小初高学习专题06 书面表达第02期届高三英语百所好题速递分项解析汇编.docx

小初高学习专题06 书面表达第02期届高三英语百所好题速递分项解析汇编.docx

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小初高学习专题06书面表达第02期届高三英语百所好题速递分项解析汇编

【浙江省“五校联考”2019届高三上学期第一次考试】假如你是李华，你的好友Tom想约你明晚和他家人共进晚餐，但你因故不能应约。

请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：

1.表示歉意；

2.解释原因；

3.弥补方法。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】DearTom,

Thankyouforyourinvitationtodinneratyourhometomorrowevening.Unfortunately,itismuchtomyregretthatIcannotjoinyouandyourfamily,becauseIwillbefullyoccupiedthenforanimportantexamcomingthedayaftertomorrow.Ifeelterriblysorryformissingthechanceofsuchahappyget-together,andIhopethatallofyouenjoyagoodtime.Isitpossibleforyouandmetohaveaprivatemeetingafterward?

Ifso,pleasedon’thesitatetodropmealineaboutyourpreferabledate.Idolongforapleasantchatwithyou.

Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【分析】

本文为应用文中的书信的写作。

假如你是李华，因故不能友John应约支与朋友一起共进晚餐，据此用英语写一封致歉信。

要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。

但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，要注意谋篇布局，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。

审题时注意本文使用一般现在时。

第二节概要写作（满分25分）

47.【浙江省“五校联考”2019届高三上学期第一次考试】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush.Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,it’sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.

Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush.Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry,theycan’tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater.Asthesayinggoes,‘Hastemakeswaste.’Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly.Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly.

Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter.Forexample,takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane.However,takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends.Besides,itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives.

Finally,slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus.Asisknowntoall,takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress.Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry,theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem.Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Accordingtosomestudies,peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases,tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense,eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter.

Inshort,workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced.Yet,muchstresscan’tbringenjoyment,friendsandhealth,whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages.Therefore,takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace.

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【答案】Despitebeingaccustomedtothefastpaceinmodernsociety,peoplearerecommendedtoleadaslowerlife.（要点一）Firstly,slowingdownlowersthepossibilityofcommittingerrorsbycomprehensivethinking.（要点二）Secondly,moreopportunitiestoenjoylifeareallowedbyaslowerpace.（要点三）Lastly,betterhealthconditionphysicallyandmentallyisalsowhataslowerlifebrings.（要点四）Therefore,let’stakeaslowerlifefromnowon.

【解析】

【详解】文章涵盖了全部要点，在写作中注意使用非谓语，句式简单明了，同时能正确地使用连词firstly…，secondly…，lastly…..把文章有机地联合起来。

作者抓住了关键词，准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇，用简洁的语言概括了文章重要信息。

文章中多处运用了非谓语。

如动词的ing形式作状语：

Despitebeingaccustomedtothefastpaceinmodernsociety,peoplearerecommendedtoleadaslowerlife；动词的ing形式作主语:

slowingdownlowersthepossibilityofcommittingerrorsbycomprehensivethinking；表语从句：

betterhealthconditionphysicallyandmentallyisalsowhataslowerlifebrings和祈使句：

let’stakeaslowerlifefromnowon

【山西省吕梁市2018届高三上学期第一次阶段性测试】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David下周三将来你所在的城市旅游，但你有事无法去机场接他。

请你给他发一封电子邮件，要求如下：

1.表示歉意并说明理由；

2.安排他人接机。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

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【答案】DearDavid,

IamveryhappytoknowthatyouarecomingtovisitmycitynextWednesday.

Havingkeptintouchwitheachotherbywritingforyears,Ican’twaittoseeyou.However,IamsorrytotellyouthatIcan’tmeetyouattheairportthatday.Mysisterfellillandwastakentothehospital,soIhavetotakecareofherthere.Butdon’tworry.I’veaskedmybestfriend,LiLei,topickyouupandtakeyoutothebookedhotelinstead.What’smore,Ihaverecommendedsomeplacesofinterestintheattachment,whichIthinkyoumaybeinterestedin.Ofcourseyoucanalsovisitothertouristattractionsbyyourself.Meanwhile,IwillcallyouthemomentIamavailable.

I’mexpectingyourarrivalandhopeyouwillenjoyyourstayheresincerely.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【分析】

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

【点睛】本文是一封电子邮件，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

同时文中使用高级句子。

Havingkeptintouchwitheachotherbywritingforyears,Ican’twaittoseeyou.现在分词做原因状语；whichIthinkyoumaybeinterestedin.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句；IwillcallyouthemomentIamavailable.此处themoment引导时间状语从句；另外，However,What’smore,Meanwhile,等的运用为文章增色添彩。

【湖北省仙桃中学2019届高三8月考试英】假如你是李华，你校外教Mr.Brown春节期间看到邻居房门上的福字是倒着贴的，感到很好奇，写信向你询问此事。

请你给他回一封信，介绍福字倒贴的原因和这一传统的寓意，同时邀请他高考后来你家过端午节。

参考词汇：

端午节theDragonBoatFestival；福字thecharacterFu

注意：

1.词数：

100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。

DearMr.Brown,

I’mreallygladtoreceiveyourletter._______________________________________________________

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Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearMr.Brown,

I’mreallygladtoreceiveyourletter.Asyouhaveseen,manyChinesechoosetostickthecharacterFuonthedoorupsidedownduringtheSpringFestival.Thisactuallyexpressestheirbestwishesforthenewyear.InChinese,thecharacterfor“upsidedown”soundsthesameasthecharacterfor“toarrive”sothismeansthathappinessisarriving.Quiteinteresting,isn’tit?

Bytheway,I’dliketoinviteyoutocelebratetheDragonBoatFestivalwithmyfamilyaftertheCollegeEntranceExam.It’sadayinmemoryofthegreatpoetQuYuanandweusuallyeat zongzi andenjoydragonboatraces.It’llbeagoodopportunitytoexperiencetrulyChinesecultureandtradition.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【分析】

本题是提纲类作文，文体是说明文。

【点睛】文中使用了由as引导的非限制性定语从句Asyouhaveseen,manyChinesechoosetostickthecharacterFuonthedoorupsidedownduringtheSpringFestival.运用了that引导的宾语从句thismeansthathappinessisarriving.以及反意疑问句Quiteinteresting,isn’tit?

还运用了由it作形式主语的句子It’llbeagoodopportunitytoexperiencetrulyChinesecultureandtradition.较高级词汇thesameas，bytheway，inmemoryof，lookforwardto也为文章增色不少。

【河北省邢台市2019届高三上学期第一次月考】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你倾诉他近来对网络社交媒体上瘾。

这已严重

影响了他的生活和学习。

请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1．表示安慰

2．提出建议（关掉手机；发展新爱好；多和家人朋友待在一起）。

注意1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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