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回到frogs---原因是因为好吃。
Inotherwords,manypeopleholdthevalueoftheirownbenefitspriortoothers’,becausetheydonotrealizetheside-effectoftheiractivities.Tobespecific,(生物链和害虫的例子)。
Therefore,governmentshouldtakecertainmeasurestostrengthencitizen’sawarenessofecologicalcircles.
●全球化
2.坏处:
Anyintegrationunderminesthediversityintheworld.
同样的道理:
Inthesameway/Tofollowthesamededuction,
A.统一语言的好坏
Aunifiedlanguagetendstohavenegativeeffectsonthepreservation/developmentofethnicminorities’tongues.Forexample,CCTV1,China’snationalTVchanneleverreportedthataminorlanguagecanbeonlyspokenbyonepersonthanksto,ironically,theover-spreadofmandarinChinese.
However,variousnationalgovernmentsandrelevantinternationalorganizationssuchasUnitedNationsOrganizationofEducation,ScienceandCultureshavebeenawareoftheissueandadoptedcertainmeasurestohelptheseminorlanguages’preservation.
B.国外食品的进口/国外快餐的影响/国际贸易的发展
Theentryofforeignproductsintoalocalmarkettendstohavenegativeeffectsonthedevelopmentoflocaltraditionalbusinesses.Forexample,McDonaldsandKFChavedistractedmuchofconsumers’attentionfromtraditionalfoods.
However,inthelongrun,thisdevelopmentwillpromotehealthycompetitionamongvariousbrandsindomesticmarkets.Furthermore,localbrandswillhavetoimprovetheirproductsandservices,whichfinallyhelpsthelocaleconomyandtheenrichmentofcitizens’materiallife.
B.国际关系的重要性/国际援助对发展中国家的影响。
Thepoliticaloreconomicinterferenceofdevelopedcountriesintodevelopingcountries(and同化政策assimilationpolicy)tendstohavenegativeeffectsonthedevelopmentofthedevelopingcountries’nationalcharacteristicsandindependentdecisions.Ithasbeenrepeatedlyreportedthatsomedevelopingcountriesgetcertainfinancialaidunderadditionaltermsofunfairness,namely,theyhavetosellcertainrawmaterialsatlowerprices.
However,inthelongterm,thedevelopingcountrieswillfinallygetawaywiththecontrolofdevelopedcountries,ascanbeseeninthedevelopmentofJapanaftertheSecondWorldWar.
IMFInternationalMonetaryFund
●全球化的好处
国际语言/贸易/食品/关系的一些相关活动tendto对于有助于不同民族、宗教和文化之间的交流,从而更好的mutualunderstanding.进一步来讲,理解是解决争端的根源。
总的来说,这些活动都有助于长期的世界和平。
______andrelevantactivitiestendtohelptheexchangesbetweendifferentnations,religionsandcultures,andhencetoreachbettermutualunderstanding,whichliesinthesourceofsolutionstodisputes.Generallyspeaking,thistrendhassomepositiveeffectsontheestablishmentoflong-termworldpeace.
3.教师的不可替代性/电脑技术英特网的发展
●网络美女&
qq聊天VS老婆&
见网友
网络的好处:
●什么样的美女都有—信息全—写论文,以前去‘图书馆’翻书,现在‘google’
Shouldlibrariesbeeliminated,becausetheInternethasreplaceditsfunction?
07-2-10
E-bookcanreplacetraditionalbooks?
Cet62008-6
ThebenefitsoftheInternet?
Cet62007-12
Inwhichareas,istheInternetmoreimportantthanteachers?
07-5-19,08-10-23
运用:
因特网提供最广泛的信息。
例子,过去写论文要去图书馆翻书找很久,现在只用2分钟去google一下,所有相关信息一目了然。
TheInternetprovidesthewidestrangeofinformation.Forexample,decadesago,awriterhastovisitlibrariesandkeepsearchingforprobablyhoursforrightreferencebookswhilenowadayscanhelphimoutwithin2minutes.
