托福综合写作满分范文.doc
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一:
网络故事书(web-storybookservice)
reading
网络故事书的好处
1.可以教小朋友读书
2.经济实惠,家长不需要为孩子买书了
3.可以代替父母陪伴孩子,为家长节省时间
lecture
反驳
1.使用时不能和小朋友互动(askquestionandgetfeedback)
2.网络上的故事都是过时的,要想读新故事还是要买书(不足)
3.父母与孩子一起读书可以增进感情
例文:
Thespeakerrebutsthereading'sargumentbypointingout
theinadequacyoftheweb-storybookservices'interactionwithchildren,theincompletenessofthedatapool,andbyunderminingtheassumptionthatsavingparents'readingtimeisabenefit.
Thespeakerbeginsbystatingthatmerelypronouncingthewordsandstoryforthechildrenwillnotprovideadequatelearningexperiences.Despitethetimesavedandpronunciationutilitieslaidoutinthereading,thewebservicescanonlyrespondwith"correct"or"notcorrect".Thelackoffeedbacktochildren'squestionswillnotcreateaneffectivelearningprocess.
Thenthespeakergoesontoarguethatthecurrentweb-storybookserviceshaveaverylimitedcollectionofbooks,thusnotbeingabletosaveparentsthecostofnewbooksasthereadingstates,becausetheparentsstillhavetobuymanybooksthatthewebservicesdonotprovide.
Lastly,thespeakerchallengesthevalidityoftheassumptionofsavingparents'timetoreadstoriestochildren.Thereadingarguesthatsavingthetimeisabenefitfortheparents,butthespeakermaintainsthatthewholepointofreadingstoriesisfarbeyondreadingstoriesalone.Incontrast,itisanessentialwayofcommunicatingandbuildingrelationshipbetweenparentsandchildren.
二:
药品广告(drugadvertisement)
提出命题:
药品广告所提供的信息都是客观全面的,且病人对药物了解得越多越好
1.病人可以更多了解处方药的相关信息(information)
2.医生开药时,病人可以与广告上进行比较,有利于选药
3.通过广告,病人可以了解到新药的发展,提醒医生
挑战命题:
病人不需要对药物了解太多,因为有时候了解得太多会对非专业的病人产生困扰,而且广告所提供的信息也不完整全面
1.广告通常只有宣传好处,对副作用(sideeffects)一笔带过,病人很难判断
2.病人对药物的准确用法用量不了解,可能会用错
3.广告只宣传新药,对旧药没有宣传,但是针对不同的病情,也许旧药更为合适
Thespeakerraisesseriouscounterargumentsagainstthereadingparagraphsbyprovidingdrasticallydifferentevidencesregarding
theeffectsoftheadvertisement,theimpactofself-selectingmedication,andtheimpactoftrendsinthepharmaceuticalindustry.
Firstly,knowingmoreinformationfromtheadswillnotnecessarilyhelpthepatientsmakebetter-informeddecisions,asthereadingargues.Onthecontrary,patients,withoutprofessionaltrainingandknowledge,willbemoresusceptibletomisunderstandinginformation.Forexample,theywouldfocusonlyonthepositivesidesofacertainmedicinewhileignoringtheserioussideeffects.
Inaddition,ifthepatientsbeartheresponsibilityofprescribingtheirownmedication,theyassumemoreresponsibilitytotheirownhealth.Thismakesdoctorslessliableforpotentialrisksandundesirableconsequences.
Lastly,asforthenewtrends'benefitstothepatients,thespeakerdoesnotchallengethereadingdirectly.Instead,hearguesthatthenewmedicine,whichwillcountformostoftheadsmaynotnecessarilybethebestmedicine,eventhoughthepatientscaninformtheirdoctorsaboutthenewproducts.
三:
网络问卷(webbasedsurvey)
reading
网络问卷相对传统问卷的优势
1.调查范围更广,所以调查结果就更为准确(逻辑错误:
参加人多并不代表范围广,也不能保证效果好)
2.发放,填写和收集问卷更加方便简单
3.成本低
lecture
反驳网络问卷的优势
1.所取得的调查结果不全面(biased),因为不是所有人都会上网,中老年人上网会比较少,而年轻人上网比较多
2.成本并不会低,因为一个好的网络问卷需要一个团队的大量工作(提出新的证据:
网络问卷也需要成本和人力资源)
3.大多数人对网络问卷都不严肃,会得到不正确的信息,容易混淆视听。
例文:
Thespeakerquestionstheeffectivenessofwebbasedsurveysbyprovidingevidencescontradictorytothereading.
Firstly,heidentifiedthereading'slogicalflawinassumingthatanincreaseinthescopeandquantityofthesurveywillautomaticallytranslatetogreaterprecisionofthesurveys.However,ifsurveysaimtoquestionpeopleover60yearsold,howcantheseoldpeopleconductsurveysonlinesincethisgroupseldomsurftheInternet?
Thewebsurveysareeffectiveinreachingmainlytheyounggeneration.Thustheresultscannotbeextendedtodemonstratetheviewsofthewholepopulation.
Secondly,althoughtheweb-basedsurveyswilllowerpapercost,theywillinevitablyincurnewcostsinwebdesigning,flashyfeatures,andotherelements,whichwillrequiremorecostlyteamwork.Thisevidenceeffectivelyattacksthereading'sargumentthatwebsurveyswillcertainlyreducethecostofthesurvey.
Intheend,manywebdesignerstendtooverdointhewebpageandaddfancyandflashyfeatures.Asaresult,manypeopleperceivetheweb-basedsurveysasnotseriousandarethusnotwillingtorespondtothesurveys.Unlikephysicalsurveysthatdrawattentioneffectively,manywebbasedsurveysaresimplyignoredorevendeleted.
四:
打分偏高(inflationofmarks)
reading
老师给学生打的分数越来越高
1.分数打得低会减低学生的学习意志
2.会影响教师自己的测评结果
3.因为别的老师给的成绩高,如果不跟着给高分,学生出去找工作会吃亏
lecture
解决方案
1.应从小灌输正确的学习观念,不应因一次小失利而丧失信心
2.教师的评测可以改在学期结束前进行,这样学生的成绩就不会影响到评测结果
3.企业在选拔人才时可以看学生在班级中的排名而不是单纯的成绩
例文:
Thespeakerchallengesthereasoningthatsupportsthecurrentinflationin
collegegradingsystem,providesveryspecificalternativestoteacherevaluationt
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