信阳市第四高级中学高考英语 专题训练 短文改错书面表达18.docx
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信阳市第四高级中学高考英语专题训练短文改错书面表达18
河南省信阳市第四高级中学2014届高考英语专题训练:
短文改错、书面表达(18)
Passage***
MarkTwainwasborninasmalltownofHorid.Whenheisonly1___
twelveyearsold,hisfatherdied.Latehebecameariverboatpilot.2_____
MarkTwainwasherpenname.DuringtheAmericanCivilWar3_____
Heworkedasareporterandwritealotofstories.Graduallyhe4____
madehismarkandhisworkwerepopular.Hebecameoneofthe5_____
bestknownwriterofthe19thcenturyintheU.S.A.Inhislife6____
MarkTwainwrotethenumberofstoriesandnovels,onwhich7____
“AdventureofTomSawyer”isthemostfamousone.Hiswritings8____
havebeentranslatedtomanyotherlanguages,andtheyare9_____
deeplylovebythereadersallovertheworld.10___
【参考答案】Key15
1is—was2Late-later3.her—his4.write—wrote
5work—works6.writer—writers
7.the—a8.right9to—into10.loved
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一、导语
Whatdoesbeautyreallymean?
Everybodyhasowndefinition.Thestandardofbeautychangeswithdifferentsociety,cultureandnations.Someholdthepointthatthebeautifulappearanceisofgreatimportance,whichisvisibletoall.Othershavetheideathatthespiritualbeautyistheloveliestone,whichlastslong.Howeverdifferentitmightbe,theiropinionsareallacceptable.
什么是美呢?
每个人都有自己的定义。
美的标准因社会、文化和国度不同而产生差异。
有的人认为相貌上的美是最重要、最直观的美,有的人则认为心灵上的美才是最可爱、最长久的美。
无论哪种美,这些对美的定义都是有道理的。
二、创设情境
以“Whatisbeautyinyourmind”为主题,发表自己的看法,题目自拟。
要求:
1.行文流畅,观点鲜明;2.内容丰富,层次分明;3.词数150左右。
三、学生习作
Beautywillbuynobeef
Everyoneadmiresbeauty.Nowadayssomepeopletendtothinkthattheyownbeautyiftheyhaveagoodlooking.Theyarenotsatisfiedwiththeirappearance.Theyspendmuchmoneytakingakindofoperation.Canbeautyreallybeman-made?
Ifso,everybodycangetbeauty.Asaresult,thereisnobeautyatall.
Theappearanceisgivenbyourparentsandisuniqueintheworld.Everyoneshouldvalueit.I’d①ratherprefernatureasthestandardofbeauty.Justacceptyourself,accepteverythingthegodgivestoyou,andcreatethebeautifullife②belongtoyou.
Manyheroesdon’thavebeautifulsurface.However,theirbeautifulimagesoftencometoourminds.Theirbeautycomesfromtheircontributionstothesociety.
Don’tbeeagertojudgewhetherapersonisbeautifulornotwithoutathoroughunderstandingofhim.Abeautifulpersonisnottheonewithagoodlooking,butwithabroadandkindheart.
Goodlookingispleasantwhilespiritualbeautyismoreimportant.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Virtueisfairerthanbeauty.”Ifyouhaveakindheart,youownrealbeauty.
【点评】 本文以谚语“漂亮不能当饭吃”为题,直截了当地亮出了自己的观点。
全文以“美德胜于美貌”为主线,阐述了“追求外形的美而放弃了内在的美不是真正的美”。
文章观点鲜明,结构严谨,用词恰当,作者能运用谚语来强化自己的观点,有较强的英语语言组织能力和表达能力。
本文有两处语言错误:
①I’dratherprefer应改为 I’dprefer。
wouldrather表示“宁愿”,prefer也是“宁愿”的意思,两者不能连用在一起。
②belongto改为belongingto,在此处作定语。
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(201*内江、广安模拟)
LastSaturdaywehadapartyathome.Dad'sfriendscome1.________
alongwiththeirfamilies.SinceMomwasnotathome,Dad2.________
andIhadtoprepareeverything,soitturnedoutsuchamiracle3.________
thattheydidmakeit!
