高考英语读后续写范文8篇点评Word格式文档下载.docx
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Sparrowsareeverywhere.Thetiny,gray-and-brownbirdsarefoundoneverycontinentexceptAntarctica,flyingorjumpingaroundcities,pickingupleftoverfoodonside-walks,andsometimeschasingwithnativebirdspecies.Thesesmallcreatureshaveadaptedtolivingalongsidehumans——likepetdogs.
Whenyoucomeacrosssuchsuddencallers,youarelikelytosenseitasanunwantedvisitorintoyourcomfortzone,oryoumightreceiveitasalovelyangeloflife.Ichosethesecondoption,withnohesitationwhilemyhusbandpreferreddrivingthemaway.Afterall,I'
venevercometostoptofeeltherelationshipwithsparrows.
IrecalledwhenIwasalittlegirllivinginthecity,Ilivedinanapartmentwithaflatroofviewedfromourkitchenwindow.EverydaymymomandIwouldgoouttofeedthesparrows.Shetaughtmehowtocallthemwithaclickingsoundshemadewithhertongue.Ihavelovedsparrowseversince.So,everydayinmysparetime,Ican'
tstopobservingandcelebratingtheirdancefromourwindow.Istuffedthemwiththeleftoversonourtableclothaftereverymeal.AndIhaveprovidedthemwitheverykindofbasesandstandsofourhouse.
Undoubtedly,theyfeelateaseinourbackyard.Andthathasledthemtogatherupcourageandslideintoourkitchen,bedroomorevenreadingroom.Perhapsbecausetheyhavethefeelingthatwedon'
tconsiderthemtrouble-makers,butfriendlyneighbors.ButIamslightlyworriedabouttheirdroppings(粪便).
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写出。
Oneday,theyleftsomedroppingsinmyhusband'
sreadingroom.
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Abouttwoweekslater,Iheardmyhusbandcalling“Oh,myGod!
”
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Oneday,theyleftsomedroppingsinmyhusband'
sreadingroom.Theyhappenedtodirtyhisimportantworkreportsonthedesk.Hewassoangrythatheaskedmetoclosethewindows.Iimmediatelydidathoroughcleaningandpromisedthatthedoorsandwindowsofthereadingroomwouldbeclosedtightly,andthesparrowscouldn’tbreakinagain.Myhusbandkeptsilent,andatlasthecalmeddown.Iknowheisacaringperson,whoalwayslovesanimals.
”Thinkingsomethingsimilarhappenedagain,Iranovertohavealook.Hewaslookingoutofthewindowandsaidexcitedly,“Look!
Whatasurprise!
Therearethreeeggsinthesparrow'
snest!
They'
regoingtohavebabiesoftheirown!
”Hewashappy,likeachildandunconsciouslyopenedtheclosedwindow.Afterthat,therearealwaysbreadcrumbsonthewindowplatformofthereadingroom.
【写作思路点拨】以转变为主题思路,写转变前与转变后的情形对比,提及转变的诱因。
(二)
Itwaslunchtime,Jerry,David,Tom,andIwenttothedininghalltohavelunch.Iglancedacrossthebusycafeteriaandsawthenewstudent,Jack.Hewasholdinghisplateandwaitinginlines.
Davidnoticedhimtoo.“Why'
sthenewkiddressedliketheheadmaster?
“heasked.TomandJimmylaughed.
“Jack'
scool.He'
sinmyEnglishandhistoryclasses.”Isaid.However,IkeptthetruththatJackandIhadbecomefriendswhenweworkedonaprojecttogether.Wediscoveredthatwewerebothenthusiasticreaders,somethingIwouldneveradmittoJerry,David,andTom.
IsawthatJackwaswalkingtowardus.“Don'
tdoit,”Ithought,butinsecondshewasatourtable.Myfriendsraisedtheireyebrows.Jerry,David,Tompiledtheirbackpacksonthetableandchairssothattherewasnospaceleftforanotherpersontositdown.Davidsaid,“Idon'
tthinkwehaveroom.”
Thisawkwardsituationfrozetheair.IcouldfeelJacklookingatme,butIstaredatmylunchasifitcontainedpreciouspearlsofwisdominsteadofriceandbeans.Afteralong,uncomfortablepause,Jackleft.Ishouldhavespokenupforhim,butIcouldn'
twalkawayfrommythreefriends,orcouldI?
Jackdidn'
tspeaktomeafterthatmeeting.Hewassoonhangingaroundwithanothergroupofkids.Afewmonthslater,IsawanannouncementaboutJackbeingchosentobepresidentoftheschoolbookclub.IwashappyforJack'
sachievements,butIrealizedIhadmadeabigmistakewhenIsaidnothingatthelunchtablethatday.WhywasIsoafraidthatmyfriendsmightfindoutthatIliketoread?
