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automobile

choice

option

enough

sufficient

find

discover

finish

accomplish

first

initial

giveup

surrender

hide

conceal

livelongerthan

survive

lucky

fortunate

make

manufacture

man-made

artificial

outofdate

obsolete

overcome

conquer

putoff

postpone

putupwith

tolerate

takepartin

participatein

unwilling

reluctant

wordy

redundant

（2）善用具体词汇

笼统词

具体词

good

kind、honest、just、generous、affectionate、selfless、friendly

cry

weep、sob、whimper、sniffle、wail、moan、groan

scientist

mathematician、physicist、biologist、chemist、linguist

fruit

apple、banana、peach、watermelon、grape、pear、orange、lemon

foralongtime

forhourslong、forthreeweeks、forfiveyears、fordecades、forcenturies

形体化

A. 

Theinjuredfootballerlimped（跛行）slowlyoffthefield.

B. 

Thevictoriousarmymarched（迈进）intotheconqueredcity.

C. 

Thepedestriansrushed（快步走）hereandthereintherain.

D. 

Theman,whosewifewasexpectingthefirstbaby,waspacing（踱步）nervouslyupanddownthehospitalcorridor.

E. 

Themanagerstrode（大步走）intotheofficeandaskedwhowaslateforwork.

F. 

Wewandered（瞎转）aroundforhourslookingforthehouse.

G. 

Shejustdrags（步履拖沓）alongafteruswhereverwego.

感官化

Raincamedownandbrokethesilence.

Afteralonghush,bigraindropscamepitter-patteringdown,shatteringtheeeriesilence.

细节化

speak讲话 

talk交谈

tell讲述 

explain解释 

mention提及 

narrate讲述

lie撒谎 

whisper耳语

discuss讨论 

utter出声

persuade劝说 

quote引述

libel诋毁 

murmur低语

comment、observe、remark评价 

declare、announce宣称

（3）同义替换

Welovedthefoodsomuch,especiallythefishdishes.

Ipreferwalkingalone.

Ireallyadmirepeoplewhocanworkinsuchdifficultconditions.

IwanttotravelbecauseIenjoymeetingpeopleandseeingnewplaces.

Sheisfondofplayingthepiano.

Babiesareattractedtobrightcolours.

Idon’tcareforcoffee.

H. 

ManysoccerfansarecrazyaboutDavidBeckham.

I. 

He’sthefirstrealboyfriendshe’shadandshe’smadabouthim.

J. 

ManyWesternersarekeenonJackieChan’skungfufilms.

K. 

Hehasbeenaddictedtothedrug.

L. 

Someadultsarehookedoncomputergamesaswell.

陈词滥调

建议替换词

sometimes

nowandthen、fromtimetotime、onceinawhile、occasionally

show（表明）

indicate、reveal、suggest、illustrate、demonstrate、manifest

person、people

individuals、characters

have（有）

enjoy、possess

think

believe、claim、maintain、argue、insist、harbourtheideathat、holdtheviewthat、itiswidelyacknowledgedthat

thing

affair、issue、matter

should

besupposedto（但表示虚拟语气的should不能替换）

famous

well-known、popular、renowned、legendary、prestigious、high-profile

hardworking

industrious、conscientious

important、necessary

essential、crucial、indispensable、ofvitalimportance、ofgreatmomentum/magnitude/significance

cause

giverise/birthto、leadto、resultin、trigger、contributeto

becauseof

thanksto、dueto、onaccountof、onthegroundsof

many

avarietyof、numerous、awidearrayof

couldn’t、didn’t

failedto

remember

bear/keepinmindthat、learnbyheart

very

exceedingly、extremely

makesb.dosth.

enablesb.todosth.

maybe…、perhaps…

Chancesarethat…

inmyopinion/view

personally、formypart、asfarasIamconcerned、frommyownperspective

inordertodosth.

inaneffort/attempttodosth.、forthepurposeofdoingsth.、withaviewtodoingsth.

payattentionto

place/putapremiumon、setgreatstoreby

drawpublicattention

arousewidepublicconcern

catchupwiththerecentprogress

keeppacewith/keepabreastofthelatestdevelopment

trytodosth.

attempttodosth.、meantodosth.、endeavourtodosth.

beagainststh、disagreewithsth

oppose、objectto、frownonsth

advantagesanddisadvantages、meritsanddemerits、goodpointsandbadpoints

benefitsandrisks、prosandcons、promisesandthreats、strengthsandweaknesses

doharmto、hurt

endanger、jeopardize、compromise

beautiful、interesting

fascinating、enchanting、inviting、captivating

Differentpeoplehavedifferentideas.

Viewson…varyfrompersontoperson；

Thereasonsarevaried；

Anumberoffactorscouldaccountforthis.

Therearetwocauses.

Peopleholdontothisviewpointpartlybecause…,partlybecause…；

Thecausesaretwofold.

（4）注意搭配

搭配松散：

Myteacherhelpedmeverymuch.（alot）

Chineseeconomyhasdevelopedverymuch.（rapidly）

Afriendmustknowyouverymuch.（well）

搭配错误

quickfood

Myfatherisanexcessivesmoker.

Theydidalotofefforttofinishthejobontime.

Iproposedtotakeafinalpartywithotherclassmates.

