作文范文之专四作文Word文档格式.docx
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inconclusion,ithinkthatprivatecarownersshouldbeproperlytaxedforpollution.itisnotonlyforpunishmentbutalsoforwarning.“pollutiontax”onprivatecarsisaneffectivewaytocontrolthenumberofcars,reducepollutionandprotectresources.fromnowon,asstudents,weshouldtryourbesttocarryoutit,suchasgoingsomewherefarawaybybus,orotherpublictransportations.
阅卷专家评论:
1.审题基本准确;
2.内容基本切题;
3.结构不够严谨;
4.论据缺乏说服力,论述不够充分;
5.语言一般,不够流畅。
范文二:
shouldprivatecarownersbetaxedforpollution?
asthedevelopmentofoursociety,moreandmorepeoplebuyprivatecars.andrecentlygovernmentagenciesinsomecitieshavebeenstudyingthepossibilityofputtinga“pollutiontax”onprivatecars,whichhasarousedquiteastiramongthepublic.inmyopinion,theprivatecarownersshouldnotbetaxedforpollution,andihavethreereasonsformyopinion.
firstly,ithinktheemissionlevelscan’tdecidehowmuchpollutionthecarhadmadeandhowmuchmoneytheownershouldbetaxed.forexample,acarwithasmallerenginemaybeproducelesspollution,butiftheowneruseitmorefrequently,ofcourseitwillproducemorepollution.sothetaxshouldn’tdependontheemissionlevels.
secondly,thetaxforpollutionmaybemoreharmfultoourenvironment.asyouknow,ifapersonpaysomemoneyforthepollution,hewillthinkthereisnoresponsibilityforhiscarandthereisnoneedforhimtoprotecttheenvironment,becausehehasalreadypaythemoneyfortheenvironment.thenhemaypaylittleattentiontotheenvironment,andevenharmtheenvironment.so“pollutiontax”maybenotbegoodfortheenvironment.
thirdly,protecttheenvironmentisthedutyofeveryofus,notjustseveralprivatecarowners.ifthegovernmentjustforcesomeprivatecarownerstopaythe“pollutiontax”,therestofuswillthinkthereisnodutyforustoprotecttheenvironment.thentherewillbemorepeopletodestroytheenvironment,andlesspeopletoprotecttheenvironment.ofcourse,theresultofthe“pollutiontax”willbeopposetotheoriginalpurposeofthegovernment.
allinall,“pollutiontax”isnotgoodtoourenvironment.andweshouldalsorememberthatthedutyofprotecttheenvironmentisnotjustthedutyofseveralprivatecarowners,butthedutyofeveryoneofus.
专家评论:
1.审题准确到位;
2.内容切题充实;
3.观点清晰独到;
4.结构严谨合理;
5.有一些语言错误。
范文三:
作文
privatecarownersshouldbetaxedforpollution
thefirstandforemostthingtoconsideristhevolumeofvehiclethatbelongstogovernmentitself.asthegovernmentcallsfortakingpublictransportationratherthansmallvehicle,the“pollutiontax”imposedonstatedownedvehicleswhichisalmostforpersonaluseshouldbemoreseverethanthatonprivatevehicles.aslongasthegovernmentcreatestheimageofreducingpollutionbyconstrainingitsvolumeofvehicletonesserarylevel,willthepublicbegintolayemphasisonthereductionofvehiclesandalsoenvironmentalprotection.
thereisafurtherconsiderationthatthetaxshouldnotonlybejudgedbytheengineor
vehicles’sizes,simplybecausenoteveryonedrivesthesamedistance.inotherwords,the“pollutiontax”willbeenhancedthroughthecollaborationwithotherformsoftax,like“oiltax”.theintroductionoftaxportfoliocanmaketaxpaymentreasonablewhentheindividualinterestissafeguarded.
