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Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat作文题目.Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplethinkthat观点一.Intheirviews,therearetwofactorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows:
Inthefirstplace,原因一.Furthermore,inthesecondplace,原因二.
People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeopleholdtheideathat观点二.Intheirpointofview,ontheonehand,原因一.Ontheotherhand,原因二.Therefore,thereisnodoubtthat观点二.
AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat观点一或二.Itisnotonlybecause原因一,butalsobecause原因二.Themore ,themore ./Onlywhenwe canwedo .
(2)权衡利弊型
Nowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernover(theissuethat)作文题目.Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesin题目议题.
Generallyspeaking,itiswidelybelievedthereareseveralpositiveaspectsasfollows.Firstly,优点一.Andsecondly,优点二.
Justasapopularsayinggoes,“everycoinhastwosides”,讨论议题isnoexception,andinotherwords,itstillhasnegativeaspects.Tobeginwith,缺点一.Inaddition,缺点二.
Tosumup,weshouldtrytobringtheadvantagesof讨论议题intofullplay,andreducethedisadvantagestotheminimumatthesametime.Inthatcase,wedefinitelymakebetteruseofthe讨论议题.
(3)问题与建议
Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceaproblemthat .
解决方法:
Withthehelpofmoderntechnology,wenowhavemanymeanstosolveit.Bydoing ,wecan .What’sthemostimportantisthat .
结论:
Inaword,itisclear/obviousthat .Onlywhen canwe .
日前农业部批准转基因水稻证书,由此引起了社会上很多关于转基因食品的争议。
以下是某网站辩论的结果:
转基因食品的支持方:
1.解决粮食短缺问题;
2.减少农药使用;
3.节省生产成本,降低食物售价;
4.……
转基因食品的反对方:
1.可能对蝴蝶等昆虫和周边的植物造成伤害;
2.对人体有潜在的危害;
3.……
要求:
请给《中国日报》写一封正式信,陈述以上结果并表达自己的意见和建议。
注意:
1.词数150左右。
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
农药pesticide
DearSir,
IamLiJunfromGuangHuaMiddleSchool.IamwritingtotellyouabouttherecentdebateaboutGMfoods.
Trulyyours,
LiJun
【写作指导】
第一步:
审题
本文题型是属于提纲式作文,而体裁属于正式书信。
全文主体内容分为三大部分。
题目中的关键词是“转基因食品”。
正式书信的特点:
语言要严谨,可多用长句;
理由要充分,做到以理服人;
反映的事实要客观;
语气要礼貌。
第二步:
谋篇布局
第三步:
列提纲
反对方的理由
havenegativeeffectson,causedamageto,potentialthreat,can’tensuresafety
考虑用句型:
notonly...butalso...
支持方的理由
lackfood,reducetheuseofpesticides,saveproductioncost
过渡词用onthecontrary,though(引导状语从句)。
你的意见和理由
atthecostof,inthelongrun,haveadvantageover
过渡词用personally,asfarasI’mconcerned,还可以考虑用谚语来表达。
第四步:
正文
16分达标范文
21分目标作文句型
21分参考范文
IamLiJunfromGuangHuaMiddleSchool.IamwritingtotellyouabouttherecentdebateaboutGMfoods.
①Somepeopleareagainstit.②TheythinkthatGMfoodsareharmfulandwillmakethesurroundingplantsandsomeinsectslikebutterflyindanger.③Peopleonlythinktheproductionprofitsarethemostimportant.④Itcannotensuresafety.Undoubtedly,thepotentialthreatcannotbeignored.Last,cropsproductionwasnohigherthantheyareforregularcropsaccordingtoarecentresearch.SotheGMfoodswillendupinfailure.
Thoughtherearethefearsofopponents,theirsupportersthinkthattheyhavegreatpromise.⑤Thispromiseincludesgreaterproductionoffoodcrops.⑥Cropswillbeplantedonlessareawithouthelpofpesticides.⑦Theyarehealthierandmorenutritious.GMcropscouldresultinlessuseofenergy,water,andsoilandbetterwastemanagement.
⑧Personally,GMfoodsfeedtheworld.⑨Theyrelievepeople’sworryaboutsafetyinthelongrun.
⑩Thoughithasmanydisadvantages,wecannotjuststopforthissimplereason.
Bestwishestoyou.
第二段:
1.如何将①②两句合成一句?
2.②③句之间应该用什么连接更好呢?
3.③④句怎么用定语从句连接?
第三段:
4.⑤⑥⑦可以用定语从句或分词结构连成一句吗?
第四段:
5.⑧⑨两句怎样用notonly...butalso连接呢?
6.⑩句中用上成语“因噎废食”是不是更好呢?
PeopleagainstitholdthatGMfoodswillmakethesurroundingplantsandsomeinsectslikebutterflyindanger.Worsestill,peopleonlythinktheproductionprofitsarethemostimportant,whichcannotensuresafety.Sothepotentialthreatcannotbeignored.Last,cropsproductionwasnohigherthantheyareforregularcropsinarecentresearch.SotheGMfoodswillendupinfailure.
DespitethefearsofopponentsofGMfoods,theirsupportersthinkthattheyhavegreatpromise,whichincludesgreaterproductionoffoodcropsonlessareawithlesshelpofpesticides,andcropsthatarehealthierandmorenutritious.Mostimportantly,GMcropscouldresultinlessuseofenergy,water,andsoilandbetterwastemanagement.
