雅思基础写作笔记Word格式.docx
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长度
任务指令
评估
任务1
20分钟
150字
描述图,
流程图
曲线图
柱状图
饼状图
表格图
任务完成情况
连贯与衔接
词汇资源
语法范围与准确性
任务2
40分钟
250字
议论文:
①要求评估问题提供解决方法
②比较对比不同的观点或看法
③反驳论点或观点
任务回应
盖楼房:
图纸:
思路拓展+作文模板
原料:
词汇+句型
★写作困境(5.5---6)
1.没有思想:
2.没有语言:
3.表达不够地道:
Somepeoplesaidthatyoungerpeopleshouldholdimportantpositionsinthegovernments.Othersbelievethatitisnotproper.Discussbothsidesandgiveyouropinions?
有人认为年轻人应该在政府中担任要职,有人反对,讨论两方观点,给出你的意见。
Sosevereistheenvironmentalcontaminationthatwehavenoalternativebuttoadoptsomeeffectivemeasurestoresolveit.
思路拓展
H:
health
健康:
有益健康,有害健康,增强免疫力,威胁健康(孩子们看电视,在家学习和办公,体罚孩子,汽车的利弊,群体性体育运动,体育课,吸烟)
1.Beingaddictedtotheon-linegames/Receivinghome-educationvia(通过)theInternet/Longtimedriving/Eatingtoomuchfastfoodsradiationofthemobilephone/watchingtoomuchtelevisionsufferingfromthepressureofstudyisphysicallydetrimental(有害身体健康)
bedetrimentaltoone’shealth/growth不利于健康/成长
2.Beingaddictedtotheon-linegames/TV/Receivinghome-educationviatheInternet/longtimedriving/Eatingtoomuchfastfoods/lackofphysicalexerciseisahealth-threateningactivity/practice.(威胁健康的活动)
3.Strengtheningthephysicalexercises/theclosefamilyrelationship/theassuranceofenoughsleep/toavoidtheintakeofjunkfoods/well-balanceddiet/well-connectedinterpersonalrelationshipisbeneficialtoone’shealth(增进健康)
4.Regularphysicalexercise/doingsomejogging/aerobicexercises(有氧运动)couldbuildone’sphysique(增进体质)
5.toeatfruitsandvegetablesRegularphysicalexercisecouldstrengthenone’simmunesystem(增强免疫力)
E:
education(解决问题类话题)
接受良好的教育,没有接受良好的教育,教育公众/消费者,提供教育的机会,教育资源的不合理分配,教育是最好的投资,懂得教育的常识。
Thanksto
Tobewell-educated
1.Someyoungstersembarkonthecriminalroads/breakthelaw/anumberofyoungstersfailtosecureanidealjobduetopooreducation(由于没有受过良好的教育)Therefore,whatisneedediseducation.(因此,所需要的就是教育)
2.Thosedisrespectfulyoungstersshouldbeeducatedtofostertheawarenessofrespectingtheold.---应该被教育以养成---(年轻人不尊老)
foster=cultivate=develop=nurture培养
3.Thepublicshouldbeeducatedto
4.
