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Recently,thispicturehastriggeredaheateddiscussionontheWechat—themostinfluentialsocialmediainchina

第二句：

Theauthor’srealpurposeisnotassimpleasthepictureitself,buttoleadobserverstofindoutwhathidesbehindtheiceberg.

第二段（阐述图画含义）

（提出观点）

nothingcanbecomparedwith+重要主题，+状语

Thepicturedemonstratestwostrikinglydifferentattitudes,pessimismandoptimism,whenfacingthesamethingandtellsusthatnothingcanbecomparedwiththeoptimismandtheenthusiasm,especiallyinthetimesofknowledgeexplosion,whenthenews,facts,opinionsevenrumorshavebeenbombardingusfromeverycorneroftheworld.

表明公众态度——

What’smore,nobodydarefailtoattachdueattentiontotheimportanceofoptimism.

Peoplefromallaroundtheworld,governmentsandtheinternationalorganizationsgiveprioritytothefundamentalroleofchoice.

第三句：

句群——Bydoingso...这样一来......展开P52（6句）

Indeed,makingtheadvisablechoiceremainstobeanintegralpartforone’spersonalsuccess.

Putanotherway,withouttherightdirection,onecouldbarelyfitintosociety,letaloneattainsocialstatus.

Theproperchoiceofthefuturecareercanhelppeopletreattheworldwithbenevolence,confidenceandtolerance.

Weretherenorationaldecisionforourfuturelife,hardlycanwetastetherealhappinessoftheworld.（integral完整的，必须的;

benevolence/bə'

nevələns/,仁慈）

第三段（评论或者举例）万能结尾

Nowweneedtoworkwithperseveranceinadown-to-earthway.

HenryFord,agreatAmericanindustrialist工业家,thecreatorofthe”motorage”,theexcellentembodimentofAmericandream,whowentthroughunusualgrowthhistory,achievedhisowngloriousaccomplishmentandgainedfar-rangingsupportperfectlyexemplifiestheimportanceofreasonablechoice,iargue.

Therefore,thegeneralpublicissupposedtoenhancetheirawarenessthatproperchoiceplaysansignificantroleinourlives.

2012年真题（成功品质——乐观）

Asisshownabove,inthemiddleofthepicturestandtwopersons,lookingatthedroppedwinebottle,showingdifferentreactions,onesigningthat“thereisnothingleft”,andtheotherbeinggratefulthat“thereissomethingleft”.

Nothingcanbecomparedwiththeoptimism,especiallyinthetimesofknowledgeexplosion,whenthenews,facts,opinionsevenrumorshavebeenbombardingusfromeverycorneroftheworld.

What’smore,nobodydarefailtoattachdueattentiontotheimportanceofoptimism.

Peoplefromallaroundtheworld,governmentsandtheinternationalorganizationsgiveprioritytothefundamentalroleofoptimism

Indeed,positiveremainstobeanintegralpartforone’spersonalsuccess.

Putanotherway,withoutoptimism,onecouldbarelyfitintosociety,letaloneattainsocialstatus.Positivecanhelppeopletreattheworldwithbenevolence,confidenceandtolerance.

Weretherenooptimismforourfuturelife,hardlycanwetastetherealhappinessoftheworld.（integral完整的，必须的;

HenryFord,agreatAmericanindustrialist工业家,thecreatorofthe”motorage”,theexcellentembodimentofAmericandream,whowentthroughunusualgrowthhistory,achievedhisowngloriousaccomplishmentandgainedfar-rangingsupportperfectlyexemplifiestheimportanceofoptimism,iargue.Therefore,thegeneralpublicissupposedtoenhancetheirawarenessthatproperchoiceplaysansignificantroleinourlives.

2011年真题（环保类）

Asisshownabove,onthelakefloatsaboat,onwhichonecoupleoftouristsarethrowingwasteintothelake,whichhasbeeninamessandfullofvariouswastesincludinglunchboxes,fishboneanditslike.

Theprimarypurposeofthepictureaboveisthatdueattentionshouldbepaidtourgentproblemthatpeople’sinappropriatebehaviorsleadtotheseveredestructionofenvironment.

thepicturedoesrevealthat+有害主题isnotonlyharmful,butalsodamaging,+状语。

Thepicturedoesrevealthattheenvironmentalproblemisnotonlyharmful,butalsodamaging.

What’smore,thepublicfailstoattachdueattentionto.environmentalprotection.