Personally,notonlydoGMfoodsfeedtheworldbutrelievepeople’sworryaboutsafetyinthelongrun.Thoughithasmanydisadvantages,wecannotstopeatingforfearofchoking.
【满分作文词语、句型优化】
1.GMfoodsareharmfulandwillmakethesurroundingplantsandsomeinsectslikebutterflyindanger.
【优化1】GMfoodshavebignegativeeffects,towhichthesurroundingplantsandsomeinsectslikebutterflywillfallvictim.
【优化2】GMfoodsdomuchharmtothesurroundingplantsandsomeinsectslikebutterfly.
2.Peopleonlythinktheproductionprofitsarethemostimportant.
【优化1】Peopleonlythinktheproductionprofitsareofgreatsignificance.
【优化2】Peopleonlythinktheproductionprofitsdocountformuch.
【优化3】Peopleonlythinktheproductionprofitscarrymuchweight.
【优化4】Peopleonlythinktheproductionprofitscannotbestressedenough.
【优化5】Peopleattachmuchimportancetotheproductionprofits.
3.Sothepotentialthreatcannotbeignored.
【优化1】Sowecannotturnablindeyetothepotentialthreat.
【优化2】Sowecannottakeitforgrantedthatthereisnopotentialthreat.
4.Theirsupportersthinkthattheyhavegreatpromise.
【优化1】Theirsupportersholdtheopinionthattheyhavegreatpromise.
【优化2】Theirsupportersareconvincedthattheyhavegreatpromise.
【优化3】Theirsupportersarefortheopinionthattheyhavegreatpromise.
【优化4】Theirsupportersmaintain/argue/holdthattheyhavegreatpromise.
5.Thoughithasmanydisadvantages,wecannotstopeatingforfearofchoking.
【优化1】Disadvantagesas/thoughithas,wecannotstopeatingforfearofchoking.
【优化2】Despite/Inspiteofmanydisadvantages,wecannotstopeatingforfearofchoking.
及时训练
(一)
北京某家政服务公司推出了“高考保姆”服务。
“高考保姆”一般要有本科学历,他们既要辅导考生的薄弱学科,也要给考生做饭、洗衣服等。
此项服务在社会上引起了不同的反响。
现在请你结合此事并根据下面表格内容用英语写一篇短文。
人们的不同反应
赞同(60%)
反对(40%)
1.高考对于孩子的未来非常关键,需要找专业人士来照料。
2.许多家长工作很忙,抽不出时间照顾孩子。
1.这样会造成孩子过度紧张。
2.高考是孩子成长的重要经历,家长应亲自陪同孩子体验。
你的看法
……(至少两点)
1.对所给要点逐一陈述,可适当发挥,不要逐句翻译。
2.词数150左右。
开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
AdomesticservicecompanyinBeijingprovided“Gaokaonannies”forstudentswhowilltakepartintheCollegeEntranceExamination.Thenanniescannotonlytutorthestudentsintheirweaksubjectsbutalsowashclothesandcookmealsforthem..
【参考范文】
AdomesticservicecompanyinBeijingprovided“Gaokaonannies”forstudentswhowilltakepartintheCollegeEntranceExamination.Thenanniescannotonlytutorthestudentsintheirweaksubjectsbutalsowashclothesandcookmealsforthem.Asforthematter,opinionsaredivided.
60%ofthepeopleareinfavorofit.TheythinktheCollegeEntranceExaminationisveryimportanttothestudents,soit’snecessarytoemploypeoplewithspecializedknowledgetotakecareofthem.Meanwhile,manyparentsaretoobusytosparethetimetolookaftertheirchildren.However,therestofthepeopleareopposedtoit.Intheirview,employing“Gaokaonannies”islikelytomakethestudentsmorenervous,whichmayhavebadeffectsonthem.Besides,thestudentsshouldgothroughthiskeyperiodoftimeaccompaniedbytheirparents.
Frommypointofview,Itotallydisagreewiththeformer.IfIwereoneofthosewhohave“Gaokaonannies”,Iwouldnotbeusedtobeingtakencareofbyanunfamiliarpersonwhocannotpossiblyunderstandmeaswellasmyparents.Furthermore,hiringa“Gaokaonanny”costsalot,whichmayburdentheparents.
(二)
最近,“校园安全”成为人们广泛关注的话题,为确保师生安全,你校决定禁止外人进入校园。
为此,学校在学生中做了一次“家长该不该进校园及其原因”的调查。
调查结果如下图所示:
根据上图信息,请以“ShouldParentsBeBannedfromEnteringCampus?
”为题,用英语写一篇150词的短文。
要求如下:
1.简要描述图中的信息(包括人数比率、观点及原因);
2.谈谈你的看法。
文章的标题和开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
ShouldParentsBeBannedfromEnteringCampus?
Recently,campussecurityhasbecomeahotissue.Toensuresecurity,strangersarebannedfromenteringcampusbyourschool,andasurveyhasbeenmadeamongthestudentsaboutwhetherparentsshouldbeincluded..
ShouldParentsBeBannedfromEnteringCampus?
Recently,campussecurityhasbecomeahotissue.Toensuresecurity,strangersarebannedfromenteringcampusbyourschool,andasurveyhasbeenmadeamongthestudentsaboutwhetherparentsshouldbeincluded.
Accordingtothesurvey,60%ofthestudentsthinkparentsshouldbeincludedbecauseitisaruleeveryoneshouldobey.Another25%subscribetotheviewthatthereisnoneedforthebanastheirbelovedparentsc
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