英语写作.docx
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英语写作
找观点:
十个角度
1.money
1)earnmoney=economicdevelopment
2)savemoney
3)wastemoney=values,consumerism
2.time
1)savetime=efficiency
2)wastetime=efficiency
3)killtime=entertainment
3.health
1)beneficialtohealth
2)detrimentaltohealth
4.knowledgeandeducation
1)broadenhorizons
2)enrichexperience
3)acquireskills/knowledge
4)obtaininformation
5.psychology
1)senseofachievement
2)addiction
3)loneliness
4)stress,depression
6.emotion
1)interpersonalrelationship,emotionalties
2)senseofresponsibility
3)patriotism
7.powerandability
1)duty/obligation
2)ability
8.environment
1)conservetheenvironment
2)contaminatetheenvironment
3)facilities,equipment
9.culture
1)heritage,protecttheculture
2)exchange
10.moralityandcrime
1.现在网上购物已经成为一种时尚
Currently,manypeople_________inorderto_______,whichhasmadeonlineshopping_________.Obviously,_________________.Moreover,_____________.Furthermore,_________________.
Currently,manypeoplearecrazyaboutonlineshoppinginordertobuysomecommoditieswhich/whattheydesire,whichhasmadeonlineshoppingbecomeafashion.Obviously,onlineshoppingcanhelpcustomerssavesomemoneybecauseonlineshopownersdonotneedtopayforstorageandofficespaceandreducetheircosts.Moreover,customerscansavetimebyshoppingonlinebecausetheydonotneedtogofromstoretostorepersonally
2.网上购物有很多好处,但是也有不少问题
Obviously,apparently,undoubtedly…
Onlineshoppingcanhelpconsumerssavealargeamountofmoneybecauseonlineshopownersneednot
Advantages:
1.savemoney
2.savetime
3.easytocompareandanalyze
Disadvantages:
1.belikelytobecheated
2.thetruequalitycannotbeguaranteed
3.difficulttocontroltheexpenditure
1.背景信息
2.正反双方观点
3.中心思想
4.结尾提建议
5.主体部分阐述
背景信息:
句型1:
平铺直叙说现象+目的(目的尽量笼统):
目的表达:
forthepurposeofdoing,forthesakeofdoing,inordertodo
通常还要表示时间
Currently,atpresent,inthecontemporaryera,intheInformationAge,inthemoderntimes,inrecentyears
现象:
现象蕴含在问题中,有三种情况:
1.已经发生:
现在完成时
2.计划进行:
plantodo,expecttodo,anticipatedoing
3.充满热情:
becrazyaboutdoing,beenthusiasticaboutdoing
强调现象的普遍性:
很多
Many,avastnumber/amountof…..,anincreasingnumber/amountof….
Currently,many(alargenumber/amountof)_______havedone(areplanningtodo)(arecrazyaboutdoing)_________inordertodo笼统______.
句型2:
过去分词短语+by+原因,现象:
注意过去分词短语的逻辑主语和句子主语的一致。
否则是语法错误。
过去分词短语包括:
motivatedby激励,stimulatedby刺激,boostedby推动,encouragedby鼓励,promptedby促进,drivenby驱使,
后面的名词包括:
goal为之努力,purpose一般,aim一般,objective具体可行,expectation期待,anticipation期待(of)或者desire欲望,aspiration热切的盼望,ambition抱负(for)
过去分词+by+目标+做….事情,现象
Atpresent,motivatedbythegoalofdoing…..,many(alargenumber/amountof,quiteafew)…havedone(areplanningtodo,arecrazyaboutdoing)…….
Currently,motivatedbythegoalofbuyingdesirablegoods,manypeoplearecrazyaboutonlineshopping.
观点阐述
主体段落
方面1=1+2+3
主体段落的注意事项:
1.使用表示顺序的连接词:
第一点不用连接词,moreover,besides,also,next,plus,furthermore,then
2.注意主语的改变:
三角形结构
3.注意引用他人的观点:
Proponents(opponents)of主题词汇…arguethat观点
Thosewhosupport(favor,approveof,areinfavorof)主题词汇…believethat观点
Thosewhooppose(disapproveof,areopposedto,objectto)…believethat观点
Accordingtotheproponents(supporters)of…,观点
Accordingtotheopponentsof…,
Accordingtothosewhosupport(favor,approveof,areinfavorof)…,
Accordingtothosewhooppose(disapproveof,areopposedto,objectto)…,
Forthosewhosupport(favor,approveof,areinfavorof)…,
Forthosewhooppose(disapproveof,areopposedto,objectto)…,
上述句型使用在第一层次
4逻辑要严密:
简单句表示观点的+目的(forthepurpose/sakeof,inorderto,sothat),原因(dueto/owingto,asaresultof+名词或者动名词,inthat/because/since+句子),结果(,which,;therefore)
LearningEnglishcanhelpyoungpeoplefindadesirablejobinthatEnglishisthelinguafrancainmostmultinationalcorporations.
LearningEnglishcanhelpyoungpeoplefindadesirablejob,whichenablesthemtobefinanciallyindependentortoachievetheirvaluesinlives.
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