Iaskedhertogooutofthekitchenandwaittheresult.

（1）长短句更替

Theanimaltrainerdoveintothepool.Thetrainerwasskilledandathletic.Shewasexcitedwhenshedoveintothepool.Sheswamwithtwodolphins.Thedolphinswerebabies.Thedolphinswereplayful.Thetrainerswamwiththedolphinsforoveranhour.Whenthetrainerswamwiththedolphins,shewashappy.

Theskilled,athleticanimaltrainerexcitedlydoveintothepool,whereshehappilyswamforoveranhourwithtwoplayfulbabydolphins.

Theanimaltrainerwasskilledandathletic.Sheexcitedlydoveintothepool,wherethereweretwoplayfulbabydolphins.Sheswamwiththemhappilyforoveranhour.

下面是五种将短句变长的方法，请注意划线部分的改动。

1）将简单句合并为并列句和复合句

例1：

Thetyphooncontainedstrongwindandheavyrain.Duringthestorm,theroofofthetownlibrarycollapsed.Theroofofthepostofficedidthesame.Thetorrentialrainfloodedthecountyroads.Schoolscancelledclassesduetotheconditions.

改为：

Thetyphoon,containingstrongwindandheavyrain,causedtheroofsofthetownlibraryandthepostofficetocollapse,createdfloodsoncountyroads,andforcedschoolstocancelclasses.

例2：

Today,greatwealthaboundsinNingbo.Thewealthiscentredintheoilindustry.However,fewmanufacturingjobsarestillavailable.

AlthoughthereismuchwealthcentredinNingbo’soilindustrytoday,therearefewmanufacturingjobsavailable.

2）改短句为非限定性动词短语，包括不定式、分词和动名词短语

WhenJerrylefttheroom,hewaswhiningandcrying.HewasconvincedthatIwasacruelman.

Whiningandcrying,JerrylefttheroomconvincedthatIwasacruelman.

Inreality,wecanoftenfindthatmanypeoplearecomplainingthattheirdifficultiesaresogreatthattheycannotovercomethesedifficultiesthemselves.

Inreality,wecanoftenfindmanypeoplecomplainingthattheirdifficultiesaretoogreattoovercome.

例3：

Theproblemwhichwasnotsolvedwillbediscussedatthenextmeeting.

Theunsolvedproblemwillbediscussedatthenextmeeting.

例4：

IstillrememberthatIwastakentothecountrybymyuncleasachild.

Istillrememberbeingtakentothecountrybymyuncleasachild.

3）改短句为介词短语

TherearemanyreasonswhyIopposebilingualeducationattheprimaryschoollevel.

Foranumberofreasons,Iopposebilingualeducationattheprimaryschoollevel.

Althoughitwasraininghard,hegotthereintime.

Hegotthereintimeinspiteofheavyrain.

4）改短句为同位语结构短语

BeijingisthecapitalofChina.Itisalsothesecondlargestcityinthiscountry.

ThecapitalofChina,Beijingisthesecondlargestcityinthiscountry.

或者：

Beijing,thecapitalofChina,isthesecondlargestcityinthiscountry.

Beijing,thesecondlargestcityinChina,isthecapitalofthiscountry.

NoamChomskyisaworld-renownedlinguist.HeisInstituteProfessorofLinguisticsatMIT.HerecentlypublishedhisfourthbookonAmericanforeignpolicies.Heisseventy-oneyears’oldatthetime.

NoamChomsky,aworld-renownedlinguistandInstituteProfessorofLinguisticsatMIT,recentlypublishedhisfourthbookonAmericanforeignpoliciesattheageofseventy-oneyears’old.

5）改短句为独立主格结构短语

Sirenswereblaringandthefireengineswerejustpullingup.

Sirensblaring,thefireengineswerejustpullingup.

Itrainedonandon.Streetswerefloodedandbuseswereboggeddown.

Itrainedonandon,streetsfloodedandbusesboggeddown.

Hetooksomeorangejuiceoutofthefridgeandwalkedtothekitchenwindow,holdingtheglassinhishand.

Hetooksomeorangejuiceoutofthefridgeand,glassinhand,walkedtothekitchenwindow.

（2）使用非人称主语组织句子

1）物称主语

她哭了起来。

l 

Shebegantocry.

Tearscametohereyes.

今天早上醒来时我想到了一个好主意。

IthoughtofagreatideawhenIwokeupthismorning.

AgreatideadawnedonmewhenIwokeupthismorning.

一见照片，我就想起了童年。

WhenIsawthephotos,Icametothinkofmychildhood.

Thephotosremindedmeofmychildhood.

我说不出话来。

Icouldn’tsayanything.

Wordsfailedme.

这个运动首先在上海兴起。

ThemovementoriginatedinShanghai.

Shanghaifirstsawtheriseofthemovement.

2）it充当形式主语

It’srainingcatsanddogs.大雨滂沱。

Itneveroccurredtomethatshewouldbesodispleased.我从未想到她会如此不高兴。

ItcomesasasurprisetolearnthatmorepeoplearemurderedinNewYorkthaninthewholeoftheUK.得知纽约一地被害人数竟胜于整个英国我很吃惊。

3）there＋系动词结构

Thereseemstobenodoubtaboutit.此事似是无疑。

Therecomesatimewhendyingseemsbetterth