Foster/cultivate
improve/strengthentheirawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.(环保)
improve=promote=enhance提高
perfect=better=optimize改善
5.Therefore,whatisneededistopopularizeeducation.因此,所需要的就是教育
6.receiveaneducationwithahighquality接受良好的教育(出国,国家给教育买单,孩子出生在富裕家庭)
7.Educationisaninvestmentinheaven.教育是最好的投资。
8.receivefineeducationwithuniformquality接受同等质量的教育(反对分班教育)
9.theunfairallocationofeducationalresources教育资源的不合理分配(反对分班教育)
gettoknowthecommonsenseofeducation
value
了解教育的常识(老师的作用)
receivethecustom-madeeducation
10.Parentaleducationandguidanceishighlyrecommended.提倡父母的教育和指导(青少年犯罪,孩子看电视)
1月23日基础写作第二次
计划:
思路拓展+词汇升级
M:
money
节俭钱;
浪费钱;
创造经济价值;
增加政府的税收;
造成政府的财政紧张;
给国家、家庭、监狱建设增加了经济负担;
兼职可以缓解财政的负担。
1.Theboomofthetourism/adsindustry/thedevelopmentofhigh-tech/tohostsportsevents/toprotectoldandhistoricbuildingscouldgenerate/bringaboutimmense/greatcommercialvalue/benefits带来巨大的商业价值(广告和旅游)
2.Ads/tourism/educationisanindispensablesourceofgovernmentaltax政府税收的必不可少的渠道(广告和旅游)
Compulsorycourse
3.Theinvestmentinthepublicartprojects/outerspaceexplorationamountstomakingthemoneyfly浪费钱(反对政府投资)
4.Receivingdistanceeducation/Travelingonone’sownisextremelycost-effectiveandeconomical省钱(网络教育和自己旅行)
5.couldbeveryeconomicalintransportationandcaterings(交通和餐饮方面很节省)
6.wearingschooluniformisextremelyeconomical穿校服很省钱---beeconomicalinsth=befrugalwith/ofsth在---方面很节省
6.beeconomicallyindependentthusease/lightenthefinancialburdenofthefamily经济独立和缓解家庭财政负担(workingasapart-timer=embarkingon/takinguppart-timejobs)
8.__________imposemuchpressureuponanationeconomically照成经济压力(反对政府投资政策)
Crippletheeconomy
morality:
(动物试验,死刑,安乐死,堕胎,虚假广告,体罚孩子)
Animalexperiment/deathpenalty/mercykilling (安乐死)/physicalpunishment(体罚)/
usingsmallanimalsatrandom(任意使用小动物)isimmoralandanactofcruelty.残忍的行为
2.Abortion(堕胎)isnotonlyimmoralbutalsoinhumane.
4.Producingtheillegalproducts/disrespectingtheaged/tospitandlitterinpublic(丢垃圾和吐痰)
plagiarism(
学术剽窃)disobeysthesocialmorality/publicvirtue
Thus,itisofgreatsignificanceforpeopletofindoutitsagingpopulation’s/youthcrime’scausesandascertainsomesolutionstoresolveit.(问题解决型过渡句)
2)Agreatdealofwealth
2)agreatdealoftime
Arangeofknowledge
许多的课程
awiderangeofsubjects
bunchesoffriends
aseriesofproblems
C:
cultureandcommunication
1.Internationaltourism/adsisbeneficialtoculturaldiversity/communication.
2.Studyingabroad/traveling/learninganewlanguagecoulddeepenone’sinsightintoanotherculture.
Inmostcases,generationgap(代沟)/thedecompositionoffamilybonds(家庭纽带的分解)couldbeattributedtothefactof(归结于---的事实)fewcommunications.
Knockdown
Teardown
Intact
Views
Peoplearetoobusytohaveaneffectivecommunicationwiththeirfamilymembers.
C:
convenienceandefficiency(方便和效率---科技话题,新事物话题)
_______greatlyfacilitate______
1.Theinventionofthemobilephone/airplane/car/Thedevelopmentofhigh-techbringhugeconveniencetomodernpeople/people’slife.(带来了极大的方便性)
2.Listeningtomusic/Strengtheningthephysicalexercise/Theusethe
3.
4.telecommuting(远程办公)/thedistancelearningcouldenhancetheefficiencyoflearning/working/communication可以提高---的效率
eradicate
knockdown
teardown
Hemmccstreet
Toopenabookisalwaysbeneficial
Strengthenone’sculturaldeposits
Deepenone’sinsightintolife/oneself
Matureone’sthought
Instillconfidenceintooneself
addspicetolife
relaxone’smind/mood
mouldone’stemperature陶冶情操
enrich/enlargeone’sknowledgescope
broaden/widenone’shorizons/vision
bringaboutearth-shakingchangesin______
subtle
exertaprofound
influenceon
insteadof
Themostobviousreasonforhousingshortage/youthcrime/agingpopulationisthat
Anotherreasonisthat
on-linegame
thedevelopmentofhigh-tech
Themobilephone
watershortage
housingshortage
Neverhasthetopicconcerning______failedtocatchpublic’sattention
S:
psychology(与人相关)
Ø
体罚
大学生择业难
老龄化
1.Physicalpunishment/exposingtothoseviolentorbloodycontents/single-sexschool(男女分校)/
2.