Everythingwentperfectlyfine.4.________
Alotofkidswhocamethatday.Ihadthemostwonderfultime5.________
withSteven.Itwasjustamazedtofindsomeonesomuch6.________
likeme.Wehadalotofthingsbycommon.Thetimeseemed7.________
shorttome,andIwishedwecouldhavehadsomemoretime8.________
tocontinuetheconversation.Hopefulwe'regoingon9.________
atriptogethernextsummer,andalsosummerafternext.10.________
答案与解析:
8.去掉had wish后的宾语从句用虚拟语气,谓语应用情态动词+动词原形,因此把had去掉。
9.Hopeful→Hopefully 副词hopefully放在句首,表示“希望”副词作状语修饰整个句子。
10.在also后加the nextsummer指明年夏天,thesummerafternext指后年夏天。
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近几年的高考《考试说明》中,关于高考英语书面表达评分标准第五档(很好)中有这样一段话:
"应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。
"这就是说,学生仅运用基础的词汇和基本的句型,不能体现出较强的语言运用能力,即使表达无语法错误,也不能得高分;相反有些错误,目的在有意识地使用复杂结构或较高级词汇,也不扣分,仍属于最高档次。
高考把写作要求提到了这样一个高度,有利于反映学生的水平层次,有利于指导教学。
原来"要点完整,语言无误,行文连贯,表达清楚"的标准就落后了。
在平时的教学中,训练最多的,学生们也最习惯的是五种基本句型:
①主语+谓语;②主语+谓语+宾语;③主语+谓语+间接宾语;④主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语;⑤主语+谓语+宾语+补足语。
用这些句型组织的句子单一、无生气,不能给人一种含金量高的审美享受。
客观形势对我们提出了高难度的要求,我们怎样才能对书面表达进行科学的操作?
怎样才能控制写作呢?
本文拟就这一课题进行讨论,希望能给学生以启迪,调动积极性,开拓思维,培养创新精神。
首先,在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句型,要灵活运用各种语法结构,使文章有声有色。
一、改变时态
例:
Thebellisringingnow.(一般)
Theregoesthebell!
(高级)
二、改变语态
例:
Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(一般)
Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.(高级)
四、使用过去分词
例:
①Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(一般)
Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.(高级)
②Onceitisseen,itcanneverbeforgotten.(一般)
Onceseen,itcanneverbeforgotten.(高级)
五、使用V-ing形式
例:
①Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.(一般)
Onarriving/hisarrival,pleasegivemeane-mail.(高级)
②Iftheweatherpermits,I'llcometomorrow.(一般)
I'llcometomorrow,weatherpermitting.(高级)
六、使用名词性从句
例:
①Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidn'tturnup.(一般)
Thefactthathedidn'tturnupdisappointedeverybody.(高级)
②Ihappenedtohavemethim.(一般)
IthappenedthatIhadmethim.(高级)
③Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(一般)
Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(高级)
七、使用定语从句
例:
Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(一般)
Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.(高级)
八、使用状语从句
例:
①Iwon'tbelievewhathesays.(一般)
Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon'tbelieve.(高级)
②Ifyoucomebackbeforesixo'clock,youcangoout.(一般)
Youcangooutonconditionthat(providedthat)youcomebackbeforesixo'clock.(高级)
③Ifshedoesn'tagree,whatshallwedo?
(一般)
Supposingthatshedoesn'tagree,whatshallwedo?
(高级)
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高考英语作文精选范文(看图作文类)
5.根据图画写一篇短文,叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。
①妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩;②儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理。
要求:
1.不仅要表述出图中的内容,还要发表自己的感想;
2.字数:
100字左右;3.开头已给出。
Oneday,XiaoMingsawalittlegirlfallover.Hewantedtohelpthegirlup,buthismotherstoppedhimandsaid,“Don’tdothat,otherwiseotherswillthinkitwasyouwhoknockedherdown.”Afewdayslater,themotherwasshockedtoseeXiaoMingjustletthefallenoilbottlebe.AndXiaoMingsaidtohismother,“IfIdidsomethingaboutthebottle,youwouldthinkthatitwasIwhoknockeditover.”
