句子润色及模拟作文Word格式.docx
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Thepicturesymbolicallydepictsthatsixlovelychildrenfromdifferentcountrieswithdifferentethnicitiesgettogetherandplaygameshappilyinaworldofharmony.Itisquiteobviousthatthedrawerwishestodrawourattentiontothemostfavorablesocialphenomenonthatculturalexchangesaregainingworldwidepopularity.
Thereare,tomymind,severalreasonsaccountingforthisphenomenonofthepicture.Foronething,culturalexchangescanenhanceinternationalfriendship,andpeoplecanacquirebetterunderstandingofeachother.Throughculturalexchanges,theycanlearnofdifferentpeoplesaroundtheworld,whattheybelievein,howtheyleadtheirdailylife,andtheirtraditionsandcustoms.Foranother,culturalexchangescanalsogreatlybenefitthecountriesinvolved.Thatisbecausecountriescansharetheirachievementswitheachothertostimulatingtheirownsocialprogressandculturalprosperity.
Basedontheabovereasons,Iholdthatworldwideculturalexchangeisbeneficialtoallcountriesinvolved.AsforChina,theopeninguppolicyhasgreatlypromotedtheChinesecivilizationtotheentireworldandviceversa.Therefore,Icanfirmlyconcludethatinthelongrun,culturalexchangeswillcontributetoaflourishingChineseandglobaleconomy,aswellasdiversifiedcultures.
二、人与自然(实物)关系类
Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould
2)possiblereasonsfortheissueofSavingLandforEndangeredAnimals
3)conclusion.
Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)
Thereisnodoubtthathumanactivityhasaneffectontheplanet.Weseetheevidenceofmankind’sendeavorsallaroundus.Overall,itseemsthathumanactivityharmstheEarthmorethanbenefitsitmakes.Asisvividlybetrayedinthephotoabove,duetooverdevelopment,thereislimitedlandbeingsetasideforendangeredanimals.
Absolutely,weshouldreservesomelandfortheworld’sanimalsforthefollowingreasons.First,mankind’sneedforlandisconstantlygrowing.Ifthedemandisnotcheckedcontrolledinsomeway,humanswilleventuallydevelopalloftheearth’savailableland.Atthattime,mankindwillhavenomoreroomtogrow,andallthewildanimalswillhavedisappeared,aswellasothervaluableresources.Second,humansareabletoinnovateandcanusethelandthattheyalreadypossessinmoreefficientways.Animalsareunabletodothis.Oncetheirlandistakenawayfromthem,theywilldie.Thirdandlast,endangeredanimalsareanimportantpartofthebiodiversityofourplanet.Iftheydisappear,wecannotpredictwhattheeffectwillbe.Therefore,weshouldtreatsuchanimalsasavaluableresourcetobeprotected.
Tosumup,theworld’sendangeredanimalsareanimportantresourceandweshouldprotectthembysettingasidesomelandforthem.Althoughmankind’sneedforlandcontinuestogrow,peopleareintelligentandinventiveenoughtoputthelandintouseproperly.Inthisway,wecanhaveenoughlandforfarming,housingandindustry,andpreservethebiodiversityoftheplanetatthesametime.
三、个人(个体)体验类
Studythefollowingsetofcartoonscarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushould
1)describethecartoons,
2)statingitsmainidea,and
3)givingyourcomment.
Inthecartoonwecanseeatallandthinman,alongwithashortandstoutmanareusingsuitablehotpotfordinner.Apparently,thepictureaimstoemphasizethatanythingtobedonemustbemeasuredinadvancesothatweareabletofindaproperwaytodoit.
Thissameprincipleappliestosolvinganyotherproblem.Firstly,whenwewanttoknowtherealityofsomething,wemustdescribeitlikeitis,gettingridofourprejudicesandexaggerations,sothatwecanhaveanunbiasedview.Secondly,theobjectshouldbeanalyzedinaconcretewaysothatwecangraspthereasonsandrulesofit.Thirdly,wemustadaptourapproachtosolvingaproblem,foreachsituationisdifferentfromtheothers.Sowemustviewaproblemfromdifferentperspectives.
