段）

9AsfarasIamconcerned,theimportanceofaninterviewcan’tbeoveremphasized.10Iftheintervieweepresentshismostattractivequalitiesduringaninterview,hewillmostprobablyobtainthejobhehasbeendreamingof.11Besides,opportunityisforthosewhoarewell-prepared.12Allinall,itisnecessarythatwelearnsomepointstoperformbetterinajobinterview.（总结观点段）

Topic1

TrafficintheCity

1）交通是现代城市的一大问题

2）污染和堵车时交通问题的两大体现

3）解决交通问题的手段

1Nowadaysitisgenerallyacceptedthattrafficisoneofthegreatestproblemsof

amoderncity.2Asmoreandmorepeoplebuytheirowncars,airpollutionaswellasnoisepollutionsbecomesmoreandmoreserious.3Additionally,roadsarepackedwithcars,busesandbicyclessothattrafficjamisverycommon.4Therefore,howtodealwithtrafficproblemisworthpayingmoreattentionto.

5Thefollowingwayscanbeadopted.6Firstly,morestreetsandroadsshouldbeconstructed.7Secondly,theprivatecarownershipshouldbelimited.8Thirdly,undergroundtrainandcitytrainshouldbedevelopedquickly.

9Asforme,thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputundercontrol.10Morecarsmeanmorepollution.11Inaddition,morecarsareagreatchallengetoroads,forthebuildingofroadsisnotasspeedyastheincreasingofcars.12Inaword,itisadvisablethatlessmotorvehiclebeused.

Topic2

HowtoEliminateFakeDiplomas

1）目前假文凭现象屡见不鲜

2）这种现象造成的危害

3）我们应该怎么做

1Nowadaysitisgenerallyacceptedthatthefloodingoffakediplomasisgetting

veryserious.2Itisreportedthatfakediplomasareverycommoninthejobmarket.3Allkindsoffakediplomasorcertificatesarebeingoffered.

4Specialattentionshouldbepaidtothefactthatfakediplomasarebringinggreatdamage.5Ononehand,employersmayrecruitemployeeswhoarenotqualifiedforacertainpost,causingtheircompanyagreatloss.6Ontheotherhand,it’sunfairthatonefailstogethisjobjustbecausehisrivalhasproducedafakediplomaorcertificate.7Therefore,itishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestostopfakediplomasfromspreading.

8Manyawaycanbeadoptedtoeliminatefakediplomas.9Firstofall,companiesanduniversitiesshouldhaveaclosecontactsothatthefakediplomascannotplaytricks.10Inaddition,theonewhofabricatesthefakediplomasshouldbeseverelypunishedbylawandtotallyexposedthroughmedia.11Moreover,weshouldkeepdetainedrecordsofthediplomaholdersandissuethediplomaswithfake-proofseal.12Onlythroughthesewayscanthisproblembetackled.

Topic3

OnaHarmoniousDormitorylife

1）一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性

2）如何创造和谐的宿舍生活

3）“我”的看法

1Recently,therehasbeenadiscussionaboutaharmoniousdormitorylife,whichisimportanttouscollegestudentsandbenefitsallthemembers.2Inaharmoniousenvironment,wecanhaveagoodrestandputourheartintostudy.3Additionally,wewillhaveagoodmoodandenjoybeingtogether.4Therefore,itishightimethateffortsweredriventoboosttheharmonyincollegeresidences.

5Thefollowingwayscanbeadoptedtocreateandmaintainaharmoniousdormitorylife.6Firstofall,wehavetoevaluateourlifestyleandtrytogetridofourbadhabits,ifthereareany.7Secondly,whenanannoyingsituationarises,wehavetolearntotolerateeachotherandco-exist.8Thirdly,weshouldlearntosharewitheachotherandmakegoodfriends.9Onlythroughthesewayscanwebuildaharmoniousdormitorylife.

10Itisnodoubtthatdormitorylifeisanindispensablepartofcollegelifeandnoonecanignoreit.11Asforme,considerationforothersisaneffectivesolutiontoconflictsinlife.12Inconclusion,aharmoniousdormitoryenvironmentplaysapositiveroleincollegestudents’studiesandlives,andwemusttryourbesttokeepitwell.

现象解释型

写作思路

基本框架

描述图表段

主题句----扩展句（描述图表数据）---结尾句

说明原因段

主题句----扩展句一（原因一）----扩展句二（原因二）---扩展句三（原因三）-----结尾句

总结观点段

主题句---扩展句一（影响/问题/理由一）---扩展句二（影响/问题/理由二）---结尾句

描述现象段

主题句----扩展句一（现象表现一）---扩展句二（现象表现二）---结尾句

说明原因段

主题句----扩展句一（原因一）----扩展句二（原因二）---扩展句三（原因三）-----结尾句

总结观点段

主题句---扩展句一（影响/理由一）---扩展句二（影响/理由二）---结尾句

结构模板1

1Fromthechart/graph/table/picture,weclearlylearnthat总述现象，whichhasarousedgreat/commonconcern.1/Accordingtothechart,itisclearthat图表内容概括.2Whatimpressesusmostis图表中重点数据./2Thechart/graph/table/pictureindicates图表数据一，while图表数据二.

3Therearemanyreasonsaccountingfor现象或变化./3manyreasonscontributeto现象概括.4Firstofall/Tobeginwith,原因一.5Whatismore/Moreover,原因二.6Inaddition/Besides,原因三.7Therefore/Asaresult,总结原因导致的结果.

8Astome/AsfarasIamconcerned,“我”的观点.9Foronething/Ononehand,影响/问题/理由一.10Foranother/Ontheotherhand,影响/问题/理由二.11Thus/Inbrief/Toconclude/Inconclusion/Inaword,总结观点.

结构模板2

1总体现象hasbeenbroughtintofocus./1总体现象，whichhasarousedgreatconcern.2现象表现或变化.3Inaddition,进一步阐述现象。

4Therearemanyreasonsaccountingforthisphenomenon./4Thereasons/factors影响该现象arevaried.5Amongallthesereasons/factors,原因一playsaveryimportantrole.6阐述原因一.7Whatismore/Moreover,原因二.8Inaddition/Besides,原因三.

9Astome/AsfarasIamconcerned,“我”的观点.10Foronething/Ononehand,具体的看法或理由一.11Foranother/Ontheotherhand,进一步说明看法/理由二.12Thus/Inbrief/Toconclude/Inconclusion/Inaword,总结观点.

UnbanGreenbeltConstruction

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1）上图所示为1998-2002全国城市绿化资金支出情况，请描述其变化

2）请说明发生这些变化的原因

3）你认为这样的变化是否合理，为什么

1Accordingtothechart,itisclearthatthenationalexpensesonUrbanGreenbelt

ConstructioninChinafrom1998to2002changedalot.2Thechartshowsin1998,8819.23millionRMBwasspentonUrbanGreenbeltConstruction,whilebytheyear2002,thenationalexpensesonUrbanConstructioninChinahadrisentoover26709.57millionRMB.（描述图表）

3Manyreasonscontributetothischange.4Tobeginwith,thenaturalenvironmenthasbecomeworsethanbeforeandtheclimatehasalsobeenaffected.5Moreover,thegovernmenthasrealizedthattheycannolongerignorethedeteriorationoftheenvironmentanddecidedtotakesomemeasures.6Inaddition,thepublicarepayingmoreandmoreattentiontoenvironmentalproblems.7Asaresult,morean