separatingthetopstudentsfromthoseslowlearners(分班教育)ispsychologically/mentallydetrimental(心理上有害健康)
3.TV/TheInternet/
4.Uni-sexschoolexertsgreatnegativeinfluenceonthementalityandphysiqueoftheyoung对于身心照成了不良的影响
Thosewhoreceivehomeeducationmight
unity
manage
servethefunctionof
andcost-effective
violation
conduceto
____haveprofoundlyrevolutionized_____
bringaboutearth-shakingchanges
In
AV
Adult-only
Foster
Cultivate
Agingpopulation
Thesameknifecutsbreadaswellasfingers.
debatable
5.matureone’sthought/mentality成熟一个人的心态(reading/working/studyingabroad/traveling)
6.mislead/misguideone’slifeoutlook/attitude误导人生观
(negativemassmedia)
7.
8.
9.(negativemassmedia)
10.poison/corrupt(腐蚀)one’sinnocentmind毒害人的纯净心灵
adult-only=X-rated(青少年禁看的)X级片=pornographic=dirty=bluepress=sex
11.arouseone’sviolentimpulse诱发暴力冲动
12.cultivateone’steamworkspiritandawarenessofcooperation培养团队精神和合作意识(群体性经验/教育的目的)
theInternet
T:
technology(新事物)
1.Technology/high-techistheprimeforceofproductivity.=Scienceandtechnologyconstituteaprimaryproductiveforce(科技是第一生产力)
2.High-techhasalreadyrevolutionizedmodernpeople’slifeintransport,communicationandeducation.(高科技改变了人们的生活)
3._________isadouble-edgedsword.双刃剑(总结)
4.cybercrime=
on-linecrime(网络犯罪)
computerhacker(电脑黑客)
invadeone’sprivacy(侵犯隐私)
stealone’spassword(偷取密码)
distribute(传播)violent,andpornographicinformation.
R:
right/obligation/duty(权利,责任,义务)(社会热点话题---住房短缺,人口老龄化,大学生择业难,环境污染,青少年犯罪)
Itistheunshakable/compellingobligationofgovernment/astate/parents/publicto
①enactrelevantlawsto/②developtheeconomyto_______这是是政府不可推卸责任去------(政府的责任,一是立法,一是发展经济)
1.Itiseveryone’sdutyto(人人有责)①protecttheenvironment/②bewiseconsumers(如何避免受到广告的不良影响)
2.Animalexperimentisaobviousviolationofthebasicrightofsubsistence(生存)这是对于---的基本权利的公然侵害
例:
Forthoseslow/normal/averagelearners,separationinteachingisanobviousviolationofthebasicrightofreceivingeducationwithuniformquality.(反对分班教育)
euthanasia=mercykilling
Seenfromtheperspectiveof---
Plagiarism
environment(家庭,社会,自然)
1.Millionsofyoungoffenders(少年犯)embarkonthecriminalroadduetothefamilyviolenceandparents’divorce由于家庭的暴力和父母的离异(回答了青少年犯罪的原因)
2.comefromthesingle-parentfamily来自单亲家庭
3.receivefinehomeparenting/education接受良好的家庭教育
4.over-industrialization/
5.overexploitationoftourismwillinevitablyruin/damage/hurtthenaturalenvironment破坏自然环境
6.increasinglyhotcompetitionresultinthepressureofseekingajob激烈的竞争会导致择业难/people’sunhealthycondition.
7.competitiveatmosphere(竞争的氛围)andpressurefromthepeers(同龄人压力)couldhelpthelearnerstoconcentrate
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