雅思写作流程图Word文档格式.docx
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定语从句
特点三:
被动语态
特点四:
顺序词
特点五:
适当添加
特点六:
无总结
题目1:
玻璃的回收流程【单图】
范文1:
Thisdiagramillustratestherecyclingprocessofglassbottles.Thewholeprocessisacyclewhichcanbedividedintothreemainstages.
Inthefirststage,usedbottlesarecollectedatarecyclingpointreadytobetransportedbyatruck.Thesecondstagestartsinacleaningplant,wheretheserecycledbottlesaresortedbycolorintogreen,brownandclearonesandwashedbyhigh-pressurizedwater.Whenthecleaningisdone,thebottlesareconveyedtoaglassfactorywheretheyarecutintoglasspieceswhicharethenpouredintoafurnace.Afterbeingheatedinthefurnace,thebrokenglassesaremeltedintoliquid,whichflowsintoaglassmold.Hereglassliquidfromothersourcesisaddedandthemoldingprocesstakesplace.Inthefinalstage,new,emptybottlesarefilledwithliquid,thenpackedanddispatchedtothesupermarketreadytobepickedbyconsumers.Atthispoint,acyclehasbeencompletedandanewcyclewillbegin.
题目2:
蚕的生活史及丝绸服饰的生产流程【组图】直线型与循环型
1)moth在哪里产eggs?
产卵用什么动词?
moth一次产卵一个还是多个?
eggs大概有多大?
moth产卵之后怎样?
2)eggs变为larva的动作用什么动词?
一个egg变为几个larva?
larva的复数形式是什么?
图中表明larva以Mulberryleaf为food,用哪个动作表明进食的动作?
3)larva“吐丝”是从哪里“吐”出来,用什么动作表示这种动作?
larva吐丝制作cocoon的顺序是怎样的,是由内向外还是由外向内?
larva在吐丝结茧的过程中是否还进食?
4)cocoon完成后larva在哪里,处于什么状态?
cocoon大概是什么颜色,质地如何?
以上问题,问的比较细致,甚至有些刁钻,其中本分细节未必需要在真实写作中写出来。
但是如果本来就懂这个流程,对于看懂这个流程无疑是有巨大益处的,或者反过来讲,如果看不懂这个流程,很有可能发生产生误解,在实际写作中要么不敢用描述每个步骤的功能,不敢于描述各步骤之间的关联,要么就直接出错。
1)Select到底在选什么,选择的标准是什么?
2)Boil的目的是什么?
3)Unwind一步中,300-900米是指每根silkthread有这么长吗?
4)Twist的作用是什么?
5)图中twist和weave都指向dye,是要dye两次吗?
6)图中select、boil、unwind、twist、weave的过去分词都是加ed吗?
【总述】Thediagramillustratesthemainstagesinthelifecycleofsilkwormandtheprocedureofsilkclothmaking.【两图关系】Fromthisdiagramitcanbeseenthatthecocoonsarenecessaryrawmaterialsusedforsilkclothproduction.
【分述流程1】Inthefirststage,eggsareproducedbythemothandittakestendaysforeacheggtobecomeasilkwormlarvathatfeedsonmulberryleaves.Thisstagelastsforuptosixweeksuntilthelarvaproducesacocoonofsilkthreadarounditself.Afteraperiodofaboutthreeweeks,theadultmothseventuallyemergefromthesecocoonsandthelifecyclebeginsagain.
【分述流程2】Whenitcomestotheproductionofsilkcloth,oncethecocoonsareselected,theyareboiledinwaterandthethreadscanbeseparatedintheunwindingstage.Eachthreadisbetween300and900meterslong,whichmeanstheycanbetwistedtogether,dyedandthenusedtoproduceclothintheweavingstage.
【小结】Overall,thediagramsshowthatthecocoonstageofthesilkwormcanbeusedtoproducesilkcloththroughaverysimpleprocess.
Theillustrationsbelowshowhowchocolateisproduced.
Summarisetheinformaitonbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures.
这个流程图介绍了巧克力的制作过程,种植可可树,收获,发酵,晒,装袋,托运,送去工厂,烘焙,研磨去壳,最后挤压产生液体巧克力。
重点的词汇在图的下方都有显示。
Thediagramshowsthestagesintheprocessofmakingchocolate.【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。
流程图必备三个词:
process:
整个过程,stage:
阶段,step:
步骤】
Chocolatecomesfromthecacaotree,whichisgrowninpartsofSouthAmerica,AfricaandIndonesia.【开头不能冲上来就直接介绍cacaotree,而是通过主题词chocolate引出,否则显得太唐突】【流程图特点之一:
介绍过程要使用一般现在时】【流程图特点之二:
大量使用定语从句,将有关联的两句话连接。
】【流程图特点之三:
大量使用被动语态】Thetreeproduceslargeredpodswhichcontainwhitecocoabeans.
