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bring,carry,take,fetch,get,convey,transport均有“带,拿,取”之意。
4.2
Mainlyinsocial,suchaseconomicimpact,costofpopulation,birthanddeath,thequalityofthepopulationandagingofthepopulation.
∙[标点警示]该句句首与上一句句尾标点符号之间空格缺失。
quality,property,feature,characteristic,peculiarity,trait,attribute,character均有“特性,特点,品质”之意。
第4段
5.1
PopulationagingprobleminChinaissevere,weshouldtakecareandfindthesolution.
earnest,serious,grave,
severe,solemn,sober均有“严肃的”之意。
5.2
Itissaidthatthepopulationgrowthto1billionand295millionpopulationbytheyearof2000inChinaNationalBureauofStatisticsin2003-2012.
第5段
6.1
FromChinaNationalBureauofStatisticsin2007-2012wecanknowthatthepopulationisexpectedtocontinuetoincrease,andthespeedissofast.
∙[句子警示]英文标点符号之前无须空格。
haste,
speed,hurry,dispatch均含“迅速,急速”之意。
6.2
Thedatadisplaysthepopulationwillincreaseto2billionand400millionin2050,anditshowsthelargenumberofChina'
spopulationarethepeoplewhoseageis15to64inrecentyears.
exhibition,exhibit,show,exposition,fair,
display
都可表示“展览,展览会”之意。
6.3
Astimegoesby,thenumberofpeoplewhoseageisolderthan65yearsisincreasing.
∙[拓展辨析]
people表示“人,民族”。
查看与person的区别。
6.4
Accordingtotherelevantliterature,morethantenyearslater,thetotalpopulationofChinawillbelessthantheexistinglevel.
afterwards,
later
均有“后来,以后”之意。
第6段
7.1
StatementsandProblems
第7段
8.1
ThispaperhasdiscussedtheChina'
spopulationaginganditrelatedtosocialsecurityproblemsandeconomicproblems.
join,combine,unite,connect,link,attach,couple,associate,
relate
均有“连接,结合,联合”之意。
8.2
ManyyearsofbirthcontrolpolicyhaveresultedinaseverepopulationagingprobleminChina.
8.3
Chinahasestablishedasocialsecuritysystemofacombinedsocialpoolingaccountandpersonalaccounts.[修改]
∙[拓展辨析]动名搭配
pool...account
在语料库中出现过
6
次
8.4
Foryears,fundsfrompersonalaccountsweredivertedtofillthegapinthesocialpoolingaccount,resultingingrowingsocialsecuritydebt.
grow...debt
10
8.5
Whatwearefacingisnotthecompetitivepressurefromthelargeamountofpeople,buttheshortageoflabor.[修改]
lack,want,absence,
shortage,scarcity均含“缺乏,不足”之意。
8.6
Whilethesocialsecuritysystemiscontrolledbythegovernment,andChina'
ssocialsecuritysystemislargelyapay-as-you-gosystem,thenthesocialpressureheavierandheavierowingtotheproblem,wemustrevisethesecuritysystemthatdelayedretirementforexamplenow.
heavy,weighty都可表示“重的,沉重的”之意。
8.7
Thefollowing,consideringthatthepensionreplacementrateofmanpoweraccountishardtoobtain,soitwillcoordinatethemanpoweraccountfundsandpersonalaccountfundasaunifiedpensionfundstomeasure.
∙[拓展辨析]注意consider和believe区别。
8.8
Specificparameters'
settingsandprojectionsarehighcontributionrates,highreplacementrates,andhighdebtinthesocialsecurityaccount.
account,report的有“报道,叙述”之意。
第8段
9.1
LiteratureReviewandReferencesincurrentresearchstatus
magazine,journal,periodical,publication,newspaper,review,press均有“出版物,定期刊物”之意。
第9段
10.1
Firstly,China'
spopulationismoresevere.
10.2
(ChinaNationalBureauofStatistics(2003-2012))Itappearedthepopulationgrowthpeakthreetimeslastcentury,andthebirthratesareabove20perthousandafterentering90s,thebirthratesdecreasedyearbyyear.
∙[名词错误]请检查Statistics,确认大小写正确。
hill,mount,mountain,range,
peak,volcano均含有“山”之意。
10.3
In2005droppedto12.40perthousand.
descend,
drop,fall,sink都表示“落下,下降”之意。
10.4
ManyyearsofbirthcontrolpolicyhaveresultedinaseverepopulationagingprobleminChina.