Idisagreewithwhatthemotherdidinthestory.Ithinkparentsshouldsetagoodexampletotheirchildren.Theyshouldnotonlycarefortheirchildren’shealth,buttheirminds.Theyshouldlettheirchildrenknowitisapleasuretohelpotherswhoareintrouble.Weliveinthesocietywhichisabigfamilyforallofus.
Everyoneshoulddosomethinggoodtobuildupoursociety,right?
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【3】
BaloneyisakindofsausagethatmanyAmericanseatoften.ThewordalsohasanothermeaninginEnglish.Itisusedtodescribesomething—usuallysomethingsomeonesays—thatisfalseorwrongorfoolish.
BaloneysausagecomesfromthenameoftheItaliancity,Bologna.Thecityisfamousforitssausage,amixtureofsmoked,spicedmeatfromcowsandpigs.But,boloneysausagedoesnottastethesameasbeeforporkalone.
Somelanguageexpertsthinkthisdifferenttasteisresponsibleforthebirthoftheexpressionbaloney.Baloneyisanideaorstatementthatisnothinglikethetruth.
..inthesamewaythatbaloneysausagetastesnothinglike
themeatthatisusedtomakeit.Baloneyisawordoftenusedbypoliticianstodescribetheideasoftheiropponents.Theexpressionhasbeenusedforyears.Fiftyyearsago,aformergovernorofNewYorkState,AlfredSmith,criticizedsomeclaimsbyPresidentFranklinRooseveltaboutthesuccessesoftheRooseveltadministration.Smithsaid,“Nomatterhowthinyousliceis,itisstillbaloney.”Asimilarwordhasalmostthesamemeaningasbaloney.Itevensoundsalmostthesame.Thewordisblarney.ItbeganinIrelandabout1600.ThelordofBlarneycastle,nearCork,agreedtosurrenderthecastletoBritishtroops.Buthekeptmakingexcusesforpostponingthesurrender.And,hemadethemsoundlikeverygoodexcuses,“Thisisjustmoreofthesameblarney.”TheIrishcastlenowisfamousforitsBlarneystone.Kissingthestoneisthoughttogiveapersonspecialpowersofspeech.OnewhohaskissedtheBlarneystone,sothestorygoes,canspeakwordsofpraisesosmoothlyandsweetlythatyoubelievethem,evenwhenyouknowtheyarefalse.
1.What’sthemainideaofthetext?
(Nomorethan5words)
2.AccordingtoAmericans,whatdoesbaloneyreferto?
(Nomorethan8words)
3.WhatdoyouknowaboutthelordofBlarneycastle,nearCork?
(Nomorethan6words)
4.WhydopeoplekisstheBlarneystone?
(Nomorethan6words)
【参考答案】
1.Theothermeaningofbaloney.
2.Itissomethingfalseorwrongorfoolish.
3.Hewasacleverman.
4.Togetspecialpowersofspeech.
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(广东卷)写作(共两节,满分40分第二节:
读写任务
阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文
WhenSamfirstgottohisboardingschoolwithhisparents,hewasveryhappy.Hethoughthewouldbeable()togohomeeveryweekend.Whenhewastoldhewouldnot,hestartedcryingbecausethethoughtofnotseeinghisparentswasdrivinghimcrazy.
Hewasgivenuniformsandallotherthingsthathewouldneedfortheterm.Hestartedcryingwhenitwastimeforhisparentstoleave.Hewasthentakentothedorm,wherehesawotherchildrenhappy.Hetriedasmuchashecouldtofitinbutcouldnotbecausehismindwasathome.Hestartedfeelinghomesick(想
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