考研英语强化班写作文档格式.docx
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(一)评分原则和方法
1.一般评分标准适用于A、B两节。
但根据两节不同的考查要点,评分时会有不同的侧重点。
A节本部分的评分重点在于信息表达的全面、准确、适当。
主要包括信息点的覆盖是否全面,语篇结构和格式是否正确,语言表达是否准确,语域是否恰当等方面。
对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据试题的具体情况做出相应规定。
B节作文的评分重点在于内容的完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。
2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来给分。
评分人员在档内有1-3分的调节分。
3.A节作文的字数要求是应用文100词左右或摘要80-100词。
B节作文的字数要求是160-200词。
文章长度不符合要求的,酌情扣分。
4.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。
评分时,视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
5.如书写较差,以致影响读者理解,将分数降低一个档次。
(二)一般评分标准
第五档A节(9-10分)B节(17.20分)
很好地完成了试题规定的任务。
—包含所有内容要点;
—使用丰富的语法结构和词汇;
—语言自然流畅,语法错误极少;
—有效地采用了多种衔接手法,文字连贯,层次清晰;
—格式和语域恰当贴切。
对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。
第四档A节(7-8分)B节(13-16分)
较好地完成了试题规定的任务。
—包含所有内容要点,允许漏掉一两个次重点;
—使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇;
—语言基本准确,只有在试图使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别错误;
—采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰,组织较严密,
—格式和语域较恰当。
对目标读者产生了预期的效果。
第三档A节(5-6分)B节(9-12分)
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
—虽漏掉一些内容,但包含多数内容要点,
—应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求;
—有一些语法及词汇错误,但不影响理解;
—采用了简单的衔接手法,内容较连贯,层次较清晰,
—格式和语域基本合理。
对目标读者基本完全产生了预期的效果。
第二档A节(3-4分)B节(5-8分)
未能按要求完成试题规定的任务。
—漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点,写了一些无关内容,
—语法结构单调、词汇项目有限;
—有较多语法结构及词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解,
—未采用恰当的衔接手法,内容缺少连贯性,
—格式和语域不恰当。
未能清楚地传达信息给读者。
第一档A节(1-2分)B节(1-4分)
未完成试题规定的任务。
—明显遗漏主要内容,且有许多不相关的内容;
—语法项目和词汇的使用单调、重复;
—语言错误多,有碍读者对内容的理解,语言运用能力差;
—未采用任何衔接手法,内容不连贯,缺少组织、分段;
—无格式和语域概念。
未能传达信息给读者。
零档(0分)
所传达的信息或所使用语言太少,无法评价;
内容与要求无关或无法辨认。
写作A节题型分类
1.书信类应用文
2009大纲样题:
Directions:
YouarepreparingforanEnglishtestandareinneedofsomereferencebooks.Writealettertothesalesdepartmentofabookstoretoaskfor:
1)detailedinformationaboutthebooksyouwant,
2)methodsofpayment,
3)timeandwayofdelivery.
Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.
Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use"
LiMing"
instead.
Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.(10points)
Sampleletter:
DearSirorMadam,
IamwritingforinformationabouttestpreparationmaterialsfortheIELTStest.
IwonderifyouhaveavocabularybookcoveringthewordsrequiredforIELTS,aswellaspastexaminationpaperswithkeysandmodelessays.Besides,howshouldIpayforthesebooks-bycash,cheque,oranyothermeans?
Ifpossible,Iwouldliketousemycreditcard.Finally,howwillthesebooksbeshippedandwhenistheapproximatetimeIcanreceivethem?
Theexpressmailispreferableiftheadditionalchargeisnottoomuch.
Iwouldappreciateitifyouwouldsendmeareplyatyourearliestconvenience.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
步骤一:
阅读并分析题目
1)信息点和内容
Explainingasituation
Requestinginformation
2)语言
Vocabulary
Sentencestructure
3)格式和语域(对比:
便笺、备忘录)
Format:
salutation,body,complimentaryclose,nameofsender
Register:
informalorformal?
步骤二:
开始写作
写称呼语:
DearSir/Madam...Towhomitmayconcern...DearMr.Bush...DearGworge
表明写作目的:
Iamwritingfor/about/concerning...Iamwritingto...Iamwritingbecause...
提供,询问信息:
Iwonderif...Woulditbepossibleforyouto...Iwouldliketo...
要求采取行动:
Iwouldappreciateitifyoucould...Ishouldbegratefulifyoucould...Couldyouplease...Wouldyoumind...
结束语:
Thankyouforyourattention/kindness...Ilookforwardtoseeingyou/yourreply.
签名:
Yourssincerely...Yoursfaithfully...Bestwishes...Lotsoflove
步骤三:
检查
检查内容
检查语言
检查卷面
书信写作语言点
语法点
一般过去时
I'
msorry,Iwaslatefortheclassthismorning.
Ireallyenjoyedyourdinnerlastweek.
现在完成时
IhavebeenstudyingEnglishfor10years.
Theovenhasbeenbrokenforoveraweek.
一般现在时
Myclassstartsat8:
30.
Theyhavepartieseverynight.
