5 sentence concisenessWord文档下载推荐.docx
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Wewritesentencestoexpressideas.Theuseofwordsinasentence,therefore,isdecidedbytheideaitexpresses.Needlesswordsdonothelpexpressideas;
onthecontrary,theyobscurethemeaningandconfusethereader.Sooneoftherulesofsentence-makingistouseonlythenecessarywords,orasfewwordsaspossiblesolongasthemeaningisfullyexpressed.
Butoftenwetendtoputasuperfluouswordhereandthereinasentence.Thishabitmaycomefromthewaywetalk.Itiscommoninspeakingtorepeataword,usewordsofsimilarmeaningtogether,andchangewordswehavesaidandeventhestructureofasentenceinthemiddleofit.Butweshouldnotdosoinwriting.Thisispossiblebecausewhenwewritewehavetimetocheckwhatwehavewrittenanddeleteallthewordsthatarenotneededfortheexpressionofideas,ortomakeoursentencesconcise.Inordertobeconciseinyourwriting,pleaseobservethefollowingguidelines:
1.Useapronouninsteadofrepeatinganoun.
Sample1
Wordy
MoreConcise
Thefactorybought2importedmachines.
Thefactorybought2importedmachines.Theybrokedownthenextday.
Thetwomachinesbrokedownthenextday.
2.Useawordinsteadofaphrasewiththesamemeaning,anduseaphraseinsteadofaclausewiththesamemeaning.
Sample2
themanwithambition
theambitiousman
Sample3
theclassshowing
thebestperformance
thebest-performingclass
Sample4
Thearticle,whichhasbeenpublishedrecentlyisinstructive.
Therecentlypublishedarticleisinstructive.
Sample5
theideathatismostinteresting
themostinterestingidea
*NowI'
dlikeyoutoknowsomecommoncircumlocutionsthatcanbesimplifiedintooneword:
thereasonfor,forthereasonthat,owing/duetothefactthat,inlightofthefactthat,consideringthefactthat,onthegroundsthat,thisiswhy
=because,since,why
ontheoccasionof,inasituationinwhich,undercircumstancesinwhich
=when
asregards,inreferenceto,withregardto,concerningthematterof,where...isconcerned
=about
itiscrucialthat,itisnecessarythat,thereisaneed/necessityfor,itisimportantthat
=must,should
isableto,hasthecapacityfor,hastheabilityto
=can
itispossiblethat,thereisachancethat,itcouldhappenthat,thepossibilityexistsfor
=may,might,could
Sample6
Itispossiblethatnothingwillcomeoftheseexperiments.
Nothingmaycomeoftheseexperiments.
Sample7
Shehastheabilitytoinfluencetheelection.
Shecaninfluencetheelection.
Sample8
Itisnecessarythatwelookintothishotissue.
Wemustlookintothishotissue.
3.Ifnotforthesakeofspecialemphasis,donotrepeatwordsorphrasesinasentenceorinonethatfollows.
Sample9
Wordy
Tomhasasister.
Tom'
ssisterisanurse.
Sheisanurse
Donotusedifferentwordsorphraseswithsimilarmeaningsinthesamesentence.
Sample10
Hiswifeconsideredtherefrigeratoranunneededluxury.
Hiswifeconsideredtherefrigeratoraluxury.
*RedundantPairs
Manypairsofwordshavesimilarimplications.Finishimpliescomplete,sothephrasecompletelyfinishisredundantinmostcases.Herearesomeothers(wordsinbracketscanbeomitted):
(past)memories,(various)differences,(each)individual,(basic)fundamentals,(true)facts,(important)essentials,(end)result,(final)outcome,(free)gift,(past)history,(unexpected)surprise.
*RedundantCategories
Specificwordsimplytheirgeneralcategories,soweusuallydon'
thavetostateboth.Weknowthataperiodisasegmentoftime,andthatpinkisacolor.Ineachofthefollowingphrases,thegeneralcategorytermcanbedropped,leavingjustthespecificdescriptiveword:
large(insize),(ofa)bright(color),heavy(inweight),round(inshape),(atan)early(time),in(thefieldof)economics,honest(incharacter),(ina)confused(state),unusual(innature),extreme(indegree),(ofa)strange(type).
●Anotherthreehelpfulmethods:
1.Donotoverusetheformit+be-verborthere+be-verbatthebeginningofsentences.
Suchexpressionshavesomerhetoricaleffectforemphasisinsomecases,butunnecessaryuseofsuchstructuresresultsinwordywriting.Mostoftenyoucanwriteamoreconcisesentencebygettingridofsuchopenings.Youcanmakethenounthesubjectofthesentenceandremovetherelativepronoun.
