名师整理最新英语中考写作《校园生活》专题精讲精练Word下载.docx

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5.ItwasMarywhogavemethegreatesthelpandmademyschoollifeso

wonderful.

6.Weshareourjoyandsadnessjustlikeabigfamily.

7.WhenIhadastomachache,myclassmateslookedafterme.Itmadememoved.

8.Whenmyclassmatesmeetsometroublesthattheyareunabletoovercome,

Iamreadyforgivingthemahandanytimeanywhere.Ihavehelpedthemalot,

andIamalwayshappytodothat.

【模拟试题】

Beproudofmyschool

a.Whatdoesyourschoollooklike?

b.Whatfundoyouhaveatschool?

c.Whydoyoulikeyourschool?

（Giveatleasttworeasons.）

【要点分析】

1.通过具体的活动（如:

兴趣小组、体育运动、与老师同学的相处、自己在学校生活

中的收获等）来表达对学校的情感。

2.时态:

一般现在时。

3.文章结构:

略写校园环境,详写校园生活和自己的成长、收获,

4.切忌:

言之无物,只说“热爱”自己的学校,却不说为什么“热爱”。

【写作思路】

36.o

I）总体概述“我为学校而骄傲”

1.lamproudofmyschoolbecauseitisbeautifulandwehavemanyinteresting

schoolactivities.

2.Myschoolisverybig.Wehave...Thereare..（从建筑、设施、绿化的角度写）

2）具体谈谈校园活动和人物

1.Wehavelotsoffunatschool.Afterschoolweplay..,Wedolotsofsports

like..,Sometimeswehave...（从体育运动、课外活动、主题活动的角度写）

2.Studentsinourschoolstudyhardanddowellintheirsubjects.

3.Eachstudentrespectshis/herteachersandispolitetoothers.

3）从校园活动和人物中得到的启迪

1.Ilovemyschoolbecause..,llearnalotfrom...Ireallyfeelproudofmyschool.

2.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontoourschool,itwillbemorebeautiful.

【范文评讲】

原文稿

Iamproudofmyschoolbecauseitisbeautifulandwehavemanyinterestingschoolactivities.Myschoolisverybigwithseveraltallbuildings.Wehaveabigplayground,andtherearelotsoftreesandflowerseverywhere.Besides,thereisabigfountaininourschoolgarden.Somestudentsusuallyplaytogetherafterclass.Othersappreciatethegoldfishinthejoke.Italsogivesusmuchhappiness.

Wealsohavelotsoffunatschool.Afterclassweplaygamesanddolotsofsports,likeplayingbasketball,footballandtabletennis.SometimeswehaveclassmeetingsandEnglishfestivals.

Ilovemyschool.Theteachersareverykindandthestudentsarefriendlytoeachother.Weshareourjoyandsadnessjustlikeabigfamily.

【点评与评分】

作者在整篇文章中条理清晰,意思连贯,语句通顺,全文流畅。

可文章在整体布局时还需考虑,注意详略得当。

按中考作文20分计算,属于第三档~第二档的文章,可得14~15分,需改进之处:

1.文章应略写校园环境,详写校园生活和自己的成长、收获。

而作者在第一段中用

了过多的笔墨,使文章显得头重脚轻弪。

所以去掉部分描写校园环境的句子更好。

2.第二段中,加上Sportsandschoolactivitiesmakeushealthyandmakeour

schoollitecolourful.更能突出运动和校园活动带来的好处。

3.在最后一段中加上一个连接词,表明热爱学校更重要的原因。

4.原文中少了结尾,应添上结尾,使文章具有完整性。

修改稿

Iamproudofmyschoolbecauseitisbeautifulandwehavemanyinterestingschoolactivities.Myschoolisverybigwithseveraltallbuildings.Wehaveabigplayground,andtherearelotsoftreesandflowerseverywhere.

Wealsohavelotsoffunatschool.Afterclassweplaygamesanddolotsofsports,likeplayingbasketball,footballandtabletennis.SometimeswehaveclassmeetingsandEnglishfestivals.Sportsandschoolactivitiesmakeushealthyandmakeourschoollifecolourful.

Ilovemyschool.Thefurtherreasonistheteachersareverykindandthestudentsarefriendlytoeachother.Weshareourjoyandsadnessjustlikeabigfamily.Ilearnalotfrommyschoollife,Ifeelproudofmyschool.Itisoneofthebestschoolsinmyheart.

【范文选登】

Myschoolisverybigwithseveraltallbuildings.Thereare2-000studentsinmyschool.Wehaveabigplaygroundwithlotsoftreesaroundit.Therearealotofflowerseverywhere.