Thecartoonimpliesdifferentmeaningstodifferentpeople.Ateachershouldadoptdifferentteachingmethodsaccordingtothestudentsintheclass;
adoctorshouldprescribedifferenttreatmentsaccordingtothepatient’ssymptoms;
afarmershouldseeddifferentplantsaccordingtothevariousconditionsoftheearth.Fromaphilosophicalpointofview,dissimilarproblemsshouldbeapproacheddifferently.Goodresultscomefromattentiveanalysisofaproblem.
四、城市交通
思路点拨:
此图片描述的是一幅交通堵塞的场景。
图片中,车一辆接着一辆地堵在街上,各种抱怨声不断。
毫无疑问,这幅图反映的是城市交通的压力问题。
同时,汽车过多就意味着尾气排放过多,所以这幅图同时又反映了环保和低碳问题。
第一段:
描述图画;
第二段:
分析交通堵塞给人和环境带来的影响;
第三段:
建议措施。
思维拓展
建议措施部分,还可以从如下角度提出:
呼吁政府:
投资完善基础设施、继续坚持限行的制度。
倡导低碳出行:
步行、骑自行车。
倡导理智选择城市:
人全部拥挤在大城市带来的负面影响。
高分范文
Howhorriblethetrafficis!
Thepicturedepictsascenarioofaterribletrafficjaminthestreet.Infact,thetrafficjamissoheavythatitismoreofaparkinglotthanacrowdedstreet①.Anxiouspassengerscannottakebusesbecausetherearefewbuses.Instead,thestreetisfilledwithtoomanyprivatecars。
Exaggeratedasitis,thephenomenonisnotuncommonnowadays.Withthenumberofprivatecarsincreasing②,trafficjamsinmetropolitansareboundtohappen.Heavytransportationpressureinlargecitiesmaybringmuchinconveniencetopeopleandexertnegativeimpactsontheenvironment.Ontheonehand,whentrafficjamhappens,shortdistanceinthepastnowseemstobecometerriblylong,anddriverscoulddonothingbuttowait.Therefore,alotofprecioustimehasbeenwastedontheroad.Ontheotherhand,exhaustedgasemittedbycars③hasincreasedtheburdenofenvironmentandcausedcarbonemission,whichhasdivertedfromtheconceptoflivingalowcarbonlife。
Therefore,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoalleviatethetrafficjam.Firstly,taxesleviedonthesalesofprivatecars④shouldberaisedsoastorestrictprivatecarownershiprate.Secondly,publictransportationsuchasbusesandsubways,whicharelow-carbontransportationmeans,shouldbeencouragedandpromotedsothatwecanhaveasmoothtransportation。
佳作妙译
交通状况真是一团糟!
这幅漫画描述了街上糟糕的交通堵塞的场景。
实际上,交通堵塞严重到了一定程度,与其说这是一条拥挤的街道,还不如说这是一个停车场。
焦急的乘客等不到数量稀少的公交车,而私家车却到处都是。
虽然这幅图有点夸张,但是当今这种现象并不罕见。
私家车的增多必然产生大城市交通堵塞。
大城市沉重的交通压力会给人民生活带来不便,也会对环境造成负面影响。
一方面,一旦发生堵车,原来很近的路程似乎变得十分漫长,除了等没有别的办法,大量的宝贵时间被浪费在路上。
另一方面,汽车排放的尾气更增加了环境的负担、导致了碳排放,这和低碳生活的理念相违背。
因此,应该采取有效措施缓解严重的交通堵塞问题。
第一,通过提高税费限制私家车拥有率(保有量)。
第二,应该鼓励和推广低碳的公交车、地铁等公共交通工具,以便我们拥有更顺畅的交通。
名师点评
①itismoreofaparkinglotthanacrowdedstreet:
moreofAthanB的结构,通过字面可以理解成:
更多的是A而不是B。
翻译的时候,往往翻译成:
与其说是B,不如说是A。
反过来,当我们想用英语表达“与其……不如……”的时候,我们可以采用这个结构。
实际上,这个结构在历年真题阅读中曾多次出现。
如2000年Text3中的选项:
Futuristpoetryismoreofatransientphenomenonthanliterature。
②Withthenumberofprivatecarsincreasing:
with短语表伴随,翻译成“随着”。
③exhaustedgasemittedbycars:
其中emittedbycars是过去分词短语作后置定语。
相当于定语从句:
gaswhichisemittedbycars(被汽车排放的尾气)。
写法:
请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。
④taxesleviedonthesalesofprivatecars:
其中leviedonthesalesofprivatecars(针对私家车被征的税),为过去分词做定语。
五、礼到心不到
A.Topic:
Studythefollowingcartooncarefullyandwriteanessayonthetopicoflovingourparents.