Behindthescenepresentedabove,therelurksahostofproblemsofsomehigherlevel.

Smog，PM2.5acidrain,globalwarming,thethinnessofozonelayerspossiblychangesclimatepatterns,affectscropproductionanddisruptswildlifedistributions,andleadstotheextinctionofwildspecies.

industrialsewagedumpedintoriversorlakespolluteswater;

thismaycausethedeathoffishesandotheraquaticspecies.

peoplelivingbytheriverwillprobablydevelopstrangediseases.

Weretherenoenvironmentalprotection,neverwouldwetastetherealhappinessofthelife.（lurks潜在[lɜ:

k];

ahostofproblems一系列的问题;

smog烟雾；

thinness/θɪnnəs/稀薄；

industrialsewage工业污水[ˈsu:

ɪdʒ]；

aquaticspecies[əˈkwæ

tɪk]水生植物）

第三段（评论或者举例）

情况很紧急thephenomenonbeingsoserious,itishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestotacklethisproblem.

立法很重要itisimperativethatlawsandregulationsbeintroducedandenforcedtocurbandharnessthisurgentproblem我们必须制定一些法律法规来解决这些问题

专家想对策Beyonddoubt,researchers,scholars,andexpertsmustplaytheirpartinthisissue.theyareexpectedtoworkoutup-to-datasolutionstodealwiththesituation.在这个问题上，研究人员，学者和专家应该找出与时俱进的方法来解决它

第四句：

公众应教育Thegeneralpublicissupposedtoenhancetheirawarenessoftheharmfuleffectsofenvironmentalpollution

第五句：

Allthesemeasureswillhelpusinsolvingtheseimportantproblemsandpreventusfromdangerousillnessesanddiseases.

Onlyinahealthyatmospherecanwehopetowitnesstheidealsceneinwhichpeoplecanenjoytheirlifetotheuttermost.最大限度

2010年真题（文化交流）

Asisshownabove,inthepictureabovestandsahotpot,atraditionalChinesecooker,containingalotofnamesofculturalelementsofbothwesternandeasternculturalbackgrounds,suchasShakespeare,Confuciusandhislike,withalinegoinglikethis:

culturalhotpot—deliciousandnutritious.

Nothingcanbecomparedwiththeculturalexchange,especiallyinthetimesofknowledgeexplosion,whenthenews,facts,opinionsevenrumorshavebeenbombardingusfromeverycorneroftheworld.

What’smore,nobodydarefailtoattachdueattentiontotheimportanceofculture.

Peoplefromallaroundtheworld,governmentsandtheinternationalorganizationsgiveprioritytothefundamentalroleofculture.

Bydoingso,theconflictsandtensionscanberelived.

Itputshumanrelationshipinaharmoniousposition,promotingmutualunderstanding,enhancingfriendlyties,andshorteningthegapbetweenpeople.

Weretherenoculturalexchange,hardlycanwetastethewonderofwesterncultures.（tensions紧张气氛；

mutual彼此的；

ties关系）

结尾句——

Thebenefitsovershadowthedisadvantages利大于弊

Insummary,whilesomemayremainunconvincedbymydiscussion,buttheanalysisihaveofferedsofarshouldatleastmakethemawareofthecomplexityandimportantoftheissue.

Therefore,thegeneralpublicissupposedtoenhancetheirawarenessthatculturalexchangeplaysansignificantroleinourlives.

2006年真题（偶像崇拜）

周围事物怎么样或者在做什么——独立主格描述

Asisshownabove,inthechairsitsayoungman,havinghishaircutascoolasDavidbeck-hamwithcostof300yuan;

whileanotheronewritesDavid’snameonhisface.Therehasbeenaheateddiscussionabouttheminthenewspaper.

第二段（阐述图画含义）9句

Thepicturetellsusthatnothingcanbecomparedwith+重要主题，+状语

Thepicturedoesrevealthat+有害主题isnotonlyharmful,butalsodamaging,+状语。

Thepicturetellsusthatthestarworshipisnotonlyharmful,butalsodamaging.

What’smore,thepublicattachesdueattentionto...+重要主题

What’smore,thepublicfailstoattachdueattentionto...+有害主题

What’smore,thepublicfailstoemphasizethebadeffectsofit.

Bydoingso,theyoungwastestheirhours,lavishestheirdays,evensquanderstheiryearswhiled