请求
Woulditbepossibleformetoborrowyournotes?
Couldyousendmeinformationaboutthetrip?
提问
Doyouknowwherethebookscanbefound?
WhatclothesshouldIbring?
Whendoesthecoursestart?
原因和结果
Ican'
tgobecauseitistooexpensive.
ItistooexpensivesoIcan'
tgo.
对比
Hestudiedveryhardbuthefailedintheexam.
Hewasalwayslate.However,hegotthebesttestresult.
词汇
不太正式与较为正式:
Shegetsgoodmoney—Shereceivesagoodsalary.
Peopleareworriedabouttheenvironment—Theenvironmentisamajorissue.
mnotreallysure,but...—Itispossible...
Peoplesay...—Itisoftensaid...
2005
TwomonthsagoyougotajobasaneditorforthemagazineDesigns&
Fashions.Butnowyoufindthattheworkisnotwhatyouexpected.Youdecidetoquit.Writealettertoyourboss,Mr.Wang,tellinghimyourdecision,statingyourreason(s),andmakinganapology.
Writeyourletterwithnolessthan100words.WriteitneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.
Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter;
use"
LiMing"
高分作文
DearMr.Wang,
Iammuchgratefultobeemployedbyyoutwomonthsagoasaneditorforyour
magazineDesigns&
Fashions.Iappreciatetheopportunityofhavingworkedherewithyouandothercolleagues.Theexperienceswillbeunforgettablethroughoutmylife.
However,asayoungmanwhoseprimaryinterestisincomputerscienceratherthanfashiondesigning,Ifindmypresentjobdoesn'
tfallinwithmyprevioustrainingandstrength.Ithereforedecidetoquitthisjobforsomethingelsethatmayconformtomyformerpreparation.
Pleaseacceptmysincereapologiesforanyinconveniencesmyleavingmayoccur.
Yourstruly,
LiMing
2006
YouwanttocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotearea.Writealettertothedepartmentconcerned,askingthemtohelpfindacandidate.Youshouldspecifywhatkindofchildyouwanttohelpandhowyouwillcarryoutyourplan.Writeyourletterinnolessthan100words.WriteitneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.
Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)
MovedbythenoblecauseofProjectHopeandencouragedbywhathasbeenachievedsofar,Iwouldliketocontributemybittotheprojectbyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremoteareaofyourprovince.
Iwouldbemuchgratefulifyoucouldhelpmeseekoutagirlwhohasjuststartedschoolingbutwhosefamilycannotaffordhereducation.Myplanistopayforhertuitiononanannualbasistillshefinisheshersecondaryeducation.Iwouldliketoremitmydonationdirectlytoabankaccountopenedbyherfamilyinherlocalarea.
2007
Writealettertoyouruniversitylibrary,makingsuggestionsforimprovingitsservice.
Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.
Donotsignyournameattheendoftheletter.Use"
DearSir/Madam,
Iamastudentinthisuniversitywhoregularlycometothelibrarytospendmysparetime.Generallyspeaking,theservicesyouofferhereisquitegood;
however,Ihavesomesuggestionsforyoutoadopt.AndIwouldliketoextendmygreatestappreciationifyouaresokindastotakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.
Tobeginwith,willyoupleaseprolongthetimeforreading?
Inthedaytime,mostofthestudentsarehavingclass,sotheycan'
tcometothelibrary.Moreover,someofthebooksonshelvesareoutofdate.Ifyouaresokindastoprovideus.somebookssuchasthelatestmagazines,wewillbegreatlyhonored.
Ireallywishtohaveamorecomfortablelibrary.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.
Sincerelyyours,
2008
YouhavejustcomebackfromCanadaandfoundamusicCDinyourluggagethatyouforgottoreturntoBob,yourlandlordthere.Writehimaletterto
1)makeanapology,and
2)suggestasolution
Donotwritetheaddress.
DearBob,
IamwritingtomakeanapologytoyouforIforgottoreturnamusicCDwhichIborrowedfromyoulastweek.YesterdayIhavecomebackfromCanadaandIfounditinmyluggage.Iamsosorrythatyoucannotlistentoitatpresent.
TheCDwhichIborrowedfromyouismadeinCanada,soIbelieveyoucanfindanotheroneinyourlocalstore.HowaboutyourbuyinganotherCDbyyourselfandIwillpayforit?
Ifyoucannotfindthesimilarone,Iwouldsenditbacktoyoubypost.Andifthereareanyothersolutionsyoulike,pleaseletmeknow.
Iamsorryagainformycarelessness.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yourssincerely,
2009
Restrictionsontheuseofplasticbagshavenotbeensosuccessfulinsomeregions."
WhitePollution"
isstillgoingon.Writealettertotheeditor(s)ofyourlocalnewspaperto
1)giveyouropinionsbriefly,and
2)maketwoorthreesuggestions.
Youshouldwriteabout100words.
Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.
各档次分数段例文
(1)
Towhomitmayconcern,
Asastudentofauniversity,Iwanttotakethisopportunitytoexpresssomepointsabout"
WhitePollution"
.
Thereisnodenyingthatplasticisdestroyour
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