高三英语作文写作模拟训练20题含例文解析.docx
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高三英语作文写作模拟训练20题含例文解析
高三英语作文模拟训练20题(含例文解析)
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一、读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
IlwasacoldwinternightinNewYork.IwasalittlescaredbecauseIhadjustmovedintoanewhouse;Ihadseenamouse.Tmscaredofmice.However,thereallybadthingaboutshiftingwasthatIdidn'thaveevenonefriend.Therewassomethinggood,though.Intheformerhouse,1hadtoshareabathroomwithotherpeople,whichIdidn'tlike.Inthishouse,Ihavemyownbathroom.
Todaywasmyfirstdayofschool,andthestreetstoschoolwereverynice;(heywerelikeiccrinks(溜冰场)coveredwithsnow.WhenIreachedschool,IfeltnervousasIwasenteringmiddleschoolwithoutafriend.AlfirsttherewasahistoryclassinwhichIknewagirlnamedAlice.Alicehadyellowhair,skinwhichwasaswhiteasmilk,andeyesasblueasthesky.ShelookedatmeandaskedmeifIwouldliketobeherfriend.Shelookedsweetandfriendly,soIsaid"yes".Iwasenthusiastic,butwhenwcleftfbrbreak,IsawsomethingthatIdidnotlike—someguyswerethreateningandbullying(欺负)Alice.
Onseeingthis,Itoldtheguys,“Don'tsaythattoher."
"Whoareyoutotellmewhattosay?
"oneoftheguyssaid.
Alicefeltextremelybadandwentrunningandcrying.Whensheranaway,Itriedtofollowher,butIcouldnotcatchupandlosther.Shedisappearedintooneofthemanyrooms.Afterawhileofsearching,Ithoughttolookinthecafeteriaandsawhersittingandcrying.Justwhen1wasgoingtotrytocalmher,thebellrang,andshehurriedaway.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
ThenextdaywhenIarrivedatschool,Ididn'tfindAlice.
Whenthepolicearrived,theguyswhowerebullingAlicewerecaught.Ilseemed(hatMomhadknownlongago(hatIwouldneedthesefabric.Mom,inherownway,hadfinallysaidthosethreebeautifulwordsI'dlongedtohear.
【解析】【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者的妈妈因为癌症去世了,去世前为作者缝制了最后一床被子。
母亲去世几个月后,作者决定自己尝试缝制被子,在翻找材料时发现妈妈早为作者准备好了材料。
【详解】段落续写:
1由第-•段首句内容“几个月后,我想起了妈妈给我做的被子,决定自己试-•试。
"可知,第•段可描写作者缝制被子的经过以及感受。
2由第二段首句内容“但妈妈的帮助从来没有出现,然后爸爸给了我妈妈的桁缝袋,装满了多余的布料。
”可知,第二段可描写作者发现妈妈提前给自己准备好的东西,以及感受。
1.续写线索:
决定尝试做被子一购买材料——想起妈妈一发现母亲准备好的材料——作者感悟
2.词汇激活行为类
1决定:
decideto/determineto完成:
complete/finish
2提供:
offer/provide情绪类
1困难的:
hard/difficult美妙:
beautiful/wonderful
【点睛】[高分句型1]IthoughtaboutMomalotwhileIworked.(运用了while引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]Ihadn'thadachancetogothroughMom'squiltingbagyet,butmaybetherewassomethingthat1coulduse.(运用了that引导定语从句)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
AMealwithaSmile
Atelevenyearsold,mymainconcernwasmoney.WherecouldIgetit?
WhatwouldIspendi(on?
HowmuchdidIneedtobuythenewmust-havethingmyclassmateseitherhadorwantedjustasbadlyasIdid?
Iwenttomymom."Mom』needmoremoney,MIsaid,leaningagainstthekitchencounterwhileshecookeddinner,"Whatelsecankidsdofbrajobaroundhere?
''
“Youthinkyouneedajob?
"Momaskedwithasmile."Youcouldjustenjoythesummerliketheotherkids,youknow?
""I'llstillhavetimefbrthat,butIwanttowork."Ishrugged."Okay,letmeaskaround.^,Momfinallyagreed.
Thenextday,shehadananswer."Yourgrandmotherwillpayyoutohelpherdeliverluncheachdaytotheelderly/'Icouldn'twaittostartmynewjobonMondayafterschooldismissedforthesummer.
