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idea;
扫读;
总体感觉(文字,文法,文体,文笔)
三)、通过样文具体对比高分作文与低分作文的特征:
(2006年12月份四级题目为例)
SpringFestivalGalaonCCTV
1、许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会
2、但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3、我的看法
样文一:
TheSpringFestivalGalaonCCTVhaslongbeenatraditionforChinesepeopletocelebratetheNewYear.Itwasverypopularatthebeginning,butnow,somepeoplesuggestthatitshouldbestoppedbecausemanyprogramsareoutdatedandboring.
Inmyopinion,theGalashouldcontinuetobeheldeveryyear.Firstly,itstillhasalargeaudiencewhoprefertospendtheirnewyear’sevewatchingit.Ithasbecomeacustomforthem.Secondly,asitisbroadcastedthroughouttheworld,itcanbeagoodchancetoshowourtraditionalculturetotherestoftheworld.Thirdly,itisanimportantprogramforChinesepeoplelivinginothernations.Bywatchingtheprogram,theycanfeellikebeingathome.
Inaword,theSpringFestivalGalaisquitemeaningful.Itshouldn’tbestopped,butbeheldonyearbyyear.
指出并分析14分作文的特征(归纳得分点及教师评阅时的关注点):
——切题。
表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。
基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
样文二:
Inchina,thereisaSpringFestivalGalaonCCTVontheSpringFestivalEve.Ithasalonghistoryandisveryimportanttoeveryone.Butastimechange,nowpeoplehavetwodifferentopinions.
Ononehand,alotofpeoplestilllikeit,andevenloveit.Ontheeve,thewholefamilycansittogether,andenjoythegreatgala.Afterabusyyear,it’ssogoodthateveryonecanenjoyoneself.Ontheotherhand,somepersonsdon’tthinkso,andasktocancelit.Theythinkthegala’sstyleisoutoffashionandsosimplethattheycompletelyhateit.Thegalacostsalotoftimeandmoney,butdoesn’timpressthematall.
Inmyopinion,thegalaisverybeautiful.Theactorsandactressesspendalotofeffortsonit.Theyhopethatpeoplecanenjoyitandhavefun.Ilikeitverymuch.
指出并分析11分作文标准:
表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
样文三:
SpringFestivalGalaonCCTVisverypopularinChineseformanyyears.LotsofpeopleliketoseeitwhenSpringFestivalcoming.Fromit,theyfeelwarmandhappy.Theycanseemanytraditionalthings,suchasopera,singing,dancingandsoon.Usually,therearesomeinterestingthingshappenedinSpringFestivalGala.
ButsomeotherpeoplethinkthatSpringFestivalGalaonCCTVshouldbeforbidden.Whydotheythinkitisnotgood?
Becausetheysaythatitspendsmuchmoney.Usuallyitcostmorethanmillions.Inanotherway,theSpringFestivalGalaisworsethanbefore.Somanypeoplethinkthatitdoesnotinterestthematall.Theythinktheycafindinterestingfromsomeotherplaces.
IthinkSpringFestivalGalaisstillnecessary,nomattertherearemanypeopleisdisagree.Weshouldhavesomethingreallyfromourcountry’s.IlikeSpringFestivalGala.
指出并分析8分作文的特征(强调此档次的作文为大部分学生可能属于的档次):
——基本切题。
有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;
语言错误相当多,其中一些是严重错误。
注意:
此档作文接近及格分。
样文四:
Nowadays,thereisageneraldiscusstodayabouttheissueofchangesonSpringFestivalGalaonCCTV.
ManypeopleliketowatchingSpringFestivalGalaonCCTV.Particularly,theoldpeopleverylikeit.Firstly,theythoughtthatSpringFestivalGalaonCCTVisgreatandintresting.Secondly,thereisprogramofourChineseculture.Thirdly,maybeitisabletobringhappytothem.
Ofcourse,theotherpolewanttocancelingthat.Ononehands,theyarelikelytodon’tloveit,inotherwords,maybeitissodull.Onanotherhands,peopledon’tlikeitthinkthattheprogramlackofseverecreation.