B.Wordlimit:
about200words
C.Youressayshouldmeettherequirementsbelow:
1)Describethecartoonandthemessageconveyed
2)Drawaconclusionandgiveyourcommentonthecartoon.Youressaymustbewrittenclearly.
Asisvividlydepictsinthecartoon,oldparentsaresittingonthecoachwithdisappointmentandsadness,becausenoonecomesbacktocelebratewiththem.Althoughtheyreceivedalotofpresentsfromtheirchildren,theyfeelverymiserableandhavenoappetite,sincewhattheywantmostisnotsuchmaterialstuffsbutthecareandlovefromtheirchildrenandgrandchildren.
Nowadays,youngmenlooksobusyandindependentinmodernsocietythattheywillneverfeelfreetolivewiththeirparents.Theymoveoutandmindtheirownbusinesseveryday.Onusualdays,theywouldnotliketotaketheirtimetovisittheirparentswiththeexcusesofbusyness.Onsomefestivaldays,theyprobablysharealittletimetodropintheirparentsorevenjustsendsomepresentsbutdon’tshowuppersonallylikewhatthecartoonaboveillustrates.Theythinkthatpresentscanrepresenttheirlove,however,totheparents,whoovercamealotofdifficultiestobringthemup,thosestuffarefarawayfromwhattheyreallyhopefor.
Withtherapidpaceofeconomicdevelopment,ouroldparentsfeelmoreandmorelonelyandunhappy.Howeverbusywemaybe,weshouldspendmoretimetalkingwiththemandaccompanyingthem,becausetheyoncegaveussomuchselflesslovethatweshouldreturnthemthesamefromthebottomofourheart.(238words)
漫画中生动地展示了一对老人带着失望与悲伤坐在椅子上,因为没人回来和他们一起庆祝节日。
虽然他们收到了子女的许多礼物,但他们感到非常孤独,也没什么胃口,因为他们最需要的并非这些物质的东西,而是子女们的关爱。
在现代社会中,年轻人看起来如此忙碌,以至于无法抽空来陪伴父母。
他们大多搬出去独自居住,每天忙于自己的事务。
在平常的日子里,他们以忙为借口,不愿意花时间去探望父母。
在一些节日,他们可能只留一点时间去看望父母或是如漫画中所示的仅仅送些礼物表示心意而无法与父母团聚。
他们认为礼物可以代表他们的爱意,但是,对于含辛茹苦把他们养育大的父母来说,这些礼物远远不是他们所期望的。
随着经济的快速发展,年迈的父母们感到越来越孤独与不快。
因此,作为子女,无论多忙,我们都应该花时间与父母聊天,陪伴他们,因为他们曾经给了我们无私的爱,我们应当以同样的爱回报父母。
考研英语作文:
句子的润色和修饰
下面来谈一谈描述段和阐述段的句子写法,这两个段落在以往的考试中出现的最多,供大家参考。
描述段句型的润色修饰
1)Therebe句型
不好说未来考试还会出现什么图画,但是有一点是肯定的,那就是只要还有图画描述这个段落考法,therebe句型就是不可回避的。
这种句型专门表达"
某地方有某物"
,在描述段中出现的可能性很大。
一般therebe句型的结构是:
Therebe名词+
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