Whenmygrandmotherpickedmeup,Ithankedherforthejobwithquestions."It'ssimple.Wepickupalargecontainerfullofhotmealsinanearbytownandthenwegoonourdeliveryroute."Thatwaseasy.
Afterourloadwasarrangedinthebackseat,mygrandmotherdroveustoourfirststop:
asmallhouse.InearlyjumpedwhenIglancedover(oseealinyoldwomaninthecornerlookingatme.WhenIdrewneartoher,shesmiledatme,revealingnoteeth.Thehousesmelledterribleandoldliketheantiquestoresmymomlikedtovisit.Iheldmybreathuntilwcwentbackoutontotheporch.Wasthisreallyhowsomepeoplelived?
Icouldn'twrapmyheadaroundit.
Thenextstopwasmuchthesameandthenext.Thehousesvariedinsizeandshape,somewerenicerthanothers,butthesamewrinklypeopleeagerlywaitedfortheirmeals.EachpersonsmiledatmeandthankedagainandagainasIhurriedtogetoutofthere.Iwassweatyandtired.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Onourwaybackhome,Isatatthebackseatsilentlywiththeideaofgivingup.
HerwordstouchedmedeeplyandIdecidedtocontinuethejob.
【答案】Onourwaybackhome,Isatalthebackseatsilentlywiththeideaofgivingup.ItwasobviousthatIwasn'tverycomfortableaboutthejob."Youdon'thavetohelpme"mygrandmothersaid,“Iunderstandifthejobisn'twhatyouwanttodo."Iswallowedhard,thinkingofmoney.DidIwanttobecomfortableordidIwantthemoney?
"No,grandma,it'sokay.Iwillgetusedtoit."Though,Iwasnotsureofmywords."Ifyouaresure,dear."Amomentofsilencesettledoverthecarbeforeshespokeagain."Foralotofthepeoplewedelivertothisistheironlymealoftheday.Forsomeofthem,wearetheonlypersontheysee.Manyofthemarcalonc.,,
HerwordstouchedmedeeplyandIdecidedtocontinuethejob.Whenwewerebackatthehouse,MygrandmotherhandedmethemoneyIhadearned.Itdidn'tseemquiteasexcitinganylonger.I'dliketosaythatIdidsomesomethingincrediblewiththemoneyIearned.Idon'tevenrememberwhatIboughtfortheelderlythenextday.Whatmattersarethosepeoplewithsmilessinkingin(heirwrinkledfacesbroughtunexpectedjoytomylifewhileIbroughtthemonlyasimplegift.
【解析】【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者开始很想要钱,妈妈告诉她需要自己去赚钱,同时也告诉她嫌钱的方法,那就是和祖母一起去为那些来年人送食物.起先作者感觉不好,但是老年人看到她总是面带微笑,似乎非常开心。
祖母告诉她老人很孤独,得到食物是他们一天最快乐的事情。
作者顿悟:
自己的快乐不是赚点钱,而是给老人带去快乐。
【详解】段落续写:
1由第一段首句内容''在回家的路上,我坐在后面座位上沉默不语,想放弃"可知,第一段可描写作者对这个工作不满意,祖母教导她的经过。
2由第二段首句内容“她的话打动我,我决定继续做下去''可知,第二段可描写作者通过祖母的教导,思想转变过来。
1.续写线索:
不满意一解释一疑问一再解释一回报一感悟词汇激活
行为类帮助:
hclp/aid/assist
1习惯:
getusedto/bcaccustomedto确信:
besureof/beconvincedof
情绪类兴奋的:
bewildwithjoy/beexciting
1意外的:
unexpecled/accidental
【点睛】[高分句型1].ItwasobviousthatIwasn'tverycomfortableaboutthejob.(It作形式主语)[高分句型2].
Whatmattersare(hosepeoplewithsmilessinkingintheirwrinkledfacesbroughtunexpectedjoytomylifewhileIbroughtthemonlyasimplegift.(What引导的主语从句以及while引导的时间状语从句)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成•个完整的故事。
Tayloropenedhersleepyeyesandlookedoutthewindowatthefoggyfieldbelow."NO!
"shecried,nowfullyawake.Buttermilk,thecow,wasinMania'sdaisy(雏菊)field.
