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4.文章标题和第一句话已经给出,注意衔接和紧扣标题。
ThepeopleIrespect
Therearemanypeoplerespectablearoundus.ThepeopleIrespectmostismyaunt,acharmingwomanofmediumbuilt,whowasbornintoarichfamilyandreceivedagoodeducation.Nowsheisanexcellentdoctorandspecializesininternalmedicine.
Asweallknow,COVID-19brokeoutinMarchofthisyearinWuhancity,whichwasinurgentneedofdoctorsandnurses.EveryoneacrossourcountrywassofrightenedattheepidemicthatnearlynonedaredtogotoWuhancity.However,atthiscrucialmoment,itwasmyauntthatriskedherlifetodovoluntaryworkwithouthesitation,whichamazedmesomuch.Ishowgreatrespectforhernotonlybecauseofhercouragebutalsoduetoherselflesscontributiontoourhomeland.Besides,shedoesn'
tcareaboutmoneyaswellasfamebutcaresforothers.Herlifeattitudealsomakesagreatdifferenceonme.
Allinall,myauntsetsagoodexampleforme.AndIdolearnalotfromher.That'
sthereasonwhyIrespecthermost.
全国卷二
上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。
请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:
1.农场情况;
2.采摘过程;
3.个人感受
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
题目:
MyWeekend
Organizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspickpeacheslastweekend.Thefarmissituatedatthefootofamountain,theskyisblueandtheairisfresh.Wewereattractedbythebeautifulscenery.Therearedifferentkindsoffruittreesaswellasavarietyofanimals.
Onarriving,wesawredripepeacheshangingonthetree.Usingbasketsandladders,Wefirstpickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.Icouldn’twaittotakeabite,andthesweetjuicewentdownmythroat.
Iwasgratefulforthisopportunitytogetclosetonature.NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!
【详解】第一步:
根据提示可知,上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。
请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动。
内容包括:
1.农场情况;
2.采摘过程;
3.个人感受。
第二步:
根据写作要求确定关键词(组),如:
pickpeaches,issituated,beautifulscenery,fruittrees,avarietyofanimals,Usingbasketsandladders,takeabite,begratefulfor,getclosetonature,feastonthesweetness.
第三步:
根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
本文用一般现在时和一般过去时。
第四步:
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Organizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspickpeacheslastweekend.和Usingbasketsandladders运用了非谓语动词;
Wefirstpickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.运用了定语从句;
NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!
运用了连词notonly…but…和倒装句。
全文中没有中式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
另外,文章思路清晰,层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
全国卷三
假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编一个短剧,请你写一封邮件给外教missVeans,请他指导你们。
邮件内容包括
1.情节简介
2.指导内容,
3.商定时间和地点。
参考范文
DearMissVeans:
IamLiHua,andI'
mwritingtoaskifyoucouldhelpmeandmyclassmatesinchangingourtextintoashortplay.
Ourplaywillbebasedonthetext"
horse"
.Thetexttellsastoryofakingandanartist.Inthestory,thekingaskedtheartisttodrawhimabeautifulhorse.Buttheartistmisunderstoodtheking,andintheendthekingforgavehimbecauseofhiseffort.MyclassmatesandIarestrugglingwiththelinesoftheplay,aswealwaysstumbleoverpronounciations.WewillhavearehearsalnextWednesdayafternoonintheschoolhall,andIhopeyoucancomeandgiveussomeadvice.
Pleaseconsiderourrequest.Ilookforwardtoyourreply.
Sincerely
LiHua
北京卷
第三部分:
书面表达(共两节,35分)
第一节(15分)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。
你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。
复学在即,作为俱乐部负责人,你给Jim写一封电子邮件,请他推荐一名外籍指导教师,内容包括:
1.条件及要求;
2.表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意:
1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear
Jim,
.
Yours,
Li
Hua.
分析这是一篇写人的信件,要求抒发自己对人物的观点并进行说明.所以用第一人称来叙述,时态以一般现在时态(叙述影响)和一般过去时态(叙述他的生平)为主.内容分成三部分:
一开头打招呼引出下文;
二内容着重介绍人物贡献及对我的影响;
三结束语.
高分句型:
1.Asfor(至于)myfavoritefigureinChinesehistory,itmustbeWeiYuan,agreatthinkerinthelateQingDynasty(WeiYuan的同位语).
至于历史上我最喜欢的人物,那肯定是魏源,他是清末伟大的思想家.
2.He(主语),inhisbook(状语),HaiguoTuzhi(MapsandRecordsoftheWorld)(book的同位语),introduced(谓语)moderntechnologiesandideastoChina(宾语)
在他《物种起源》这本书里,他把现代的技术和观念带入我国
范文
DearJim,
It'
sgreattohearfromyou.IfeelproudknowingyourinterestinChinesehistory(点题,说明写作目的).
AsformyfavoritefigureinChinesehistory,itmustbeWeiYuan,agreatthinkerinthelateQingDynasty(高分句型一).He,inhisbook,HaiguoTuzhi(MapsandRecordsoftheWorld),introducedmoderntechnologiesandideastoChina(高分句型二).Thatopenedoureyestotheworld.Infact,heinspiresmetomajorinEnglishincollege,tobeabridgebetweenChinaandtheworld.(介绍魏源的成就和影响)
Interestedinknowingmore?
Icanfindyousomebooks!
Justletmeknow(表达愿意更进一步帮忙的愿望).
Cheers!