●网络美女有可能是‘照片处理过的’,‘整容了不好看不出来’—信息有真有假
Inwhichareasareteachersmoreimportant?
07-5-19,07-07-14
ThedefectsoftheInternet.
网络的信息广泛正是其缺点,因为无法判断信息的真伪。
ThewidenessofinformationisthedefectoftheInternetinformation,becauseitisveryhardtodistinguishthefalsefromthetrue.
●美女看多了—分心了distraction,
Distraction除了美女还有什么,onlinegames,qq聊天,娱乐节目entertainingprograms
恶性的distraction—不恰当的内容impropermaterial—例如;
violence,pornography
TheInternetcanreplaceclassroomteaching/lectures?
—当然答案是‘NO’,在现阶段contemperarily.
ThedrawbackoftheInternet.
英特网上充满了诱惑,比如说臭名昭著的网络游戏,使无数学生废弃学业。
TheInternetfeaturesawholerangeoftemptations,namely,theinfamousonlineadventuresthatnumerousstudentshaveindulgedthemselvesingivinguptheirstudy.
Forexample,manystudentshaveindulgedthemselvesinonlineadventuressothattheygiveuptheirstudy.
运用2:
05.01.22
Recentyears,thenumberofcrimescommittedbyyoungpeopleinmajorcitiesthroughouttheworldisincreasing.Discussthisissue.Givereasonsandsuggestsomesolutions.
其中一个重要原因是越来越多的媒体包括英特网、电视对于非法行为的描述,比如说暴力,毒品和卖淫,过于细致。
很多缺乏判断力的青少年容易误入歧途。
OnemajorreasonisthatmoreandmoremediaincludingTVandtheInternetdescribematerialinvolvingillegalactivities,suchasviolence,drugs,andprostitutioninanover-detailedway.Manyyouthswhoarelackofabilitytodistinguishtherightfromthewrongeasilyerrintowrongpaths.
扩展运用
08.01.12
Somepeoplethinkthebestwayofreducingcrimeistogivelongerprisonsentences.Others,however,thinkthereareotherbetterwaystoreducecrime.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.
08.08.16=05.07.23
DetaileddescriptionofcrimesonnewspaperandTVcanhavebadconsequencesonsociety,sothiskindofinformationshouldberestrictedonmedia.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?
●美女看多了2—得病:
相思病和红眼病
MoreandmorepeoplearedoingtheirworkandstudyathomethroughtheInternet.Whatarethepossibleeffects?
2007-03-31
英特网的坏处:
影响人们的心理健康和身体健康(例子见:
科技类话题)
●相对来说,老婆好些,因为看了可以‘抱’不会有‘心理病’,也不会有‘假’
老师—可以‘面对面’交流,解决问题,改作业当面传授细节;
信息的真实性和准确性相对较高
运用1:
课堂教学提供和老师面对面的交流,通过这种交流可以更加有效的帮助学生提高成绩。
一个非常有代表性的例子就是,写作必须要改作文,改作文最好是当面讲授可以搞清楚‘错在哪里’!
Classteachingprovidesfacetofacecommunicationwithteachers,andthecommunicationcanthusimprovestudents’performanceinamoreeffectiveway.Onegoodillustrationisthatanessaywrittenbyastudenthastobecorrected,andfacetofacecorrectionprovidesdetailedinformationonwhyamistakeisamistakeandhowitismade.
●Qq可以互相交流—‘假的’更多—见网友
我们以前一朋友,见网友都约好地方,远远的等着,打电话,远处先看看,10个里面有8个和现实不一样,长的对不起人,所以‘搜索费时间’
ThesearchontheInternettakesmuchmoretimethanreceivingpurpose-orientedinformationfromteachersorinclasses.
●扩展:
电脑技术—刚开始贵不贵,重不重,稳定不稳定?