10.5
Accordingtothepaper,althoughChina'
spopulationismorethanIndia,butonly60%ofthepopulationofchildreninIndia,whichisthebirthrateofChina'
spopulationisfarlowerthantheresultofIndia.
distant,
far,remote都含有“远的”之意。
∙[其他]语法错误,连接词although和but在同一个句子中不可同时使用。
10.6
Accordingtofigureintheresearch,in2014China'
s14yearoldpopulationaccountedforonly16.5%ofthetotalpopulation,comparedto16.6%in2010anddown0.1%,hasbeeninaseriousminority,significantlylowerthantheworld'
saverageof27%.
earth,
world,globe均可表示“地球”之意。
10.7
Accordingtothecurrentbirthrateofthepopulationprojections,morethantenyearslater,thetotalpopulationofChinawillbelowerthantheexistinglevel.[修改]
lowerthantheexistinglevel在本族语中很少使用。
modern,contemporary,
current,recent,present,up-to-date均有“现代的,当代的”之意。
10.8
Duetotheagingintensifies,childrenundertheageof14droptobelow15%,overtheageof60nonlaboragingpopulationwillreachabout33%,20yearsoldofthefollowingnonlaborpopulationaboutisabout18%,nonlaborpopulationaccountedfor50%,thenthetotallaborforcepopulationwilldroptobelow5billion,ratherthan"
within30yearswillremainatbetween700millionto800million"
.
fairly,pretty,quite,
rather
都有“相当,颇”之意。
10.9
NationalBureauofstatisticsdatashowsthatin2012and2013,China'
sworkingagepopulationrespectivelyoverthepreviousyeardecreasedby345million,244million,2014,overtheageof16to60yearsofage(notincluding60yearsofage)oftheworkingagepopulation91583people,overthepreviousyeardecreased371millionpeople,accountingforthetotalpopulationaccountedfor67%,comparedwiththepreviousyeardecreased6inathousand.
appear,emerge,
show,loom均有“出现”之意。
10.10
Whatwearefacingisnotthepressureoflaborshortageandthestructuralunemploymentcausedbytheshortageoflabor.
appearance,look,
face,aspect均含事物或人的“外表,容貌”之意。
第10段
11.1
Secondly,theone-childpolicycontributestotheproblem.
11.2
(ChinaMinistryofLaborandSocialSecurity(2001))China'
spopulationagingproblemismoreseverethanothercountriesbecauseoftheone-childpolicyadoptedintheearly1980s,increasingtheretirementageandthecurrentsocialsecuritysystemisnotsustainable.
age...problem
11.3
ItchallengestoChina'
ssocialsecuritysystem.
11.4
Maintainingthecurrentreplacementandcontributionrates,socialsecuritydebtwillbeexplosive.
assert,affirm,allege,
maintain,testify,claim均含有“断言,声称”之意。
11.5
Thenincreasetheretirementage.
第11段
12.1
Lastly,thecurrentsocialsecuritysystemisnotsustainable.
atlast,atlength,eventually,finally,intheend,lastly
均含有“最后,终于”之意。
12.2
(Diamond,P.
∙[句子错误]请检查句中谓语动词。
12.3
A.,&
Barr,N.
12.4
(2006))Fundsfrompersonalaccountshavebeenusedtofinancethedeficitsinthesocialpoolingaccount.
finance...deficit
263
12.5
Peopleolderthan60yearscanreceiveapension.
accept,
receive,admit,take均有“接受,接纳”之意。
12.6
Socialproblemsindifferenttimesreflectthecontentofthedifferent,populationprobleminmodernareoneofthemostimportantsocialproblemsintheworld,isthecoreofmanysocialproblems.
∙[句子错误]请检查is,确认主谓一致。
different,various,diverse均含“不同的”之意。
详情点击
12.7
Althoughitisdifferentindifferentcountries,itsessenceismainlymanifestedinthepopulationreproductionandthematerialreproductionofthedisorder,populationgrowthovereconomicgrowthandtheemergenceofpopulationsurplus.
copy,duplicate,model,
reproduction,facsimile均有“复制品”之意。
12.8
TakeChinaasanexample,allkindsofproblemsencounteredinthecurrentsociallifeanddevelopmentaredirectlyorindirectlyrelatedtotheenormouspressureofpopulation.
∙[搭配错误]请检查theenormouspressureofpopulation,本族语中很少使用。
∙[搭配错误]请检查thecurrentsociallife,本族语中很少使用。
direct,
directly
都有“直接地”之意。
12.9
Firstofall,thepopulationpressuretoprovidetheexistingpopulationlivingconditionsandimprovethelivingstandardsofthepeople,hasencounteredinsurmountabledifficulties.
∙[冠词警示]
thepopulationpressure疑似冠词多余。
∙[学习
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