Sample11
Therearefourquestionsthatshouldbeanswered:
·
Fourquestionsshouldbeanswered:
Sample12
Therewasabigexplosion,whichshatteredthewindows,andpeopleranoutoftheirhouses.
Abigexplosionshatteredthewindows,andpeopleranoutoftheirhouses.
2.Useverbsintheiractiveratherthanpassivevoice.
Sample13
MyEnglishwastaughtbyMrs.Green.
Mrs.GreentaughtmeEnglish.
Sample14
YouraccountswerecheckedbytheDirector.
TheDirectorcheckedyouraccounts.
3.Donotoverusenominalizations(thenounformsofverbs).
Sample15
Thefunctionofthemovieistheentertainmentforpeople.
Themovieentertainspeople.
Sample16
Thecurrentfocusofthemedicalprofessionisdiseaseprevention.
Themedicalprofessioncurrentlyfocusesondiseaseprevention.
Task:
Revisethefollowingsentencestomakethemmoreconcise
(1)Theumbrellaispinkincolor.
(2)IntheearlypartofthemonthofJuly,thestudentswillhavetheirsummerholiday.
(3)Inmyopinion,Ithinkyourplanisnotpractical.
(4)Duringthatperiodoftime,manygirlspreferredskirtsthatareredincolorandmadeofcotton.
(5)Thiskindoforganismswereroundinshapeandpeculiarinnature.
(6)Imagineamentalpictureofsomeoneengagedintheintellectualactivityoftryingtolearnwhattherulesareforhowtoplaythegameofchess.
(7)Someoftheuniversitiesarejointlyrunbyacompanyincollaborationwiththelocalgovernment.
(8)Smokingisconsideredahandsomeactbysomestudents.
(9)Thetheoryisn'
tprovedbythisexperiment.
(10)Inthisessayisanexampleoftheuseoftherefutationinargumentation.
Makethefollowingsentencesmoreconciseandclear.
1.Hisfatherisnotlikeherfather.Herfatherreadsmorebooks.
2.Manyuneducatedcitizenswhohaveneverattendedschoolbegintotakeparttimetrainingcourses.
3.BeijingForeignStudiesUniversity,whichwasfounded60yearsago,iswellknowninChina.
4.Atthispointintime,weshouldpaymuchattentiontoqualityeducation.
5.Thegrasswaslikeacarpet.Itcoveredthewholefield.Thecolorofthegrasswasfreshgreen.
6.Annaspokeinalowandhard-to-hearvoice.
7.Thiswasahistorymuseumplannedwithagreatdealcare.
8.Thesewereissuesthatinessencewererelatedtoeconomy.
9.ThenovelswrittenbyHemingway(海明威)aredifferentfromthenovelscomposedbyFaulkner(福克纳).
10.IntheearlypartofDecembertherewasaheavysnowinthisarea,anditsnowedforthreedayswithoutletup.
11.Earlyinthemorningtherewasafog,whichcoveredallthingsinthecityandpeoplewhoweredrivingwerecarefulandtheyhadtodriveveryslowly.
12.HehastastedthewinesproducedindifferentplacesandhesaystheredwinemadeinBeijingisthebest.
13.Eachtimetherewasaknockatthedoorhewasnervous,forhefearedthatsomeonemightcometobringhimmorebadnews.
14.Chinahasapopulationof1.2billion.Shemustdomuchtolimitthegrowthofpopulation.
15.Somepeopleliketosay"
that'
sneat"
whentheymeantosay"
sgood."
Itisaslangexpression.
16.Studentswhoareintheirfourthyearattheuniversitygotovisitthelibraryregularlytolookformaterialandreferencebooksusefulforthewritingoftheirgraduationpapers.
17.Thesechildrenarebusyplayingwithtoys.Theyhavelittletimeforstudies.
18.Whenyoureadthebeginningofthebook,youcannotunderstandthemeaningofthetitle.Youwillunderstanditwhenyoucometotheendofthebook.
19.Herearetwenty-fivestudentswhohavealreadyexpressedadesiretoattendtheprogramnextsummer.Itistheyandtheirparentswhostandtogainthemostbythegovernmentgrant.
20.Inresponsetotheproblemsidentifiedintheself-study,severalactivitieshaveevolvedatthiscollegetomeettheever-expandingneedsofourstudents,butthetraditionalgoalsofthecollege,whicharetoeducatethewholeper
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