届英语二轮专项冲刺之专题检测卷三十二 短文改.docx
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届英语二轮专项冲刺之专题检测卷三十二短文改
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:
在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:
把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:
在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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(2013·西安模拟)
Skiingismyfavoritesport,eventhoughIhadonlyskiedforfourdaysinmywholelife!
LastyearmyfatherpromisedthatbecausemybrotherVictordidwellinhisexams,hewouldbringusforaspecialholiday.WhenVictorgotstraightA’s,Dadsaid,“Ipromisedaspecialholiday.IthinkIshouldkeepmywords.”Victor’sdreamwastoseereallysnow.SoweflewtoSeoulatChristmasvacation,andthentookabustoMujuResort.Asweclimbupthemountain,wesawsomesnowonthetrees.Webegantoplaysnow!
Nooneinmyfamilyhadevertouchedsnowbefore.Wewerealllikethelittlechildren.Wepickeditup,madesnowballs,andthrewitateachother.
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ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmypockets,andIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperienceforthreemainreasons:
beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.Intheotherhand,Icanmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformetofollow.
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(2013·绵阳模拟)
LastSaturday,ourschoolhadorganizedalloftheSenior1studentstovisitthechildrenatalocalorphanage.Wetookmanybooksthatwaspopularamongchildren,aswellasmanykindsofschoolsuppliesandtoys,tochildren.Theyweredelightedtoreceivethesegift.Weplayedsomegamestogetherandgiveperformances.Beforeleavetheorphanagewetookphotoswiththemandgavethemourcontactdetailsbutwecouldkeepintouchwithoneanother.
Thatday,eachoneofushadanenjoyabletime.Wegavethechildrentheircareandhelp;forreturn,theygaveustheirsmilesandlove.Thesevoluntaryactivitiesmadeadeeplyimpressiononus.
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(2013·大连模拟)
NowadaysGrade3studentsaregeneralfacedwithalotofpressure,whichisrathercommon.Toreduceit,thefollowedsuggestionsmayhelp.Firstofall,knowexactlywhatleadtoyourpressure,andthenyoucantakemeasurestodealwithit.Secondly,setupagoalwhatisnottoohigh,inanotherwords,don’tputtoomuchpressureonyourself.Thirdly,findawaytorelaxyouoccasionally,forexample,youcanlistentomusic,goswimorjustsimplygowalking.Lastly,makefriendwithothers,suchas,yourclassmates,yourteachers,yourparents.Theywillunderstandyouandcometoyourhelpwhenyouarereallyinthetrouble.Inaword,nevergetyourselfstuckinthepressurefor“impossibleisnothing”.
答案解析
1
答案:
Skiingismyfavoritesport,eventhoughIhadonlyskiedforfourdaysinmy
have
wholelife!
LastyearmyfatherpromisedthatbecausemybrotherVictordidwellin
if
hisexams,hewouldbringusforaspecialholiday.WhenVictorgotstraightA’s,Dad
take
said,“Ipromisedaspecialholiday.IthinkIshouldkeepmywords.”Victor’sdream
word
wastoseereallysnow.SoweflewtoSeoulatChristmasvacation,andthentooka
realfor
bustoMujuResort.Asweclimbupthemountain,wesawsomesnowonthetrees.
climbed
Webegantoplay∧snow!
Nooneinmyfamilyhadevertouchedsnowbefore.We
with
werealllikethelittlechildren.Wepickeditup,madesnowballs,andthrewitateach
them
other.
1.【解析】第一句had→have。
主句谓语动词是一般现在时态,所以,状语从句的谓语动词应该是现在完成时态,不可能是过去完成时态。
2.【解析】第二句because→if。
在that引导的宾语从句中,又包含一个条件状语从句。
在爸爸许诺时,考试还没进行,所以,应该用if引导条件状语从句。
3.【解析】第二句bring→take。
此处的take表示“带我们去”,不能用bring。
4.【解析】第四句words→word。
keepone’sword是固定词组,意为“遵守诺言”。
5.【解析】第五句really→real。
用形容词修饰名词。
6.【解析】第六句at→for。
forChristmasvacation意为“去度圣诞假期”。
7.【解析】第七句climb→climbed。
文章叙述的是过去的事情,故应用一般过去时态。
8.【解析】第八句play后面加with。
playwithsnow意为“玩雪”。
9.【解析】第十句去掉the。
littlechildren表示泛指,其前面不用定冠词。
10.【解析】第十一句第二个it→them。
此处的them指的是snowballs,而不是snow。
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答案:
ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhigh
decided
school.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmy
gettingdollars
pockets,andIthoughtaboutleavinghome.Ittookmeonlytwoweeksawayfrom
homewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferent
whentotally
experienceforthreemainreasons:
beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmore
creative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold
∧.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheir
to
advices.Intheotherhand,Icanmakemy
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