Wehavelotsoffunatschool.Afterclasswedolotsofsports,likeplayingbasketball,footballandtabletennis.Also,wechatwitheachotherunderthetreesandplaygamestogether.Howhappyweare!

Ilovemyschoolbecauseit'

slikeabigfamily.Theteachersinmyschoolareaskindtousasourparents.Ifeelproudofmyschoolanditisoneofthebestschoolsinmyheart.

of

【范文链接】

Myclassmatesandmyclass

MyschoollifeiswonderfulandIfeelproudtobeamemberofmyclass.Inmyclass,Igetalongverywellwithmyclassmates.Iusuallyreadbookswiththemandshareourthoughtstogether.WhenIhaveaPElesson,Ialwaysplaybasketballwiththemandweallenjoyourselves.AndIrememberoneday,whenIhadastomachache,myclassmateslookedafterme.ltmadememoved.Soinmyopinion,myclassmatesareveryfriendlyandkind.

Frommypointofview,myclassismysecondhomebecauseitalwaysgivesmewarmthandlove.It'

llbethemostvaluabletreasureinmymemory.

Studyisfun

Whydowecometoschool?

Differentpeoplemayhavedifferentanswers.Somepeoplesaythattheycometoschooltostudyjustbecausetheydreamofabetterjobandabetterfuture.Butinmyviewpoint,studyisfun.

Itissaidthateveryonewhoisinterestedinstudymayfindpleasureinreading.Exactly!

Studycannotonlyenrichmyknowledgeandbroadenmymind,butalsobringme 

lots 

of 

fun 

as 

w 

ell. 

What'

s 

more,study 

always 

teaches 

me 

how 

to 

be 

honest,confident 

and 

knowledgeable.

In 

a 

word,study 

is 

fun.

Taking 

part 

in 

school 

activities

Many 

students 

are 

very 

interested 

activities. 

They.have 

their 

reasons.Firstly,they 

think 

that 

learning 

from 

textbooks 

not 

only 

task. 

They 

believe 

thatthey 

should 

take 

every 

chance 

get 

more 

practical 

knowledge. 

Secondly,they 

thinkthat 

after 

long 

hours 

study,they 

can 

relax 

themselves 

by 

taking 

However, 

large 

group 

have 

little 

interest 

them 

spend 

most 

oftheir 

time 

on 

studies. 

First, 

they 

make 

full 

use 

tostudy. 

Second, 

feel 

activities 

do 

with 

furtherdevelopment.

my 

opinion, 

we 

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active 

pa 

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activities.On 

one 

hand,we 

learn 

great 

deal 

other 

meet 

Besides, 

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society 

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many 

good 

qualities,so 

learningfrom 

textbooksis 

enough.

A 

letter 

about 

Dear 

Tom,

How 

you?

Now 

I 

enjoy 

life 

much. 

Besides 

manysubjects 

at 

school, 

all 

kinds 

class.

We 

different 

ac 

cording 

our 

personal 

hobbies. 

Forexample, 

go 

computer 

Monday 

aboutcomputer 

science. 

also 

improve 

English 

joining 

Corner 

onTuesday.If 

like 

music,we 

join 

the 

Music 

Club 

Thursday.We 

playball 

games 

Friday 

order 

ourselves 

stronger.

Of 

these 

activities,I 

playing 

ball 

best 

because 

health 

veryimportant 

for 

us 

students. 

rich 

andcolourful. 

activities.

Yours,

Wang 

Lin

My 

middle 

life

a.How 

flies!

colourful 

nearly 

ending- 

Here 

what 

Ithink 

myself.

past 

four 

years,I 

was 

proud 

myself 

got 

well 

myclassmates 

grades 

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good,Now, 

interests 

such 

readingbooks, 

sports 

so 

on, 

In 

this 

way, 

knowledge 

andimproved 

life.

As 

future,I 

two 

dreams. 

One 

teacher,and 

tobe 

volunteer. 

Helping 

others 

greatest 

happiness.

Although 

made 

much 

progress 

I'

ll 

try 

even 

better. 

Believingin 

key 

success.

b.Howtimeflies!

Mycolourfuljuniormiddleschoollifeiscomingtoanend.I'

mgladtotellyousomethingaboutmyschoollife.WhenIwassixyearsold,Istartedschool.SinceIbecameastudent,Ihavebeenstudyingveryhard.Myparentsarequiteproudofme.Now,Istudyatakeymiddleschool,whichisnotonlymodernbutalsobeautiful.Theteachersinmyschoolaresokindandhard-workingthatIlovet