Firstly,【流程图特点之四:
使用一些表示顺序的连接词】whenthepodsareripe,theyareharvested,thebeansareremovedandtheyarefermentedforseveraldaysinlargewoodenboxes.【三个句子的并列:
“句子A,句子Band句子C”。
】Duringthefermentingprocess,thebeansturnbrown.【流程图特点之五:
要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的的一些内容,否则可能达不到字数要求。
但是一定要把握尺度,千万不要加上自己的主观观点,否则会扣分】
Next,thebrownbeansarespreadinthesuntodry.Theyarethenputinlargesacksandtransportedbytrainorlorry.Afterthis,thebeansaretakentoachocolatefactorywheretheyareroastedinanovenattemperaturesofbetween250and350degreeCelsius.
Afterbeingroasted,thebeansarecrushedandtheoutershellisremoved.Thispartisnotneededformakingchocolate.Finally,theinnerpartofthebeanispressedandliquidchocolateisproduced.
时间阶段:
afteraperiodof..months/days/minutes,during…
顺序连词:
first,firstofall,inthefirststage,initially,tobeginwith
Second,then,next,also
Afterthat,atthesametime,inthemeantime,meanwhile
Priorto,until
thefirststageinvolves…/inthesecondstage/inthethirdstage/
inthelaststage//Thenextstepinthestageisthat….
目的连词:
inorderto/inorderthat;
soasto/sothat
Thediagramsbelowshowthestagesandequipmentusedinthecement-makingprocess,andhowcementisusedtoproduceconcreteforbuildingpurposes.(剑8test3task1)
一、题目类型:
流程图-2个
二、题目简要内容:
图1-水泥的生产;
图2-混凝土生产过程
三、素材积累:
连接词:
then,afterwards,attheendof,asmentionedabove,however…
代词:
thefirst,the,this,which,where,thelatter,thefinal,thelast…
动词:
introduce放入
obtain获得
passthrough穿过
gointo进入
workwith采用
comeout出来
beginwith从…开始
名词:
material材料
combination组合
element成分
四、论据积累:
雅思流程图的写作要根据流程图中的箭头指示方向而进行写作,描写的顺序千万不能弄错。
五、结构分析:
本图由两幅流程图构成。
通过分析可知,考生除了要分别描述制作水泥和混凝土的过程之外,还要对这两种方法进行对比比较。
写作思路:
写作时可以分为四段:
第一段改写题目介绍主要内容;
第二段和第三段分别描写水泥和混凝土的制作过程;
第四段总结这两种制作方法的差异。
Thediagramsshowtheprocessesandtheequipmentsusedtomakecement,andhowtheseareusedtoproduceconcreteforbuildingpurpose.
Thefirststepinthecementproductionsistointroducelimestoneclay.Thesematerialspassthroughacrusherthatproducesapowder.Thenthispowdergoesintoamixer.Afterthis,theproductpassestoarotatingheaterwhichworkswithheat.Afterwards,themixturegoesintoagrinderwherethecementcomesout.Attheendoftheprocess,thecementispackedinbags.
Referringtotheconcreteproduction,theprocessbeginswithacombinationof15%cement,10%water,25%sandand50%gravel.Thesefourelementsareintroducedintoaconcretemixer.
Asmentionedabove,theconcreteproductiontakesfewerstepsthanthecementproduction,however,itisnecessarytousemorematerialsthanthelatterprocessinordertoobtainthefinalproduct.
Thelastdifferencebetweenbothprocessesisthattheconcretemixerdoesnotworkwithheat.
改写开头+总结概况(几步)
Thediagrambelowshowstheprocessbywhichbricksare
manufactured
forthebuildingindustry.
--Thepicturedisplayshowbricksareproducedthroughsevenconsecutivestages.
Before/after+doingsth.,….;
Before/after+SVO,…..
1)Thepieces/lumpsofclayneedtobeplacedonametalgridsoastoturnthebigchunksofclayintosmalleronesbeforefallingonaroller.
2)Afterthebigchunksofclayareturnedintosmalleroneswiththeuseofametalgrid,thesmallerpiecesofclaysfallonaroller.
Once/When…,….
-Oncesandandwaterareaddedintothesmallchunksofclay,softandwetclaycanbeformed.
-Oncethebricksareshaped,theyaredriedtoremoveexcessmoistureinanovenfor24-48hoursthatmightotherwisecausecrackingduringtheensuingfiringprocess.
Havingdonesth.,….
Havingbeendriedintheoven,bricksarefiredtomoderatetemperaturesbetween200and980degreescentigradeinacompactedfurnacecalledkilnandthenturnedtoakilnwheretemperaturerisestothemaximumof1300degreescentigrade.
Astheresultofdoingsth.,….
Astheresultofbeingcooledinachamberfor2-3days,bricksareeventuallyformed.
…sothat…
thebricksbeingfiredneedtobemovedtoachamberwheretemperaturebecomeslowerfor2-3dayssothattheycanbecooledandeventuallyformed.
NotUntil…
Notuntiltheblendofingredientsisconveyedandplacedintoamouldcanbricksbeshapedwithanidenticalsize.
By/throughsth./doingsth.,….
-Throughbeingcutbyastiffwire,bricksareinitiallyformedwithdesiredlength.
Theprocessstartsfrom…Subsequently,….,whichthen…..Afterwards,….
Atthatpoint,….,which,inturn,....Itisworthnoticingthat….Before….Next,…..Inthefollowingstage,….Also,….Eventually,….
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