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本次托福独立写作是儿童教育类,新题,但也是传统的儿童教育类,意思是你认为要跟小孩分享的事情最重要的是哪一个,第一是要让他们生活有条理,第二是要诚实,第三是要乐于助人,典型的三选一题型,还是用上课时候讲过的文章结构和方法去写作即可,可以两段支持段加一段反证段,也可以一段支持段加两段反证段,灵活使用即可。
这里选择第一个。
首先,being
organized是他们今后独立生活的必备能力。
其实现在很多孩子的小时候的生活都是父母在安排,孩子只要被动的接受并且执行,其实没有自己的想法,而这则会使他们对父母产生过度的依赖,会对他们独立生活会产生消极影响,导致自己无法自理生活,而如果从小就学习如何能够井井有条的安排自己的生活的话,他们以后就可以自己很独立很好的生活。
其次,being
organized能减轻他们以后生活和学习的压力。
其实,现在很多学生都有拖延症,就是因为不会安排自己的时间,导致拖到最后自己压力很大,这甚至到high-level
education还会发生,所以being
organized是一种管理生活和学习的能力,能够考虑好每件事情要做的时间点,知道在正确时间做正确的事情,这样的话不仅可以按时完成自己的学习或者工作任务,还可以让自己的生活压力减缓很多。
另外,being
honest虽然也很重要,但其实在今后的生活中,一个人是很难保持百分之百诚实的,因为有一些场合是需要说谎的,比如说有些善意的谎言,而且在某些情况下,诚实反而会冒犯到他人,比如直接指出他人的缺陷或者短处,所以说孩子应该要在自己的生活和社交过程中去体会如何在不冒犯他人的情况下去保持诚实,这是在他们小时候可能无法理解的事情,这是需要时间去磨练和积累的。
当然,being
helpful也是一个很重要的品质,但同样地,帮助他人也要看情况,不能一味的帮助他们,这样的话有时候使得他人对自己产生过度的依赖,反而对他们的能力产生负面效果。
而这些也是孩子在小时候难以学习的道理。
词汇:
1.traditionalvirtue传统道德
2.absolutetruth完全的事实
3.Confrontation对抗
4.Blotch弄脏
5.dilemma困境、窘境
6.inthelongrun长期
7.betrayal背叛
8.overwhelm胜过
9.derivefrom从...获得
新托福独立写作范文一:
Thetraditionalvirtueofhonestyinallsituationsisincreasinglydoubted
bymanyintoday’sworld.Manybelievethatbeinghonestisnotalwaysthebest
policywhendealingwithpeopleandshallnotbesharedwithchildren.Bethat
asitmay,thisessaywillexploretheimportanceofbeinghonestin
relationshipsbetweenpeople.
Undeniably,Sharingvaluesofbeinghonestexposeschildrentothecruel
world.Weallunderstandthatoftenthetruthisoffendingandmaynotbeavery
nicethingtobothhearorsay.Even,manywouldagreethatifacompanyisto
telltheabsolutetruthaboutit’sproducts,noonewouldbeinterestedineven
havingalookattheproducts.Thesamelogicalsoappliestohuman
relationships.ifyourfriendhadwornanewlypurchaseddressonherbirthday
andenergeticallyaskedyouifitwasaworthybuy,wouldyoufreelyexpress
youropinionthatyouhadneverseenadressastheoneshe’scurrentlywearing?
andspoilherbirthday?
unarguably,hiding(entirelyorparticularly)thetruth
insomesituationscanbequitehandyindeed.confrontationsanddisputescan
seeminglybeavoided.
However,thereisalwaystheriskfactorofthetruthemergingsooneror
laterwhentellinganuntruth.thebasictrustinanyrelationships
friends,parentsandchildrenwillbeblotched,andwouldhaveanimpactonthe
futurerelationshipbetweenbothparties.thestoryofthe“theboywhocried
wolf”fullyillustratestheconsequencesoftellinglies.noonewillbelieve
youwhenyou’retellingthetruth.Therefore,afterpresentingthevalueof
honestytochildren,theywillavoidfallinginthedilemma.
Inaddition,another“badfactor”oftellinguntruthsisthatyouhave
absolutelynocontroloverwhenthetruthwillemerge.untruthsbreedpainin
bothparties:
tearswhenthetruthisuncoveredafteraperiodoftime;
inthe
longrun,itseemsthathidingthetruthisnotbeneficialtoeitherparty.In
contrast,deliveringthevalueofbeinghonesttochildren,childrenwillhave
noworriesoffearingthetruthtobeexposed.Therefore,thelifewillbe
easierthanthosechoosingtocoverupthesecrets.
Everyonehatesbetrayal.evenifitisthetrendtooccasionallyhidethe
truthinrelationships,itisstronglyrecommendedthatnottofollowthattrend
astheriskandtheconsequencesofthetruthunfoldedoverwhelmstheminimal
advantagesonecanderivefromnottellingthetruth.Afterall,itis
understoodthatrelationshipsarefoundedon“trust”whichgoeshandinhand
with“truth”.Indeedhonestyisthemostimportantconsiderationinany
relationshipbetweenpeople.Asaresult,thisvalueshouldbeshared
greatly.(wordcount:
472)
新托福独立写作范文二:
Asthefirstteacherofachild,parentsplayapivotalroleinchildren’s
growth,whichisnotjustrestrictedtophysicalwell-beingbutincludes
personality-buildingandpsychologicalhealth.Especiallyforyoungchildren
aged5to10,parentsarelikerolemodelsthatchildrenadmireandtryto
imitate.So,therearemanygoodtraitsthatparentsaresupposedtohelp
childrendevelop,suchasbeinghonest,beinghelpfulandbeingorganized.Inmy
mind,thefirstlessonchildrenatthisageshouldlearnishonesty.