AsIstaredattheannouncement,IknewIneededtoapologizetoJack,evenifhedidnotwanttobecomemyfriendagain.Ithoughtthatmythreefriendswouldnotagree.IalsothoughtthatIriskedlosingthemaswell.However,IknewthatIwouldlosemyselfifIdidnothing.
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Asthedismissalbellrang,Igatheredupmybooks,tookadeepbreath,andwenttofindJack.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Jacknodded,andthenmentionedmythreefriends.
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(1)
Asthedismissalbellrang,Igatheredupmybooks,tookadeepbreath,andwenttofindJack.Awaveofuncertaintyoverwhelmedme.OnthewaytoJack'
sclassroom,Ifeltseveralbutterfliesstillflutteringinmyheart.However,urgedbythestrongdesiretobeamemberofthereadingclub,Iquickenedmypaces.Theclassroomdooropened.HerecameJack.Lookingintohiseyes,Imadeanapology,explainingthatIwantedtojointheschoolbookclub.
Jacknoddedandthenmentionedmythreefriends.Withhesitation,Ihadnoideahowtoanswerhim.Seeingthroughmymind,Jacksmiledandputforwardagoodidea.Thenextday,wewerehavinglunchwhenJackapproached,holdinganoticetorecruitnewmembers,sayingthatifsomeonewantedtojointheclub,hemusttakethreeotherstudentstoformagroup.Tomysurprise,myfriendswerealsointerestedinthebookclub.Inaflash,JackandIbeamedtoeachother.
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(2)
Asthedismissalbellrang,Igatheredupmybooks,tookadeepbreath,andwenttofindJack.JackwascommunicatingwithanothergroupofkidswhenIapproachedhim.Bowingmyheadinshame,Iwastooembarrassedtopaymyrespecttohim.Buthemadenoticeofmeandgreetedmewithasmile.Conqueringmyinnerscary,Iwalkedtowardshimandexpressedmysincereapologytohim,promisingthatIwouldneverdoanythinglikethatagain.Heansweredthatitwasnobigdeal,soIaskedwhetherwecanbecomefriendsagain.
Jacknoddedandthenmentionedmythreefriends.HeaskedmewhetherIcouldinvitethemtotheschoolbookclub,inwhichwaywecoulddevelopsimilarinterestsandbuildalastingfriendship.Consideringtheymaybefondofreadingafterbeingexposedsomeinterestingbooks,Iacceptedhisadvice.Tomysurprise,mythreefriendswereeagertogiveitatry.Fromthenon,weoftenchosetoreadtogether.
(三)
NoTime
Withabroadsmileonherlips,15-yearoldSirinrushedtohermomtoshowoffhernewpainting.Butmomraisedhereyebrowswitheyeswideopen,andspokeinanimpatienttone,“Notime,baby.RightnowIambusywithanimportanttalk.Justwaitforsometime,OK?
Holdingheroilpainting,shefrowned(皱眉),andthensearchedforherdad.
“Dad,seewhatIhavedone,”Sirinannouncedaloudinathrillingvoice.Herdadturnedaroundwhileadjustinghistie,grinnedather,andshowedhisthumbsup!
Immediately,blowinghertwocheeks,Sirinrepliedangrily,“Dad,youhaven'
tseenityet.”
Hesmiledathersaying,“Notime,baby.Iwillseeitlater.”Hejustpattedherbacklovingly,kissedherforehead,andrushedforhisoffice.
Shewasnotakidtobepleasedwithsimplegestureorsmile.Shestoodthereforafewseconds,andthenstormedofftoherownbedroom.Hotairwasblowingfromhernostrils(鼻孔);
herfaceturnedintoapplered.Shethrewthepaintingonthetable,slammed(把…砰地关上)thedoorandthrewherselfonherbed.
“Whyiseverybodysobusy?
”Sherecalledthousandsofincidentsthathurtherinpre-school,middleschoolandeveninhighschooltoo!
Sheassumedatleastherownfamilymemberswouldgivesomevaluestoherthoughts,buttheywerenoexception.Unconsciously,hereyeswerefilledwithtears.
Theknockingsoundonthedoorputasuddenbraketoherthought.Hermomwascallingherfordinner.Sirindeliberatelycamelatetojointhem.Shekeptsilentanddidn'
tlookatanyone,scratchingthetablematwithhernail.Hermomwaspuzzledattheunusualbehavior.Suddenly,themorningincidentclickedinhermind.Softly,sheasked,“Honey,didIdoanythingwrong?
Para1:
Atthisverymoment,Sirincouldnolongerresistheranger._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Para2:
Whenbackfromschoolthenextday,Sirin
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