itiscertainthat“pollutiontax”cancontributetotheenvironmentprotection.however,thetaxwillnotfullyfunctionunlessamoreconsiderateschemeofpoliciestakenintoaccount.英语专业四级考试在线课堂
1.观点新颖明确;
2.内容切实到位;
3.篇章结构清晰;
4.衔接自然合理;
5.语言流畅,词汇丰富,句式多变;
6.有一些语言错误。
牢记英专四级合格作文要求:
论点明确、清楚
论证层次分明
结构严谨
紧扣论点讨论分析,论证有说服力
观点阐述合乎逻辑
衔接自然、顺畅
语言运用得体
【篇二:
2011年专四作文强化班材料】
moduleone
requirementsfortem-4composition
一2004《大纲》对写作部份的要求
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a.作文:
能根据所给作文题目,提纲或图表,数据等,写一篇200个单词左右的作文。
能做到内容切题,完整,条理清楚,结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺,表达得体。
考试时间为35分钟。
b.便条:
能根据所给提示写50-60个单词的便条,通知、请帖等。
能做到格式正确,语言得体。
考试时间为10分钟。
二.测试形式
本部份为主观题,分两节:
sectionasectionb。
sectiona:
composition
本节是命题作文,文章体裁主要属于说明文,议论文或记叙文的范围。
sectionb:
note-writing
本节是写便条。
三.新大纲与旧大纲的不同
a.短文写作的字数由原来的150字增加到200字。
b.便条写作的计分由原来的5分增加到10分
c.写作总分由原来的20分增加到25分。
四.评分原则
1.总体评分法。
2.从内容和语言两方面对作文进行综合评判。
a.作文是否体现主题。
b.结构是否合理
c.语法文字是否有重大错误
d.卷面布局是否整洁
五.评分标准
a.命题作文
15~14分:
切题。
表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,几本无语言错误。
13~11分:
表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语法错误。
11~9分:
基本切题。
表达思想比较清楚,文字上连贯,但语言错误较多,其中有少量严重错误。
8~6分:
表达思想不够清楚,文字连贯性差,有较严重的语言错误。
5分以上:
条理不清,思想紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有语法错误,且多数为严重错误。
字数要求:
150-170字,扣1分;
130-150字,扣2分;
110-130字,扣3分;
90-110字,.扣4分;
90字以下,至多给5分。
另外,如照抄提示中原句,不得计入所写字数。
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格式完整,结构合理,内容表达清楚,行文连贯,能实现应用文的交际功能
等。
六.分档样卷
14分档:
withtheinternetbecominganindispensablepartofmodernpeople’slife,
makingfriendsonlineenjoysitsgreatpopularity,especiallyamongyoungpeople.however,isitwisetomakefriendsonline,asmanyparentsandteachersareworryingabout?
asfarasiamconcerned,istronglyopposebeingaddictedtomakingfriendsonline.
firstly,toomuchattentiontoonlinefriendsdistractsyourconcernstothetrue
friendsandfamiliesintherealworld.ifwelookaround,weoftenfindalotofsametime,thecommunicationbetweenthemandfriendsaroundthemarebecominglessandless.therefore,theyfeellonelierinreallifeandspendmoretimeoninternet.
besides,onlinefriendsareoftendisguised.alargenumberofcaseshave
provedthatmanycriminalsmakeuseofinternettocheatofmoneyorlove.eveniftheyarenotcheaters,theytendtobetotallydifferentpersonswhenyougetinactualcontactwiththem.there’salwaysagapbetweentherealworldandtheimaginaryone.
nevertheless,itisunwisetomakefriendsonline.thosewhoareindulgingin
internetshouldtothefriendshipandkinshipinthereallife.whatyoushoulddoistoseeksolution,butnottoescape.
12分档:
nowadays,ithasbeenafashiontomakefriendsonline,andmoreandmoreteenagers,collegestudentsandevenmanyadultswillspendalotoftimechattingwithidon’tthinkitiswisetomakefriendsonline.
firstly,mostofpeoplewillnotrevealtheirrealidentityontheinternet,whichwillnotenableyoutomaketruefriends.justimagine,ayoungladyyouaretalkingwithmaybeanoldman,andi’besides,thefriendsonlinecanbringbadeffecttopeople,especiallyforteenagers.thecertaindegree,atlast,makingfriendsonlinecandobadtotherelationshipbetweenyouandyourfamilyandfriendsinreallife.beingaddictedtotheinternetmakesyouignorethereality.youwillbeangryaboutyourparents’inaword,itisnotwisetomakefriendsonline.ihopeeveryonecanfocusontherealityinsteadofwastingtoomuchtimemakingfriendsontheinternet.
9分档:
thereisatendencywecan’tdenythatmostofushaveaccesstointernet.susequently,makingfriendsonlinehasbecomeacommonthing.somemayarguethatmakingfriendsonlineisn’wisertomakefriendsonline.
ononehand,it’with.thenmakingfriendsonlineisagoodwaytosolvethisproblem.meanwhile,wecannotonlygainfriendship,butalsoexchangeourminds.inthisway,weobtainasenseofsatisfactionfromtalkingwithastrangerwhowilltendtosaybeautifulwordstowardus.ontheotherhand,makingfriendsonlinesometimes,friendsonlineencourageustoreadhelpfulbookswherewillbeabletolearnmore.
allinall,frommypointofview,onlineaslongasweuseitproperly.
7分档:
peoplewouldliketomakethebestinternettobroadentheirminds,theycangetlargeinformation,theycanplayinterestinggames,eventheycanfriendsonline.whileaquestionhasbeenarisen:
“isitwisetomakefriendsonline?
”
youthathemoneyeagerlyandtotrustasocalledonlinefriend.
solet’sdo
5分档:
ithinkitiswisetomakefriendsonline.first,nowjob’spressuremoreandmore.everyonecann’tbettertalkfacetoface.second,friendsonlinemayspeakeverthingofthem.
third,friendsonlinemayhelpsomethin
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