Inmyopinion,Iagreewiththefirstopinion.Inmychildhood,theprogramismyfavouritethingsandIlove’t.However,IhopeSpringFestivalGalaonTVcouldhavesomechangesandbecamemorebetterthanbefore.
指出并分析5分作文标准:
表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。
大部分句子均有错误,切多数为严重错误。
样文五:
InChina,therehavealargeofnumberpeoplelikestolookSpringFestivalGalaonCCTV.ItisatraditioncustomsforChinesefamily.Theyareargue,SpringFestivalGalamoreandmoredelightandhappiness.
Recent,therehavesomepeoplesuggestthatSpringFestivalGalawascancelledwouldratherbetter.TheyarethinkthattraditionSpringFestivalGalawasverylimitedThenSpringFestivalGalabecameverynotinterestinginthisoveryearsandpeoplewasboringwiththisform.
Inmyparts,Ithinkeverythingsisdouble.So,wemustthingmatterseverypartsduringourthoughtwithSpringfestivalGalawetherornotcontinullivesonTV.Itiswillbehavesomepeoplewaslived.OrItiswillbehaveanotherpeoplewasdislikedthatwemustthoughtwiththem.
指出并分析2分作文标准:
——条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎。
二、英语写作句子结构及常见错误分析归纳:
一)、英语的句子结构。
英语的句子结构分为三种:
简单句,并列句和复合句,其中并列句和复合句又是由若干个简单句所组成。
简单句:
Thetrainarrives.Theseahadbecomecalmagain..
并列句:
Theymuststayinwater,ortheywilldie.Itisnotcheap,butitisverygood.
复合句:
Theofficethatdealswithpassportisupstairs.Whenhewokeup,theseahadbecomecalmagain.
简单句的基本结构有五种:
1.主语+谓语Thingschange.
2.主语+连系动词+表语Treesaregreen.
3.主语+谓语+宾语Mysisterwillfixeverything.
4.主语+谓语+直接或间接宾语Heboughthiswifearing.
5.主语+谓语+宾语+宾补Ifoundthebookeasy.
由于表达意义的复杂化,句与句之间衔接照应,修辞的使用和语言省略的原则等使得原本简单的这五种句子的基本结构在实际的使用中呈现了复杂化,多样化的趋势。
如:
1.Plainlyenough,anyonemustrealizeitwhoreflectsuponthemannerinwhichtheyreachpublicoffice.
2.In1600theearthwasnotthecenteroftheuniversebecausethemajoritythensupposeditwas;
nor,becauseshehadmorereaders,wasEllaWheelerWilcoxabetterpoetthanFatherHopkins.
二)、常见错误分析
词法错误:
(一)冠词错误:
(二)名词错误:
可数不可数、用词不当
(三)形容词、副词错误:
用词不当、比较级最高级用法
(四)动词错误:
及物与不及物,动宾搭配、情态动词的误用,特殊句型therebe的误用
(五)介词错误:
介词误用以及介词to和动词不定式的混淆。
句法错误
(一)、不一致:
主谓不一致(人称不一致,数的不一致,时态不一致以及代词不一致)
(二)、修饰语错位
(三)、句子不完整
(四)、词性误用:
介词当动词用;
形容词当副词用;
名词当动词用等.
(五)、指代不清
(六)、句子的连接
例.Therearemanywayswegettoknowtheoutsideworld.
时态的误用(现在、过去、进行、完成及将来时)
标点错误和首字母大写错误
中国式英语
(一)汉语思维
1.However,everythinghasitsblackside.2.Howthegovernmentwilldowiththem?
3.Whenyouconvenient,youcanhelpme.
(二)英汉语序机械对译
Ifsomeone’sfamilysituationisnotwell,hecanapplyforloantobank.(误)
Letalonetouchtheoutsideworldofcampus/keepagoodbodyhealth(误)
三、第一讲课后练习(句子改错)
(一)冠词错误
1.Suchopinionleadstosurprisingwasteofwater.
