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四级作文
四级作文
评分标准:
满分为15分。
阅卷标准共分五等:
2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。
各有标准样卷一至二份。
2分……条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
5分……基本切题。
表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。
有较多的严重语言错误。
8分……基本切题。
有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。
11分……切题。
表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
14分……切题。
表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性好。
基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错误。
[注:
白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。
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阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照样卷评分,若认为与某一份数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,即可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分),但不得加或减半分。
[注]
1.如题目中给出主题句,起始句,结束句,均不得计入所写字数
2.只写一段者:
0~4分;只写两段者:
0~9分(指规定三段的作文)
长度计分标准:
91~100词:
扣1分
81~90词:
扣2.5分
71~80词:
扣4分
61~70词:
扣6分
60词以下:
扣8分
3.为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准,现将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分,列表如下,称为得分率。
其中9分的得分率为60(相当于百分制的60分)。
作文分 15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
得分率 100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7
经原国家教委批准,四、六级考试已从1997年6月份起采用“作文最低”制计算成绩,其中足见国家对提高大学英语写作能力的重视程度。
按规定,考生作文若为0分,无论其总分是否高于60分,均作不及格处理;若其作文分高于0分,低于6分,报导成绩时,需从总分中减去6分,再加上实得作文分。
也就是说,要从总分中减去实得作文分与6分之间的差额部分。
评分标准分五个档次,14分,11分、8分、5分、2分,它分两个档次,14分上可以给到15,下可以给到13,8分上可以给到9分,下可以给到7分,5分上可以给多6分,下可以给到4分,2分上可以给到3分,下可以给到1分,这就是从1到15它分了五个档次。
这五个档次我们再可以分三大档,14分和11分的这算是两个合起来,叫一大档,这大档的它相同点是内容切题,文字连贯,条理清楚,这是14分和11分它的相同点,也就是说只要你达到内容切题,文字连贯,条理清楚,你就可以得到11分以上的这么一个分数。
11分和14分两个档之间区别在什么地方?
在于用词上,你的用词是不是准确,所以这是一大档。
下面是8分和5分这两个档可以构成一个大档,这个叫内容基本切题,注意“基本”这两个字,叫基本切题。
下面分开了,8分与5分之间在条理清楚上,你写文章条理清楚不清楚,在清楚上就出现变化,8分的是条理比较清楚,5分是条理不清楚,8分和5分是内容基本切题,只要你没有完全切题就可以给你打到8分这个档,只要你内容完全切题就可以给到11分以上这个档,这是评委们的标准问题。
评分样卷
AlettertotheUniversityPresidentabouttheCanteenServiceonCampus
14points
January12th,2002
DearMr.President,
I’mveryluckytoattendthisworld-famousuniversity,butI’mafraidI’mnotcontentwiththecanteenserviceoncampus.
Firstly,thequalityofthedishesshouldbeimproved.Undoubtedly,therearealotofdeliciousdishes,butalltheyear,theyarethesame.Moreandmorestudentsarecomplainingabouteatingthesamefoodeachday.SoIthinkthemosturgentproblemisvariety.
Secondly,thepriceisabittoohigh.Manyofushopethatthecanteencanprovideuswithnotonlydeliciousbutalsocheaperfood.
Finally,theenvironmentissonoisythatwecan’tenjoyourmealsingoodmood.Isuggestthattherebesomesoftmusictohelpusrelax.
Thosepresentedsuggestionsarenotjustofmyown,butalsoofmanyotherstudents.Wehopeourrespectablepresidentwillpayattentiontooursuggestions.
Bytheway,thecanteenworkersareverypatientandalwayssmiling.SoIthinkifouruniversityoffersthembetterconditions,theywillofferusbetterservice.
Bestwishes,
YoursSincerely,
LiMing
11points
January12th,2002
Asoneofyouruniversitystudents,Iamnotverysatisfiedwithourcanteenservice.