Imusthaveforgottentofastenthegatelastnight,Taylorthoughtasshepulledasweatshirtoverherhead.Mamawasplanningtoselldaisybouquetsatthefairnextweek.ButButtermilkwaseatingtheflowers.
Taylorhurriedoutsideandgrabbedtheleadropehangingontheporch."Whycan'tyoustayinthef^eld?
,sheshoutedatButtermilkassheheadedacrosstheyardtothedaisyfield.
Buttermilkstoodnipping(啃咬)tenderflowersoff(heirstems.Taylorleapedtoherfeetandrushedtothecow.Angryandanxious,shethoughttoherself:
"WhenIgrowup.I'llbeanartistandpaintpicturesallday.rilneverownacow.Toomuchtrouble."
JustasTaylorwasabouttosnaptheleadropeontoButtermilk'scollar,thefamilydog,Red,roundedthecomerofthehouse.Thecowcouldn'tstandRed.
Buttermilktookoff,tearingthroughthedaisiesandacrosstheyard.Shefinallyranthroughtheopengateandintothefield.
“Thankgoodness!
"Taylorsaidassheclosedthegateandsecuredthelatch(门栓).
Sheturnedtolookattheflowergarden.Mostofthedaisieswereeithereatenorcrushed.
Mamacameoutofthehouse."What'sgoingon?
"sheasked.Shelookedsadlyathergarden.
44Iforgottolatchthegate,"Taylorsaid."I'msosorry."
Tknowyouare.''MamasighedandgaveTaylorahug."Youlearnedanimportantlessontoday.,,
Taylor'sheartwasheavyasshewentbackintothehouse.Shehadtothinkofawaytomakeituptohermother.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
ApaintingonthewallcaughtTaylor'seye."That'sit,"shewhispered.
Onthemorningofthefair,Taylorsaid,“Mama,Ihaveasurprisefbryouupstairs.,,【答案】ParagraphI:
ApaintingonthewallcaughtTaylor'seye."That'sit,"shewhispered.Taylorracedupstairs.
Shegrabbedherartsupplies,satdownatherdeskandlookedoutofthewindowattheremainingdaisiesbelow.Asherbrushmovedsmoothlyacrossthepaper,daisiescamealive.Totallylostinpainting,Taylormadeonepaintingafteranother.Tokeepitasecret,everydayTaylorlockedherselfinherroom,committedtopaintingmore,whichButtermilkcouldn'teatanymore.Ofcourse,neverhadsheforgottentolockthegatesincethen.Bytheendoftheweek,shehadcompletedtwodozenpaintings.Appreciatinghergreatmasterpieces,shecouldn'tcontainherexcitement,jumpingandclapping,"Imadeit."Paragraph2:
Onthemorningofthefair,Taylorsaid,"Mama,1haveasurprisefbryouupstairs?
'OuthurriedTaylor,whoexclaimedatthetopofherlungexcitedly.Mamamanagedaweaksmile."Really?
Let'sseeit".InstantlytheyreachedTaylor'sbedroom,Tayloropened(hedoor.Whatgreetedthemweredaisypaintingseverywhere,brightandcheerfulinthemorninglight."Wow,"saidMama,unabletouttermorewords."Doyouthinkanyonewillbuythem,Mama?
M'Oh,yes,sweetie.I'msuretheywill.AndyouhaveabetterlessonthanIexpected."Mamasmiled.
【解析】【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了泰勒从小就下决心R大了不会养奶牛,而是要当一名艺术家,整天画画。
【详解】1•段落续写:
1由第一段首句内容“墙上的一幅画引起了泰勒的注意。
"就是它,"她低声说。
"可知,第一段可描写她抓起美术用品,坐在书桌前,望着窗外剩下的雏菊,就开始画起来。
2由第二段首句内容"在集市的那天早上,泰勒说:
"妈妈,我在楼上给你准备了一个惊喜。
可知,第二段可描写对泰勒画的维菊的评价。
2.续写线索:
画画——完成——欣赏——笑词汇激活
行为类画画:
paint/draw
1完成:
complete/finish欣赏:
appreciate/admire
2笑:
smile/laugh情绪类
①兴奋:
excitemcnt/excitation【点睛】
[高分句型IJTokeepitase
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