2.Andwidespreadofeducationisalsoagoodreason.
3.Pollutionisthebiggestproblemofthecities.
4.Idon’tthinknumbershaveanythingtodowiththeluck.
(二)名词错误
1.Toomuchtestsaredisadvantageforstudents’study.
2.Inmodernsociety,peopleareundervariouspressures.
3.Twosolutionshavebeenrecommendedsofar,andeachonehasbothadadvantageanddisadvantage.
4.Theydon’tgetequalpayforequaljob.
5.Theyaremanyreasonswhichhavecausedsuchachange.
(三)形容词错误
1.Themorehastyyouare,theslower.
2.Inbigcities,especiallyinShanghai,citytrafficistoodifficult.
3.Inmodernsociety,therelationshipbetweennaturalscienceandsocialsciencehasbecomemoreandmoreclose.
(四)副词错误
1.Infact,freshwaterisexactlyinadequate.
2.However,theopportunitywillnotrunintoyouvoluntarily.
3.Inaddition,people’slivingstandardisbecomingmoreandmorehighly.
(五)动词错误
Thetrafficaccidentwastakenplaceatthejunctionoftwohighways.
2.Becauseofhisexcellentperformance,thebossrosehissalary.
3.Itmaynotgoodtoourhealth.(情态动词的误用)
4.Theyshouldspentmuchtime.
5.Thereexistssomenewproblemssuchasbeingdishonest.(therebe句型的误用)
6.Therearemanywayssolvetheproblemoftuitionfees.
7.Wemustpayattentiontoitandmakesolutionstotheproblem.(动宾搭配不当)
8.Italsomayhelpyoutomakesuccess.
(六)介词错误
1.Toomanytestswilldoharmtocultivateourindependentthinking.
2.Allthesecontributedtosolvetheseriousproblem.
3.Inconclusion,Ibelievethattheopportunitiesareabundantinoursocietyandeveryoneis
equalforthem.(介词误用)
4.Asthedevelopmentofsociety,moreandmorepeoplehavetheaccessofcomputers.
(七)句法错误
1.Whenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.
2.IbelieveIcandoitwellandIwillbetterknowtheworldoutsidethecampus.
3.Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.
4.Todowellincollege,goodgradesareessential.
5.Nonecannegativetheimportanceofmoney.
6.Andwecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingityourself.
7.Therearemanywayswegettoknowtheoutsideworld.
(七)时态的误用
1.Withtheopeningofourcountrytowardtheworldinrecentyears,Englishbecomesmoreand
moreimportant.
2.Theneedformorejobsmakesusdevelopourindustries.
3.IadmiredscientistswhenIwasalittlechild,fortheyknewalot.
第二讲:
四级作文考试题型及分析;
议论文的谋篇布局
一、历年真题分析
通过对1997年至2010年四级作文题目的分析,可将四级作文文体归纳为以下几类:
一)传统的提纲式议论文
1997年1月CET作文题目 PracticeMakesPerfect
1.怎样理解“熟能生巧”?
2.例如:
在英语学习中......
3.又如......
1997.6MyViewonJob-hopping
1.有人喜欢始终从事一种工作,因为
2.有人喜欢经常更换工作,因为
3.我的看法
1998.1HarmfulnessofFakeCommodities
1.目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品,为什么会有这种现象
2.举例说明说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人社会的危害
1998.6DoLuckyNumbersReallyBringGoodLuck?
1.有些人认为某些数字回带来运气
2.也有些人认为数字与运气无关
3.试说明你的看法
1999.1Don’tHesitatetoSay“No”
1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说不
2.为什么有些人在该说不的时候不说不
3.该说不时不说不的坏处
1999.6ReadingSelectivelyorExtensively
1.有人认为读书要有选择
2.有人认为应当博览群书
2000.6IsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary?
1.很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是
2.也有人持不同意见
3.我的看法和打算
2003.1ItPaystoBeHonest
1.最近社会上出现了一些不诚实的现象。
2.诚实利人利己;
怎样做到诚实。
2005.12ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoT
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