第二节(20分)
假设你是红星中学高三
(1)班班长李华。
居家学习期间,你们班开展了一次以“自律”为主题的调研活动。
请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文稿件,给你们学校英文网站投稿,记述你在本次活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程。
词数不少于60。
提示词:
自律self-discipline
IamLiHua,theclassleaderofclassone,gradetwelve.Duringthepandemic,studentsinourclasscarriedoutaresearchaboutself-discipline.Atfirst,theefficiencyofthestudentswereverylow,andgreatlyaffectthelearningoutcomesofstudents.Tosolvethisproblem,meandsomeofthestudentsmetofflineforabrainstormmeeting.Aftercomingupwithpossiblesolutions,allclassmateshadanonlinemeetingduringwhichwedecidedonaspecificplan.Aftercarryingouttheplan,thestudyresultsofallclassmatessawobviousincrease,andourteacherwashappywiththeresult.
上海卷
假如你是明启中学高三学生李华,前几日,你邀请你的好友王磊下周五去郊野公园一起欣赏露天音乐会。
面对天气恶劣、交通不便等原因,王磊一直犹豫不决。
假如你是李华,请写一封信说服王磊和你起参加。
(1)请你从解决他的问题
(2)还有音乐会的重要性两方面
写一篇文章建议他参加这次活动!
信件写作的基本框架
Greeting:
Useanappropriategreeting(DearMr/Miss/Mrs/Ms...+lastname,orDear+firstname)
Openingparagraph:
Usesetphrasetobeginyourletterandsaywhyyouarewriting(Howareyoudoing?
Itwasnicetohearfromyou...etc)
Mainpart:
Thecontentofyourwriting
Closingparagraph:
Stateanythingyouwanttoemphasize.
Usesetphrasestoendyourletter
Signatureendings:
Yours,allthebest,bestwishes...
议论文的基本框架
Introduction:
Brieflyintroducethetopicyou'
regoingtodiscuss.
Sayhowyoufeelabout.
(twoparagraphs)
Choosetwomainaspectsoftheissueandwriteoneparagraphoneach.
Explainyourideas/points,andgiveexamplesifpossible.
Conclusion:
Sumupbystatingyouroverallopinion.
同学们只要把这两个框架融汇起来合理使用,就是本文的基本大纲。
示例1
DearWangLei,
It’sbeenawhilesinceIheardfromyou.Lasttime,IinvitedyoutoattendtheconcertwhichwillbeheldnextFridayinthecenturypark.Thoughyoudidnotreplytome,thehesitationwearingonyourfaceofferedmeaglimpseofwhatwasgoingoninyourmind.Maybeitistherecentghastlyweatherortheterribletrafficthathinderyoufrommakingupyourmind.However,asfarasIconcerned,it’sstillworthourefforts.
Thisconcertisnotapopmusicconcertbutaclassicmusiconewhereseveralprestigioussymphonyorchestraswillperformmanywell-knowncompositions.Itmustbeafeastforalltheaudience.Moreover,chancesarethatwemayhaveanalbumwithperformers’autographsonit.Youshouldnevermisssuchafabulousconcert!
Intermsofdifficultiesyouareworriedabout,Ihavealreadyfoundsomesolutions.Myfatherwillbeavailableonthatdaysothathecandriveustothescene.Ihavemanagedtopersuadehimtomakehispromise.Inaddition,incaseofarainyday,Ihavepreparedtworaincoats.Iamconfidentthatwewillindulgeourselvesintotheelegantflowofnotes.
Iamlookingforwardtohearingyourreply.
Yours,
示例2
Howareyoudoingthesedays?
You’vebeenhesitatedtogowithmetotheopen-airconcertinthecountryparkonFriday.Itseemstomewhat’sholdingyoubackistheterribleweatherandtheinconvenienttransportation,neitherofwhich,inmyopinion,isobstacles.
Firstly,thereisnoneedtobotherwiththingsuncontrollable,suchastheweathercondition.Wecanmakeplansaheadaccordingtotheweatherforecasting.Ifyouarenotconfidentwithit,wecanplanforbothrainydayandsunnyday.
Secondly,mobilenavigationappscanhelpuschoosethebestway,savingusfromthetroubleofworryingaboutthetrafficconditionsandthesubways’servicetime.Lastly,themostimportantthingisthatthisconcertissuchamajoreventthatyouwouldregretifyoudidn’tcome.
Besides,yourfavoritebandwillbeperforming!
Wouldn’titbeamazingtoseeyouridolsfacetofaceandevengetachancetotalktothem!
Hopefullyyouwilltakemysuggestionintoconsideration.AndI’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.
Bestwishes,
天津卷
书信:
介绍成人礼。
1.回顾成长历程;
2.观看校友抗疫视频;
3.自己的感受和未来期望。
作文解析:
“成人礼”特定表达:
1、成人礼:
coming-of-ageceremony
2、OurceremonyfellonMay16.fallon在某一天举行
3、InChinatheageof18meanswehavegrownup.不能用18yearsold做主语
4、Duringtheceremony,dressedinHanfu,atraditionaldress(costume)ofHanChinesepeople,weperformed/observedaseriesofrituals.注意“穿着汉服”“行礼”的表达。
5、Wegotdownonourknees/kneltdownonthegroundtoourparentstoexpressourthankstothemforraisingusandbringingusup.注意“下跪”的表达。
6、Weowesomanythankstoourparents.owesth.tosb.“欠,欠恩、欠情”
7、Theceremonyisintendedtomakeusunderstandthemeaningofmaturityandresponsibility.beintendedtodo旨在
素材
成人礼coming-of-ageceremony是在少男少女年龄满18岁时举行的象征迈向成人阶段的仪式,它标志着告别孩童时代(childhood),进入成年期(adulthood)。
在成人礼上,通常都
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