Tobeginwith,honestyisthevaluablecharacterforachildtobeaccepted
byothers.Tomaintainfriendlyrelationship,peopleneedmutualtrust.Itis
vitalthatachildishonesttoparents,playmates,teachersandanyonethey
meet.Atyoungage,theymaybesimplyblamedfortellinglies,butwhenthey
growup,whatdishonestycoststhemisthelossoftrust,andgraduallytheymay
beisolated.Inaword,parentsshouldtimelypointoutchildren’sliesand
appropriatelyhelpthemcorrectthemistake.Forinstance,thereasonwhya
childrefusestoadmithebreaksthevaseishefearsparents’punishment.But,
ifhefindshisliescanhelphimavoidpunishmentandthusgetsusedtolying,
thelosswillfinallybecomeunbearableandirreversibleinfutureworkor
study.
Secondly,childrenshouldalsolearntobehonesttothemselves.
Inevitably,peoplewillencountersomesituationsorconsequencesthattheyare
unwillingtoconfront.Atthismoment,someonemaychoosetodeceivethemselves
andescapefromreality.Throughconstantlylyingtothemselves,theymay
finallyforgetthetruthandacceptliestheymakeupasfacts.Forexample,
whenachilddoesnotwanttoadmithelosesagameatschool,hemaymakeup
someexcusestocheathimself,suchasunfairreferee,andrefusestoadmitthe
competitoractuallyisstronger.Consequently,oncehefindssanctuaryinlies,
thedishonestytoinnerheartstopshimfromtraininghardertowinthegamebut
encouragescomplaintsandself-abandonment.Parentsatthistimehavetheduty
tomotivatechildrentobreakliesandbehonesttothemselvesbravely.
Admittedly,beingcooperativeandorganizedisalsosignificant
characteristicthatchildrenoughttopossesssinceyoung.Tokeepeverythingin
orderistheprerequisiteforonetomaintainhighefficiencyinworkorstudy.
Inaddition,kind-heartedpeopleareusuallypopularamongpeopleandcaneasily
expandsocialcircle.Forexample,parentscanencouragechildrentokeeptheir
roomtidyandorganized,andorganizechildrenintheneighborhoodtojoinin
communityservices.However,forallthevaluabletraitsthatchildrenshould
share,whatcomesfirstmustbehonesty.Anorganizedandhelpfulliercannever
becalledarespectfulperson.
Insummary,goodparentingisofgreatsignificanceinchildren’sgrowth.
Itisparents’responsibilitytoequipchildrenwithgoodpersonalitiesat
formativeyears.Amongallthedesirabletraitschildrenshouldcultivate,
honestyisalwaysthemostvaluableone.
TOEFL真题2
x0916托福独立写作题目:
电脑,手机,电脑游戏:
有趣,帮助孩子放松
但是缺点明显,孩子缺乏锻炼,缺乏与人沟通
简单玩具:
益智,激发想象力,例如乐高
和朋友一起玩:
锻炼沟通能力,拓展社交圈
Nowadays,childrenrelytoomuchonthetechnology,likecomputers,
smartphone,videogamesforfunandentertainment;
playingsimpletoysor
playingoutsidewithfriendswouldbebetterforthechildren’sdevelopment.
范文:
Undoubtedly,childrentoday,asthemosttech-savviestgenerationin
history,canhardlyliveadaywithoutcomputersandsmartphoneswhichplayan
importantroleintheirstudyandentertainment.However,asthetimechildren
spendwithdigitalsdevicesskyrockets,bothparentsandeducatorsstartto
worryabouttheperilsofnewtechnologyandadvocatethatitismoremeaningful
forchildrentoplaywithsimpletoysandmeetfriends.
Admittedly,childrenacquiremuchjoyfromcomputersandsmartphones.The
welldesignedcomputergamesneverfailtofascinatetheirplayerswithvivid
figures,attractiverewards,andcheerfulmusic.Itisevenmorejoyfulwhen
classmatesareplayingtogetheronline.Inaddition,almosteverychildwhohas
asmartphonewillinstallchattingsoftware.Astheyalsohavethestrongdesire
tobeconnected,theykeeptalkingwitheachotherevenafterschoolonthe
phone.Ifthereisanythingthattheyarereluctanttocommunicatewithparents
orbrothersandsistersathome,itismorefuntochatwithclassmates.
However,asthereareself-evidentdisadvantagesofplayingcomputersor
smartphones,suchaslackofexercises,pooreyesightandisolationfromreal
world,parentsandeducatorsadvocatereplacement:
simpletoysandmeeting
friends.Tobeginwith,therearemanytoysthatnotonlybringasmuchjoyas
computersandsmartphonesdo,butalsohelpchildrenprovokethinkingand
activateimagination.Comparedwithcomputergameswhichrequirefewthoughts
butsimpleexercisesoffingers,thosetoysencouragechildrentomakemore
effortsinthegameandrewardsthemwithstrongersenseofachievement.Oneof
thebestexamplesmustbeLego,atoywelcomedbymanyfamiliesglobally.With
numeroussmallpiecesofdifferentcolorspiledup,childrenareabletobuild
anythingintheirmind,likeanarchitecture,ananimalandacartoon
character.
Secondly,communicationandinteractionwithfriendsisabsolutelymore
importantinchildren’sdevelopment.Whileentertainingwithcomputersor
smartphones,childrenareusuallyabsorbedintheirowninnerworldandpay
littleattentiontoothers.Theunwillingnessoftalkingtootherswill
graduallymakechildrenisolatedandweakentheircommunicationability.Thisis
exactreasonwhyitisvitalf
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