Thefirstreasonisthattherearemanystudentscomingfromotherplaces.Theymanybenotaccustomedtothelocalfoodatthebeginningoftheterm.Soourcanteenshouldprovidemuchmorekindsoffoodforthemtochoose.
Secondly,thepriceofthefoodishigherthanwecanafford.Ihopethepriceofsomefoodcanbedecreasedalittle.Thenwecanhavealargerchoice.
Inadditiontoabovesuggestions,Iwanttoreflectthatmanystudentswillhavelunchafterclasses.Atthattime,thecanteenwillbecometoocrowded.Sowehopethatyoucanarrangesomemoreseatsforstudents.
Thesearemysuggestionsofourcanteenservice.Ireallyhopeyoucantakesomemeasurestomakethecanteenservicebetterandbetter.Thankyouverymuch.
YoursSincerely,
LiMing
8points
January12th,2002
DearMr.President,
I’mreallysorrytooccupyyoursparetime.Asamemberofallstudentsinouruniversity,Ihavesomeimportantthingaboutourcanteentotellyou.
Ithinkourcanteenisnotwellenoughforus.Asfollows:
firstly,thepriceistoohighforsomeofustoafford.Wealsofindthatthepriceofmostfoodishigherthananyotheruniversitiesinourcity.Moreover,thoughthehighprice,ithasn’tbrougtwiththegoodqualityofthefood.Couldyouconsiderthatthepriceshouldbelowdownalittle?
But,everycoinhasitstwosides.Ithinkthesurroundingsinourcanteenisthebestoneinthecity.AndIknowthatithasbeenequipedwith8TVsetssincelastyear.Thisisagoodwaywhichwecangetmoreinformationfrom.
Aslast,Iwanttogivesomesuggestionstoimproveourcanteen.Addsomekindsoffoodwillsaticefythemorestudents.
Thankyou.Ireallyhopeyoucanthinkovermysuggestions.
5points
January12th,2002
DearMr.President,
MynameisLiMing.Iamyourstudentingradethree.
Today,Iwritethislettertoyou,mydearPresident.Iwanttellyousomethingaboutthecanteenserviceoncampus.
Ouruniversityhavetencampuses.Butthesamefoodindifferentcampus,thepriceisnotthesame.Iwanttoknowwhythepriceisdifferent.Thewordofthemenuistoosmalltoseeitclearly.Wehavetoaskthecookerwhatfoodwehavetoday.Itwasteustoomanytime.Becauselongtimewillcausethefoodcold,weneedhotfood.
AtlastIwantletyouknow.Iloveouruniversityverymuch.SoIwritetoyouthisletter.Iwanttoseeourcanteenserviceoncampuswillchange.
Thankyou.
LiMing
2points
January12th,2002
DearMr.President,
Thankyouforreadthisletterforthebusyworking-time.MynameisLiMing.I’minClass4,Grade1.WhenIhaveenteredintothisschool,Iworriedaboutthelunch.Becausethefoodisbadorgood,itwillrelatourhealth.
Inourschool,thelunchisnotgood.Iwillhavethreeparts:
quantity,price,service.Atfirst,thequantity,everytimeIboughtthefoodiswarm.AndIthinkthefoodisnotdesicine.Thepriceissohigh.Iamastudent.Ihavelittlemoney.Ihopetoeatfoodwillcheaperanddesicine.Atlast,theservice.Theworkerwasn’tkindnesswhenwehadboughtthefood.
Ihopepresidentwillimprovethiscaseimmediately.That’sall.
Atlast,Iwishyouallthebest.Andgoodhealth.
Teacher’sDay
14points
Teachingisthemostgloriousandrespectablecareer.OnTeacher’sDay,I’dliketoexpressmyinnermostappreciationandgratefulnesstoalltheteachersintheworld.
Teachersaretheelevatorsofhumansouls.Istillrememberhowmyteacherspulledmethroughacriticalmoment.IdidabadjobinthefirstpreparationtestforthecollegeexaminationandIwasconsiderablydepressed.Thenmyteacherscametomyrescue!