4.科技问题
答案是:
又贵又重,又不稳定
现在呢?
答案变成:
不贵,不重,也很稳定,千家万户
任何技术的发展都可能面临相同的情况:
可应用于
电视,08-1-10电脑,手机,飞机和环境问题,汽车和环境问题,核能源问题
例子:
电视机的坏处08-01-10
电视长时间看多了会造成近视眼,电视节目也有不当的内容污染小孩的心理健康,比如说黄色暴力。
LongtimeexposuretoTVcausespooreyesightproblemsonviewers,andsomeimpropermaterialincludingviolenceandpornographyalsoundermineschildren’smentalhealth.
然而这些不好之处都是可以避免的。
However,allthesedisadvantagescanbeavoided.
首先父母老师应该给与更多的指导和监督在小孩子看电视的时候,而且随着技术的进步我们会有可以屏蔽不良信息的智能软件。
First,parentsandteachercouldgivemoreguidanceandsupervisiontochildrenwhentheyarewatchingTV,andtechnologicaladvanceswillprobablybringaboutsortofintelligentsoftwarethatcanstopunhealthyinformation.
另外,科技的发展必然是朝着好的方向的,我们已经有了发出较少辐射的液晶电视,很合理的我们可以期待,有一天看电视对我们的视力没有任何伤害。
Inaddition,thedevelopmentofscienceandtechnologieshasalwaysbeenforthebetter.Forinstance,wehaveinventedliquidcrystaldisplay(LCD)TVs,whichemitsmuchlessradiationthanthoseproducedyearsbefore.Therefore,itcanbereasonablyexpectedthatonedaywewouldenjoyTVwithoutanyriskofharmstooureyes.
●请将上面的这个段子里面‘电视TV’全部换成‘电脑/英特网computers/theInternet’
●请将上面的这个段子里面‘电视TV’全部换成‘手机cellphone’;
把‘eyesightproblems’换成‘higherriskofcatchingbraincancer’;
把‘LCDTV’换成‘codedivisionmultipleaccess(CDMA)cellphones’即可。
●汽车,飞机制造污染
●06.02.18
●Somepeoplebelievethatairtravelshouldberestrictedbecauseitcausesseriouspollutionandusesuptheworld’sfuelresources.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
●2007.9.8
●Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplearedependingoncarsintheirdailylife.Somepeoplethinkithascausedproblems.Whataretheproblems?
Doyouthinkweshouldencouragepeopletousecars?
(社会现象)
●08.04.05=06.03.25
●Onelong-distanceflightconsumesfuelwhichacarusesinseveralyears'
time,buttheycausethesameamountofpollution.Sosomepeoplethinkthatweshoulddiscouragenon-essentialflights,suchastouristtravel,ratherthantolimittheuseofcars.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisview?
●08.06.14
●Manypeoplethinkcheapairtravelshouldbeencouragedbecauseitgivesordinarypeoplefreedomtotravelfurther.However,othersthinkthisleadstoenvironmentalproblem,soairtravelshouldbemoreexpensiveinordertodiscouragepeoplefromhavingit.Discussthebothsidesandgiveyourownopinion.
●雅思题目多次考过,应该limitallairflights/autotransports吗?
答案肯定是‘不行的’
采取同样的思维,请问不禁止,该怎么办
●答案‘替代能源’
我们不能禁止飞机/汽车,因为它们是最重要的交通手段,在现阶段。
但是他们确实也污染了环境,尤其是空气污染和噪音污染。
Airflights/Autoscannotbebanned,becausetheyareamongthemostimportanttransportvehiclestoday.However,theydocreateairpollutionsandnoises.
很明显,对于空气污染,最好的办法人们早就意识到了,替代无污染能源,比如说太阳能。
Astoairpollution,apparentlypeoplehavebeenawareofthebestsolution,alternativeenergysourcesthatareenvironmentfriendly,suchassolarenergy.
另外对于噪音污染,解决办法早就有了,消音器。
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