Patiently,myEnglishteacheranalyzedthepaperwordbywordandencouragedmetocarryon.Mychemistryteacheralsogavemeapreciousgift.
Hetoldmenottobeobsessedwiththetestresultsandencouragedmetofindfuninlearning.Theirhelpenabledmetosurvivethecompetitionandwillsurelybenefitmeinthefuture.
PerhapsI’llneverhaveachancetorepayallthatIhavereceivedfromteachers.ButI’lltrytobeausefulpersonandbecometheirpride.
11points
Teacher’sDayiscoming.Onthisoccasion,Iwanttodelivermygenuinegratitudetoalltheteachers.
Iwillneverforgetmyclassteacher’sdevotionandcaretome.BeforeNationalEntranceExaminations,IwassonervousthatIcouldn’tfocusonthebooks.Iwasn’tconfidentaboutmyability.Theideaofgivingupevenoccurredtome.Myteachernoticedmyanxiety.Thensheencouragedmeandadvisedmealot.However,Istillcouldn’tcalmdown.Somyteachertalkedtomealot.Shetoldmehowsheovercametheobstaclesoflifewhenshewasfacedupwithimportantaffairs.
Herwordstouchedmealot.AndIbegantofacetheexamwithfullcourageandconfidence.LuckilyIachievedmyexamssuccessfully.Iknowit’stheresultofmyteacher’sloveandcare.
Iwillcherishthewordsofherthroughmylife.Iwilltrytofacethedifficultiesinmylifewithouthesitation.That’sthebestwaytoreturnherlove.
8points
Todayisteacher’sday.Iwanttogivebestwishestomyteachers,whoassistmetolearnandwhoshapetheworldtome.
Irememberitwasin2001,Iwouldhavethechemistryolimpiccompetitionforhighschoolstudents.Astheonlyonegirlinmyclass,Ididn’thaveconfidencetocompetewithmyboyclassmates.Mr.Wangwhowasmyclassmasteralwaysencouragedme:
“remembergirlscandoallthingswhatboyscando.”Besides,hehelpedmewithmystudies.EvenduringthewintervacationwecoulddosomeinterestingsmallexperimentsatMr.Wang’shome.Whathemadeusknownarenotonlysomedifficultquestionsbutalsothecoreforscience,theloveforscienceandthecouragetothinkandtoaskquestions.Inbreief,Mr.Wangmadeusenjoyscienceratherthanworkjusttowinthegame.
TodayIamstudyinginuniversity.I’llalwaysrememberwhatMr.Wangtaughterus,Iwillworkhardonmystudiesandremindmyselftoworkforthebenefitofhumans.
5points
TodayisTeacher’sDay.HappyTeacher’sDay,myteachers.
Intheevening,allofmyclassmatesandImakeapartyforourteachers.Intheparty,eachofusgiveprerentstoteachersandhopethemfeelinghappyandhealthy.Then,teachersandusplaytogether.Allofusfeelveryhappy.
IalsorememberwhenIwasinmymidschool,myEnglishteacherhelpmetostudyEnglish.Atthattime,myEnglishisveryverypoor.AlthoughIstudyeditdayandnight,itseemedwortherandworther.ThenmyenglsihteachertoldmethatthewayIstudyingisworry.Hetoldmetherightwaysandhelpmefriendlyeveryday.Withhishelp,myEnglishbecamebetterandbetter.
Teachersarealsofriendsforus.IthinkImuststudyhardtorepaymyteacher.
2points
Teacher’sDay.HappyDay.Ihopeteachesfeelluck.Ibelieveitistimeweelevatedtheteachetothespacewhereitbelongs,therebysettinganexampletothepeopletotheteacher’sattitude.
Remember,whenIwasayougboy,Iamaoutrageousboy.Intheclassroom,Ihavebeenobservedtothrowsomethingacrossthecourtwithoutconsidesuchamovemighthaveangrysomeoneintheirseat.Therefore,
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